@Auggy- I never said anything about them dying.
@Ronnel- Too late for what?
@Misa- Look at your post: The more she listened to what zane said,the more confused she got.Which for her is something she hates.Being left out of the loop.but then again everyone knew the same amount as her."what has gotten into Zane"She asked herself as she got her folder,and her silver ball,then thought about where to put bothhmm both hidden and accessible,that means with me at all times.
She thought to herself,as she got her folder in her bag.Right now all she wanted to know what was the hell was going on,later she could respond to everyones reactions which was probably the same. She could feel his killer instinct in the air,and it scared her.out of all the time,she has known him, he has never been like this,Ill put the ball in a bun in my hair, for now,ill think of a better place to put it laterShe thought as she went to the place where her staff was hidden and took it outI haven't taken this out since i found it, it might be useful where ever i am headed"
and compare it to my edited post:
The more she listened to what Zane said, the more confused she got. Which for her, was something she hated; and that was being left out of the loop. But then again everyone knew the same amount as her."What has gotten into Zane,"She asked herself as she got her folder, and her silver ball, then thought about where to put both "Hmm both hidden and accessible,that means with me at all times."
She thought to herself, as she put her folder in her bag. Right now all she wanted to know was what the hell was going on. Later she could respond to everyone's reactions which was probably the same. She could feel his killer instinct in the air, and it scared her. Out of all the time, she has known him, he had never been like this. "I'll put the ball in a bun in my hair, for now, I'll think of a better place to put it later." she thought as she went to the place where her staff was hidden and took it out. "I haven't taken this out since I found it, it might be useful where ever I am headed"
Which one screams more "I'm skilled!!!!" than the other?
