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 Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 4:57 pm
Name: Niskie Yolissa
Village: Hidden Time
Power Level: 500
Song of the Elders: Yolissa requires her harp to use this genjutsu. Once she begins to play the song, if the user hears this move, there body appears to turn old and frail. Once they are caught in this genjutsu, they move at 65% there original speed, and there power is at 75% of what it originally is. The genjutsu can be broke by someone with high genjutsu awareness. This genjutsu only lasts for as long as she plays the song. The opponent has to be within range to hear it. Her range is 200 feet. She can play it for 1 post, every 5,000 Chakra.
1,000 Skill Points.
Accepted
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 3:31 pm
Name: Mizu Ferraku
Village: Mist
Power Level 26,672
Suiton Jiten Tama(Rotation Sphere)-Jiten Tama is a large orb of water that is contained by a layer of chakra, the water cannot pass through the layer of chakra, but anything else pretty much can. The sphere is constantly spinning making the water able to smash into enemies and throw them around if hit by the sphere. The orb is connected to the users hand via five chakra strings. It can be swung around and if hit, it can either knock the enemy away or if a direct hit is made they can get caught in the rotating sphere. The flaw of this is the sphere of water ways quite a bit, therefore the user cannot move around quickly. As well if one is able to get behind the orb, the user becomes very vulnerable since he basically is a stationary target to any incoming attacks. 1200 Skill Points
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 2:25 pm
Name: Luke Uchiha
Village: Leaf
Power Level 2100
Chain Wrap: luke will swing the chains with his arms straight out then curve his wrist's in so the chains wrap around his arms and waist like a armor so he can break through any type of object or cause some internal damange to his target person. when wearing the chain as an armor it can block kunia or anythng that is being thrown towards it. 800 skill points. every 5000 words the power strike will get stronger.
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 3:45 pm
Senku Kumari ~ Accepted.
Gatekeepper ~ Ok..
Is it like that chain gaia Item? lmao So his hands are covered in the chains, for added offensive value?
And what do you mean by "every 5000 words the power strike will get stronger"
Plus. He cant be able to break through special weapons, or armors.
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 3:54 pm
Reaver: the chain is just a chain you know for locking up a bike at school. just plain heavy duty chains. well you see power strike means his power when strike an object. the more to the power the stronger it is when striking an object. it wont be able to break through special weapons or armors but mabey some other stuff like stone metal crystal.
Add that in, And it's accepted.
also here in another made up.
Chain Whip: luke will swing his chains around in the air gaining speed then with the flick of his wrist he will launch them at his target like a whip causeing some damage due to how far he is away and the speed the chains pick up from the launching. the chains will break through most objects but have to be a certain type in order to break. the range limit is about 100 fett. Cant break through special weapons or armors. every 5000 words the power strike will get stronger and the feet will increase 100. 800 skill points.
Give it a range, and I'll accept it. Also add in that it cant break through special weapons.armors.
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 8:08 pm
Ryu Sanada
Hidden Craftsman
Metal Jutsu Style: Armor Repulse
While using 'Metal Jutsu Style: Synthetic Skin' and Ryu becomes trapped or grappled by an opponent, he can disengage the jutsu and send the metal that once covered his body flying in all directions around him acting as shrapnel to attack the opponent and break free of what ever bond is holding him.
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Metal Jutsu Style: Metallic Clone
Ryu creates 1d10 (10 sided dice) worth of clones using his Metal Jutsu Style. Each clone is granted his non-clan, non-weapon techniques, and access to most his Metal Jutsu Style abilities. The clones will not be able to use; Metal Jutsu Style: Synthetic Skin, Metal Jutsu Style: Iron Maze, Metal Jutsu Style: Iron Golem, Metal Jutsu Style: Armor Repulse, or Metal Jutsu Style: Metallic Clone.
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Metal Jutsu Style: Liquid Metal Style
An advanced form of Ryu's Metal Jutsu Style, it allows him to turn all the metal he creates into a liquid form which he can still control. Any of his other Metal Jutsu Style techniques work in conjunction with this advanced style.
