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 Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:18 pm
*Flashback-ed!* In stories, flashbacks are my least favorite because they don't progress the story. But they are needed because they fill in the gaps. Needed: Yes Wanted: No Confusing!~
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:23 pm
Hero Maul *Flashback-ed!* In stories, flashbacks are my least favorite because they don't progress the story. But they are needed because they fill in the gaps. Needed: Yes Wanted: No Confusing!~ *In the next chapter James Tyler dies a humiliating and horrific death* Lols, only joking. Well, I don't mind flashbacks, as long as they don't pop up all the time. I really liked the oppourtunity to write something a bit deep and sentimental.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:27 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Hero Maul *Flashback-ed!* In stories, flashbacks are my least favorite because they don't progress the story. But they are needed because they fill in the gaps. Needed: Yes Wanted: No Confusing!~ *In the next chapter James Tyler dies a humiliating and horrific death* Lols, only joking. Well, I don't mind flashbacks, as long as they don't pop up all the time. I really liked the oppourtunity to write something a bit deep and sentimental. As I said, Needed.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:18 pm
Chapter 17 online. I've been in a writing mood tonight, so I hope you don't mind the flood of chapters.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:21 pm
I like the flood of chapters. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:23 pm
I loved this chapter, it questions something that I have alway wondered, freedom. That is something I will never understand.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:27 am
Seaphron I loved this chapter, it questions something that I have alway wondered, freedom. That is something I will never understand. Yeah, it's a tricky thing. Well, there should be some more chapters coming your way today.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:42 am
I just read all the chapters. This is really good. I like it alot.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:44 am
Forsaken Swordsman Yeah, it's a tricky thing. Well, there should be some more chapters coming your way today. Indeed it is, I can't wait to see more chapters.
Masamunes back blaugh
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:51 am
Masamune 5.0 I just read all the chapters. This is really good. I like it alot. Thanks. The next chapter is going to be about Thomas Klaus actually, so well timed return. btw, do you live in Switzerland? If you do have you ever visited Gstaad?
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:00 am
ForsakenSwordsman Masamune 5.0 I just read all the chapters. This is really good. I like it alot. Thanks. The next chapter is going to be about Thomas Klaus actually, so well timed return. btw, do you live in Switzerland? If you do have you ever visited Gstaad? I don't live in Switzerland but I visit it every year. I have a lot of family there, too. But, I have not been to Gstaad. The places I've been are: Zurich, Luzern, Gruyere, Leukerbad, Zermatt, Arosa, and Basil. (I've also been to Bern but that's so far back that I can't remember.)
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:18 am
Masamune 5.0 ForsakenSwordsman Masamune 5.0 I just read all the chapters. This is really good. I like it alot. Thanks. The next chapter is going to be about Thomas Klaus actually, so well timed return. btw, do you live in Switzerland? If you do have you ever visited Gstaad? I don't live in Switzerland but I visit it every year. I have a lot of family there, too. But, I have not been to Gstaad. The places I've been are: Zurich, Luzern, Gruyere, Leukerbad, Zermatt, Arosa, and Basil. (I've also been to Bern but that's so far back that I can't remember.) Awesome. I just thought that it was quite a coincidence that Switzerland feautred in the story, and that you also had swiss references on your profile. @ all: the new chapter will be up in a matter of seconds, once I post it.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:22 am
Seemed a little sexist but it was pretty good.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:28 am
Seaphron Seemed a little sexist but it was pretty good. Lol, well for some reason Klaus ended up being the sexist character (nothing personal Masamune). Well, other than Drakam.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:33 am
ForsakenSwordsman Seaphron Seemed a little sexist but it was pretty good. Lol, well for some reason Klaus ended up being the sexist character (nothing personal Masamune). Well, other than Drakam. XD I see what you mean, only differance is Drakam hates everyone.
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