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 Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 10:49 am
She shrugged and continued crying. "Nothing." She growled. But it wasn't her voice. He was getting stronger.
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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:15 pm
Valencia closed her eyes and slowly inhaled, her breath shudded upon realizing who the voice belonged to. She opened her eyes and they drifted down to look at Aster, who read is sister's ashen expression like a book, instantly grabbing Neomi's wrist.
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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:45 pm
((I don't know where to go or what to do.))
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Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 3:34 pm
*Red writing will be Jared's actions and voice, and Blue will be Neomi's. And D, you could run into us or something..*
"Let me go, you mother-" He didn't get to finish, as Neomi's own body took over. "Jared, quit! How are you even doing this? She grabbed Aster's hand and pulled him into a hug. "Leave me alone!" She pushed him away, tears still forming in her eyes.
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 7:37 am
(Aster now has whiplash Lol!!! Not really but kinda........ :^P)
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 8:04 am
(Aster now has whiplash Lol!!! Not really but kinda........ :^P) (Btw remember that Valencia is purple, Zaria is pink, and Aster is deep blue.)
Aster refused to let Neomi/ Jared go, keeping his grip firm while Jared and Neomi fought for control. Valencia, however, had backed up a few steps, unsure of what to do, torn between helping her dear friend or eluding the grasp of Jared.
"What happening?" Zaria asked not knowing that whole story of the past days.
"I'm not sure but I know who's doing it."Valencia murmured.
"Jared?"
"Jared."
Valencia exhaled sharply, stepping foreward and casting a glance over at Aster, " Let her go." She slowly whispered. When Aster didn't she repeated herself, " Let them go."
"Are you sure"
"No."
She stepped ever closer as Aster reluctantly released his grip on Neomi's wrist.
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 5:25 pm
Neomi smiled wickedly. "Good thing you did. I was about to kill you." She told him, then threw back her head and laughed.
"Why are you doing this to me? Get the hell out!" She screamed furiously.
"Oh, my Neo. However will I explain?" Neomi stopped to think, putting her hands on her hips.
"DON"T call me that, dumbA$$." She whispered. "Just leave us alone."
Neomi sighed and shook her head. "You really don't get it, do you? I CAN'T get out. Your stuck with me for the rest of your life."
Neomi screamed in horror and threw a fit. "FOR MY WHOLE LIFE?" The walls shook.
Neomi stopped and shook her finger. "Now Neo, we don't want to throw a fit, do we? It just makes things worse." To show what he meant, he made Neomi throw herself at Valencia, then punch her in the nose. Blood came out.
"Oh GOD. What did you do?" Neomi backed away. "I'm-I'm sorry!" She yelled. Then she turned and ran out the door, crying.
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 5:30 pm
Niel could hear screaming from in the distance and rushed towards the source. He saw Neomi running out in tears. Niel grabbed Neomi, stopping her in her tracks. "What the hell is going on?" he asked.
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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 6:07 pm
She grabbed his arm and twisted it. "Don't touch me." She whispered.
Neomi bit her lips and apologized. "Jared..I think he's...I'm sorry." She looked down and sighed, trying to find the right words.
"He's right here." Neomi looked Niel in the eyes, and cast him a scary smile.
*Sorry it's switched around this time. Blue's Jared and Neomi's red*
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 6:17 pm
Niel easily pulled out of her grip and wrapped his arm around hers. Niel prodded multiple pressure points to make her body go limp so he would have a good combo. Three right jabs to the torso, a left hook to her kidneys, multiple hits to the spine and neck, a head-butt, and a bicycle kick to her jaw to finish it all off.
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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 6:40 pm
Neomi groaned, and then fell to the floor. "Whats wrong with you? I said I'm sorry!" She moaned again and began crying hot tears.
Neomi laughed. "You think that hurts?" She whispered in glee.
She bit her lip.
*normal colors again look far above*
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2010 4:22 pm
Quote: Neomi smiled wickedly. "Good thing you did. I was about to kill you." She told him, then threw back her head and laughed. "Why are you doing this to me? Get the hell out!" She screamed furiously. "Oh, my Neo. However will I explain?" Neomi stopped to think, putting her hands on her hips. "DON"T call me that, dumbA$$." She whispered. "Just leave us alone." Neomi sighed and shook her head. "You really don't get it, do you? I CAN'T get out. Your stuck with me for the rest of your life." Neomi screamed in horror and threw a fit. "FOR MY WHOLE LIFE?" The walls shook. Neomi stopped and shook her finger. "Now Neo, we don't want to throw a fit, do we? It just makes things worse." To show what he meant, he made Neomi throw herself at Valencia, then punch her in the nose. Blood came out. "Oh GOD. What did you do?" Neomi backed away. "I'm-I'm sorry!" She yelled. Then she turned and ran out the door, crying. (On the first line were you responding to V or A? I'm confused but it doesn't matter now I can cope....) Valencia fell backward with a surprised gasp then stood again, running out the door behind Neomi only to find Neil beating her limp body. " What the hell?" She snapped before trying to rip Neil of Neomi. "Valencia!" Aster called out as his sister ran out the door, blood streaking down her face. Zaria rushed to the door way, Aster standing beside her watching Valencia, Neil, and Neomi before jumping in, ripping Neil off Neomi. "What is your problem?" He yelled with a firm grip on Neil upper arm.
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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:41 pm
"She had it coming." Niel growled.
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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:41 am
(I don't like the picture that I have for Aster ( I didn't think he'd become such a big character) So I'm gonna put a new picture up)
Aster let Neil go, remembering the mind trick Jared set upon him.
Valencia sat down beside Neomi, looking her over to make sure she wasen't to badly hurt. She stopped for only a moment, She could change at any time, Her mind warned her, But she is still my friend..... Move away... Help her...... Be Alert....Be careful Her mind conflicted but she didn't move away even though every inch of her desperately wanted to.
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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 1:52 pm
Niel turned towards Aster and swam past him and curved up to the surface. Just as he passed Aster's ear, Niel whispered a brief message, "We need to talk."
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