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Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 4:31 pm
Reaver Darkside Quote: Reaver Senimaru Hidden Substance Contamination: Stage 6 This stage of the contamination is another genetic modification caused by the in-placement of multiple viruses and poisons into Reaver's body. Once the contamination was complete, it actually allowed for Reaver to be able to resist the techniques that normally block or restrain his own made ups or other techniques. Successfully canceling out the opposing techniques that would cause his made ups, or his normal techniques from being restricted. This is done, by the advanced properties of his body, merging with his chakra points in order to keep them flowing through out the body and brain, preventing any techniques from being locked away from use. Quote: Nirvana Hidden Soul Light Scimitar This Scimitar is as light as a feather, in order to deal damage to her opponent. The abilities behind this weapon, are based mainly off of the element of light. As long as she wields this blade, her fighting speed and reaction time is enhanced to the point, where she can deflect projectiles, or even normal physical attacks with ease. Each strike of this blade particles of light gather around the blade, causing the blade to glow brightly, but also have a barrier of light around it's thin and light blade. Meaning that when she strikes, the blade actually has an invisible force, to which adds to her strikes. So if she misses a slash, the opponent would still be wounded, by the microscopic particles of light around the blade. Particle Armor This armor is a creation of Nirvana's abilities with the use of light. It actually creates an invisible barrier of microscopic light based particles floating around her entire body at all times. Although they are so small, they do not even give off light. They do enhance the power and efficiency of all her light based techniques. They cause her light based techniques to be more deadly, and also allows for them to push back any sort of shadow without a problem. Allowing her light based techniques to negate shadows, or techniques that cause shadows to be unaffected by light based techniques. Both are....  I actually like the sword thing. Kind of like Asuma's blades.
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Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 4:34 pm
Dcme Demon Inuzuka: Hidden Leaf Curse Mark: Healing Light From Demons curse mark comes a loving light, one from a so called" angel". Because of the angelic properties it gives Demon the ability to heal any wound or any ally's wound for 500 Cp. His angel aspect also gives him a second ability, it has changed his blood to pure, which means he can now not be effected by any type of poison or aliment. Tihs is ALL I could think of... Unless your bloodline makes you immune to poison, this is not going to be allowed. And by healing, what do you mean 500cp? That's not health.
And on a personal note, this sounds like something for Hidden Heaven, to be honest.
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Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 4:35 pm
Eh, that made-up was from my cursed seal...
Still denied. Your seal cannot heal you, and neither can your clan. If you want to heal people, become a medical ninja. If you want to heal from poison faster, bring anti-venom. Case closed.
rofl Sorry. Had to laugh at the "bring anti-venom" thing. xd
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Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 10:09 pm
Demon Inuzuka: Hidden Leaf
Dormant Force Chakra: In his past life Demon was able to do incredible things with the use of "Force Chakra". Though his mind has lost contact with the force, Demons body still has the ability to use his forboding powers. Simply put Demon has the ability to push/pull/grab objects up to 600 punds with the use of his force power. As he gets more powerful he can move heavier things.
Pure Breed Inuzuka: Demon was knwon to be not a mutt, but a pure breed of Inuzuka. This gave him a very strong blood line ability, allowing him to ...editing...
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 1:27 am
Furanken Sutaina - Hidden Waterfall
Epitaph of the Crying Maiden - Padmasundari - Though she would never openly admit it to anyone, Shun's constant coming and going has caused Furanken much mental anguish. It simply began as paranoia, the idea that Shun might meet some other woman on his journey and leave Furanken alone with child, a fate that was nearly as bad as her rape so many years ago. That paranoia soon became an obsession; the desire to change herself and better her appearance and ability. While studying the medical arts she came to discover that the legendary Sannin Tsunade had once held such an ability that would hide her true face from the world via layers of jutsu. This is Furanken Sutaina's personal version of that. In essence, she allows her thoughts to shape her body into the ideal beauty that a man would desire. However, the negative thoughts and hate for her 'true appearance' also take up an embodiment, coming in the form of a katana, and being born from a woman's scorn, it is a blade to be reckoned with. The blade's name is 'Padmasundari' or in other words, the 'One who is as beautiful as a lotus'. 
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 2:19 am
Hido Nara
Hidden Leaf
Genesis Form: This is an advanced form technique Hido designed in a mock irony of his actual powers. It has four levels all requiring a different amount of Cps to unlock.
