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 Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 1:57 pm
Wow. I expected a lot worse from all this talk of an easy kill.
Not that the match itself will be easy but this is a promising start. Will post later this evening. At a family bbq now.
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 2:22 pm
Why don't you just quote each other in the fight? lol
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 2:23 pm
Too lazy, probably just going to pm if anything. I can just delete afterwards. I did it cause he quoted me... so yea. If you got s**t to do there reading this fight, it might amuse you. I feel it will get more intense soon.
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 2:50 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 2:51 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 2:59 pm
dont expect any more explanations; like the child he is, Vin's ruined it for the rest of you.
edit: this includes the "Judges Opinion" portion on the grading rubric.
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YummyBiscuits Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:06 pm
YummyBiscuits dont expect any more explanations; like the child he is, Vin's ruined it for the rest of you. edit: this includes the "Judges Opinion" portion on the grading rubric. See, that was the worst thing you could have done.
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:12 pm
Sunsworn YummyBiscuits dont expect any more explanations; like the child he is, Vin's ruined it for the rest of you. edit: this includes the "Judges Opinion" portion on the grading rubric. See, that was the worst thing you could have done. 
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YummyBiscuits Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:12 pm
Thus far I feel like most of the hype will be seen in Szar/Darius and Neirro/Ertai.
Neirro and Ertai have similar enough style with those blade that it could make for the best read this round. Then again, Szar and Darius make me lulz.
Lord Kelvin and Justice Guy have my attention too.
Just waiting for the meat and taters of this round....
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:19 pm
I ask you to reconsider. For starters, punishing everyone because of one person makes YOU the bad guy, not the person. Don't get me wrong, Vintrict complained far too much, but he's not the person who decides whether or not we get to read judge opinions. You are. Take that away and you're to blame.
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YummyBiscuits Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:23 pm
Sunsworn I ask you to reconsider. For starters, punishing everyone because of one person makes YOU the bad guy, not the person. Don't get me wrong, Vintrict complained far too much, but he's not the person who decides whether or not we get to read judge opinions. You are. Take that away and you're to blame. It's not him alone. I'm simply placing most of it on his head. Honestly, if I like the fight enough, I'll make it known. I might even take the time to send a PM or something. But don't expect to see anything on the official grade.
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:25 pm
Well, for the sake of not cluttering the OOC thread with more discussion about judge opinions, I'll stop talking about it.
But it's a shame.
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:25 pm
I really want to enter a tournament soon, now. I mean yes after reading the majority of the fights, ooc chatter and complaining, it looks like it can be a real pain in the a**...But I like the challenge that I could face.
I mean...
I am very rusty, and I came from a time in Gaya Rp fighting that we weren't so detailed, it was straightforward and to the point.
Everyone, at least a lot of you, have had very flashy and out there posts, with much more detail then I have ever added to any fight.
This.
I want this challenge to sit on my a** for two hours and write up a post with the thought that I am trying to give everybody something enjoyable to read.
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:30 pm
Being overdescriptive is a fault, in my book. Be clear, but not verbose. You want to make it read like a scene from a movie or an anime, you want the action to hit the reader hard and then move on.
If you get too technical, you become instantly boring to read. If what you're writing is boring, then you've already lost.
So don't worry too much about being super detail oriented. What's much more important is knowing exactly what you want to describe and then executing it in a brief, entertaining way. When you do that you can start devoting more time to your character's thought process, or referencing the action to a storyline. Suddenly, your action is more than just a bunch of physical motions. Suddenly, it has meaning, and precedence. Suddenly, it begins to make sense. That's when I think fights are the best.
I hope to fight you one day in a tournament. I'm sure we'd have lots of fun.
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2014 3:32 pm
Red the Ambivalent I really want to enter a tournament soon, now. I mean yes after reading the majority of the fights, ooc chatter and complaining, it looks like it can be a real pain in the a**...But I like the challenge that I could face. I mean... I am very rusty, and I came from a time in Gaya Rp fighting that we weren't so detailed, it was straightforward and to the point. Everyone, at least a lot of you, have had very flashy and out there posts, with much more detail then I have ever added to any fight. This. I want this challenge to sit on my a** for two hours and write up a post with the thought that I am trying to give everybody something enjoyable to read. Wanna spar?
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