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 Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 7:47 pm
Rpc Name: Kei Fallen
Village: Cloud
Rank: Academy
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Inuzuka
What you know about the clan/bl: (If you put everything it will be denied on the spot)
At a certain age The Inzuka clan members acquire their Puppy. The dogs are usually named after colors. Clan members and the dogs become Companions and they are close and train together. In exams Inuzka members are allowed to use there companions.
Rp Sample (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan)
Kei made her way to the edge of the forest. She let out a soft yawn. “It’s far too early to be up.” Mizuiro let out a little yawn to. “Yep you’re my pup.” Kei looked over her shoulder to see a man appear. “Late as always.” Kei smiled and turned around. “So you ready to do this.” The man walked a little bit closer and got in a righting position.
Kei tossed a small pill at Mizuiro. Mizuiro swallowed the pill and took the shape of Kei “now let the fun begin.” Kei and Mizuiro charged at the man and Kei did a round house kick, but the man grabbed her and flung her into a tree. Mizuiro came up and bit the man on the arm. Kei got her self up after hitting the tree. “Damn you” She did a couple of hand signs and a burst of chakra flowed out of her. “I’m just beginning.” Kei started to become more beat like. She charged at him.
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Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 10:44 pm
Rpc Name: Kutsue Kaguya
Village: Iwagakure I guess
Rank: academy student?
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kaguya Clan/Shikotsumyaku
What you know about the clan/bl: Well, they have the ability to manipulate their skeletal structure, allowing them to grow extra bones and change the shape, density, and I believe the mass of bones. They are known for their amazing offensive and defensive capabilities, especially when it comes to taijutsu, I believe that they also have a slight regeneration factor.
Rp Sample:
Kutsue's breathing came in labored gasps, his long white hair clinging stickily to his face, as he hid in the uppermost branches of a tree. He had been running for hours now, and it was beginning to take a toll on his body. He closed his eyes as he leaned his head up against the tree's trunk, trying to clear his head so he could come up with a plan. Before he could do anything however, Kutsue heard the sound of a cracking twig below him. To his amazement, the man that had been pursuing him was now directly below him, completely open to attack. Without a moment of hesitation, Kutsue slid silently off of the branch, the only sound to be heard was the ruffle of his clothes as they billowed in the wind.
With a thought Kutsue caused a bone spike to protrude through his palm just before he reached the target, as sharp and deadly as any blade. The bone blade sunk deep into the neck of the man with the satisfying and distinct sound of a blade stabbing through flesh. But just as Kutsue thought it was over the clone exploded in a gust of cutting wind, it had been a trap, a trap he had walked right into. Kutsue went flying into a nearby tree, his skin torn and ripped by the cutting blades of wind, but as he struggled to his feet most of the wounds already began to heal, save for some of the deeper wounds. His arm had broken in two places, but for him it was as simple as a thought to fix.
Looking around wildly, Kutsue formed a shield of bone on his right arm as he readied himself for the next attack. Hearing a rustling behind him, Kutsue immediately spun and launched several bone bullets formed from his phalanges. But as when he saw who he had struck, his eyes widened in horror as he let out an ear-splitting wail of pain and disbelief. Standing there was his beloved sister, blood seeping from her chest, a stunned expression on her face. Looking down at her chest, she lifted a feeble hand towards her wounds, as if she didn't believe they were real. Looking back at Kutsue, she tried to speak, but was suddenly overcome as she slumped to the ground.
Kutsue stumbled over to the cold corpse that had been his sister and knelt down beside her, tears streaming freely down his face. Lifting a shaky hand towards her body, Kutsue mumbled to himself, "why were you here? You should be back home." As his hand reached his sister, Kutsue noticed something was wrong, her body didn't feel right, and then suddenly there was a piercing pain through his chest, and in front of him he could see the tempered steel blade of a katana. But that couldn't be right, the katana would have to be going through him for him to see it at that angle. Looking past the katana for a moment, Kusue suddenly noticed that his sister was no longer there, instead there was nothing more than a rock.
Looking down at his chest, Kutsue saw that he had indeed been run through, but for some reason it was as if his brain hadn't realized it yet. He recognized that he was in pain, but it wasn't the kind of pain he had been expecting, it was almost dull, not sharp like he had been expecting. Looking over his shoulder, Kutsue saw the masked face of his pursuer, his smile obvious even through the cloth mask that covered most of his face. "If you're going... to get close... enough to stab me...", Kutsue struggled to say through labored breaths, clearly one of his lungs had been pierced as it was now very difficult to breath. "You better... make sure... you kill me... with the first strike...", with that, Kutsue's back almost seemed to explode as bone spikes ripped through his back to pierce his pursuer.
The man never even saw it coming. More than a dozen razor edged bones pierced through his torso, ending his life in a bloody haze. Kutsue rose shakily to his feet as he grabbed hold of the katana's blade that was still protruding from his torso. With great effort, Kutsue began to push the blade back through the way it had come. Once he could no longer grab it, he formed one of his index fingers into a thin square shaped tool to push it out the rest of the way. Kutsue would be in the hospital for a little while, but his body was already beginning to heal itself, after all, he pushed bones through all parts of his body all the time, it would take more than one sword wound to take him down.
