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 Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 9:20 am
((I'm glad you feel that way, but I counted all my posts. You didn't say anything about fragment sentences or short ones. wink
But, I edited it nonetheless.))
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 2:59 am
((Good effort. All you need is fix your fifth post and everything will be fine. You're getting there, Evil. Don't give up.))
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:44 pm
(( It has 22 sentences. XD I've had three other people check all my posts. ))
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:50 pm
(I just counted them, both qualify, so let finish up this ceremony)
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 12:31 am
Tyrant_Hatsume (( Gawh! I'm sorry!! It's been forever! )) †»‡«Hatsume»‡«† Hatsume pupils widened and directed themselves at Ogato again when he spoke out, his words entirely grabbing at her focus. Wiping away everything else at the moment. She was lost for words, wanting to respond but every time she went to actually say it, it caught stuck in her throat. Finally, a couple words fought out, ".. Ogato... I- ... You're words are too kind." but then, being as lost in the moment as she was, nearly flinched when kasen had flash stepped over to a near seat, asking his concerning comment because of how red and nervous looking she was. "Ehh? Me?! I-I'm fine! Nothing wrong going on here..!!" She smacked a hand directly onto her tail to force it's uncontrolled movements to stop. Damn trouble making fuzz brush! Yeesh, he nearly scared her half to death! Looking to the cookie, food- a weakness all so easily known in her life. Never the less, she'd take the wolf-shaped cookie with a embarrassed short. "Thankyou." It didn't long after that the young wolf had to go, which was fine... that was he wouldn't see her break the cookie in half, handing the other half to Ogato in a sharing gesture towards his mouth. >=) Her piece on the other hand would be already nibbled on with the help with her right hand. <..<((Sorry I took so long I couldn't decide on what to put, I hope I didn't keep you waiting to long.)) Ogato smiled saying, "You give me to much credit Hatsume, but for the record I think maybe it's the second one." When Kasen appeared Ogato gave him a friendly short wave. Since he didn't really know Kasen he merely listened to Hatsume and him talk. As they finished speaking Ogato smiled at Hatsume thinking to himself, I have no clue what just happened. When she offered the half of the cookie to Ogato he said in a joking manner, "You just broke the wolf." He then took the cookie taking a bite out of it. "Thank you Hatsume."
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 5:34 am
EvilWolf1 ((Evil will have her way. I swear to god if you say this is godmodding, there will be chopping...)) The light that had formed around Evil slowly faded, revealing her. She stood proudly, her black fur glowing with the mysterious Zaigou symbols, her eyes pulsing with different colors. She lowered her head for a moment. Energy began to collect around her, and she opened her jaws to grin evilly. She glowed once more, as she began to build up the Mother of all Reido Blasts. Just as she had reached the maximum amount of charging, Ky fired his own beam. It exploded outwards, flashing brightly as it headed toward herself and her wedding. Evil looked coldly up at it and roared, releasing her Grand Reido. The two beams collided, twisting around each other for a moment, fighting for dominance. There was a loud flash, followed by what sounded like a sonic boom, and then Evil's Reido prevailed, disintegrating Ky's beam. There was even enough of it afterwards to head straight for Ky. It exploded directly onto his large winged form. This heavy hit caused it to fall from the sky. All of his boosters were working overtime, but they had been too badly damaged to work effectively. Evil began to pad forward as Ky fell, her fur twitching. As it crashed into the ground, sending up clouds of dust and debry, Evil broke into a run. She leaped onto the fallen behemoth and saw Ky exposed amidst the wreckage. She snarled, leaping in to snatch his him up. She clamped her jaws onto his arm, dragging him roughly out. When she had exited the pit, she shook him violently, tossing him around as if he were nothing. She dropped him onto the ground and her tongue lolled out, her pulsing eyes staring eerily at him.
You have ruined my Wedding. Now, I'm going to kill you slowly, and painfully. Remember my name as I send you to meet your maker. I am Evil Wolf! She snarled, placing one large paw on his chest and bending down, planning to carry out his torture as she had planned it.
[8/8 I WIN]
Ky felt like a rag doll as Evil had her way with his body, thrashing him up and about before finally throwing his body on the ground with such force that the force of which dislocated Ky's right shoulder. It was painful, no doubt, but the feeling of pain was something that reminded Ky that he was alive. In fact, he lived for pain, though not for pleasure like a masochist would. It was to affirm the fact that he was still human. Being someone with eternal life, one would inevitably experience being detached from the world. Ky didn't want that and constantly sought ways to be reminded that he was still mortal and pain was just the thing he needed. As he lay down on the ground, he was smiling. He struggled up, but he constantly fell flat on his face because he can't sustain his weight due to his dislocated shoulder. Eventually though, the Bount Leader managed to sit himself up and lean back on a nearby tree only to see Evil's face with a sadistic grin playing on her lips.
