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Nara, Hido

Hidden Leaf

Shadow Crystal Ice Style

This is a special ninjutsu style created by Hido as his most advanced form of combat. It utilizes his flash freeze jutsu, black ice jutsu, and his abilities as a Nara to create a fighting style unlike any other. (NOTE: most of this technique is just combinations of already existing made ups thus very little of this is anything new, just more advanced in it's application.) This is a style utilizing Hido's ability to control his shadows without any form of handsigns or physical motions as well as his ability to instantly freeze anything with a mere thought. He has found a way to fuse and alter both of these techniques slightly, imbuing them with extra chakra hardening their cellular structure. Using the Shadow Crystal Ice Style, Hido can form many different attacks, or even weapons out of shadow imbued ice.

The actual form this technique takes is the same as his Black Ice style (Shadow Freezing Jutsu) in which he rapidly fuses shadowds into generated ice giving it the same properties as a Nara shadow as well as the ability to freeze anything that touches it in the same substance. This technique actually changes the cellular composition of the 'black ice' making it into a translucent black crystal substance that is unbreakable by normal physical means (it can still be broken with strong impacts from chakra sources such as rasengan or etc.) while still retaining the properties of his Black Ice style (Shadow Freezing Jutsu) most of the more advanced applications of this will be made as seperate made ups as seen below.

Pending.
It can be phased through, with the appropriate techniques, and is in fact break able? If that's correct, this is approved.

That is correct.


Seven Pillar Crystal Embrace

This is a technique utilizing Hido's Shadow Crystal Ice Style. Using his Shadow Crystal Ice Style, Hido forms Seven solid pillars of crystal, making them form instantaneously an even distance from his opponent on all sides. He then uses his Shadow Tendril Jutsu (clan jutsu), shooting multiple tendrils of shadow making a large cage around his opponents. If they physically touch or phase through in any way any of the parts of the cage (the pillars, or the Tendrils) they will be trapped and affected by his Shadow Immitation Jutsu. The is capable of being broken, if his opponent can find a way to destroy the shadows or break the pillars. Though each tendril has to be broken individually if a pillar is destroyed the whole cage comes down.

Pending.
The only problem I see with this, is that you say they can be broken, but if they're touched the person is cast into the effects of the Shadow Immitation jutsu.
It cant be both, if it's a cage, that traps opponents, and makes it so if they try to phase through, they'll be captured. Then fine.
But the way this is written, it really says that you cant escape.


No only if you physically touch it, if you hit a pillar with a strong attack rasengen for example, you aren't physcially touching it but you still break it thus its escapable.

All above approved mrgreen

Dante, Thantos
Hidden Alchemy

Chakra Revolver: Revolation
This technique, allows for Thantos to take the properties of his Chakra revolver, and actually be able to merge himself with it, by using his Fusion clan technique. In this way, he can actually have the revolver' abilities be able to be used from his own body. For example, he could fire a pure Chakra Bullet from one of his fingers, instead of having to aim the gun. Although this technique does not allow for him to permanently have it in his body, it does allow him to seal it away, so he can use the weapon without needing to actually have it in his hand. The second half of this technique, actually allows for him to be able to enhance the abilities of the Chakra Revolver, in order for him to actually have a minimum amount of control to it's abilities. With a simple jarring of his mind, he can make himself able to curve the bullets a little in case an opponent were to dodge. He can also make the bullet at such a speed, that dodging would be close to impossible, the closer he is to his opponent.

The Black: Take Over
Upon entering one of the more final stages of 'The Black' with this stage, 'The Black' actually begins to merge with the host in order to give the host the full abilities of 'The Black' all of the time, instead of only when it takes over. With this ability also comes the ability of being able to gain the chakra, through any Chakra draining methods that the host can use, or are used against the host. As such, if someone were to try to drain the host's chakra, they're chakra is drained instead, although in this way, the host does not gain any chakra.

Approved.

Multiple characters will be having this made-up, if it gets approved. Both Dessu's and my characters.

