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 Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:50 pm
metal mist Automail: Leg- a metal leg made by scientists and mechanics from hidden alchemy and hidden gears. they developed a leg that was light weight and very durable. it works better then a normal leg, and can even be used in transmutations. Frost was given this leg to replace her own, the leg is very strong and hard and works well for taijutsu. a kick from this leg can send a person flying.  Automail: Heart- a heart made by the scientists from alchemy and gear. it is a half of a heart, built to replace a heart that has stopped functioning but had nothing wrong. it replaces the right half of the heart and allows the body to work at double speed. it increases blood and chakra flow through the body, making jutsu easier to use. That of course would tire you out quicker yah know? >_> Red Water: Gems- Frost found a secret river underground near alchemy, she found a chemical that helped power alchemy. it takes the power from the alchemy user and amplifies it, then sends it back through the alchemist to use. this is only possible when the water is solidified through a tedious process of compression. once compressed it becomes a gem which can be used as a jewel on a ring or necklace. the pieces of the gem will amplify the user's alchemy x2. [NEW PART] these gems cannot be held for more then 2 posts before contact poisoning occurs. to avoid poisoning, they can be placed inside of a small container. if inside of a container a larger amount is needed to get the same effects, and must be within a foot of the user.  It needs a drawback/cost of some sort >_> ___________________ there i added a limiter. Red Water: Weapons- using a vial of red water from the underground river by alchemy, Frost can bend a vial of red water mixing it with the glass from the vial into a weapon chosen during creation. the weapon created takes a certain number of vials of red water. Frost can only carry a total of 10 vials on her at a time, then she has to return to the underground river and refill some more. these weapons are great during combat because small alterations can be made during a swing of the weapon. a sword could grow small spikes out the sides to do slightly more damage. a mace can grow small ridges similar to knife edges on parts during a swing. (small alterations are all that can be made during a fight. weapon changes can be made but do still need new vials added to the mixture if changing to larger weapon.) Weapon - vials. mace - 2 dagger- 1 short sword - 2 b*****d sword - 3 claymore - 4 gladius - 3 once you get the one above approved you should be fine.
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Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 3:21 pm
My Demons Made-Ups Gobi Earth Explosion - This technique allows Gobi to make the earth he manipulates explode when it makes contact. The explosion size will vary depending on if the size is from a tiny dirt particle or a large boulder. Pending.
Needs some sort of cost, so you're not just causing everything to blow up. xDI can only make the earth I'm manipulating at the time explode, not just everything around. Transportation - This technique can work on Gobi himself or it can be used on an opponent. A large dome of earth forms around whoever that's about the size of Gobi. Inside of the dome, in complete darkness whatever inside is transported anywhere on solid ground around the world. Where ever the user gets transported a similar dome raised from the ground in that spot while the original dome sinks into the ground and the user appears into the new dome.  Chakra Expulsion - Gobi releases chakra from his body with this technique. the chakra leaves his body with great force. The distance is determined by how much chakra is lost in the process. EX. For the technique to go 20,000 feet, 20,000 chakra points would be lost. Forced Comet - Gobi shoots a compact ball of earth into the sky that goes through the atmosphere and comes back down, crashing into the earth with the force of a comet. Gobi helps the process by manipulating it to determine the direction the comet will fall in. Android Kuroi (Mayonaka) Hidden Moon Body Upgrade: The Matrix Code - Kuroi is able to copy his code over any living being. New Kurois retain the memories and abilities, if any, of the one over which he copies himself. This code is much like how a virus replicates. If Kuroi pierces a living being he is able to transfer his matrix code making the opponent turn into a exact replica of Kuroi. Once the Matrix Code is placed in some one they become one with Kuroi as a single but separated being. 
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Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 5:12 pm
Hmm, not really my place to say, but isn't that last one a little much? All you have to do is stab somebody a single time, and you permanently delete their character?
