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Conservative Exhibitionist
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 Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 10:36 pm
"Dig in guys." Cody says as he grabs a piece. All but one piece is gone by the time everyone has had one. Cody leaves it on the platter and puts it in the fridge with a note on top saying,
FOR IKE! DON"T TOUCH UNDER PENALTY OF DEATH!
"Ginji, please don't touch that piece of cake. It's for Ike."
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:06 am
at midnight doug wakes up
"just like always im awake and everyone else sleeps"
he turns the tv on and lays down on the couch
"hmmm maybe if i set it on the highest volume they maybe wake up"
turns the tv on highest vol
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:08 am
walks to the kitchen
picks up the cake takes a bite and lays it back
"hmm pretty good"
and makes another sandwich after
(sorry that i post here but maybe he see it here brian watch your PM's i sended you 4)
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 2:24 am
walks outside to a nearby town me:somethings strange about this place ???:your right *hits him in the head with a pipe* his whole life flashes by the sound is what i think and the video what i saw then???:hmm that will take him out for a while me:*falls asleep kinda you know out of i dont know how to spell it im dutch u know... im from europe*
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 3:31 am
Sport's TADS goes off once again in the morning, waking him up. Pulling it out, he reads the message from Thard and messages him back.
Really... I seem to remember Brian saying he wanted a good 30 pages out of me before I could turn in the mission... But maybe I was just dreaming...
Since he is already awake, Sport gets out of bed and, rubbing his eyes tiredly, walks to the fridge and gets a bowl of cereal.
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 3:41 am
wakes up at the corner of the street
"wow strange, what happend... now i remember huh they didnt steal anything"
walks back to the HQ with a big red bunk on his head
"ahh man, ooh hi sports, i gotta watch tv for a while," turns on the TV"
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 12:39 pm
Sport, lying on his bed doing the evil schoolwork, stares over at the clock. Sighing, he begins to hear a noise behind him, turning around, he notices Manectric messing with his alarm clock. Sending a shock wave coarsing through himself, Manectric uses Thunder Wave on the clock, and a loud BOOM!!! can be heard from his room. Throwing open the door, Sport emerges from the room, covered in soot, and smoke billows from the cloud. Sensing smoke, the sprinklers kick in, drenching Sport.
"I give it a 10 for entrance!" Manectric says from behind him as he exits the room. Aiming a kick at Manectric, Sport walks back into his room and notices the spot where his Wii was is now just a crater. Eyes widening in fear, Sport grabs the key to his closet, opens it, grabs some money, and before anybody even realizes he left, returns with a new Wii.
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 12:46 pm
"and its turning day havent seen anyone"
*ooh well just go sleep*
before he enters his room he notised the room next to him is all black
"... okaaaaaaaaayyy this place is weird"
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 2:04 pm
Brian_Link x-cupids arrow-x
Sorry I haven't been on... School's a drag... >.<
Hope it's a good first mission... 'Cause I'm not re-writing all of that. xp
MISSION- Flame on!
Go find a fire pokemon!
Pokemon:
Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokemon
Money: 600
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Fail, you CAN redo the mission. Your mission was good, the only reason I failed is you need to hit Ponyta more than once. 3-4 hits are typically what should be required in a match. So just add some length and you'll be good.
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 2:17 pm
Okay, this is the redo... I hope it's better than the other one.
MISSION- Flame on!
Go find a fire pokemon!
Pokemon:
Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokemon
Money: 600
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Sammy looked at the player at the other end of the table. The stakes were high, and she couldn’t afford to loose. While carefully planning her next move, she constantly looked up at her opponent’s face to see if he was expecting anything. He gave away nothing. Ever so delicately, she picked up the queen and moved it three spaces forward; two spaces away from his king. “Check.” She smirked, satisfyingly rolling her fingers on top of each other.
Squirt took his knight and captured Sammy’s queen, giving him the advantage since he still had his queen. “Squirtle squirt!” He exclaimed, thrusting his fist into the air. Her king could be easily conquered now.
“Aw, no fair! You had Troy helping you!” She laughed, looking at Troy who had, indeed, been the second part of the chess team that they had formed only thirty minutes ago. “Well, it’s not over, yet! I can still get you!” She said, only to be cut off by her TADS beeping. A mission briefing popped up on the screen.