Genesis Form Level 1 (Unlocked at 50,000 Cps): In this form Hido grows a single white angel wing, mockingly making him appear as a warrior of light or a hero of some sort. In this stage Hido's Cps are doubled, but this can only be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/25,000
Genesis Form Level 2 (Unlocked at 100,000 Cps): In this form a second white angel wing is formed. This ability grants Hido the ability to fly (via the wings) and doubles his speed and strength. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/20,000
Genesis Form Level 3 (Unlocked at 125,000 Cps): In this form Hido grows a single black wing beneath the two white ones. This stage grants Hido the ability to see the chakra signatures of his foes, without having to physically look at them, and allows him to gauge their strength and detect special information about them as well as detect techniques being used. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/15,000
Gensis Form Level 4 (Unlocked at 150,000 Cps): This is the final form, hido having grown a pair of white and a pair of black wings. This form gives Hido strength and speed equal to if he had unlocked the first six chakra gates, making him a force to be reckoned with. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/10,000
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:14 am
Mythic229 Hido Nara Hidden Leaf Genesis Form: This is an advanced form technique Hido designed in a mock irony of his actual powers. It has four levels all requiring a different amount of Cps to unlock. Genesis Form Level 1 (Unlocked at 50,000 Cps): In this form Hido grows a single white angel wing, mockingly making him appear as a warrior of light or a hero of some sort. In this stage Hido's Cps are doubled, but this can only be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/25,000 Genesis Form Level 2 (Unlocked at 100,000 Cps): In this form a second white angel wing is formed. This ability grants Hido the ability to fly (via the wings) and doubles his speed and strength. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/20,000 Genesis Form Level 3 (Unlocked at 125,000 Cps): In this form Hido grows a single black wing beneath the two white ones. This stage grants Hido the ability to see the chakra signatures of his foes, without having to physically look at them, and allows him to gauge their strength and detect special information about them as well as detect techniques being used. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/15,000 Gensis Form Level 4 (Unlocked at 150,000 Cps): This is the final form, hido having grown a pair of white and a pair of black wings. This form gives Hido strength and speed equal to if he had unlocked the first six chakra gates, making him a force to be reckoned with. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/10,000 What is enabling you to grow wings, and boost your power for a period of time?
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:30 am
In Demons past life he could use force chakra, it was a made-up I had put in for him and was approved. I simply made it so he can still use the orce...
Shun Uchiha: Hidden Leaf
The Protecto: Shun has gained unsought power by simply getting someone to care for and protect . Ever since then it seemed his power had started to increase abnormally, though Shun didn't know it. He came across this power while training and desires to master it through turning it into a fighting style. Comparable to Hiten Mitsurgui Shuns "Protecter" Style of fighting delas with swift, precise movements, and hard slashs. This style can only be taught to someone with high reaction naturally ((Uchiha, Hyuuga, Dattomaru, ETC)). While using this style your sword becomes lighter, and more of an extension to your body. Anyone who masters this style will be a force to be reckoned with.
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:37 am
Dcme Demon Inuzuka: Hidden Leaf Dormant Force Chakra: In his past life Demon was able to do incredible things with the use of "Force Chakra". Though his mind has lost contact with the force, Demons body still has the ability to use his forboding powers. Simply put Demon has the ability to push/pull/grab objects up to 600 punds with the use of his force power. As he gets more powerful he can move heavier things. Dcme The Protector: Shun has gained unsought power by simply getting someone to care for and protect . Ever since then it seemed his power had started to increase abnormally, though Shun didn't know it. He came across this power while training and desires to master it through turning it into a fighting style. Comparable to Hiten Mitsurgui Shuns "Protecter" Style of fighting deals with swift, precise movements, and hard slashes. This style can only be taught to someone with high reaction naturally ((Uchiha, Hyuuga, Dattomaru, ETC)). While using this style your sword becomes lighter, and more of an extension to your body. Anyone who masters this style will be a force to be reckoned with.