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Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 5:32 pm
It probably won't get approved, won't know until it does though
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Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 7:01 pm
Needs another Mod's look over, of a technique on the previous page.Quote: Dante, Thantos Hidden Alchemy Alchemic Disintegration Thanks to being of the Jounin level, and soon planning to become a kage to his village, Thantos created a technique to assist in his role as an Anbu, and a defender to his village. This technique, is thanks to the abilities that he has with alchemy. This technique is actually the cause of long hours, carving away at his own arm in order to have alchemy circles intertwining up and down his entire right arm and miss-matching with the ones that are already on his hand. With this technique, he actually manages to be able to drain away the opponent's actual substance as long as his hold is maintained. Meaning that if they are of a human base, he can grab hold and drain away both chakra and blood without actually causing a physical wound. Though at longer posts he may actually give the limb the look of being shriveled up thanks to losing up to all the blood in that location. It takes a single post to charge up the needed forces that would then cause the ability to drain away from the opponent. But once the opponent is held for that one post charging period, they are instantly taken in by the effects, losing blood and chakra at a rapid and dangerous pace from the next post onwards. Connection is needed to maintain the technique, and once connection is lost. I don't see why not. Approved. Quote: Asmodeus Hidden Grass Demonic Formulation This is the actual genetic formulation of Asmodeus. Fully showing his demonic properties since he is in fact a Demon by race itself. This body that he possesses, actually consists of a good deal of rather gruesome details that make him just a tad more interesting. Some of these details include the ability to in a sense, bleed maggots. Meaning that when he is damaged, to such a degree as to bleed, and when he chooses it to happen, he can have maggots emerge instead of blood. These maggots are slightly acidic, and are known to attempt to burrow into people's skin, that may make contact with them. Although they do not move to attempt to get in the opponent. Aside from having these odd worms in making up his body. He also has an exceptional speed boost, thanks to being a demon. By adding a little strain to his muscles, he can use a movement that is much like that of a flash step. Moving as if he just flickered from one spot to the next. Most Doujutsu and similar techniques that allow movement to be tracked, can easily allow his movements to be tracked by those techniques. When you bleed maggots it substitutes for blood, right? What I mean is: the loss of maggots holds the same effect as losing blood? If so then approved. Substitute for blood, yes. Emotion Funnel This ability is actually one that effects anyone that is around him. It allows for him to actually grow stronger, the more anyone around him starts to use and show emotions. Although it does not work for all emotions, more definite ones such as Fear, Hatred, or Sadness fully fuel Asmodeus into an almost godlike stature. But this is not to be fooled for a move that may cause potential misuse. Only negative emotions are able to be used in this way, other emotions like that of happiness, joy, love or any other assortment of the more positive emotions have little to no effect, and at higher levels may actually cause Asmodeus to falter in his strength, and become weaker. How this technique works, is that it actually creates a sort of unseen funneling effect around Asmodeus, draining away at anyone in the vicinity's emotions and in turn making Asmodeus become stronger and stronger, the more negative feelings that his opponent, or those around him come to possess. He gains a multiplication to all physical traits that he can possess. More strength, more speed, endurance. Almost everything is liable to become stronger, with the more negative emotion that an opponent, or someone near the opponent shows while fighting. Of course, he does not keep these modifications, instead they are lost as soon as the emotion's source is defeated, or they flee from the area. Erm, I suppose this move is all right. It worries me because there are a lot of moves people can use to make people have negative emotions throughout the fight which would increase your power more and more. But I suppose this can be approved. I will be monitoring it. Approved. Already said something about this one to you in PM xD Obscurity Checked!
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 2:33 am
Kikuta Gaze Level 5 Over the years, Akira’s chakra has been corrupted by a great amount of things. He was once the holder of the Panther beast seal, And now he is the vessel for the Rokubi and the soul of The legendary Skye Orimara. These powers have given Akira the ability to go beyond the abilities of a normal Orimara. Akira’s Kikuta Gaze has reached a fifth stage, a stage that has only been seen once and at that not in over a century. In this stage, Akira’s eyes enter the new moon stage, completely filled with black darkness. In this state, Akira’s reflexes are nearly twice that of an Orimara at level four, traceable only special means. Also, this technique does not come with the normal techniques that came with the previous four levels of the Kikuta gaze, with one second taken off the time it takes for their effects to activate. Though you are able to use the level four tecnhniques, this technique unlocks, other techniques for use. However, all this power comes with a price. This technique takes 500 cp per turn to continue. Kikuta Mimicry This technique uses the powers of memory loss granted by the Level 5 Kikuta Gaze and the mastery of an aspect of the Kikuta Memory. When eye contact is made, Akira chakra reaches into the mind of his opponent and places blocks on techniques that he does not know. This includes made up techniques and clan techniques making his opponent unable to use them until the end of the technique. It takes time for Akira to probe through a mind so regardless of the opponent’s power, Akira must be able to keep him immobile for one whole turn for the technique to work. Also the technique has a price, This technique costs 500 1000 cp per turn to continue. Pending.