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All Accepted
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 8:58 pm
Quote: Meliae, Parasito Hidden Star Chakra Transfer This ability allows for Parasito to be able to enter a body, and then feed itself into the chakra system of the host. Feeding her own chakra into their own, giving them a pink hint around the infected portions of the hosts body to those that can see chakra. Thus, Parasito is able to grant the host it's chakra in a pinch, making them able to exceed their chakra limits by the amount of chakra that Parasito has, and allowing the Host to feed of Parasito's chakra, making them stronger. ApprovedHow's a Third Sound? This ability must be activated each time it is used, and costs the loss of a single attack, in order to give it to the Host that Parasito is harboring itself within. Meaning that the host becomes able to use a third attack, by taking away the second attack that Parasito could have been able to make if this technique wasn't used. ApprovedMass Production This technique allows for Parasito to be able to constantly reproduce it's Mass or reduce it's mass at will. Meaning it could easily reproduce itself to fill an entire room with it's substance, or even reduce itself to be held in a small container with ease. Thus, it's substance can never truly run out or dry up if the case may be. ApprovedQuote: Serkan Hidden Blood Blood God: Bleeding Mask This technique, is an advancement off of the Blood Armor technique. It creates an armor like mask of pure blood, that can form in a matter of seconds, by having the blood fall from his hair line and form across his face like a mask. This mask, gives the user a slight manipulation to any and all blood flows in the area. Meaning once the mask is formed, they become able to cause the opponent's blood to stop moving to certain parts of their bodies, meaning that that part goes numb. It normally works only for the hands, fingers, feet and toes. Due to his lack of ability with this technique in the beginning. The numbing effect, would cause the opponent to have severe trouble holding weapons, or walking, because it would feel like their limbs aren't even there. This effect only works when the mask is worn. The mask takes two turns, to fully create, before it can be worn. ApprovedBlood God: Blood Chakra This technique, allows for Serkan to be able to utilize his manipulation of his own blood, in order to attack and sap away at anyone's chakra that may be standing or even touching the blood that he may be using, or has sent out onto the field. This is mainly though extending the reach of his chakra Absorbing armor, and thus he does not gain any chakra, by draining it from the opponent. ApprovedBlood God: Vein Rupturing After creating the Bleeding Mask, Serkan becomes able to manipulate the blood in the opponent's vein's themselves. Making them begin to full with more blood then needed, and actually cause their veins to pop out form their body. Although this can create a hazard to the body, it also severely enhances the opponent's adrenaline and causes them to be a little more stronger and faster then usual. The problem is, the more the opponent attempts to use this enhancement to their advantage, the more it actually causes the blood to pump into their veins and arteries. After three posts of this technique being used, the opponent's veins and arteries will tear a little, causing possibly severe internal bleeding. Yet this can easily be fixed, by a medic ninja. ApprovedExplosive Blood By drawing his katana from it's sheath, Serkan can use it's water type emitter to transmute the blood in an area of fifty feet around him into a small explosion, simply by touching the sword to any blood covered surface and using the Rocket blade's effect to cause the blood to explode. This works, as a secondary attack by allowing the blood caused from wounds to have an explosive property and causing a small explosion upon the blade causing the wound, in order to make the wound more deadly. ApprovedBloody Release By releasing the blade with another pull of the trigger the blade actually merges with Serkan's blood, dissapearing from sight and allowing the effects of his blood to have an explosive property to it. Meaning for one attack only, all the blood in the area will explode in a huge style explosion, that could even effect Serkan himself. Once it explodes, the sword will reform back in it's sheath and must be drawn in order to be used again. There is a charge period of five turns, before this attack can be used a second time. ApprovedQuote: Orochi, Nexus Hidden Creature Serpents Release By squeezing the trigger a second time, Venom releases and creates twin towering serpents of pure acidic poison from behind Nexus. Each serpent able to act on it's own, and harness all poison, snake or acid based techniques that Nexus knows. Of course, a strong enough attack could destroy the serpents, but they're made of the odd acidic poison, making them deadly to close range fighters, that may come in contact with them. ApprovedAcidic Saliva Due to him being of a serpent like nature, Nexus has become able to actually harness an acidic property in his own saliva and the saliva of his serpent counterparts. He is able to build up spit in his mouth, and launch it outwards as if it were almost a rocket like stream of acid. This thick stream, is able to melt through almost anything that is not stated as being unbreakable. [IE. No special armors, weapons, or unbreakable barriers] When he reaches a good 100,000 chakra, Nexus is able to actually allow his serpents to shoot similiar streams of acid from their mouths. The acid must go in a straight line, and isn't so fast, as to be easily undodge able at longer ranges. ApprovedThe Snake's Whisper A technique created by Nexus, to mimic the history of the devil's use of a serpent in the biblical story of Adam and Eve. With the use of one of his snakes, or himself. He can casually begin a soft hissing whisper that actually promotes a sort of mindwashing effect onto the opponent or opponents, though they must be weaker then Nexus's current chakra pool, in order to be effected. What the hissing whisper does, is cause the opponent's thoughts to come aligned with Nexus' own. Meaning that if he wishes of them, to go against an order of someone else. The temptation to do so will be easily accepted by their minds. This can not be used to cause someone to kill themselves, or to hand over a weapon or armor. It is simply used, to make an opponent cease defending a village, if they were ordered to defend it. Or stop fighting, if they were ordered to fight Nexus. Basically stopping them from performing their current assigned task. ApprovedSnake Authority Spell This jutsu can extend large snakes from the user's sleeves, which will coil around the target and bind them. The further addition of the user's murderous intent can weaken their target's resolve. Approved
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 5:38 pm
Nirvana
Hidden Soul
Negation Art: Chakra
An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of chakra based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into chakra that can be used to enhance and strengthen her light based attacks, during the battle. An accurate drain of the chakra used to create such techniques, will be taken as cost for the negation of a technique. An additional 2000 chakra is taken, each time this technique is activated.
