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Scouter Kai

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 4:18 pm


Oh yeah, check out post #5 to see which characters i've approved :3
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 3:41 am


woot - high tech levels, it's just I have the D20 Future roleplay handbook and it's got loads of stuff on high tech gadgets etc
So I can go all technical when I talk about stuff, perfect for the character.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:21 pm


Quote:
((edit hope this is better))

uhhhh... Dahaka 666, Just a PM or separate post would have worked... but I guess this does too.
I'm going to approve it but make sure to put more effort into your spelling and grammar in future posts, ok?
PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:45 am


(I'm gonna try playing a female for once...)

Gaian Name: Sheer_Insanity
-General
Name: Meigan "Mei" Eevane
Age: 20
Height: 5'7
Weight: 100lbs
Species: Terran
Job: Terran marine
Rank:Private

-Psychological
Personality: Meigan's clumsy disposition is always drawing lots of trouble and unwanted attention towards her, but when faced with a challenge her movements are very agile and furtive. She is very serious on rare occasions, but her childlike behavior usually gets the best of her. Her extreme cheerfulness is balanced out by her tendency to get overly upset over small details, and while she does everything she can to make things right she usually ends up falling flat on her face. Despite her habit of accidentily breaking everything within a 5' radius of her, she is a good friend to all that come accross her and likely a worthy ally.
Likes: People, weapons, and target practice (bad combination, no?).
Dislikes: Her clumsiness and small mishaps (another bad combination).
Goals: Did want to be a well known admiral of a large battleship, but now just wants to be the best marksman that she can be.

-History
Short History: Meigan grew up on a large militaristic planet populated by a majority of terrans with very few exceptions. Her mother was a typical stay-at-home wife while her father was a well known admiral of a battleship known as the Seline. Meigan always admired her father and wanted to be a battleship admiral just like him. When Meigan was only six her father was killed in battle when the Drathonians attacked. Meigan and her mother evacuated to a safer planet. Meigan dedicated the rest of her life to becoming an admiral just like her father. To everyone's surprise she became the top in her class of battleship trainees and quickly accomplished her dream of becoming an admiral. But her clumsy nature caused her battleship crew to lose faith in her and a majority of them left. She only had around 20 faithful crew afterwards, so she resigned as admiral and left. She did her best to erase her failed past and is now just a simple marine. Meigan keeps her past a secret from everyone.

-Notes
Appearance: Meigan wears a skin-tight, white body suit with two simple energy blasters attached to both her thighs. She has long blonde hair which she usually keeps tied up in a ponytail, revealing her light purple eyes.
Distinguishing characteristics: Always has her energy blasters with her.

((Hope I didn't over do the history. And sorry I went a bit scarce on the appearance and characteristics))

Sheer_Insanity


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:22 pm


great Bio, it's well written and the history isn't to much, it adds a bit of depth to the character. APPROVED mrgreen
PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:25 pm


Yay! blaugh
I tried my best sweatdrop

Sheer_Insanity


Reaper DS

PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 3:43 pm


Gaian Name: reaperds
-General
Name: dante
Age:17
Height:6'3
Weight: 153
Species: terran
Job: terran marine
Rank razz rivate

-Psychological
Personality:is never really angry with people and is always calm
Likes: to fight and talk with friends
Dislikes: silence
Goals: to become a high ranking officer

-History
Short History: his father was a commander who had died in a big battle 14 years ago and his mother had also been on the ship. he has trained all his life to go and fight and he was so excited when he got the chance to fly the battle hymn

-Notes
Appearance: http://www.winds.org/~arren/backgrounds/recca/recca1.jpg
Distinguishing characteristics: is never seen with out a gun on his belt.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 4:52 pm


.. Fix some grammar errors and the typos where you stuck two words together, I'm trying to have a literate RP so, those small mistakes need some addressing, but overall, it is a decent bio. *goes and puts [literate] in title*

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Lord Protector Quonar

PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 6:23 pm


I hope it's still okay to post backgrounds and try to join in the game. ^^

Gaian Name: Lord Protector Quonar


Name: Roger McArthen
Age sad 16 and up) 23
Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 170lbs.
Species: Terran
Job: Engineer
Rank razz rivate(default) -- see below

(I'll leave Private there as it is the 'default', though I'm hoping to put him in as a Captain. If that's not acceptable, I can alter things to fit accordingly! Just shoot me a reply / pm / anything.


Personality: He's laid back except when it comes time to put in the extra work. His job is also his hobby, and he takes great pride in making sure that it gets done well. In the fighter hangar, he's a streak of whizzing and clicking, a blur of welding and connecting, but as soon as he walks out of those doors he is perhaps one of the most laid-back, easy-going captains on the ship-- His records say as much, with as many times as he's been scolded for minor procedural technicalities. Thankfully, his efficiency at his job is enough to overlook his flaws, and Roger does his best not to step too heavily on superior's toes.

Likes: Irritating those who adhere to rules like white to rice, decent tools, people who know how to take it easy once in a while.

Dislikes: Superior officers who clash with his personality, pilots who beat the unholy crap out of their fighters, oranges, Plasticon(tm), the planet Mars

Goals: What do all men want? Money, women, glory! Well, sort of. He's not too worried about money, being in the military in a cozy engineering position. Most women on the ship just irk him for wielding protocal like a melee weapon, and he's usually too caught up in some project or another to take much interest in those who aren't. While he's dated a few women off and on through the years, none of them currently serve aboard the Battle Hymn, so he hasn't troubled himself too much with females. As for glory... Well, any position that makes him look cool and still lets him work in the hangar bay is fine with him. No fancy-shmancy Officer position would be worth it if he had to simply sit at a desk, hands bereft of tools.