Queen's Blade Participant- This lady warrior has been invited to take part in the Queen's Blade tournament. Whenever she encounters another participant (another character who has this made-up) they can fight. The winner will receive one random technique from whichever location they are currently in, that they are allowed to learn. After they fight, they must wait at least four days before they fight each other again.


Training during these battles does not count for the winner then. That seems like a worthy change, for one free technique. Unless you have something better?

Kurumu Kurono
Hidden Fantasy- Feudal Japan

Made-up Technique- Demon of Dreams, the Power of the Succubi- Succubi are, of course, demons. To be precise, they are dream demons, that feed on the sexual and life energy of their victims, and predominantly work with illusion and fantasy. This innate ability of Kurumu's allows her to make the most of it. For every technique that she knows that is associated with Dreams, Illusions or the Demonic, her natural abilities increase. (Each technique that deals with one of those three fields gives her an intangible boost of ten percent to her skill at using them, as well as her special technique or made-ups. So if she knows two sleep and one demonic technique, she would be counted as thirty percent stronger when using any of them.)



Special Technique- Allure- Succubi are creatures of seduction, just getting close to them can make one entranced. This technique primarily functions through pheromones. Her body naturally produces them, and if anyone spends too much time near her, they will become infatuated with her. Minimum time to take effect, four posts. This effect is triggered by looking into her eyes. It does not affect everyone equally. If the victim has less than half of her adjusted strength, they are entranced fully. If they are equal or just under, they are only mostly affected. If they are up to half again as strong, they are only affected for that battle. If they are double or above, they are only affected for 1d6 posts.)



Ardra
Hidden Fantasy- Feudal Japan

Special Technique- Petrifaction- This is a very powerful ability that Ardra gained both from her heritage, and by summoning and making a bargain with the demon Delmore. By meeting her gaze, an opponent can be stunned. If they are stunned long enough, she can actually use her gaze to turn them into a stone statue. (They are stunned equal to the percentage difference in their skill totals. If she has 20K and they have 10K, they only have 50% of her total, so they would be stunned for 5 turns. If they are stronger, they are only stunned for one post. Once stunned, she can attempt to turn them to stone by maintaining her gaze for a number of posts equal to 50 minus (her skill divided by 5000). So if she was at 20K, it would be six posts. If the stun wears off before this process is done, nothing happens, and she would have to try all over again. This process takes half again as many posts if her victim is stronger than her by more than 25%. If she knocks them unconscious, she can still use this gaze attack.)


Sounds good. I'll watch it though, so it's not abused. 3nodding

Alice
Hidden Void

(Potential future made-up!) Twin weapons- Alice has been granted use of two very special weapons. They vaguely resemble guns, but are not normal firearms. For starters, they both have a blade sprouting from below the barrel, extending to a length of twelve inches. The blade is exceptionally sharp. The actual part of the weapons that resemble guns work on a similar principle, but instead of firing ammunition or anything, they coalesce her chakra and fire it in the form of a concentrated burst. (Each blast uses 500 chakra, and creates a sphere of energy approximately three inches in diameter, that is fired in a straight line at great speed. Since it's not a bullet, it doesn't actually cause piercing damage, just a concussive and slight incendiary effect.) She can fire each weapon once per post, no more than that.

Would that be allowed?

The only problem with that, is that there haven't been any more guns allowed into the guild. You'll need to talk to Drago probably, see what he says about it.

Gabriel Archangel

Big Bang Theory- in seven days the lord created the earth and sun and planets and animals and everything else. the way that it was started was from the Big Bang, a collision of a meteor and the planet Earth made the moon and Earth and all life on it. using the theory of the big bang Gabriel formed a technique using the Lords strength and specific way to punch. when this is used Gabriel's hand gain's a rocky gray look and appears like a comet. once the hand is meteor-like Gabriel will punch his target and once the punch is started it looks like a large meteor getting ready to collide with whatever is in its way. once impact occurs everything around it shatters and forms a large crater which would shatter a boulder in seconds.-- I don't understand..So do you punch the opponent and everything shatters..or is that you miss and everything shatters..WTF shatters..

