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 Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 6:34 am
Very nice chapter, Gendou. It was well written AND it had zombies. What more do you possibly need?
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 6:47 am
1) Gendou's evil.
2) YES! Boychilde!
3) Kyra's a nutter. scream
4) OH GOD NO ZOMBIES gonk gonk gonk *bursts into tears*
5) Gendou's evil.
6) The Gendou writing this is evil.
*tries and fails to not make a comment regarding Mory's happiness level upon being alone with Gendou*
*shot* gonk
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 7:16 am
Quote: Gendou's blood-red eye flashed with rare humor. "Do I actually see with my own very eyes a man who's not heard of a skeletal cat? Or a man who's not seen a diabolical dog?" *cackle* xd I'm sure I'm the only one who gets this. I think it's wonderful. You're wonderful. I very clearly see the scenes you write. My favorite scene is Gendou casually walking at night, corpses and skeletons cropping up and following him. heart
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 8:09 am
Danti *tries and fails to not make a comment regarding Mory's happiness level upon being alone with Gendou* Stockholm Syndrome's got nothing on this. wink
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 9:08 am
Danti 3) Kyra's a nutter. scream YES. I thought it was strange that it seemed so familiar to me last night. My actions, I mean, and I realized that Genny stumbled upon my complex. xd I absolutely HATE to be forced into anything. It has to be of my own will, or you'll drag me alone like a crazy tribal in a cart. Or you'll have to knife me three hours.
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 10:31 am
Kyraa Danti 3) Kyra's a nutter. scream YES. I thought it was strange that it seemed so familiar to me last night. My actions, I mean, and I realized that Genny stumbled upon my complex. xd I absolutely HATE to be forced into anything. It has to be of my own will, or you'll drag me alone like a crazy tribal in a cart. Or you'll have to knife me three hours. Don't make me shiv you.
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 11:08 am
I love how you write action, Gen. It flows, even while changing viewpoints. I love how Graye and Ruevian end up fighting together, and I love Weston's reaction at the end. I love how competent the Legionaires are.
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 11:42 am
EEEEEEEEE~!!!! biggrin This is the best chapter YET! I honestly cracked up laughing when I heard "Boychilde", because (even though it really is Mom's nickname for my brother) that has to be the WORST name for a prince I've EVER heard. xd I love the battle scene. I have an annoying tendency to get bored with battles, but this one kept me interested. The ZOMBIES, man, the ZOMBIES~ eek OH NO. I'm gone. He got me. What ever shall I do? gonk heart Calmer Danti *tries and fails to not make a comment regarding Mory's happiness level upon being alone with Gendou* Stockholm Syndrome's got nothing on this. wink
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 1:59 pm
"Uh, where's the princess?" <--- best line. ^-^ That was sweet, Gendou. I especially like how you handled the fight scene, it played out wonderfully.
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 2:17 pm
There were zombies, ergo I am happy. And you've still got that knack for creating good battle scenes, I see. Good, good work.
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 2:34 am
Chapter Fifteen is up for your viewing and reviewing pleasure.
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 2:37 am
:O! Genny did something naughty. Curiousity killed the cat. Or ruined a relationship.
And whatever did happen to poor old-man-in-young-man's-body DV? surprised
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 2:41 am
You guys~! Gendou's GODMODDING! whee
(More intelligent comments later!)
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 5:32 am
That was very good, Gendou, I'm looking forward to Mory's inevitable case of stockholm syndrome.
*looks at the healer, then screams as he is burned with white magic*
I also like the forshadowing that you did with Rommy and DV. And you didn't beat us over the head with the Mallet 'O plot-points like some writers do, either. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 5:54 am
This really is indeed all flowing nicely together. As Will said, there's just the right touch of foreshadowing, but not too much as to be predictable.
It does seem like everything will be decided at Highguard.
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