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 Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 1:18 pm
((First of all, I know that there is next to no chance that these will be accepted, especially with the post about puppets, but i just had to try it.))
The Bite (Nosferatu): That which makes a Nosferatu a Nosferatu has been argued for centuries, whether it be a demon or a disease. However, the fact of the matter is that if a Nosferatu was to bite you and drain the last of your blood, you would become his.
The Bite (Lycan): Not too unlike the Nosferatu version, when a Lycan bites you and defeats you he becomes an Alpha male and you become a part of his wolf pack.
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 1:37 pm
Valkiron ((First of all, I know that there is next to no chance that these will be accepted, especially with the post about puppets, but i just had to try it.)) The Bite (Nosferatu): That which makes a Nosferatu a Nosferatu has been argued for centuries, whether it be a demon or a disease. However, the fact of the matter is that if a Nosferatu was to bite you and drain the last of your blood, you would become his. The Bite (Lycan): Not too unlike the Nosferatu version, when a Lycan bites you and defeats you he becomes an Alpha male and you become a part of his wolf pack. You were right on. Both are...
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 1:51 pm
Reaver Darkside Quote: Akai Kaguya Hidden Sound Sub-Zero Shielding Using his clan techniques, with the manipulation of bone. Akai found it possible to launch his bones from the ground in any direction around him and shoot up to become a curving wall that may block an attack heading in his direction. Of course, this wall can not be moved, once it is formed, and Akai can not be moving if he wants to make the wall of bone. The added feature to this wall, is that between each of the three bones that shoot up, are thick layers of ice that form and old it together, in order to stick with his theme of ice and bone. This ice is formed naturally, thanks to Akai’s abilites with that of Ice and the cold. Sub-Zero Degrees This technique is simply a modifier to the use of Akais ice based abilities. It actually allows for his ice, snow and water attacks to be at such a temperature, that they freeze things upon contact. Allowing for Akai to cause a greater deal of harm to his opponents, as well as strengthen his attacks so they can not be stopped so easily. Although this technique is constant, it can not be used to freeze someone solid automatically. Instead, once someone is to be killed by Akai. Their bodies are frozen solid, either preserving them, or making it easier for them to be destroyed and resist the theft of the body. For the most part, the enhancement through cold temperature, makes them to be around -500º. Although it can not effect the opponent as such, meaning that the opponent may become much colder when in an ice based environment, but they will not be able to actually freeze completely, unless they are defeated or killed. Quote: Asmodeus Hidden Grass Emotion Gaze This technique, known as the Emotion Gaze, is actually that of how Asmodeus' eyes truly work. They make it possible to actually be able to view the current emotions of the enemy, in order to know how they are feeling. As well as being able to see the enemy's emotions, no matter the barrier that stands in his way. Other then this, Asmodeus gains no real advantages until much later on, at around 70k in chakra. Where he is able to actually convert his gaze, into not only a gaze, but a literal ability to sense in all directions, much like a sixth sense. With this, he finds it possible to know where someone is, by their emotions alone. Any kind of emotion is possible. The final evolution of this Gaze, is when Asmodeus reaches 100k in chakra. Once at 100k Asmodeus is able to spread the sensing into such a degree, that he can actually refine it back into himself, allowing the ability to sense so great, that he can use it strictly in battle with deadly accuracy for fighting. Making it possible to read the emotions of his opponent, and then counter their attacks with little to no flaw unless he is physically becoming exhausted, where the technique actually drains away at him, causing his abilities with it to revert back into the previous stages, with prolonged use. The last one is a bit iffy, but all are approved. I'll be good, Promise. 3nodding xd
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 2:08 pm
(I'm not even going to fight that one, anyway, my last made up for the day)
Pistol Assembly: A pistol made from random parts. Not really made for long range combat. It can fire bullets at the speed of sound. 10 shots in a magazine.
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 2:12 pm
Valkiron (I'm not even going to fight that one, anyway, my last made up for the day) Pistol Assembly: A pistol made from random parts. Not really made for long range combat. It can fire bullets at the speed of sound. 10 shots in a magazine.