I'm just unsure about this one. neutral PM me 'bout it?Neutral Seal Combination Part 1: Weapons useless This technique uses the Neutral Seal’s abilities and turns them on special weapons. When this technique is activated, the abilities of all special weapons can not be used on the the jutsu user while he is in stage two of the seal. This technique can only be used with one other combination tech. Neutral Seal Combination Part 2: Techniques useless This technique uses the neutral seals abilities of negation and turns them on a particular type of technique. When this jutsu is being used, one type of technique (taijutsu, genjutsu, elemental, pure chakra, cybernetic, ect) can not be used on the jutsu user while he is stage two of the seal. This technique can only be used with one other conbination tech. Neutral Seal Combination Part 1: Doujutsu's useless This technique uses the neutral seal’s abilities of negation and turns them on doujutsu in particular. When this technique is used, no Doujutsu techniques can be used against the user while he is in full neutral seal power. This technique can only be used with one other conbination tech Pending. All three.
How about, make it so only one can be used at a time out of these three techniques. But the original effects of the seal can be used in conjunction? And for "Neutral Seal: Techniques useless" - Choose one for the battle, so you're not just negating everything. 3nodding Okay Neutral seal: Techniques useless- thats what i was planning on doing with it in the first place so i have no problem with it, ill just add that to the description.. Hmm only one at a time? I was planning on having them active until the mark is deactivated. How about i use all three and the effects affect me as well? If not ill just figure out a technique switch system like thing. I can go with two at a time. Medical Sacrifice Valkyrie at her skill level is well versed in medical skills. She could heal someone of just about any ailment, but that would take time. So in emergencies she has an all in one cure: her blood and chakra. By getting someone to bite her skin and suck her blood and chakra out, the healing abilities that are afforded to her are tranfered to them. With it they can beat diseases and poisons with ease and heal minor cuts instantly. This technique only works on allies and not on herself. Pending.
Does it work on herself, as well? no it does not work on her Sonido The number one job of a medical ninja is to not get hurt. This is Valkyrie's answer to that. She has preformed surgury on herself much like she did with Ranmaru and Ichigo to make their bodies. In her case it was so that her legs were able to reach this type of speed. With this technique she moves almost instantaneously at high speeds for a few seconds, enough to put space between her and her enemy. Biological Knowledge To be a good grappler, you need a least some knowledge of biology. In Ryu's case, his knowledge of biology and anatomy rivals that of a medical ninja. He knows the density of every part of every bone. He knows the amount of power it takes to break a bone in one hit. He knows the weakest part of the skull to hit to cause a concussion. He know the force it takes for a slap to the ear to cause eardrums to pop and he knows the force it takes to interrupt the flow of water in the body and cause an opponent to lose equilibrium. Needless to say, his hands are dangerous. Ash Cat The blade dissolves into ash. In combat, the user can control the movement of the ash, and cut anything it lands on by moving the hilt. The ash is also solid enough to be used as a shield to block enemy attacks. The ash has a limit of thirty meters and can block physical attacks, though a large enough attack runs the risk of spilling over its edges The Demon Weasel Cloak- ? yea, working on it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 4:03 pm
GreenTigerr My Demons Made-Ups Gobi Earth Explosion - This technique allows Gobi to make the earth he manipulates explode when it makes contact. The explosion size will vary depending on if the size is from a tiny dirt particle or a large boulder. Pending.
Needs some sort of cost, so you're not just causing everything to blow up. xDGobi can only make the earth that's being manipulating at the time explode, not just everything around. Shino Replication - Gobi creates a replica of Shino from the earth. Once it is created it has the same technique set as the original Shino but the chakra is drawn from Gobi instead of Shino himself. The second Shino's attack count towards the 2 per post, just like a clone's. Other then that, it's good.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 4:45 pm
Shun Uchiha-Hidden Leaf Hakusuitosaketsu ("Soul Sleep and Chain Link")- This move allows Shun to severe the soul chain of his opponent with his Zanpaktou blades. If an opponent is cut by Shun's blades they not only leave a normal wound, but a soul wound as well. This technique cuts off a persons link to there Soul Chakra, meaning they can't go any further than there basic limits. Like this, if an opponent is cut by Shuns blade on his arm, any jutsu or techniques allowing an increse in chakra would not effect that body part. This move only works for Shun Bleach based Zanpaktou Blades. Kidou ("Demon Arts")- Shun has found a scroll containing vast amounts of techniques, each technique has it's own movement and is used in an interesting way. Shun may teach his Kidou off to others if they wish to learn, but he get's to set the time to learn it. Basically allows Shun to create his own base of spells. Each spell will have a cost and can be taught to those Shun wishes to teach. Kyoumon ("Mirror Gate")- One of Shuns Kidou spells, allowing Shun to take his opponents move and send it back at them by forming a chakra based mirror. Costs 1,000 Cp to activate Pending
It seems a little powerful, seeing as with it you could throw back any attack, multiple times. neutral Demon Kazeka- Hidden Gears Hakuda - Another Form of Taijutsu Demon has stored from the days of old. This style of fighting allows Demon to force high amounts of chakra into his blows and fuse techniques together to create his own brand of striking moves. Basically allows Demon to take a move or two and make them one. He must pay the cost of the two techniques as one single technique. Pending.
