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I understand all of that, and I have lost the majority of the fights I have ever been in because I try to be a realistic as possible and allow her to take blows like a champ.

The armor thing is only to upgrade her from the basic fighter she is, add a little bit of protection without going overboard and not being able to move efficiently enough to evade. That's why I liked those shorts, they are flexible but have a small amount of padding to cushion a hit enough to make it bearable, of course depending on how big a hit it is. I want her upper torso to have the same protection, but they didn't make an upper torso to match that one.

I'll probably just end up having the artist I commission draw out a similar piece for the top, and then throw in some extra gold to draw the armor by itself for the profile.

Welp, I've got the basics of her profile down finally. I would enjoy some critic, since the profiles for this tournament were graded and accepted.

Red- Profile

I'm not so sure if there are any Gaian items that would fit with her armor very well.
I'll have to check

I'll offer my critique. There is a lack of detail regarding the extent of her abilities. I'm going to look at this from a tournament profile grading standard because I believe you said you're interested in jumping in. Let's look at the first ability as an example:

-Air solidification: As written it has a great deal of potential for causing problems. I'd say the limitations are pretty thin right now or they could use more explanation. For a tournament in particular you need to describe what her level of skill in manipulating this power is at.

If she can basically control five invisible limbs with a presumably long reach, and modify the physical properties of those limbs presumably at will such that they can become as hard and presumably as sharp as steel or greater, she will be borderline OP for most of the tournaments I've been in. I say presumably because there is simply a lack of detail in those areas.

How long can she make these tendrils? How fast can she move them? Can she move all five independently without difficulty as if she had literally five extra arms? Does it require any real concentration or effort to modify the properties of these tendrils?

And you note she uses her power specifically to create such tendrils, but can she still use it in other manners? Can she fire a high-speed projectile of invisible compressed air like a bullet? Or an extremely sharp disc of air like an invisible blade?

Being in an environment without air or a vacuum is pretty much a non-issue because those aren't reasonable fighting conditions for most competitors besides those on the level of superheroes or demigods. I suppose you could say underwater, but that would still put most competitors at a disadvantage.

This line of rationale extends to much of the other abilities.

In terms of general Gaia "mainstream" RP the profile is fine because the sky is really the limit and profiles aren't really a necessity. However, it is always more helpful to be descriptive in exactly how an ability works so that the other RPers can play off of it. You certainly want to give yourself some leeway to adapt to situations that will lead to more interesting RP, whether it means giving your character a boost to her abilities or giving her some more restrictions.

But in a tournament going outside the bounds of a profile is generally a violation, so the bounds of your abilities need to be pretty clearly defined. Tournaments vary in what is or is not acceptable, of course, and my own critique is admittedly from the standpoint of a tournament of a lower power level where a highly skilled and highly trained human fighter could reasonably compete.

Psychokinesis, EM Manipulation, psh...

Psychometabolism is where its at.

What about superhuman control over one's body and center of gravity.

Alright, so far I think I have the first ability outlined rather well. I added in and italicized what's new. If everything looks better I'll move onto the next one, if anything else needs clarifying let me know.

Be all shield toting and s**t. Yeah it is fun.

I won't protest to that, any useful skills are always welcomed.