“Well, I think our game can wait until after we’ve done our first mission, can’t it?” She asked, able to foresee the reaction they would give. Sure enough, the two pokemon violently nodded their heads, as if they had giant spinaraks on their heads. As if they could read each others’ minds, they all raced out of the HQ at the same time.
The bike was laying a few feet from the building, propped up against a small tree. Sammy unlocked the bike (apparently it had been chained to the tree...) and hopped on. Troy took a liking to the handle bars, while Squirt proffered to hang on to Sammy’s back. Pushing her foot down, Sammy began to speed off into the trees. Destination= unknown at the time being.
“So, I was thinking we’d just ride around in the forest until we stumbled upon a fire pokemon. You guys have any better ideas?” Asked Sammy, focusing on both the road and the acknowledgement of her pokemon. Both Troy and Squirt shook their heads. Sammy drove out into a part of the woods that had less trees then the others, trying to find a spot where a fire pokemon could be expected. Because she was looking for any traces of a fire pokemon, she failed to notice a large pot hole in the road.
“TYYYYY!!! TYYYYYY!!!!!” Troy yelled, but there was no stopping the inevitable. The front wheel of the bike slammed into the hole, sending the three flying through the air. At least they were all screaming in unison. They all hit the ground with a loud THUD. Sammy looked up.
“Any casualties?” Sammy asked, looking around at the dazed pokemon.
“Ty...”
“Squirt...”
Well, at least everyone could talk still. Sammy helped both of her pokemon up, then went and propped the bike up against a tree. She was about to get out a bottle of water from her bag when Squirt ran up to her.
“Squirt!” He yowled pulling at her ankle and nearly tipping her over. Sammy couldn’t understand what he was trying to tell her; he was just yelling and pointing, but there didn’t seem to be anything worth looking at in that direction.
“Slow down!” She cried, trying to make him see that he had to calm down in order for her to understand. He wouldn’t hear a word of it. Troy came over a minute later, and they both pulled at her feet, moving her legs in a way that resembled drunken walking. “Hey!” She exclaimed, trying to steady her feet, but it was no use. The little pokemon were still pushing her as hard as possible. At that moment Sammy smelled something; smoke. Out of instinct, she began to run frantically towards the source of the odor. She came to a halt at the end of a small clearing, Troy and Sammy behind her. There in front of her was a large oak tree that was going up in flames.
“Squirt, use water gun on the flames!!” She yelled through the billowing smoke. Squirt retracted his neck into his shell for a moment, then let out a jet stream of water onto the tree. The flames slowly died down until nothing was left but the burnt bark of the tree. Luckily, it seemed that no pokemon were hurt in the process. “Good job, Squirt.” She praised, while Troy did the same with a simple head gesture. The next moment was a bit confusing for everyone.
A wild ponyta trotted out of the brush, its fiery mane blowing little embers onto the nearby bushes. “So that’s what made the fire!” Sammy realized, but her revelation alerted the ponyta of someone’s presence. The ponyta let out an ear-splitting cry and began to trample the ground beneath its feet. It was obvious what it wanted; a challenge. “Alrighty, then,” Sammy said. “If it’s a fight you want, then it’s a fight you’ll get! Go, Squirt!” She yelled, and with his stepping up, the battle began.
The ponyta began with stomping on Squirt, a pretty effective attack. Squirt fell to the ground, dazed. “Squirt, you okay?" Sammy asked, worried for her little blue friend. It took only a moment or so for him to get up, and when he did, he still looked ready to fight. “Okay, Squirt, hang in there... Use water gun!” She yelled to her somewhat-worn-out pokemon. For the second time that day, Squirt leaned his head back and flung forward, releasing a powerful stream of water. Ponyta was hit, hard, with the blow, but there was still a good ways to go.
The ponyta whinnied a bit, warning Squirt that she was not the sort to be messed with. Squirt still held his ground. Glaring back at Squirt, the ponyta launched a glaring ember at Squirt. Squirt was lucky enough (or clumsy enough, you decide.) to have tripped only a second before, making the ember go right over his head. Sammy gasped as the ember nearly burnt her feet off. "Thanks for that, Squirt." She remarked sarcastically, looking at the burnt patch of ground infront of her. He smiled, and the battle continued.
"Okey-dokey, Squirt. Let's see some bubbles!" Sammy suggested, and Squirt jumped into action. Jumping into the air, Squirt released a small, yet some-what powerful, stream of bubbles at the ponyta, hitting her on the left side of her torso. It was a pretty good blow, and left the ponyta huffing from wearyness.