Does it count as using both your two techniques, that you get a turn?
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 5:41 pm
Imperial Edict: Art of the Sword- Ten Commandments/Decalogus- In her travels to learn and master the way of the blade, Tamao encountered a strange old man, who entrusted her with this blade of blades. This is not to denote it's ultimacy or primacy over other blades, merely to state that it is a blade of multiple forms. This blade is actually ten different blades, but it can only manifest as one at a time. -Eisenmeteor, the metal sword- A large sword designed to be held with both hands. It cannot be blocked by elemental techniques. -Explosion, the explosive sword- It has no edge to properly cut with, but every time it strikes something, it creates a moderate explosion. If used repeatedly, the wielder may suffer recoil damage. -Silpharion, the sonic sword- Wielding this blade makes the user lighter and more agile, allowing them to strike quickly, even enough to create a 'vacuum cut' effect. -Runesave, the sealing sword- This sword can only cut immaterial things, such as fire or lightning, or poison gas. -Blue Crimson, the twin dragon sword- This sword is actually two blades. One has the properties of fire, the other of ice. (They cannot project their elements, but they act as if the blades manifest it. For instance, the fire blade's cuts would burn.) -Mel Force, the vacuum sword- This sword can project powerful blasts of air in the path of it's strikes. (Not like a vacuum cut, more like a diminished and unidirectional Great Breakthrough.) -Gravity Core, the gravity blade- This blade can cut anything, but is EXTREMELY heavy. -Million Suns, the solar blade- This blade is composed of pure light, and can dispel normal darkness. (Not technique-created darkness.) -Sacrifar, the bloodlust sword- This sword makes the wielder grow berserk, but turns their emotions into raw power. If wielded for too long, the sword will take over the wielder. -Ravelt, the holy star sword- This blade can dispel eveil energy and is extra effective against evil enemies. (Decalogus is it's evil counterpart, what it would be if the wielder is lost to Sacrifar or Harming Blade. It's swords are identical, except Million Suns is darkness instead of light, and Ravelt affects good instead of evil.) Imperial Edict: Art of the Sword- Fierce Tempest Profusion Strike- This is a masterful technique, allowing Tamao to strike with every one of her blades, each blade striking for the number of blades she owns, all in an instant. This technique is too exhausting to risk using often, and can only be used once in a battle for every 50,000 chakra the owner possesses. As well, it cannot be halted easily, even if it completely misses, Tamao will have to slowly halt her swings. If she were to instantly stop, the sheer change in momentum and velocity would be akin to running into a brick wall at full speed. It can change it's direction to a limited extent, as much as Tamao can turn at the waist. As well, it is incredibly difficult to actually move much while performing this attack, so jumping and dodging is virtually impossible. As well, she cannot use it successively, no matter how much chakra she has. She must wait a number of posts equal to one quarter of the number of blades she has, before she can use it again.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:29 pm
Yuan Shisho Moon Kikuta Eye Evolution: Seki-Reigan Eye of the Wagtail  Speed. The Seki-Reigan is pure speed. When the user uses this doujutsu, a symbol will appear in their eyes. The Seki-Reigan makes the user move with such speed, that their bodies are actually able to occupy multiple spaces at seemingly the same time. The shinobi who uses this technique can strike multiple times from multiple points at seemingly the same time. This speedcan match the speeds of nibi and other high speed techniques. The user moves so fast that they literally multiply in number. If an enemy strikes at one of them, they will simply disappear, the user, constantly moving, taking a different path. The multiples can appear and disappear, but when they strike, they strike many times all at once, faster than humans can even sense them much less react. The doujutsu allows the user to move instantaneously. Pending.
Needs restrictions, and I'm sort of getting tired of EVERYONE wanting speeds equal to Nibi.Lol, well, Drago claims that Drago is the fastest ninja in the guild because of "Drago Speed" which is tied to the Nibi. So if you want to start reaching that level, you need to "Match the Nibi."