-History
Short History: His parents both served in the military before him, and so he spent a lot of time in a family style that promoted to-the-letter following of the rules. Having lost his mother at the age of 9, however, he and his father were forced to go through many changes. His father began slipping into the bottle whenever he could, and his son, Roger, began taking over any work that he could. His father passed away when Roger was 15, ironically of liver disease. Roger used his father's contacts to get himself a position in the backlines of the war that had been going on for years now. His handiwork with a wrench and torch earned him a few friends as he worked his way through the various basic academies, which he passed with flying colours due to his prior experience. The brass noticed this, and set him to work with countless others on a new project they had begun developing, with more than enough building to go around for everyone.

Now, at the age of 23, Roger is serving aboard that very project, the Battle Hymn. He knows the ins and outs of a decent portion of the ship, but his specialty is the hangar bay. Fighters coming in and going out receive his skilled hand at repairs and maintenance. He's even been scolded twice by some of the top officers for modifying fighters in ways that, according to him, improved the ship's performance by at least 25% all around. However, the rules and protocol were there to slap him in the face. Some of the Engineering Officers noticed this and promoted him to Captain, where he'd have a bit more freedom to experiment (within controlled climates, however.) while still doing the much-needed repair work on the hundreds of fighters the Battle Hymn supports.


Appearance: He is well-muscled from his work, but is hardly comparable to a marine or body builder. Short brown hair is slicked back most of the time, and light blue eyes give him an empathic look. A bit of fur on his face and a warm smile almost seem awkward amongst the focused and tired of the ship's crew. He's not the most nimble or dexterous of men, but whatever he can't do, tools probably can.

Distinguishing characteristics: His loose adherence to the rules, at best, may draw attention from some. He is often sporting a hip new grease stain or oil splotch, which some of his co-workers think go lovely with his eyes. It's not his fault the superiors think it crude!
PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 7:03 pm


Quonar, this is a great Bio, if you can give me some more proof of prior RP experience, i'll certainly allow your character to be a captain.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 10:52 pm


nice job, quonar, go and post whenever you're ready.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:46 pm


Gaian Name: Arugala
-General
Name: Aphrodite (Venus) Salem
Age: 19
Height: 5' 11''
Weight: 98
Species: Human
Job: Engineer
Rank razz rivate(default)

-Psychological
Personality: loves to laugh, empathetic, humorous, smart
Likes: Soup, hot coco, chess, working on machines, rock, star-gazing, chatting while working
Dislikes: Being away from the machines, loosing things, mean people, Drathonians
Goals: To design and build her own ship

-History
Short History: When Venus was five (at the time of the attacks) she lost her entire family. Her siblings were enslaved and her parents killed. Venus was never a capable fighter, but she loved mechanics and she decided to be a engineer to help fight the Drathonians who had taken everyone she'd ever loved away from her.

-Notes
Appearance: Brown skin, black ear-length , brown eyes, leather vest, tan cotton shirt, dark green cargo pants, brown tool belt, goggles, smudges of grease and bandaids are usually spotted along her arms and face.
Distinguishing characteristics: Tattoo across her shoulder blades that says "Remember" with the initials of her family below it.

arugala


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 8:24 pm


Arugala, it's a Decent Bio, it has a few spelling mistakes though, which need to be adressed (I'm really picky, sorry) also, what is the "black ear-length" thingy? Other than that, I like the character, good job.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:05 am


Gaian Name: Mr. Blackbird Lore
-General
Name: Garrett Hendlow
Age: 30
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 212 pounds
Species: Terran
Job: Demo Expert
Rank: Captain

-Psychological
Personality: Garrett is a rugged man, always sarcastic, and always putting his hands to use. He lacks a lot when it comes to formalities and mannerisms, but he does his best to remember... which isn't a very good 'best.' He can't stand being at a standstill, but he has enough patience to mask his impatience. He likes to be at work constantly, and is an entirely hands-on person. He prefers to do a job himself than oversee another person's work, and has trouble working in a team as a result. Thank the holies that his job rarely requires teamwork... And he is a definite flirt, harassing younger and older women alike. However, he is rarely serious about anything he says or does during those time.
Likes: Building compounds, explosives, and flammable materials; cigarettes; His job.
Dislikes: Being idle; inexperienced workers/soldiers; timid people; Failing to properly execute a mission.
Goals: To keep doing his thing until the day he dies!

-History
Short History: At sixteen, Garrett lost so much... His fiancee, his mother, and his two siblings. He felt crushed, and thought little of his life. Getting into an anarchistic group of friends, and experimenting with fire and small-time flash powders, he found a love for explosives and pyrotechnics. He took it beyond the stupid little pranks and games, and made it a passion. From bad came good... And from the deep-rooted loss came a powerful gain. Though he has remained single these past fourteen years, his flirtatious attitude has left none suspecting his choices.

-Notes
Appearance: His hair is black, cropped in a short flat top and spiked. His eyes are a dark brown, but always full of energy, even at his age. On his chin is a small goatee that he started growing out recently, but he keeps the rest of his face clean. Typically, he dresses himself with a pair of thick, strong boots, rusty brown, baggy jeans, a short-sleeved 'uniform,' indicating his ranking and last name over his heart, and a leather jacket always unzipped. He protected his hands with thin polyester gloves, sprayed with fire-resistant chemicals, and a pair of thick goggles can always be found hanging around his neck, or covering his eyes while he works.
Distinguishing characteristics: A burn scar across his left cheek, starting near his upper lip, and ending near his ear lobe, and an eternally confident and cocky smirk he often adorns when not at work.

Mr. Blackbird Lore

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Scouter Kai

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:26 am


only 1 typo + lots of work and cool character = Approved bio. nice job. I'm hapy with most of the who've tried to join.
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