Approved
Negation Art: Fire
An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of fire based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into strength that can be used to enhance and strengthen her body to higher points of ability, each time she absorbs a fire type attack. Thus, her physical strength gains 5% each time she absorbs fire. It does not last past the battle. An accurate drain of the chakra used to create such techniques, will be taken as cost for the negation of a technique. An additional 2000 chakra is taken, each time this technique is activated.
Approved
Negation Art: Earth
An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of earth based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into endurance, that she can use to make her frail body's skin into a much tougher and more durable substance. Each attack of earth she absorbs, causes her skin to strengthen, meaning she will become first as hard as a rock, and slowly advance to steel, and then diamond, and any substance in between. Without actually appearing any different. It does not last past the battle. An accurate drain of the chakra used to create such techniques, will be taken as cost for the negation of a technique. An additional 2000 chakra is taken, each time this technique is activated.
Approved
Negation Art: Lightning
An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of lightning based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into stamina, allowing her to battle for longer lengths, without needing to rest her body, or even worry about breaking a sweat. Each time she absorbs a lightning based attack, she gains more stamina, in order to battle longer. It does not last past the battle. An accurate drain of the chakra used to create such techniques, will be taken as cost for the negation of a technique. An additional 2000 chakra is taken, each time this technique is activated.
Approved
Negation Art: Wind
An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of wind based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into stability, allowing her body to be able to be less likely to be knocked over by a powerful explosion of wind or water, or anything of that nature. Each time something like happens, she can either more easily regain her balance or footing, or recover in the air. It does not last past the battle. An accurate drain of the chakra used to create such techniques, will be taken as cost for the negation of a technique. An additional 2000 chakra is taken, each time this technique is activated.
Approved
Negation Art: Ice
An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of ice based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into a greater form of defense, allowing her body to move at a more rapid pace, in order to block when she needs to. Of course, she becomes better able at blocking what appears to be the impossible, the more ice based attacks she absorbs. It does not last past the battle. An accurate drain of the chakra used to create such techniques, will be taken as cost for the negation of a technique. An additional 2000 chakra is taken, each time this technique is activated.
Approved
Neutral Seal: Jutsu Shou Negation
This technique, allows for the Neutral seal to be able to instantly negate the effects of the Jutsu Shou technique, or anything like that technique.
Approved
Neutral Seal: Negate The Use
This ability of the curse seal, allows for Nirvana to be able to use the abilities of the seal and cause the opponent or opponents to be unable to use a technique more then once. Meaning if they used the "Body Flicker" technique, they will be unable to use it a second time for a single turn per the amount of made ups that the opponent in question has in their possession.
Approved
Other then the Neutral Seal techs, everything else was edited with a drain of chakra from Nirvana.
