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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 8:04 pm
Masamune 5.0 Sorry about the delay. I can't finish the next chapter until I figure out the name of that wierd creature that pulls your caravan around in Crystal Chronicles. I did however update the Character Info a bit. Um.... I used to know. Popotamus I think.....
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 11:26 am
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 3:15 pm
Aww. D= I wanna see Chapter Unlucky. >_> 13.
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:14 pm
Chapter Thirteen is up. You may now post comments and/or criticism.
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:17 pm
I have the biggest headache right now so I will read it later.
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:20 pm
@Seaphers: Oh, go ahead and take the first spot with your nonsense. D<
@Masamune: I'M LOST!! gonk
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:21 pm
I keep expecting Betman to turn into Astoroth.
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:25 pm
Betman @Seaphers: Oh, go ahead and take the first spot with your nonsense. D<
That's why I did it wink
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:42 pm
@ Seaphron: That's fine. Read it when you feel up to it. @ Betman: Yes, you are. But soon you will be found... ninja @ LF: This is madness!
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:47 pm
Epic as always. I'm running out of ways to say "Good job" crying
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:49 pm
Masamune 5.0 @ Seaphron: That's fine. Read it when you feel up to it. @ Betman: Yes, you are. But soon you will be found... ninja @ LF: This is madness! THIS IS SPARTA! D<
=D
I know that was from SCII, but still, also 300.
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:51 pm
Actually it was meant to be a 300 quote. >_>
Anyway... is there anything wrong with the story or something that needs improving?
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:53 pm
Masamune 5.0 Actually it was meant to be a 300 quote. >_> Anyway... is there anything wrong with the story or something that needs improving? Ohh. THought it was from SC for a second. >_>
THIS IS CAKE TOWN.
Not as of yet, it's really good.
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:53 pm
Masamune 5.0 Actually it was meant to be a 300 quote. >_> Anyway... is there anything wrong with the story or something that needs improving? Honestly...no. This is the first time I've read a story and not found a flaw in it. Congratulations on that.
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