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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:42 pm
[[Well, me and Kin are in field outside of a small town. He hasn't had the time to reply. Masaru is in a battle with Iori. Disgusting is still rocking himself, his character is probably too shy to come out with so many people around. Ryn, Nendir, and Izzy are in an apartment complex. They'll prolly be the most likely to see you. Kimiko is in the small town. Ohijiro should also be capable of seeing you, but he isn't on at the moment. Edgar, a'Ariella and Tamwyn are also in the small town. So, the only accessible ones are Ohjiro, Nendir, Izzy, and Ryn, seeing that you're in a city from your description.]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:44 pm
((I purposely never stated where exactly he landed. wink I was planning for something exactly like this. Buuuuut whoever wants to see me can. Just... somebody, por favor.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:50 pm
(( i have to go to work))
After Missing his last attack Iori backs down and slips his hands back into his pockets. He looks at Masaru for a minute and turns around and walks away not worrying about if she will follow or not.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:00 pm
35/40
[[Since you have to go, I guess I'll have my character let yours leave.]]
After dodging her opponents last attack, Masaru watched enraged as he walked away. Just as she was about to follow him and try to end him there and then, she felt some blood trickle into her eye and temporarily blind her. She held her face and walked towards the side of the road, walking far enough away that she was sure no one could see her. She felt her face waver a bit.
Darn...this is getting to be a habit.
She quickly cleaned her blankened face before resuming her normal guise. She could feel that it hadn't healed completely, but it was pretty much scabbed over. She felt it, a long cut running from the upper right hand corner of her forehead almost to her left eye. By the time she returned to the road he had already left. She angrily sheathed her knife and began to walk in the other direction.
[[Okies, I guess Masaru is by herself again]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:06 pm
She turned slightly to look at him "there isn't much to tell. But, when you and Nendir were talking, did I hear you right? Had you been looking for him?"
((Ah!!! I can't think of anything to write!! crying ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:13 pm
[[I'm going to let Masaru just hang out and keep walking until someone needs her for their piece of the plot...I'm going to be cleaning for a little bit, but I'm still checking the game often]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:18 pm
((Ill post in a second, Im just waiting for Sauron to post once more. If anyone was wondering, Im working on an RP and working out the thinks for it lol. But Like I said, Ill post in a bit.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:20 pm
((Lol its ok, sometimes people get a bit of a block when they RP (I've never had one but I've heard of it smile ) Anyways I think its a good way to keep the story going, even though its short.))
Ryn studied Izzy for a minute, before replying,"Yes I was searching for him. I was wondering about something that happened in that town, and he was the last being I saw at the place I was wondering about."
Ryn didn't go into deeper detail, not wanting to push the girl into even deeper sadness, before realizing that Nendir had never answered his question as to who had killed the Purifier. He frowned, thinking and trying to remember the scent of the being who had killed it, but drawing a blank as to what they had smelt like.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:33 pm
Nendir walked down the stairs as gracefully as a swan took flight. He had the tome in one hand, his katana strapped to his hip and his shoes, if you could call them that, laced up to his knee.
"Ok, the garage is outside, I hope everyone has their wits about them, I don't go easy on anyone for any reason." He said with a smirk and headed out the front door.
He piled into his car, which was a convertible, and he was thankful he had made the decision to go with a topless, especially now considering Ryns height.
He climbed into the drivers seat and unlocked doors for his comrades. He didn't know how well Izzy would fair, but he doubted she would be like a newborn trying to take their first step.
Once they both had jumped in and made themselves comfortable, Nendir slammed on the gas and headed out of the city. It took no time at all to get to the place where he liked to practice his combat skills, considering the fact that there seemed to be no one on the road.
"Ryn, do you think you could grab some of the sparring dummies out of the trunk please?" He didn't see the use in telling him that the sparing dummies were enchanted to fight back, and the minute the trunk would be opened they would spring to life and attack them. "Just don't scratch my car please, it's one of my only toys." He removed his katana from it's holder and took a battle stance, no doubt the other two would wonder what was going on.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:39 pm
The short ride in the car, which Ryn found disgusting, due to the smell it had which he assumed most beings couldn't smell, was more than enough for Ryn to decide he preferred flying.
Listening to Nendir, Ryn said quietly," Sure."
Carefully, doing his best not to scratch the paint with his claws, Ryn opened the trunk, and touching the first of the dummies, only to have it leap at him, and try to strangle him.
"GAH!", Ryn shouted swatting the thing aside with one hand, only to see several others climbing out of the trunk.
"What in the name of all the unholy things is this!",Ryn shouted backing away, his left hand holding the hilt of his sword.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:43 pm
((Surprise twisted
Wheres Pen?))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:43 pm
Izzy carefully stepped out of the car, grateful to be on solid ground again. "so, what are we doing?" she asked. She looked around the area that now surronded them.
The moment Ryn spoke out though, she had a pretty good idea. "never mind." she muttered.
((one of my cats is trying to eat one of my speakers! gonk ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:52 pm
"Fight back, they are enchanted to try and kill you. The longer you take to kill it, the more it will adjust to you, getting bigger and stronger to match you evenly...too Late." The dummied closest to Ryn took on the form of him, wielding a sword so much like his, the only way they weren't identical was by the golden colored seal on the dummies chest.
At the same time one of the dummies ran toward Izzy, taking on her shape as well, and likewise with the one that was heading in Nendirs direction. "Defeat them.." He called before charging at his equal. The dummy wore a smug grin and lashed out at Nendir with a fury of strikes from it's sharp identical blade. "Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh..." He screamed at the top of his lungs after he had dodged each attack, it hadn't been easy, but then again, it wasn't supposed to be.
He slashed out at the dummy, his movements picking up speed as his hand began to glow, but the dummy mimicked his moves. The trick to defeating the dummy was to catch it off guard and not give it time to adapt.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:56 pm
((Let's go with the theory of a landing in Chicago, shall we?))
Slowly Mark moved further away from the wreckage of the wreckage of his fighter. He needed to find a metropolis in interest of finding a communications device that operated and that could have the range to get him off. He was willing to stay for some time, but he didn't have forever.
He became aware of the fact that someone was speaking to him. Judging by his eyes, posture, and expression, he was essentially asking, "Who are you? Where are you from?" Mark didn't know how to answer. Someone had to start speaking more, and it didn't seem likely that it was just going to happen. He needed to analyze the language he was being spoken to in. He let the people speak on for a while, clearly growing more and more frustrated with the lack of an answer.
He assessed as much of the language as possible. Basic structure came to him, and quite a few words, not to mention a few words that, judging by the other's reactions, were clearly swearing. He waited until the man repeated himself, shook his finger disapprovingly, turned, and dashed away, grinning to himself.
It took him several minutes to close in towards the city. Something caught his eye ahead. A quick analyzation revealed it to be the local's transportation. A human girl, what appeared to be a large lizard, and another man (he wasn't human, but Mark wasn't quite sure what he was.). He skidded to a stop, wondering if they had seen him, flattening himself in the midst of tall grass as something clambered from the rear of the vehicle to attack the people.
Given there were hostiles, he allowed the top of his wrist to expand, growing a strange green-purple extension, characterized by a blocky build and two holes on its front. A small "tsweeeeeeee" of a capacitor charging up could be heard, if they could hear well enough...
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