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 Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 2:51 pm
((Sorry. My first time trying with the whole panic-thing.))
Sakura continuned to hold on to him, feeling competely ridiculous. She was hoping that wouldn't happen, not like this....but, what was the bright white light-person-thing about? That didn't happen before, it was as if that person had saved her. But she didn't know who that was. And it was the first time the monster showed weakness, and right before she woke, the fiend had shrunk, to a man, to the one who started the fire. But she didn't know who it was, but now she knew the truth; someone had set fire to that house. It was no accident as everyone had believed.
She tried to steady her breathing, and noticed now that the place was a bit more torn up now than she thought. The carpet was now torn in spots, and the ceiling looked weather-worn.
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 2:51 pm
((*sighs* just go on with the RP, science (or math, whatever it is) is not my strong point,))
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 2:52 pm
meganargetlam ((*sighs* just go on with the RP, science (or math, whatever it is) is not my strong point,)) ((I hear ya. That explanation confused me a bit as well. xd ))
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 2:55 pm
[It's called a mind map, or a story map. Usually you write them for your own stories so that you don't get any plot holes or you can understand what you need to explain from before the story happens.]
[I use it to predict the future!! DUN DUN DUN!!!]
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 2:58 pm
((Please don't talk about stories, I already have a headache, and talking about stories makes me think of Ramakura Riders *my current project* and my friend Elianna always gives me a headache about it.))
Alli froze, clinging to the wall with fear. She stared down at the ground, no thoughts whatsoever going through her mind. She couldn't speak, and she couldn't decide which way to go. Up, or down...
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:00 pm
The doctor had gone outside and was walking around the building and saw Alli holding on to the wall"uh do you need help".
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:01 pm
She stared down at him, turning slightly green. "You think?" She managed to squeak out, just barely loud enough for him to hear. She didn't dare move anything besides her mouth, for fear of losing balance.
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:03 pm
[Lol, I remember when I had to write a book for my Bachelor's of Literature degree, yeah... it was pretty messed... ]
[I still have nothing to post, my character doesn't know what happened yet]
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:06 pm
"I am always thinking and i already did the math" steps over to his left one step."All right let go i will catch you and then I can help you into your room".
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:07 pm
((DId you read the last post I put up here. It's on this page, I think.
nvm I'll continue anyways, get rid of hte tension a bit.))
Sakura finally let go of Sai, who looked panic-struck. "I-I'm so sorry Sai..." she said quitely, tears still running down her cheeks. He probably hated her now. She tried to run off, but was shaking so much that she fell to the ground. She got back up again and started to stumble off, mabye to Mrs. Jones room or something. Somewhere that she'd be ok.
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:08 pm
[Read it the moment you pressed Submit, my character knows everything is demolished, but 'why?' nah.]
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:10 pm
((Gee, in RL I wouldn't do that Doctor.))
Alli stared down at him. "WHAT?" She yelled down at him. She gripped the wall tightly, but one of the rocks melted under the heat that was coming from her hands, and she fell down.
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:12 pm
Sai grabbed onto her again, he didn't want her to leave.
"Sakura, stop..."
He helped her on to her feet, and gave her a kiss.
"I told you, I want to be someone important to you, and to do that, I'd never abandon you."
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:14 pm
((Damn, I drank to much right now it's hard to type normally so expect typos))
Maryn got out of her room and went down the hallway. She was looking for that elemental teacher Kay-Dash because he would be the only one to explain why she had frozen tears and maybe she had a new power. She hoped not.
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 3:14 pm
((In real life there is not the Doctor there))
The doctor catches her "see what did i tell you i knew i would catch you now then why were you trying to get in through the balcony"? What do you mean you knew you were 92 percent sure all well at least it ended well.
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