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 11:18 am
Bone (Currently in Legendary members forum... Pity)
Hidden Soul
True Energy Release: Taking the concept of Kinetic and Potential Energy, Bone has found a way to harness its power. Knowing that an objecting in any position generally holds potential energy like a tree that is off centered or a building’s structure. By figuring a way to activate the potential energy in practically any object or living thing around him, Bone can convert the potential energy into kinetic energy like causing a tree to fall or a building to collapse without causing it any initial harm. After each use, there is a one-post rest period before it can be used again. One thing that this technique cannot do, however, it cannot cause any life-threatening damages within the body. Must be purely external and the object in question must be larger than a modern day dollar bill. This technique can be used on Chakra but results vary on what the chakra use was.
Child Innocence: One with a powerful and evil heart can perform this technique if the environment is relatively dark, like night time or darker. Also, it does not need hand seals to activate either. Evil is spread out upon the surrounding area, corrupting the hearts of the children nearby. They will act normal at first; playing or crying over a lost family member or whatever while the user can attack at them. If the opponent is good hearted, they may attempt to save the child(ren). But as they block the attack or assist the children to escape, the children will attack their savior with hands that can pierce through flesh or hold them in one spot depending on how many there are. However, this technique also leaves the children with a darkened heart so they roam around, killing as they meet others except for each other with the look of enjoyment upon their faces. Can only be used once since it affects all children in the area.
Torrest Hyuuga
Hidden Leaf
*Quick note: I have enough words to learn all the gates in offline RPing. Do not fret if he does not have the actual gates right now.*
- Breaking Leaf Lotus: After unleashing the 4th gate, Torrest rushes towards the opponent at an increased speed. As he appears right in front of the opponent, he pulls back a fist and throws it forwards, disappearing as the fist comes close to the opponent’s face to cause the opponent to lift his arms up in defense. Afterward, four images of Torrest will appear around the opponent kicking upwards and striking the opponent in the lower part of his chest on four sides, sending him/her upwards into the air. Afterward, Torrest will appear above the opponent spinning like a top but sideways before kicking the opponent hard in the torso and into the ground, leaving a large crater due to the strength of the attack.
9th Gate: Mortality Gate: Once opening the Eight Gate, Torrest found that he was able to take the ability a step further by releasing another gate. However, by releasing the gate, Torrest will be placed in a state of incredible power as his soul energy (AKA Spirit Chakra) will pulse through his body. With combination of the other 8 gates, this gate causes Torrest to surpass even the Demon’s themselves in ability if he has only 10% of their total chakra. However, the greatest drawback is: When activated without the other gates, Torrest has 5 posts before he dies and looses 1000 skill points. When activated with the other gates, Torrest has 3 posts before he dies and looses 3000 skill points. This gate, once opened, cannot be closed until the opponent is defeated. Torrest, if successfully kills the opponent before post limit is exceeded, will be left helpless for a full day before being able to move again.
El Diablo: The greatest of all of Torrest’s attacks. After releasing all the gates up to his Mortality Gate, Torrest will be engulfed in red chakra (which is really just chakra fused with his blood) that would surround him in almost a demonic appearance. Afterwards, Torrest will disappear from sight before several images of Torrest appears all around the opponent, throwing punches and kicks towards them until it looks like a dome of Torrests appeared around the opponent. After dealing over a hundred blows, Torrest will then grip the opponent by the neck, slamming them hard into the ground before tossing them upwards in the air with a bandage attached around the waist. While they are still stunned from being slammed into the ground HARD, Torrest will pull on the bandage before kicking the opponent three more times and sending them higher, through the O-zone layer. Torrest pulls one last time on the bandage before jumping upwards towards the opponent before finally dealing an open handed thrust into the chest of the opponent and sending a wave of chakra so great through their heart and vital organs, that the image of a devil was said to be seen by the man on the moon.
Ginsa Hyumon
Hidden Mythology
Blades of Chaos: Seven blades will appear around Ginsa, encircling him. They can be controlled through various hand seals although range and types of hand seal combinations used limit their use. However, they can also be used in combinations with sword techniques.
Lilth Huedini
Hidden Magic
Children of Nightmare: After doing a few hand seals, Lileth projects a genjutsu upon the field trapping all the victims within it. The genjutsu will cause the victim(s) to feel as if they have been transported into a ruined city in another world. The city is filled with skyscrapers and the laughter of children can be heard everywhere but is nowhere to be seen. They must find their way out without dying or they lose a forth of their current chakra. But as they attempt to locate the exit in the genjutsu, they will encounter children of which will try to kill the victims with various weapons. Also, there is no end to the children and for every technique the victim(s) use, the chakra is also spent.