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Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 10:52 pm
This was excellent, it showed that you know how to Shikotsumyaku skillfully, and that your a skiiler RPer 
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Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 10:53 pm
Yes, Academy Student.
I like it, you showed an understanding of their powers and weakness, and even utilized the regeneration correctly. I say approved.
-edit: Oh poop! 'Anyone' beat me to it D;
--edit once more: Who the heck is that guy in yur pic greg?
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Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 10:58 pm
good job, i like your rp sample, though it appears someone has beat me to it
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Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 10:59 pm
thank you, I'm glad you liked it mrgreen
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Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 11:09 pm
Hey! I thought you said I wasnt anyone, I was greg! And its Koga from Inuyasha.
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 6:41 am
Rpc Name: Kōgayatsu Fūma Village: Kumogakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Roronoa Clan What you know about the clan/bl: From what I understand the clan has special training secrets and techniques that make it's members unique. Each clan member is trained to be of perfect physical and mental strength, which would lead one to believe that over time the clan members would become exceptionally strong and have great stamina. The clan's training entails great swordsmanship which gives great offensive prowess and boast a good defense as well. Each clan member who undergoes this training forgoes the other Ninja disciplines and focuses on taijutsu training giving them great ability in the taijutsu arts. As a downside those who take this training have a limited use of ninjutsu and no use of genjutsu. Rp Sample: 日本語A small haze of smoke wafted over a giant dirt lot that was a regular ninja training area, with the outline of Kōga's tall form being seen through the smoke a second later. He had flickered onto grounds with high-speed movement, allowing him distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appear as if he had simply teleported onto the field, the smoke used to mask his movements. the young ninja stood firm, his dark red demonic eyes visible through the light smoke. In one sudden fluid and rapid movement Kōga stepped out with his right foot and drew his katana from it's sheath with his left hand. He came with a low sweep of the his sword, low to the ground then arching upwards clearing the smoke in his swords wake of speed. His red eyes locked upon the one that would be his opponent this day and Kōga pushed off the balls of his feet taking off with blinding speed as his clan's training was designed to hone speed, physical prowess and stamina. The moment the young shinobi was within five feet of his target he crouched low to the ground while placing his left hand around the black grip of his sword hilt, and lifted up into the air with great speed and agility. Having dropped the black sheath of his sword his right hand was firmly gripped around his wrist and Kōga came with an upwards vertical slash aimed towards his opponent. After slashing his opponent a burst of blue flames erupted from where his target was slashed engulfing his foe in the intense heat of the flames. Kōga then landed softly on the ground turning his back to the flamed engulfed enemy. This was the single greatest skill in the art of Ittōryū the single sword use of the Santōryū style of the Roronoa Clan. Lifting his sheath from the ground Kōga spun the sheath in his right hand as he rose his left arm to come over hsi head and slip into it's sheath with smooth ease. The black cross guard gave a metallic clink as it secured within the black saya and the lue flames erupted in an explosion leaving the face of a savage dragon depicted in the blue fie. (I didn't see the techniques listed in the taijutsu forum so here are the Santōryū Techniques http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/SantÅryÅ«#Nit.C5.8Dry.C5.AB_Attacks Also if this doesn't cut it then I don't know what else to do. If you want back story read my profile or follow my rpc's roleplay, this was about demonstrating skill in the ways of the clan and showing an understanding of the clan. I think I just about covered it and then some. I not only described the attack but I described Kōga performing the attack with precision and yes that is a technique within theSantōryū style it is called Hiryū Kaen (飛竜火焔, Flying Dragon Blaze). Yes the post has a lot of description because that is what an rp post is description without description it would be nothing. I know these attacks better than any one piece fan I've met and I feel I am capable of utilizing these technique with efficiency and great skill. But ultimately the decision lies with you all so cast your judgment whatever it may be. )
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 3:32 pm
Your whole sample is nothing but description, theres not much story behind it, and it doesnt show me that you can RP skillfully with it. All it says is "I can describe things with great detail. Please put a bit more of a story behind it, and more of actually using the techniques for a certain situation, rather than just telling what the move does before it is performed.
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 6:45 pm
Much better! You had description, but added a storytelling element as well. Congratulations
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 6:51 pm
gregar828 Much better! You had description, but added a storytelling element as well. Congratulations -sigh- Thank you, man this has been a rough couple weeks I feel like hell, but thank you
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Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 2:27 pm
Rpc Name: Samedare Mamoru Uchiha
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Sannin/ANBU Classified
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Uchiha
What you know about the clan/bl: Well, the uchiha clan are well known throughout Konoha as for there sharingan. They are also feared by Konoha due to there sharingan's extraordinary abilities. Hashirama Senju and Madara Uchiha came together and formed the leaf after there clan dispute. Clan members are not born with there sharingan, but activate it through there life span by going through some sort of mental or physical stress.
