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"Hello Slick, we meet again."

-Taskmaster to Spider-Man-

Well where going to have something like that and the story's not completely new its been revised and is going to be all original. Just like our character's should be. Everybody's sheet has looked over and revised except you Zenji we need to do that before we start.

okay first things first.

We like your story Zenji for its originality and its cool to be honest. but the problem with your story is it doesn't fit in with the bigger story at hand. like everyone elses it has some way there going to fit in with the bigger picture or some way the bigger story at hand affected them in some way. Example fozzil's has nothing to do with the dragon's and such but the events of everything that has been going on with the world and the E.A.E taking over has affected him and his people greatly. leading him to get involved in the bigger story at hand eventually. your story is singling you out as a character and has nothing to do with the foundation story. which is the story we build off of.

The second thing is your character's persona has no way of fitting in with the other protagonist of the story.
Example: Our Hero's are trying to prevent bad things from happening and help people who we meet along our journey. while also remaining focus on there sepreate goals. That being said you now join the group and according to your pro sheet most eneimes you encounter are either killed to feed to your sword or if there is no eneimes it's other people. Now just because where hero's dosen't mean you have to be goodie goodie and play by the rules and yatta yatta but it would be very hard to believe that the protagonist are okay with their other protagonist friend killing the guys we encounter wether they are friend or foe proving that where no better than E.A.E. and where just as bad.

And the third and final thing is having the power to have full control of your blood and other's people blood is overpowerd. without even going into detail with your powers you already can pretty much beat almost everyone we encounter with ease no matter what there power is.

your powers:

1.You can turn your blood into weapons and make it as hard as the wepon itself.
2.Super healing factor meaning when are you going to get tired?
3. You can easily blow up any living creature from the inside
4. You won't lose blood because you controll it
you see my point? its just to powerful it's like saying i have the power to control flesh or me saying i have the power to have all the powers i want.
And remember where trying to make a good story not who's the strongest or whatever.... My character isn't nearly as strong as the other guys but through the story you'll see how all the characters grow and progress through the story.

So with that if you don't mind i need you to tweak those things please and if you need help with anything or opinion's just ask us and we'll be happy to help.

I'm sad and happy at the moment. neutral

I'm ready for the guild, but the guild isn't ready...

yea, thats partially my fault. sorry fozzil. but i have to wait for zero to check this thing before i can fix it.

awesome. looks like rewriting was a better idea. for now, lets just make sure we can keep everyone coming on on a daily basis. i head back to college around I think Jan 27

makes sense. don't worry, not much has been happening much on DC anyways but i have finished my recreated main character. Gadgeteer and dual wield fits me more than ice and martial arts.