Laser Show: Lileth, having been trained in the art of magic, devised this show to flabbergast her opponents with surprise and shock. Hell, it can also be used in a defensive method if played out right. First, Lileth will span the entire battlefield with small mirrors in squares that are 5 by 5 inches. She then takes an ordinary laser pen and creates magical tricks with the lasers using no chakra what so ever. The beams, if uninterrupted, can hold solid objects if the trick called for it and is able to support a weight of a normal human being. Any heavier and they would merely pass through. It can also clothesline anyone running rapidly through the field or create a web of light that, when touched, feels like a tightly strung string. However, only Lileth and any members of her clan know the actual method of how these lasers can hold a solid appearance or can be further manipulated.
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:30 pm
Reaver Darkside Nirvana Hidden Soul Negation Art: Chakra An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of chakra based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into chakra that can be used to enhance and strengthen her light based attacks, during the battle. ApprovedNegation Art: Fire An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of fire based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into strength that can be used to enhance and strengthen her body to higher points of ability, each time she absorbs a fire type attack. Thus, her physical strength gains 5% each time she absorbs fire. It does not last past the battle. ApprovedNegation Art: Earth An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of earth based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into endurance, that she can use to make her frail body's skin into a much tougher and more durable substance. Each attack of earth she absorbs, causes her skin to strengthen, meaning she will become first as hard as a rock, and slowly advance to steel, and then diamond, and any substance in between. Without actually appearing any different. It does not last past the battle. ApprovedNegation Art: Lightning An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of lightning based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into stamina, allowing her to battle for longer lengths, without needing to rest her body, or even worry about breaking a sweat. Each time she absorbs a lightning based attack, she gains more stamina, in order to battle longer. It does not last past the battle. ApprovedNegation Art: Wind An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of wind based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into stability, allowing her body to be able to be less likely to be knocked over by a powerful explosion of wind or water, or anything of that nature. Each time something like happens, she can either more easily regain her balance or footing, or recover in the air. It does not last past the battle. ApprovedNegation Art: Ice An art of Negation that allows for Nirvana to be able to use her Clan's ability of damage absorption, and use it upon the art of ice based techniques used against her. The damage that would be caused by that kind of technique, would be drawn into her body and negated. The negated attack would be then converted into a greater form of defense, allowing her body to move at a more rapid pace, in order to block when she needs to. Of course, she becomes better able at blocking what appears to be the impossible, the more ice based attacks she absorbs. It does not last past the battle. ApprovedNeutral Seal: Jutsu Shou Negation This technique, allows for the Neutral seal to be able to instantly negate the effects of the Jutsu Shou technique, or anything like that technique. ApprovedNeutral Seal: Negate The Use This ability of the curse seal, allows for Nirvana to be able to use the abilities of the seal and cause the opponent or opponents to be unable to use a technique more then once. Meaning if they used the "Body Flicker" technique, they will be unable to use it a second time for a single turn per the amount of made ups that the opponent in question has in their possession. ApprovedWho approved these. This is crap there is not cost on any of those techniques. This is complete bull s**t. They are way to powerful and no cost or real limiting factor. They'll be edited with the appropriate factors~ Do not fret.
Limiters to the curse seal, are the activation of the seal. A drain can be applied to both if needed.
If other mods are really checking this forum, they could at least have the decency to look over my made ups on occasion. rolleyes I make it little known fact that I do not like to mess with the make-up thread if I do not have too... due to the fact that I often do not have alot of time to look over the techniques to the level I need to make sure they are not overpowerful. Not to mention that I often have limited time and wish to spend the majority of it RP which I enjoy much more ( and the reason I joined the guild ). I know my duties as a MOD take priority over my personal wants when needed.
- Klamachpin And I'm simply pointing out, if you're going to start in on something, you better finish it. Because no one other then myself checks the made ups unless I tell them to.
But as it turns out, it may not matter.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:06 am
Right then so this is where I try and get my Jootshoes approved eh now then is it?
Cranberry Trap: Ninjutsu
Cranberry Trap creates two walls of fire aiming away from the opponent diagonally about 10ft high each, they are extremely thin but still fire and thus painful as you might imagine. The fire is of a scarlet colour rather than the usual orange you'd expect to see. Of course a person not used to this Jutsu may get cocky and assume they are safe and you have missed, however, after activating both walls slam in on eachother producing the efect of frying whomsoever happens to be inbetween them.
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