Rp Sample : "Is that all you've got?" A cloud of dust kicked up. "For a ninja, you fight like a wuss" A pale hand brushes a balled fist away. "You won't get anywhere with such effort like that." A dull brass fist finds its target. Bone crunching. Agonizing moan. "Heh, got me that time." The pale hand clenches, fires. A grunt. A pale appendage jabs into a brown ribcage. A figure slumps to the dirt, and feces covered ground, clutching his side. "Game and match." said Samedare, standing victorious over his sparring opponent. Turning his head, he smiles toward the crowd of fighters waiting there turn. "Who's next?" Him and the other challengers stood in the village cavern. It was a little group that some villagers put together called, "Fight Club". No one spoke about it, or even thought about it, only came when time. A tall, broad, well built fighter stepped forward. His head shone brighter than the Suna sun, his fist could've been the size of Samedare's head and his body odor probably is what brought down the Titanic. "You be no tough" The opponent said. Fight club was strictly taijutsu- some clan techniques that were either physical or doujutsu were allowed- meaning ninjutsu or gen resulted in DQ. He closed his eyes as he accepted his opponent's challenge. His eyes opened, revealing that his iris had turned red. It changes color to red to reflect the change of intake in the eyes, as the pupils divide among this shell in the back of his eye, which was the lens. His pupils within the eyes became surrounded by the pupils of his sharingan, known to most ninjas as the tomes; exactly three of these tomes spiraled around his center pupil. At this stage of his doujutsu, these pupils where meant to record certain intake from what they see and project it into the eye. This information comes faster than normal human vision, it is sped along by the user's chakra and the eye's ability to accept all of this and translate it to the brain. I don't think this bronze dummy understands what he's up against. he thought. His opponent began spreading his legs and crouching his upper body as he entered a horse stance of fighting. His foe came falling down towards him. He had kicked his leg via to send himself full speed toward Samedare. Carefully watching, Samedare folds his arms, standing quite calm and ready. *Thud*, the ground shook as his opponent's large mass impacted the ground; by stepping one leg far out, Samedare pivots himself around the foe. Pushing off the ground with his hands and feet, his opponent catapults a few feet off the ground and comes down on one leg, swinging the other in Samedare's direction. Still staying calm, he waited for the right chance to use a preemptive strike. He leans his upper body back, avoiding the kick and quickly crouches down low, sweeping his leg below his opponent's in order to knock him off balance. His opponent spun in mid air as he fell off his balance but, caught himself by extending one hand downward and using the momentum to enter a deadly spin kick. (Reminds me of akuma. >->) Reacting barely in time to avoid, he sways below the flurry of kicks and barrel rolls to the other side of the opponent. The crowd cheers as the fight continues, "Eh, I haven't used this skill in a long while. Need to work on my reaction time.". He had foreseen the kick but did not understand why he did not act on it sooner. He caught himself, breathing a little heavy. He did not expect such a big man to move so quick and nimbly. "Time to step my game up. Wait, isn't this guy dumb?" he thought. He reached into his pouch and pulled out a kunai, then looked at the large beastly man walking towards him pounding his fists. Throwing said kunai, the projectile flew past his opponent and missed, landing erected into the ground. His foe froze as he did not see the kunai and looked down at it, "Har har har, puny mon missed." he mocked. As he turned around to continue charging, all that he could see was Samedare flying through the air with one leg extended. "DYNAMIC ENTRY!!" The kick successfully grinding across the cheek of his foe, sent him plummeting into the ground out cold. "WINNER, SAMEDARE!!!"
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Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 2:52 pm
Denied:
{though this isn't actually a factor, this is my concern}
1/2.) A few things, were you approved to be a Sannin?
1.) You didn't tell me anything about what you knew regarding the clan, only that you knew things...
2.) Where did you get the information {From this guild} that allows you to read movements at a speed 200% faster than a normal shinobi?
3.) You barely used the Sharingan in the post, show me you fully understand what the Sharingan can do.
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Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 3:06 pm
Yes I was approved sannin
The information regarding the clan was within the post itself. The human eyes that work as receptors visualize, record, and pass on everything to the brain by sending electrical pulses. Electricity moves pretty damn fast, sharingan is sappose to suppliment those electrical pulses through chakra. Estimating the time of electricity+ the sharingan ability= I concluded that would be 200% greater.
I clearly posted in the begining that ninjutsu and genjutsu were forbidden. Sharingan techniques are 80-90% gen and nin. The rest are just physical enhancements. The information I posted is what you know, just scientifically stated. This post was sappose to show that my character doesn't really abuse sharingan like the other uchiha's, just that when he needs a boost in combat, he activates it. (Uchiha's tend to pull an ichigo by using sharingan 24/7). My rpc uses sharingan to avoid some attacks, and barley avoid one due to his inactive use of it. (Seeing as how I am not a uchiha yet, I was't sure what standard lvl he should be at.)
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Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 3:14 pm
1/2.) Alright, by who?
1.) You can't just pull a number from nowhere, if it doesn't say it in the guild, then don't bother to put one. Otherwise, you could have picked 500% or something.
2.) The part that asks what you know...is so you post what you know. Its merely a preliminary to determine if you understand it without RPing, so please fill it out.
3.) You used it effectively for Taijutsu, but I want you to show me you can use it for ninjutsu, and genjutsu.
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