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do you think for my first time making an RP i did good? |
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it is to advanced for my little mind......... |
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its the best RP eva! |
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i cannot comprehend this question or my answer....... |
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 4:02 pm
((i think i can manage xd ))
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 4:14 pm
(((i think, knowing your character, youd like that.lol)))
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 4:21 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:31 pm
were getting to know each othert well if u havnt noticed, but knowuing you like i do, i think you have. lol
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:32 pm
you know, i think were getting to know eachh other, but knowing you as i do, you alredy know that. lol
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:36 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:58 am
(((the RP crematoria, is now open for writing, but closed for people, if you relly like the story line, and wish ot join, you can pm me and well work somthing out.)))
Cpt. Hailfire strode around the upper lower level of the jail entrance. he looked down through the bullet proff glass, into the chaos below, right into lucians eyes. lucian has been here the longest, he had the respect of not only the other inmates, but also Cpt. Hailfire. hes been here for six years, and everyday evaded the dogruns, and everyday, evaded the other gangs below, of the hundred inmates.
Cpt then turend his attention to the jails stucture. the jail floor was bout, 250 feet below, from right where he was, down to the bottom, was absolutly no order, it was chaos. the gaurds just make sure they dont get out. and to make sure the dogs were properly fed.
everyday at 12:00, they would have Dog runs. the dog runs was how they kept the population, so that the prizon wouldnt have to expand. but the dogs wernt dogs, they were massive wolves, called Hell Hounds. the gaurds, his gaurds, would open there cages to a clifthe cliff was at an angle, that you could silde down it, but not climb up. the Hell Hounds would be forced to go down, and eat, then they got back up by the long boardwalk around the walls, when the wistle blew. there would be sevral aoutomatic gates at the end, incase the inmates tryd to get out that way.
the old cells were biult into the rock walls, the bars now rusted, the lockes didnt work ,not all of them closed, some were missing. some were there. the board walk wraped around each level, with one pair of steps leading up to the next, then there were more cells, just like the lower level.there were no floors exept in the cells, on the ground, and random rock out croppings.
the inmates would be lowerd down into the chaos below by a long rope. which was centered in the gaurd area above. the gaurd area completly coverd the top of the prizon, with one floor of rooms of to the side, living Quaters for his gaurds. another storage area. fuly equiped with meals for the gaurds, ammo, guns, and alot more. with bread to last sevral years for the inmates. by the way, the inmates got water, from a hot spring, about the size of a dining table, the pool was constanntly fought over. they got got fed bread that was thrown down trough the hole in the middle of the gaurd room. and once a week, the inmates, were fed properly. with meat, cause usually, once a week, some Hell hound, would die, or fall, or an inmate will be lucky. and kill one. then more fighting would begin over that.
yes Cpt. Hailfire was pleased with the job he was assign to, cause nobody in the army cared what happend here, so if he got mad, he could randomly cap a prizoner. and he didnt have to do much. he was in command of a few gaurds, whitch gave him somone to talk to.
yes, it was 11:46, four minutes before the dog runs today, and Lucian was right there, at the bottom of the cliff, and today, Cpt. Hailfire felt like being an a**. "DOG RUNS EARLY!" he yelled. the gaurds relesed the hounds, right down the cliff, into chaos, into Lucian.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:15 am
Riane heard screams coming from up above. She knew exactly what it meant..dogs. She wouldn't be ripped to shreds, she refused. She began to climb up one of the rocky walls, gripping tight all the way up. She stopped when she thought she would be out of the reach of the dogs and sighed. She couldn't take these early runs! It annoyed the hell out of her.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:16 am
As the dogs were released every prisoner started running to cells. When i got to a cell it was closed and everyone after that.so I was dumb and sat in a corner. That is until I saw a Hell Hound,then I started running. The Hell Hound was comming close but then I swung over the rail on the boardwalk and onto the rock wall. I saw the Hell Hound trying vigerously.Since The dog run wasn't over I had to hold on to 3 small out jetting rocks.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:23 am
((im going to be Reviax, character for a while, since hes grounded from his computer.)))(((im his best freind so its ok.))))
lucian Ran. he ran like hell. from the hell hounds. they were right on his heels. he took his rope that he aqired long ago from one that snaped when they were lowering a priziner a couple of years ago. he alrady had one end tied around him, fo saftey measures, the other was a loop, he threw it around a broken that was jutting up, he then jumped of the board walk, and slowly landed on a lower one. he turned, and ran into a cell.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:23 am
"s**t!" she yelled as one of the Hell Hounds began jumping up at her. Ok, either she needed to kill these dogs or find someone who would because this was getting ridiculous. She didn't even bother looking for a cell anymore because everyone closed them 15 minutes before the dogs were supposed to be released. It was bullshit.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:29 am
Cpt. Hailfire looked down at the usual look of things, a few crimmanls died most ssaved them selves, a few were good at hiding, and what disturbed him the most, was the fact that even when lucian was taking by suprise, he still couldnt kill him. oh well, thought the captian. he sat down in his chair, looking over the chess board, he was playing a new gaurd. he was pretty good at chess, but the Cpt. was better. "the dog run ends in 5 inutes, signal the other gaurds" the cpt. said.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 8:42 am
Still Hanging on the wall and scared as hell.I think to myself "what should I do?" Then i get an idea.I jump back to the rail sliding under it knocking the Hell Hound off its feet to to the other side of the boardwalk,when it falls to the bottom.I see it get back up so I start to run,and then I get toc cell and punch the person who is holding it shut.I walk in like nothing has happened and then toss the knocked out prisoner onto the boardwalk.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 8:58 am
Riane hung on to the wall for dear life. Damn, maybe she shouldn't have tried to break out of the other prisons. She probably wouldn't be here if she wasn't so good at escaping. The dog took a huge leap, nearly biting one of her feet. She climbed a bit higher, avoiding getting dragged down by the hound. She refused to die right now, not here. She gripped the rocks as hard as she could, willing herself not to fall. She looked around for any other prisoners but could see none. She hung there, clinging, waiting for the gaurds to call off the dogs.
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:11 pm
I see someone hanging from the rocks,I yell to her,"come!run to my cell! I will open it!"Hurry!"
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