What kind of restrictions? I couldn't think of anything cause it is basically an advancement of the Kikuta gaze and that has no cost.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:32 pm
Unconventional Taijutsu: Acrobatics- The Prince uses the skills he has practiced for some time to move around in a way that most could only dream to. having been a grave robber, he had practiced escaping from ancient traps, by way of never even having to touch the ground. using these skills he had found that he could bounce from anything to another thing with ease. most people couldn't even see him when he would move. [high speed taijutsu, used to move around an opponent without having to set foot upon the ground.] Ohrmazd Help- Elika has been granted a power from one of the gods that she believes was Ohrmazds doing. using this power she can rescue the Prince(or anyone else) from being killed, each time she uses this power the person who they were facing gains back a fraction of their health too. [protected person= 1/2 total chakra regained. opponent= 1/2 of missing chakra regained. can only be used when partner is in danger.] I'm going to watch it, though.
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 12:18 am
Punchline- Joker has always been a master comedian. Using his wit, he'll tell a joke to his opponent. In the brief window of opportunity while they are either figuring it out, laughing, or groaning in disgust, he'll throw a punch, with enough force to knock his opponent unconscious. Killing Joke- One of Joker's most deadly techniques, it appears simple enough. Using any object with a sharp edge or point, he'll hurl it at his opponent, with incredible aim and precision. If it should happen to hit, it will almost always be a mortal blow. The major drawback of this technique, if someone survives this attack even once, it will NEVER work on them again, no matter what, even to the point of a point-blank strike bouncing harmlessly off of them. (Generally, if Joker has more than four times the chakra of his opponent, this attack will likely hit.)
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 12:29 am
For Drago Intangibility/self-molecular control - Exhibited by past Nibi Users... Their total control on kinetic energy at a molecular level allows them to match the vibrational frequency needed to travel easily into and through solid matter. Drago has this ability too, but with less control, so solid matter usually explodes coming in contact with him. When Drago has internalized the Nibi into himself, he too shows issues with this ability, melting matter into "molecular taffy" if not concentrated enough. Other Nibi's control is as effortless... but unlike Drago it is somewhat unstable. As an offensive ability, it can be used to scramble one's molecular structure to the point of literal disintegration..If made with Direct Contact..for Prolong period of time. I trust you, Drago. But I'll be watching it anyway. xD
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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 11:41 pm
:: Eluamous Nailo ::
Hidden Mythology --> Spartan Madeup ((Cursed Seal)) - Blink: Thus named for its ability to change places faster than the opponent can blink, Eluamous uses the energy from the Hastega Seal to literally eat away at the dimensional fabric surrounding him. To an enemy it would simply look as if he were at one point one moment, and another point the next. The technique itself only requires Eluamous to take a step in any one direction, but his Blink-point must be something within his line of sight, and he must be able to see his Blink-point clearly. Secondly, the nature of this technique pulls an extreme taxation of Eluamous's mental fortitude. He can only use this technique once per turn, and a total number of times during the battle equal to his CPS divided by 10,000. Should he go over either limit on the number of times he can use the technique, Eluamous will fall into an unconscious state. Pending.
This really doesn't seem to match any effects, that have to do with your Seal.Madeup ((Cursed Seal)) - Aura of Pressure: Another alteration of the space-time continuum, this technique causes Eluamous's Chakra Pool to become a tangible pressure, much like that of Gravity. Its true power is in its ability to cause pressure against an opponent's Chakra Pool. Although a strong opponent will not feel it as harshly, an opponent with under Half of Eluamous's Chakra Pool will be placed under a crushing pressure that doubles the cost of all the opponents' attacks, thus draining them of their power more quickly. This pressure will not hinder movement, although it will cause extreme discomfort. Pending.
This doesn't either.Madeup ((Cursed Seal)) - Thordain: Charging power from the the heavens above into his weapon to lash out with thunderous fury. This strike is said to possess the force of one of Zeus's lightning bolts; and is unique in the fact that it grows stronger the longer a battle as progressed. The power of this attack 'doubles' once every 4 turns a battle has progressed. But for every doubling in power, the attack's cost also increases by 1000 Chakra. Example: Turn 1 - 1000 Chakra, Turn 4 - 2000 Chakra, Turn 8 - 3000 Chakra, etc. Pending.
Neither does this.
PM Ryu and check to see if the made ups have to be about the Seal's abilities or not. If they don't have to, I'll re-look at these.Ryu Gekkou GoldDragon1188 Quote: [[PM Ryu and check to see if the made ups have to be about the Seal's abilities or not. If they don't have to, I'll re-look at these. ]] just need to check and see if the Madeups given by the seal need to be about the seal's abilities. Try to have them reflect the Mark. But its mostly its to add a personal touch as well...making the mark unique to the user. I'll look over yours if need be.
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