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 9:21 am
ElementPro Mythic229 Hido Nara Hidden Leaf Genesis Form: This is an advanced form technique Hido designed in a mock irony of his actual powers. It has four levels all requiring a different amount of Cps to unlock. This mutation was formed by mixing pure chakra with experimental chemicals and then injecting himself with it. Genesis Form Level 1 (Unlocked at 50,000 Cps): In this form Hido grows a single white angel wing, mockingly making him appear as a warrior of light or a hero of some sort. In this stage Hido's Cps are doubled, but this can only be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/25,000 Genesis Form Level 2 (Unlocked at 100,000 Cps): In this form a second white angel wing is formed. This ability grants Hido the ability to fly (via the wings) and doubles his speed and strength. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/20,000 Genesis Form Level 3 (Unlocked at 125,000 Cps): In this form Hido grows a single black wing beneath the two white ones. This stage grants Hido the ability to see the chakra signatures of his foes, without having to physically look at them, and allows him to gauge their strength and detect special information about them as well as detect techniques being used. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/15,000 Gensis Form Level 4 (Unlocked at 150,000 Cps): This is the final form, hido having grown a pair of white and a pair of black wings. This form gives Hido strength and speed equal to if he had unlocked the first six chakra gates, making him a force to be reckoned with. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/10,000 What is enabling you to grow wings, and boost your power for a period of time? Added in a reason
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 11:27 am
The Protector: Ban-Ryu
Shun has crafted yet another blade from his soul, but this one came from his love for his wife. Ban-Ryu is a large halberd as long as Shuns body, it weighs over 2 tons. Even with this added weight Shun has trained with it in his protector fighting style, allowing him to weild it as if it were light as a feather. Ban-Ryu can be weilded by others as well, but it will be extremely heavy and weighted to anyone besides Shun. It has the base element of lightning, he may fire off a high condensed blast of blue lightning from any part of Ban-ryu for 3,000 Cp.
Approved.
The Protector: Ban-Ryu's Rage
"Hell have no fury like a womans scorn". Ban-Ryu takes that to the fullest, once in battle Shun has the ability to form a blast of chakra equaling to half of his full amount. By spinning Ban-Ryu on his hand over his head Shun starts to form a large ball of blue chakra, this ball becomes the size of a mini van. When ready, the ball is thrown at an opponent, completely and utterly destroying anything in it's path. This attack is large in raduis, covering 500 ft. Even if Shun misses his attack if the opponent is within range they still get after shock.
500ft is too large. Say about 100 feet, and it's good.
The Protecter: Ban-Ryu's True Form
Ban-Ryu is very large indeed, but it has another stage. When Shun wishes he may shatter Ban-Ryu, turning it into nothing. After 3 turns have passed Ban-Ryu reforms into Shuns body, slowly but surely. Shun gets two wings, one of air the other of lightning, his eyes change to slits like a dragon and he two front teeth become fangs. His speed is increased ten-fold and his strength is increased 10x as well. He can reform Ban-Ryu's old form once again in this state, giving him a weapon to fight with. He can stay like this for every 15k he has.
Denied. Speed increasing 10x as well as strength is something you would get from a Bloodline or cursed Mark, not form some mystical force inside you like devotion. Unless you make some major changes to this one, it's a no go.
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 2:33 pm
Mythic229 Hido Nara Hidden Leaf Genesis Form: This is an advanced form technique Hido designed in a mock irony of his actual powers. It has four levels all requiring a different amount of Cps to unlock. Genesis Form Level 1 (Unlocked at 50,000 Cps): In this form Hido grows a single white angel wing, mockingly making him appear as a warrior of light or a hero of some sort. In this stage Hido's Cps are doubled, but this can only be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/25,000 Genesis Form Level 2 (Unlocked at 100,000 Cps): In this form a second white angel wing is formed. This ability grants Hido the ability to fly (via the wings) and doubles his speed and strength. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/20,000 Genesis Form Level 3 (Unlocked at 125,000 Cps): In this form Hido grows a single black wing beneath the two white ones. This stage grants Hido the ability to see the chakra signatures of his foes, without having to physically look at them, and allows him to gauge their strength and detect special information about them as well as detect techniques being used. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/15,000 Gensis Form Level 4 (Unlocked at 150,000 Cps): This is the final form, hido having grown a pair of white and a pair of black wings. This form gives Hido strength and speed equal to if he had unlocked the first six chakra gates, making him a force to be reckoned with. This form can be maintained for a number of posts equal to Hido's Cps/10,000 Add some sort of cost for this massive effect, and you're okay to go.