“Taaa! Taaaaa!” The ponyta wailed, pacing back and forth for a moment or so. Suddenly, the Ponyta let out a burst of speed and ran forward, the dust behind her hooves flying into the air. The ponyta tackled Squirt with an amazing amount of force, sending him flying backward. It was a critical hit, and the blow that almost took Squirt out of the battle. Still standing, Squirt boldly stood up to the pokemon that was more than ten times his size.
“Okay, let’s finish this... Pokeball, go!” She yelled, throwing a pokeball at the horse-like pokemon. The ponyta was sucked into the pokeball with a brilliant flash of light.
Once...
Twice...
Three times...
Ding!
“Yes!” Sammy exclaimed, running forward and hugging Squirt tightly, almost squeezing the life out of him.
“SQUIRT!” Squirt gasped, the air from his lungs gone. Sammy ran from him to Troy, then from Troy to the pokeball. She quickly picked it up.
“Alright! I’ll call you... Brook.” She said, satisfied with the new name. The group then made their way back to the spot where they had originally left the bike. Upon arrival, they found a group of aipom who had taken extreme interest in the new, shiny object in their habitat. It only took a few steps closer to scare them off. Sammy hopped on the bike, Troy and Squirt taking their places, and they rode off in the mid-day heat. It was surprising that they had only taken an hour or so... It seemed like ages ago that they left HQ
When they arrived back, Squirt and Troy immediately ran up to the room, eager to get some sleep after the hard day’s work. “What about the game?” Sammy called up, looking at the chess board that was now a bit crooked on the coffee table. Omitting a soft sigh, she cleaned up the game and went to the missions board. Tacking up a slip of paper on the board, she wrote out in big, bold letters:
FLAME ON
MISSION: COMPLETE
Afternote: Yes, I know it's a bit of a stretch with the whole 'tripping to avoid the ember' thing, but I was desperate to add the sarcastic remark, as saracasm does make the world go 'round. ^^
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 3:57 pm
"I guess since it's your first mission I /COULD/ grade it..." Ginji sighed as he took out a red grading pen. He then spies delicious cake over in the corner of his eye. "Hm...mission or cake..." he ponders as he walks over to the cake (not Ike's piece) with the mission.
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 4:06 pm
x-cupids arrow-x
Okay, this is the redo... I hope it's better than the other one.
MISSION- Flame on!
Go find a fire pokemon!
Pokemon:
Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokemon
Money: 600
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------Fail. I only saw Watergun and bubble, unless I read it wrong. Somehow I don't think that qualifies as 3-4 hits. And if we're going with that 3-4 hit = knockout, then Squirtle should have been KO'd by the Stomp + Critical Tackle (giving tackle 70 (I think) base power). Feel free to redo/edit the battle. And I may be being a hard a** on this mission, but trust me, if I wasn't you'd be hurting when you tried to do bigger missions like a level 4. I know from experience.
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 4:30 pm
Ok this is a redo of the mission hope i pass.
MISSION- Night Raid on Devon
Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Devon Corporation and steal 50 PokeNAVs. But you must not be seen be anyone. Beware there are 10 guards in the building. You must enter the building. Then make your way to level 3 were the PokeNAVs are. But get them quickly and return back. All the PokeNAVs are in one box.
Funds upon completion: 1000
Pokemon you may run into on the mission (you may only run into one):
Zigzagoon
Voltorb
Duskull
Funds upon completion: 1000
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Me: Alright it's my time to shine, my first mission.
I was heading to the message board for my first mission and my first mission is called:Night Raid on Devon
Objective: Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Devon Corporation and steal 50 PokeNAVs. But you must not be seen be anyone. Beware there are 10 guards in the building. You must enter the building. Then make your way to level 3 were the PokeNAVs are. But get them quickly and return back. All the PokeNAVs are in one box.
Me: Wow this should be fun my first mission is to test my battle skills and stealing techniques.
I was heading to my new Aqua Bike and headed towards the city of Rustboro.
Me:Wow so far no encounters with pokemon, or rival enemy teams, and i was hoping for a good trainer battle too.
At night i finnaly reached the Devon Corporation but it was still a little early so I went into the forest for some training and I encountered a Voltorb.
Me: Awesome a Voltorb go Abra (Its my first battle and my abra's first battle as well.)