Even when she placed her paw on his chest and stared at the face of certain death, Ky was still acting proud. "You look like a b***h, Evil," Ky muttered, giving out a short laugh when he did. "Looks like you proved yourself worthy of getting a good ending to your wedding. I lose and accept my defeat. Before you kill me though, let me reward you for entertaining me."
Placing his able left hand on the ground beside him, Ky channeled alchemical energy through the ground and on to the surroundings. With the energy flowing through their bodies, the trees, grass, flowers, nature itself, around them, swayed and transformed themselves into more lush forms as the trees and flowers became even more beautiful. Even the scars from the numerous explosions and flattened trees seemed to disappear when the alchemical energy sped up their regeneration process until no trace of the previous battle was left, save the scattered pieces from the Yamata No Orochi, but were easily hidden by the newly-grown trees. Lastly, the alchemical energy reached the altar and transformed the flowers into silver ones that shone with the sun. Yes, the surroundings may have been destroyed before, but now, with help from alchemy, it had become better than before. Surely that was their reward, but Ky knew that Evil still wasn't satisfied. He did ruin her wedding after all. As the leader of the Bounts, he was a man of honor to some extent. He had lost the fight and his life now lay in the hands of the victor. In this case, Evil.
Ky smiled and raised his neck, exposing his flesh to the wolf. "There, your reward for amusing me. However, I still sense that you're not going to be satisfied unless you kill me. Very well then, if that is what you wish, then do so. Whether I shall live or die will be up to you. The choice is yours, Evil. Whatever it is, I shall accept it," said Ky in a confident voice, his proud self unwavering, even for a bit. He was strong and adamant. Even in the face of death, he presented himself as a true leader, unafraid and unwavering.
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:48 pm
Meluk had risen from the hiding spot from Evil and Ky's battle see his master on the floor. Just hearing the crazy words coming from his mouth made him wonder: who's going to take on as the bount and Raven leader? Most likely Meluk would probably be the last chance, but, if he was picked he wouldn't let his master down at any cost.
At any cost he has to jump in to save his master's life? Of course he has too. If die's it won't be in vain, it is for his master. He flash stepped in the way of Evil.
"I'm sorry, but, you will not kill this man," Meluk said with pride.
"Ky, I swore my life to you, right?" Meluk said to Ky with a smile, "If I, you or we die I hope you know I'm honored to die by your side,"
Meluk raised his sword in case of an attack by Evil. He's trying to prove he can take any thing he throws at him.
"Yamato. No hard feelings about the whole trying to kill you thing?" Meluk said laughing.
He took a deep breath to see his fate in his face. As Meluk's Raven powers began to time out as he stared at Evil.
"Ky, I do wish you gave me some credit for what I've done for you," Meluk said to Ky, which may be his last words. If any one tried to attack Meluk, but, Evil, will die with no mercy. Meluk didn't mean to mess up the wedding, really he didn't know it was going to end this way, he just got sucked into the whole mess.
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 2:26 pm
Nirro uses his ability Rast-en to appear behind Ky and Meluk. "Both speak as if you are already dead," Nirro says to Ky and Meluk.
The Raven gives Ky and a warm smile and says ", Master Ky don't give in to losing the war when you have soldier ready to give up their lives for you." With those words said Nirro walks be side with Meluk. There was a sudden increase of power coming from Nirro’s body when had removed the goggles from his forehead which had the Roman numeral "V". A purple aura had appeared to over flow his body.
At this point Nirro is going to use all of his strength to fight Evil. He looks at Meluk quick and looks at Evil then says ",If you want to continue fighting you have to go through me and Meluk." Now all Nirro had to do was wait to see what Evil’s decision was going to be.
((Ky I hope you don't mind if I jump in.))
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 4:21 am
((No need to ask me. Whatever you think would make you feel important. As I said before, do what you want as long as it doesn't affect your mission or your beliefs. The only exception to this is when I give an order.))
Ky just sat there and saw two of his subordinates, Meluk and Niiro, get in the way of Evil and him. He smirked, thinking just how important he was to the two. Ky appreciated their feelings and was grateful of their intervention. However, as their leader, he still had his pride. He lost, that much was evident and he'll be damned if he would let his subordinates stand in the way of him and get themselves involved in whatever becomes of him. He didn't want that.
"You two maggots really are stupid," Ky said in an amused and gentle tone, addressing the two bounts. "If I would let you two act cool now, it would ruin my spotlight. I don't want anyone taking attention away from me, got it? Go on and stand aside. I don't need your protection, you maggots. Besides, you weak shits aren't allowed to die yet. You haven't proved yourself worthy of death. Until you grow strong enough to be someone worth killing, live on as weaklings and strive to reach that goal. Now, stand down and let Evil through. Accept whatever happens. That's what I have taught you."