Ask Drago himself. xd
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 2:14 pm
Reaver Darkside Valkiron (I'm not even going to fight that one, anyway, my last made up for the day) Pistol Assembly: A pistol made from random parts. Not really made for long range combat. It can fire bullets at the speed of sound. 10 shots in a magazine.
Ask Drago himself. xd yea, i wouldn't even try this one if not for the rifle assembly tech spira. ill get on that.
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 2:15 pm
Valkiron Reaver Darkside Valkiron (I'm not even going to fight that one, anyway, my last made up for the day) Pistol Assembly: A pistol made from random parts. Not really made for long range combat. It can fire bullets at the speed of sound. 10 shots in a magazine.
Ask Drago himself. xd yea, i wouldn't even try this one if not for the rifle assembly tech spira. ill get on that.
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 2:23 pm
Reaver Darkside Valkiron Reaver Darkside Valkiron (I'm not even going to fight that one, anyway, my last made up for the day) Pistol Assembly: A pistol made from random parts. Not really made for long range combat. It can fire bullets at the speed of sound. 10 shots in a magazine.
Ask Drago himself. xd yea, i wouldn't even try this one if not for the rifle assembly tech spira. ill get on that. i am, Udai is one of my many characters
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 2:25 pm
Valkiron Reaver Darkside Valkiron Reaver Darkside Valkiron (I'm not even going to fight that one, anyway, my last made up for the day) Pistol Assembly: A pistol made from random parts. Not really made for long range combat. It can fire bullets at the speed of sound. 10 shots in a magazine.
Ask Drago himself. xd yea, i wouldn't even try this one if not for the rifle assembly tech spira. ill get on that. i am, Udai is one of my many characters
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 2:36 pm
lol thanks that will lead to several different bullets in the the distant future, when i actually have the time to train Udai
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:33 pm
Kodahma, Ammon
Hidden Night.
Sound Amplifier Pistols
Although as the name implies. These are not actually guns, but extensions of the sound amplifier that his clan is known to use. Being a little more advanced then normal members of his clan, he actually invented an extension that works just as the sound amplifiers do. These guns, connected by small almost unseen and retract able bars are able to shoot sound based bullets of their own. In greater levels, they are even capable of using other sound based attacks through their form. Being retractable, they can actually recede into his sleeves, and become hidden. With these pistols, he is also granted two sound amplifiers that are much skinnier then the normal kind. On either for arm, and hand. giving him full use of his sound abilities. Although he can not use both at once. Meaning that if the Pistols are extended, the amplifiers on his arms are unable to be used, and vica-versa.
Blank As Nothing
This technique, is actually a full description of how Ammon works, in a sense. His body is a ghostly white color, causing him to appear almost dead as if he has been dead for quite some time. Even though he appears dead, and is rather cold to the touch he is quite well alive. Due to being blank of any defining features that make other's human. He had undergone an operation to actually remove his real eyes from his body, replacing them with what seems to be some sort of endless shadow that is actually a permanently sealed genjutsu in order to mask his eyes from view. Because he had no eyes, he is actually able to move around, and note things by his other senses. Especially that of sound. No matter the condition, Ammon can locate something that is near him, by the sound it makes when moving or not. His hearing, and over all ability to sense vibrations in the air. Make it so he can actually almost 'hear' the heart of the opponent, in that way he can not be snuck up on, or at least not easily.
Both Approved
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 2:00 pm
{Just thought I'd get these up before I forget them x.x}
Tsuki Hatake (Dattoumaru)
Hidden Cloud
Daichi Ayatsuri (Cursed Seal Technique)
With her Rock Seal Tsuki has been able to learn the element of Earth with ease, going out of her comfort zone of electricity and wind in order to add another element to her vast arsenal. When her Rock Seal goes into it's first stage, the triangular patter forming around her body, Tsuki is easy able to manipulate the Earth around her on a vast scale much like a Wind ninja's Wind Manipulation technique. Somewhat similar to Gaara's ability to manipulate sand, Tsuki can do the same with earth, but instead of it being sand, it is earth, meaning it has more volume and form. Though unlike Gaara Tsuki refuses to carry around a giant a** gourd [as her wings and weapons weigh enough] she can only use this technique when she is around earth/ground.