Archangel: Form of Death- a form which can be activated when Gabriel has Embodiment of the Goddess active. when active Gabriel's wings will turn black, his skin will darken, and he will grow a pair of pitch black horns. with this form out his speed will increase and his body will harden, his muscles will grow, and his senses will heighten. the bulk of this technique is that it takes in all evil in the area and lets Gabriel's true nature show. anything that he touches will start to be drained of all evil inside, adding to his strength.--EHHHH Denied..To much like the Keyblade..as a matter of fact that's just like the keyblade..

Tokijen Take To the Ground- To activate it, Drago needs to drop his sword straight down. The sword phases into the ground as though it were a pool of water in doing so energy ripples expand out turning the surrounding area dark and within seconds two rows of giant blades (with the back edges facing each other) rise up from the ground (similar in the way his Tokijen phased through) on either side of Drago(or around him and his opponent). These giant blades explode and then scatter into an infinite number of tiny blades. The number of blades is great enough that Drago can use them for defense as well as offense. He commonly forms them into large masses of blades to crush opponents. His defensive use allows him to cover himself entirely in these tiny blades as form of body shield. His Tokijen in this state is entirely mentally controlled as it moves through the air like torrents of waves, giving the appearance of cherry blossoms flowing swiftly along the wind. While Drago can control the blades with his mind alone, using his hands allows him to do so more effectively, making the blades move (almost) twice as fast.

Awww... Drago you know this one is mine, you can have Drago learn it from Koujin if you don't mind learning from a lazy missing nin.

Adv Spirit Tuner

the furthering of her abilities to link with people through music using music as a medium for a phenomenon similar to a resonance of two or more souls. With this advanced ability so long as she is able to keep up her music she is able to bring out the full potential of her allies, bringing them to a higher level of fighting giving them higher levels of speed, strength and endurance. Spirit Tuner in it's advanced form also allows her to analyze machinery like Knox's Kinetic armor in depth understanding and figuring out ways to improve it's effectiveness. Through her training she has gained an in depth understanding of machines and how they work, from simple ones, to advanced cyborg humans. She can summon a multitude of tools and repair anything mechanical in short order almost seeming to warp time as she repairs what is broken. One extra tool that seems to serve no purpose in repairing anything is a massive wrench that she can summon at will and bludgeon her enemies, despite it's large size and weight she seems to wield it with ease.



Bleeder
a unique genetic variant of the Abumi, once in a while an Abumi is born with a natural talent not requiring any special surgeries or implants to become deadly. Not many survive infancy as the nature of this mutation makes it so that when they scream it's far beyond the capacity of a normal human, so loud in fact that it causes the people around them to experience internal bleeding as the sound waves tear at their organs. Along with being terribly painful the power of this wail has only gotten stronger as they age. The power of this attack is so powerful that it renders almost any user deaf unless they wear proper ear protection cutting off the sound around them. This power is not discriminant like other sound based attacks so it's best not be in front of this powerful attack when it's launched even if your an ally. This scream can be maintained for how ever long the user can remain focused on it. No other ninjutsu can be used at the same time as this attack.



It's Not Over 9000!
Now most ninjas pride themselves on having a high chakra pool, but Knox only finds it to be a limitation in his style of fighting. With a new development of his suit he can cap his own chakra levels off at mere 9000 while in battle, where does the excess chakra go as he continues to grow and learn, for the most part into the suit giving him access to a special fighting mode called "Overkill". Now overkill as the name implies is a pretty powerful stage the suit amplifying Knox's power, quadrupling his speed and doubling the strength of his attacks, but overkill is costly he can only use overkill 1 turn for every 10k excess chakra stored in the suit itself. Overkill can only be initiated once per battle so choosing when to strike with it is highly important.


Does that mean that when comparing chaka, he's only ever going to have 9k as a total? rofl

Basically, but with Kinetic Armor you can't read his CP level anyway, he simply seems like a normal person until he stabs you in the back...

Haha. When're you going to make the tentacles, for that armor. I wonder. xd