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 Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 5:59 am
Like, OH. MY. GOD.
So, like, I read the new chapter of Gendou's Storytime? And I've NEVER been so disappointed in my entire life! I mean, goooosh! LAST CHAPTER we had AWESOME FIGHT SCENES and this just didn't deliver! I mean, who CARES about BORING highly importantexposition?!?! And the Gendou/Mory hints were just...UGGGH!!! (I mean, you get two people alone together and...lol wink ) I mean, it's SOOOO OBVIOUS that he's got a thing for Ananel and now Gendou the Author's just ruining it!
Well, if he gets rid of Blue/Alliance, then that's it. I'm LEAVING THE FANDOM!!!!!!1 scream scream mad stare
[/the Dark Side of fangirling, inspired by HBP wank everywhere]
Please don't shoot me. I don't think ANYTHING like this. I just pulled the ship stuff out of my a** (similar, possibly, to the methods employed by scary fangirls), not my libido. And for the record, I enjoyed this chapter. I just had to do this at some point.
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 6:53 am
I love mory's 'perils of penelope' role.
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 8:34 am
T_____T
I'd hate him if I didn't understand him so much. Knowledge IS power, and it is important.
Still. *emos*
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 9:47 am
Ah, nice chapter, Gendou.
Can't wait untilt he next installment.
But this chapter had more explination to it, more.... 'meaning'.
This explained Gendou a little bit better, and explained what he strives for.
He joined Defenestrated for Knowledge, and Knowledge is Power.
Gendou just strives for power. To be...
The GOD
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 11:51 am
Jeeze, how are you supposed to take him down? Beat him relentlessly with memories? Gah, Gendou is too scarily focused and willing to give up his life force. heart Love it! I like these parts more than battle scenes, always have. Though I'm a big fan of Katar, they're just cool.
I want to be in the story, too ; ;
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 12:02 pm
To be unknowable is to be unstoppable. His skill at obfuscation and evasion must be impressive to foil Romuel's purported power.
I wonder how Graye will react to Mory's disappearance? Will she leave, now that her task has been completed by a third party?
Why is Gendou's memory of meeting Defenestrated hazy? Who is playing whom?
Did Ananel just cast a spell on... zzzz...
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 12:06 pm
Westonian Did Ananel just cast a spell on... zzzz... *tucks you in* I must be a crossdresser 'cause I know I'd make a good mom. whee 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 2:09 pm
Romuel I love mory's 'perils of penelope' role. I DO TOO 4laugh heart ------ Gendou is my favorite sort of villain. No, seriously, I'm not fangirling this time. As a lady geek, I've always loved the "relentless pursuit of knowledge/power" sort. ...nobody believes me. ;_; Fine. "Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Go to school, be evil."
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 2:58 am
Chapter Sixteen is up. Comment and enjoy. Moryera "Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Go to school, be evil." That's always been my motto.
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 3:04 am
GOSH. Silly white shaman. Doesn't he know ENGLISH?!
Trust a man to be so out of tune...
domokun
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 5:28 am
Kyraa GOSH. Silly white shaman. Doesn't he know ENGLISH?! I don't know that I feel safe following these people. This is all your fault. ...Hahaha. Proper ********, I don't mean to make things worse for you if you're busy--but is there any way you could describe the geography of this world? I'm just curious and I find that sort of thing intensely interesting.
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 5:59 am
Poor Gendou. Sure, he's a mass murderer, but he seems so sad.
Poor Usagi. She's probably beside herself.
Poor Legionairres. They're so hosed.
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 6:18 am
Danti: Quick (and incomplete) MS-Paint Map, just for you:  A few notes: The green dot is Denswe, where Weston found Mory, and where Gendou picked up the bounty.
The black dotted line is the political boundary of the small Zendrake kingdom, extended by the rivers on each side.
To the north are the Orc hordes, to the south the Flatsalt caliphates.
The Kamrin tribe is just off the map detail to the north.
This is not a finished map. Additions will be made as necessary. I hope this is what you were looking for.
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 6:39 am
Gendou "I know," Ananel whispered tightly, "that we're proper ******** class="clear"> That's probably my favorite line in this new chapter.
Not just because he said a curse word, but that fact that he DID say a curse word, especially being a preist.
I'm not saying that preists don't curse, it's just that preists HARDLY curse.
And also I like how a tint of fear is in with the exclamation.
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 7:00 am
Yay, a map! Wow, that's a really small area. Makes sense, they are all on foot.
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