Ishi-sukin (Cursed Seal Technique)
This creates an extremely dense and enduring, yet weightless layering of Earth around Tsuki's body. Though naked to the normal eye, this stone skin appears when Tsuki enters the first stage of her Rock Seal as animal-like scales around her body, giving it a rather rough appearance. While dawning such a tough, rock hard skin, her defense is greatly increased much like her strength is in her Seal's level two state. The skin is strong enough to actually inflict a recoil upon a taijutsu user when they attack her directly, and is weather resistant so it doesn't free or burn [etc.] With such a defense just about any Ninjutsu and Taijutsu that is used on her by an opponent with less Chakra Points than herself will merely be endured and or deflected. The skin begins to deteriorate after five posts and must be refined after wards for 2000 CPs. Daichi Ayatsuri = Denied. There are techniques in Hidden Time, that you can learn to do just that. xd
Ishi-sukin = It's earth, meaning you're weak to lightning based techniques. And it needs a higher cost. You're basically making yourself invincible to most techniques for 5 turns. neutral
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 5:13 pm
Quote: Kaguya, Akai Hidden Sound Blizzaga Seal: Blizzard Landscape This technique, used upon activation of his curse seal, allows for everything in a mile radius to instantly be struck by a series of elemental changes onto the environment. The over all area becomes cold and windy. A constant wind shifting the ice and causing snow to envelope the area entirely. Of course this only comes to effect, when his seal is at it's full released state. The wind, ice and snow continues to move about the battle field, constantly as long as the seal is activated, and may remain longer, although once the seal is released, the ice and snow can easily be melted, and the constantly shifting winds will die down before going away completely. This technique is meant to cause the opponent to have trouble traversing and seeing more than 5 feet in front of them, at any given time because of the swirling snow and ice. Along with the ice upon the ground, and anything else that is around when the seal is fully released. Make is only slightly blur the vision, and you're good. after all, you don't have full control of the weather.This technique doesn't give me full control to begin with. xd It allows me to hinder the sight/hearing of the opponent, as if they were in a blizzard. Since once it starts, they pretty much are. 3nodding Blizzaga Seal: Numbing the Senses This technique causes the opponent to slowly have their over all senses become numbed by the use of the Seal. Once it is even partially activated, the opponent's senses become hindered. Everything except sight and taste becomes numbed as if they were caught in a cold black abyss. Although this only causes a small amount of numbness to their abilities. What causes greater concern, is that any direct physical contact with Akai while the seal is released, causes their senses to lower further for each touch. Meaning that they could lose their sense of touch, smell, hearing and even their ability to sense chakra or other forms of energy. If the contact is continued, they soon lose all these abilities until Akai is either defeated, or he releases his curse seal. Denied. Having a technique that depletes an opponents senses because they touch you isn't a fully formed technique. This would also freeze you, and hinder your abilities the same way.Blizzaga Seal: Black Ice When his seal is fully released, Akai finds it possible to administer a high speed and strength taijutsu style, revolving around the use of ice and wind as weapons. Moving in a flowing manner like the wind, he is able to dodge and defend with ease, as well as strike with fluent accuracy. The way this taijutsu actually works, is that with every strike, of either weapon or limb. Once stricken, the opponent's injury or wound is instantly frozen over with a black ice like substance, this substance actually being the opponent's own chakra, forming the ice upon their own bodies, thanks to spikes of Akai's ice cold chakra. The wounds that are given do not bleed, but they do cause serious pain to the opponent, thanks to their very skin freezing and making it hard to move, only where they are struck. If struck in vital spots, the wounds may actually freeze below the skin. Depending on the temperature around both Akai and the opponent. It must be a frozen environment, in order to freeze below the skin. Accepted, only if you are literally in a pre-snowy environment can it freeze below the skin.Done.Bone Tension This technique is an assisted technique to the use of the Kaguya Bloodline. It actually works as a greater advancement off of his Honekamen hensei [Bone-Mask Formation] and