Abra: 36hp
Foe Voltorb: 29hp
Me: Alright it looks like my abra is faster so i should attack. Abra use "confusion" yes it hit.
Abra: 36hp
Foe Voltorb: 29~8=21hp
Now it was the Voltorb's turn and it used "thundershock" and it hit as well.
Abra: 36~9=27hp
Foe Voltorb: 21hp
Me: Abra are you alright? Oh ok good then lets attack him again using "hidden power".
Abra: 27hp
Foe Voltorb: 21~12=9hp
Voltorb attacked using "screech".
Abra: 27hp, -2 defense
Foe Voltorb: 9hp
Me: Ok Abra use "confusion".No he dodged it.
Abra: 27hp, -2 defense
Foe Voltorb: 9hp
Voltorb attacked using "tackle", heavy damage do to the screech attack earlier.
Abra: 27~18=9hp, -2defense
Foe Voltorb: 9hp
Me: Ok Abra back into the pokeball.
He reaches in his pockets for a pokeball and grabs one to catch the Voltorb.
Me: Go, pokeball!
Pokeball: 1 roll, 2 rolls.
Me: Come on roll the 3rd time.
Pokeball: 3 rolls
Me: Yes i got my first pokemon, Voltorb.
He puts the caught Voltorb in his ball pocket and heads toward the Devon Corp.
Me: Ok time to get to work. Dang no way into the Corporation ill have to find a way inside
The Corporationwas heavily guarded and all he sees is 6 guards out of 10 so he thought some might be patroling the area.
Me: I only see 6 guards, they might be patroling the area so i should keep an eye out for them while looking for a way in.
He sees a way into the second floor and notices that it is through a window, and a small one at that.
Me: Hmm........ maybe i should squeeze through that window over there but i should look inside just incase.
He sees 2 guards in the room walking back and forth.
Me biggrin ang how am i supposed to get in, wait a minute i got an idea.
Jumps off the box and brings out the tired out Abra.
Me: Abra, come on out, Abra do u have enough energy to use a "hypnosis" attack on the guards in there.
Abra uses a "hypnosis" attack on the guards and then he sits outside and waits for my command.
Me: Ok Abra back to your pokeball, "Abra return."
Abra dodges the beam of the pokeball.
Me: Whats the matter Abra don't you want to go back in the pokeball?
Abra nods at Reaper.
Me: Ok Abra you can stay out of the pokeball just try not to get caught ok.
Abra nods up and down and stays by my side while i climb up into the window.
Me: Abra good job lets go to the third floor for those PokeNavs and end this mission for good.
Heads to the third floor quietly so he don't attract any attention.
Me: Ok we made it to the third floor and look there are the PokeNavs.
He grabs the box of PokeNavs and heads down the stairs and sees a guard coming up the stairs.
Me: Abra use "teleport" to get us out of here ok.
Abra nods and uses teleport.
Me: Abra once again good job lets get out of here before we get caught ok.
Abra nods and we make our escape swiftly but quietly.
Me: Alright our first mission is complete and you must be tired why dont you rest up in your pokeball ok.
Abra takes off away from the pokeball.
Me: Ok you can rest up in the bed ok.
Abra starts to rest up while Reaper puts up a paper in big bold letters.
NIGHT RAID ON DEVON
Mission: Complete
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 4:55 pm
Little Master Reaper MD2 Ok this is a redo of the mission hope i pass. MISSION- Night Raid on Devon Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Devon Corporation and steal 50 PokeNAVs. But you must not be seen be anyone. Beware there are 10 guards in the building. You must enter the building. Then make your way to level 3 were the PokeNAVs are. But get them quickly and return back. All the PokeNAVs are in one box. Funds upon completion: 1000 Pokemon you may run into on the mission (you may only run into one): Zigzagoon Voltorb Duskull Funds upon completion: 1000 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I don't think I'm experienced enough to grade this mission, but then again, when have I ever been qualified to do anything? My gut instinct is to fail you without reading the thing, but upon reading it it shows you have an okay sense of battling. More so then some people anyways. But what really got me was the presentation, missions (even lvl 1) should have good grammar and spelling. Basically, I want you to change all the 'i' to 'I' and fix any other spelling or grammar errors. A big part of your grade is presentation. And if you could use quotes, and write as you would find in a book, it wouldn't hurt. (Just be sure to double space in between paragraphs and such). All in all. Decent attempt. Fail.
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 5:05 pm
ok ill try harder then ever before
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