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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:24 am
You're not the only one Dimi. ._. Soooo frustrating, not knowing what to write next.
Timeskip for me is going better, though, not really progressing anywhere. xD It's still 100% comedy.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:48 am
time skip story hmm. Mine gets to be rather simplistic as for right now. However it seems so hard to think simple out. >.>
No going off to learn some epic jutsu.
Or train under some legendary ninja
Or wandering the country side seeing the world.
Or you know an attempt to take over the world.
Just a kid going to school and trying to learn enough to not turn into a family embarrassment. xd
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 11:02 am
At least you're not fighting like a nine-year-old with your self-proclaimed "bestest" friend and in general trying to make each other's lives hell. o_O
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 11:58 am
Exactly! I think it would be so much easier if Masanori(character) had some more levels in himself and I've had more experience with him. No it's like writing a novel about an unknown, silver tounged kid gonk
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 11:58 am
You know what I just realized. If your a Yamanaka and you have a pet like a wolf or something you can take over the mind of you pet and use your pet's body in battle.
Screw a Hatake I wanna make a Yamanka with a Falcon.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:02 pm
Does the Yamaka-techniques work on animals? I'm asking since I've never seen or read it. But if so, good job picking that up! wink Now you just want to find a kyuubi with a Yamaka and poff: World domination! 4laugh
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:06 pm
Until you get sealed in some kid. Then, that will suck. xD
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:14 pm
Wooow.. Three minds in one body? That kid is gonna be one hell of a kage! 4laugh
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:52 pm
The Ghost of Xmas Awesome I should have been more clear, I don't LIKE him, like as person. I like his character idea. A person who, while being mislead and haunted by his insecurity, while doing terrible things and justifying it all, would also, I think, lay down his life to protect his village. I think his real fall was that he wanted that sunlight, he wanted to be Hokage, and envied Sarutobi for having Kohnoha's love, where as his was one sided. So yes, Danzo was a monstrous person who did terrible things, but you can also clearly see the human in him, and his redeeming qualities in his devotion to Kohnoha, even if it was at costs, including his morality. That's what I like in a villain. Gaara's another Character I really like the premise of, 3nodding he, Itachi, Naruto, and Nagato are some of my favorites, though of course the series in general is good for Character development. It is for this reason that I want to STAB SASUKE IN THE EYES WITH A TOOTHBRUSH! confused Ahem, what I mean is, for all we've seen of him, his character is rather...opaque? His motivations are both very clear, and yet you still know very little about them. He's obviously got other emotions at work in that Crazy Uchiha head of his, but until we know what they are, he's a contrived plot device/angst generator. It would be funny if Madara took off the bandages right? And then Sasuke is like "-BAM! NEW KIND OF AMATERASU!-" And so, he not only stops Madara's time/space abilities, he also burns him alive... ^^ Oh and, speaking of the body switch technique the Yamanaka clan use.. Ino uses it on a hawk when searching for Hidan and Kakuza. Kakuza detects her though while in the hawk... he was about to kill the bird, but then she released it... lucky bird...
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 1:22 pm
I just had an affair...I'm sorry Way of the ninja but I just had an affair with Rise of the Shinobi I feel dirty.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:20 pm
I didn't know you were married to the Guild... If that case. Yes, you should be very, very ashamed of yourself.
I am part of two guilds. This one and a cool Bleach guild. Both of which are very slow paced. So it works out for me =)
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:29 pm
Slow paced bleach guild interesting. Of course I lost complete track of the series after the whole going to beat up Aizan ((Edit: Ack Aizan how did I forget that sigh.)) thing. xp
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:32 pm
I dun like the new guild front page arrangement. Gaia made it weird.......................... o_________o''
*is reasonably happy that I got somewhere with Zephyr's story*
=P
Still nowhere near timeskip...have 26 fascinating years to write about.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:52 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:21 pm
He's 35 years old. =P And I'm only on age 10.
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It's currently about 15 pages long. ._.
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