his Bone-Risen Corpse Manipulation technique. Both of which allow for him to have a minor control over the opponent's bones that are near him. With this technique, Akai can use the same five meter radius in order to control the bones of his opponent to a greater degree. Instead of harming their fingers, or their smaller bones. He can cause full arms and shoulders to be popped out of place. He can even weaken their bones so they are much more fragile and break easier. If he is over half their total chakra. Otherwise, he can only pop any joints out of place, and force the opponent to realign them before they can continue fighting. Accepted, except for breaking them.Quote: Aeron Los Ganados Hidden Evil The Hounds The Hounds are a group of Adjule and Colmillos. Adjule are dogs infected with Type 2 Plagas. Adjule can split their heads open, revealing a long ranged parasite and huge, 'dagger' teeth inside their necks. They should be considered very dangerous because they move swiftly and attack in packs of two or more. Colmillos are feral creatures usually resembling large dogs or wolves. Though at first appearance they may deceive an unsuspecting enemy, their eyes glow red in the dark, and they tend to be much more violent and aggressive than other kinds of dogs. Heavy attack will expose the Plaga within their bodies, which bristles with many long thin tentacles. The Colmillos preferred battle tactics are to jump and pin their enemies to the ground, then to gnaw at the face of the player. Or alternatively when the Colmillos Plagas are exposed, to brutally whip the player with their tentacles. Both Adjule and Colmillos are creatures that run in a pack lead by Aeron himself. Although thanks to their strength and speed, Aeron can not control too many in the beginning. These Hounds have been infected with Aeron's X-virus strain, in order to enhance their own abilities. Aeron can only have 2 hounds, for every 10k he has in his possession. These hounds work as summons, whenever Aeron wishes for them to appear, they arrive as if they had been there the entire time. Within mili-seconds of someone blinking, they are suddenly just there. Due to them attacking in packs, they all have one attack per post. Which does not interfere with Aeron's normal number of attacks. The attacks are only based off of the clan attacks, and are usually some sort of whiping blade, when they mutate. The entire pack counts as 1 attack. Denied. These would be summons.
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 7:01 pm
Kazuke Howard: Hidden Alchemy
Starting Made-up
Flame DNA: When he was young a nuclear explosion went off while he was visiting a village with his mother, that village was hidden leaf. From that explosion his mother died but Kazuke survived, but was left with a changed body. His entire being is comprised of flame DNA, no type of fire can harm him. Also because of his flame DNA when using any flame based jutsu he pays no cost.
Denied.
Flame Alchemy: White Fire
Kazuke's flames are unique and beautiful, probably from his tragic past. Pain breeds beauty and this certainly complies with that statement. He has the ability to summon up flames from any part of his body, covering him entirely if he wishes. This fire has the ability to purify things, any type of air-born substance can be burned and eradicated instantly when this fire is used around him. This fire is as hot as the sun and can melt virtually anything. Even though Kazuke has these flames on his body he cannot shot them out yet. Even so coming in close contact with Kazuke would mean sudden incineration. Kazuke cannot burn Special things((armors, weapons Etc))
Denied.
Flame Alchemy: Burning Spirit
Kazuke has mastered flame techniques, as such he has the ability to use flame jutsu without using hand signs. Also, since his spirit is flame based Kazuke cannot be effected by any emotional type of jutsu, his will is as strong as the white hot intensity of a thousand burning sun explosions, or just really strong.
Everything is good aside from the emotional thing. Give it a flaw, say, anyone stronger than yourself can not be stopped or something like that.
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 5:17 pm
((New Made-Ups for my new character, Seiji Bankou, when i change my clans when I die. Pretty basic stuff, all within reason.))
Do My Made Ups ~ Reaver.
Nendo Geijutsu • Akushitsu Sesshi
C Rank
Taijutsu
Range: Short (0m ~ 5m)
Desc.: Seiji's personal fighting style utilizing the mouths on his hands. Much like the Gentle Fist style, Seiji will attack with open palms. However, instead of releasing chakra if missed, Seiji will expel small clay creations that are usually not detected. If his hands actually make contact, the mouths on his palms will bite the enemy, tearing clothes, and even flesh if the hit area is bare.
Approved.