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 3:26 pm
Midori Seiko Hidden Grass Plain of Pain Ninjutsu S Rank Range: Far (10m ~ ) Desc.: Using his clans control over grass, Seiko can make the grass up to a half mile in diameter sharpen into spikes of grass, which can penetrate shoes and other types of clothing, thus greatly injuring and opponent who decides to step on it. However, Seiko is unaffected this jutsu. Wherever he goes, the grass flattens before he touches it, causing no harm to him. This also drains a small chunk of chakra, but it's enough to drain Seiko for a period of time afterward. Make it a half mile, and it's good. As well, it needs a chakra based cost to be used. It takes chakra to make grass this way. xDField of Dreams Ninjutsu C Rank Range: Far (10m ~ ) Desc.: Using his control of grass and fauna, Seiko turns all of the grass around him into white lilies with blue stems that release billions upon billions of spores into the air that, when inhaled, put the victim to sleep. this technique is mainly used for escape, or silent kills. Wearing cloth over ones face does cut the effect off of the jutsu. Ruined it with the explosion. One or the other and a chakra cost. xDThousand Blades of Grass Ninjutsu S Rank Range: Mid (5m ~ 10m) Desc.: Much like that of the Mist ninja Haku, Seiko can conjure up thousands of needles of Grass, instead of ice, and send them flying at the opponent. Instead of using mirrors, Seiko simply raises the grass from the ground, and shoots it at the opponent. Using his clans ability to blend in with grass, Seiko can infiltrate the chaos unseen and attack the enemy. Green Imperial Funeral Ninjutsu S Rank Range: For (10m ~ ) Desc.: Much like Gaara of the Sand's Desert Imperial Funeral technique, Seiko can place his hands on a large field of grass, and cause it to grows slightly taller than a ninja, and trap them within it, and make the grass grass crush, twist, turn to blades and spikes, and try to completely destroy the enemy. However, the technique is easily avoidable if the ninja can escape the area before the grass catches them, which is very difficult if in a large field of grass. It's good. But it needs a chakra cost. Your clan shouldn't have a magic chakra less control of grass. xD Just give it a cost, so it drains you a little, and you cant just keep using the same techniques.The cost is... mass drain of chakra. Used as an end all to kill someone. ((I'm replacing my Dragons Teeth, Dragons Breath, Grass Knot, and Grass Blindfold with these techniques.))  Time 3 xD
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 1:03 pm
Quote: Akai Kaguya Hidden Sound Sub-Zero Shielding Using his clan techniques, with the manipulation of bone. Akai found it possible to launch his bones from the ground in any direction around him and shoot up to become a curving wall that may block an attack heading in his direction. Of course, this wall can not be moved, once it is formed, and Akai can not be moving if he wants to make the wall of bone. The added feature to this wall, is that between each of the three bones that shoot up, are thick layers of ice that form and old it together, in order to stick with his theme of ice and bone. This ice is formed naturally, thanks to Akai’s abilites with that of Ice and the cold. Sub-Zero Degrees This technique is simply a modifier to the use of Akais ice based abilities. It actually allows for his ice, snow and water attacks to be at such a temperature, that they freeze things upon contact. Allowing for Akai to cause a greater deal of harm to his opponents, as well as strengthen his attacks so they can not be stopped so easily. Although this technique is constant, it can not be used to freeze someone solid automatically. Instead, once someone is to be killed by Akai. Their bodies are frozen solid, either preserving them, or making it easier for them to be destroyed and resist the theft of the body. For the most part, the enhancement through cold temperature, makes them to be around -500º. Although it can not effect the opponent as such, meaning that the opponent may become much colder when in an ice based environment, but they will not be able to actually freeze completely, unless they are defeated or killed. Quote: Asmodeus Hidden Grass Emotion Gaze This technique, known as the Emotion Gaze, is actually that of how Asmodeus' eyes truly work. They make it possible to actually be able to view the current emotions of the enemy, in order to know how they are feeling. As well as being able to see the enemy's emotions, no matter the barrier that stands in his way. Other then this, Asmodeus gains no real advantages until much later on, at around 70k in chakra. Where he is able to actually convert his gaze, into not only a gaze, but a literal ability to sense in all directions, much like a sixth sense. With this, he finds it possible to know where someone is, by their emotions alone. Any kind of emotion is possible. The final evolution of this Gaze, is when Asmodeus reaches 100k in chakra. Once at 100k Asmodeus is able to spread the sensing into such a degree, that he can actually refine it back into himself, allowing the ability to sense so great, that he can use it strictly in battle with deadly accuracy for fighting. Making it possible to read the emotions of his opponent, and then counter their attacks with little to no flaw unless he is physically becoming exhausted, where the technique actually drains away at him, causing his abilities with it to revert back into the previous stages, with prolonged use.
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