With that order, Ky breathed in and out one last time, returning his stern and serious voice, smiling a wicked smile while glaring at Evil. "What's wrong, Evil? I thought you were going to send me to meet my maker? Come on, don't make me wait. Show this tired and weary person who has lived for hundreds of years the comfort of death," muttered Ky with an even bigger grin.
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:34 am
Sighing from behind the tree Ky was pushed against, a voice came from above him. "Comfort of death? There is no comfort in death, you old fool." Dropping from a branch in the middle of the tree, Asuma's slightly faded form landed on the ground, on the side of the tree. His face was stern, more like he was angry than anything. "The comfort of death is a fool's wish. The only comfort available is that which is in life. I should know that better than anyone, wouldn't you agree, Ky?"Smirking, Asuma's voice would only carry to Evil, and to Ky, having one close to death, and the other the one who actually killed him, the connection was with no one else.
Looking up from Ky, Asuma looked towards Evil, still giving her his stern look. "Evil...wolfy-chan...will you really cover your wedding with the crimson of this man's blood? The choice is yours, but can you go on with the ceremony after your covered in this dead corpse's blood? Ask yourself that before doing anything."
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:47 am
Meluk with drew his sword from Evil. He looked back at Ky for his comment. Ky is not realizing how much he means to them. Meluk began to move out of his way.
"You and your pride Ky," Meluk said to Ky, "Before she kills you... tell me... who will take over in your place?"
Meluk meant what he said. Even though Ky didn't have a shred of respect for his men risking there life for him he still needs a answer. Incase he dies a new man would need to take over. He did think of this since he was on the ground hopeless. Also Meluk tried proving to Ky he is worth killing and not weak.
At this state Meluk could kill Ky himself, but, he would be a able to do so. Meluk respects Ky at any cost even the line in death. H took a few steps back to watch what's going to happen and what his answer was going to be.
"Nirro. Move out the way," Meluk commanded Nirro.
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:43 pm
((Ok, Ky))
Although Meluk was thinking about how would be taking leadership of the Bounts/Raven Nirro wasn't thinking of that. What was on his mind was what would be Evil's choice: Let Ky live or die. "Ok Master Ky," Nirro says to Ky. Then he looks at Meluk when he commanded him. "Don't give me order, Meluk. I'm going to move," Nirro says as he walks away.
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:52 pm
((Sorry I took so long I couldn't decide on what to put, I hope I didn't keep you waiting to long.))
Ogato smiled saying, "You give me to much credit Hatsume, but for the record I think maybe it's the second one." When Kasen appeared Ogato gave him a friendly short wave. Since he didn't really know Kasen he merely listened to Hatsume and him talk. As they finished speaking Ogato smiled at Hatsume thinking to himself, I have no clue what just happened. When she offered the half of the cookie to Ogato he said in a joking manner, "You just broke the wolf." He then took the cookie taking a bite out of it. "Thank you Hatsume."
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†»‡«Hatsume»‡«† Having been a guest inside the strong barrier, her knowledge of the on-going events outside where practical to zero. In-fact, her attention seemed to zone only on Ogato as he spoke up about her giving him to much credit which all in itself baffled the vixen! "...To much credit? I don't think I can give you enough...!" Her voice shifted to being nearly nervous, blushing hard as her ears folded back to the top of her skull. It would only be after he accepted the half-broken wolf cookie that a strong smile would return to her facial complexion and she would laugh at his comment to snapping the wolf in two. "Hehee! I-I didn't mean it in that way. Hahaha, It-It's no problem really, I couldn't eat it without you I don't think." Her blushing got worse as a stronger nervous feeling engulfed her, was she sounding stupid? Was she even making any sense?.. Doh! The things that happen to your thinking-process ability when your blinded by love. @///@;;
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:23 am
(Well well... what a turn of events, sry again for my absence... I've been suffering... alot of... "Problems" And I even now struggle to find a reason to smile lately, But I mannage alright anyways.)
-=The lightly glowing sheen on Revlis's bunny dimmed as it wriggled free out of Kevin's protective arms, the little kritter slunk away as if she was coated with oil, slipping away the little bunny hopped and bolted into the barrier, passing through to where Evil was about to kill Ky. The little bunny stood on her hind feet, sniffing at the air curiously while hopping cautiously towards Ky while Evil stalled. Having drawn close enough to Ky the little bunny began to paw at him. The bunny, she looked up to Ky curiously and rather innocent as if dumbfounded and oblivious what was happening. The bunny was the only thing between Ky and Evil now, more so the only thing between Ky and death.=-
-=Despite Revlis's previous dissappearing act, he was well hidden away and aware of what was happening. It appeared The bunny's acts was nature's way of wishing Ky to live further. After all on this occassion, it was supposed to be a wedding, not a funeral. Even The bunny knew that simple knowledge.=-
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 3:28 am
((Are we still doing this or not?))
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