Nendo Geijutsu • Nendo Tobikomi
B Rank
Ninjutsu
Range: Short (0m ~ 5m)
Desc.: After performing several hand seals, Seiji will be able to move through clay-like substances, including his clay creations. Such as his Carrier Bird, Dragon, or any other large clay creature. He mostly uses it to escape from an exploding creation of his, or to dodge incoming attacks.
It's not a constant thing, you need to make the hand signs each time you move through clay.
Kibaku Nendo • C1 - Ame Tanbenka
A Rank
Ninjutsu
Range: Short (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Desc.: After consuming some clay from his pouch, Seiji will expel up to 500 small clay petals. When he is flying above the battlefield, he will drop them, letting them float down all over the battlefield. They will explode upon the 'Katsu' command. However, these petals can easily be avoided with a Wind-based jutsu.
Approved.
Kibaku Nendo • C2 - Kibaku Kyuutai
A Rank
Ninjutsu
Range: Short (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Desc.: After consuming some clay from his pouch, Seiji will expel five clay orbs. Rei will then trow the orbs into the air, which will grow to aobut the size of a basketball, and hover in place scattered around the battlefield. Whenever Seiji wants one of them to explode, he will issue the 'Katsu' command, and which ever orb he chooses will explode.
How does he choose? How do they hover?
He chooses by focusing on which one. They float using chakra. Reminder, they are only as big as a basketball, so they aren't chakra vamps.
Kibaku Nendo • C2 - Hayabusa Kyuukouka
A Rank
Ninjutsu
Range: Short (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Desc.: After consuming some clay form hi pouch, Seiji will expel three clay falcons. Seiji then throws the three falcons into the air, which grow and fly around. He can then command them to dive-bomb a certain area or enemy. The birds will then fly directly at the enemy, and explode when commanded using 'Katsu', or when hit by a solid object. However, the birds cannot maneuver when dive bombing, as they tuck their wings in. The only way for them to turn or move is to open their wings, and stop, turn, and try again.
As long as they can only move in straight lines.
Kibaku Nendo • C2 - Chiageya
A Rank
Ninjutsu
Range: Short (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Desc.: After consuming some clay from his pouch, Seiji will expel a small shark made out of clay. Seiji will then punch a hole in the ground and place the clay shark into the ground. Then, the clay shark will grow and begin to swim in the ground, it's fin protruding from the surface to easily identify it. When at Seiji wants the shark to explode, he will issue the 'Katsu' command and blow a crater into the ground, and whatever is over it sky-high.
Accepted.
Kibaku Nendo • C3 - Ryouken
A Rank
Ninjutsu
Range: Short (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Desc.: After consuming some clay form his pouch, Seiji will expel a small clay wolf, which he will then set on the ground. The wolf will then grow to an enormous size, and roam around the battlefield searching for the opponent and attack them. If the wolf latches onto the enemy, it will explode on contact, or when commanded using 'Katsu'.
Approved.
Kibaku Nendo • C3 - Yoippari
A Rank
Ninjutsu
Range: Short (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Desc.: After consuming some clay from his pouch, Seiji will expel a small clay owl. Much like the Carrier Version, this Owl will grow into a large form of itself, which, unlike the Carrier Version, will dive at it's prey. Upon impact or 'Katsu' command, it will explode causing a massive crater if near the ground.
Approved.
Kibaku Nendo • C3 - Sasori
S Rank
Ninjutsu
Range: Short (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Desc.: In memory of Akasuna no Sasori, Seiji developed this technique to gain the admiration of Deidara and Sasori alike. After consuming some clay form his pouch, Seiji will expel a small, red, scorpion and set it on the ground. The Scorpion will then grow in size and become mobile. Unlike most Kibaku Nendo techniques, the Scorpion will not explode on impact. The Scorpion is used primarily for defense because it is so slow. However, if the Scorpion should catch you in it's pincers, it will hold the enemy in place until commanded to explode using 'Katsu'.
Approved.
Keep in mind, they all cost some chakra, in order to mold. The bigger the thing, the more chakra. I don't feel like you having to edit them all, so I'm letting you know right here.
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