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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 12:24 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 1:19 pm
Gaia Name:Armann_90 Character Name biggrin arth Bane Gender:Male Age:18 Race:Human Character Description: Wery much like my avi except every clothe that I have are black Home Planet:Coruscant Starting Planet:Coruscant Relations: He's parents died as he was only a child in jedi training and since he came to the dark side all his living relatives ran away for cover. Character History:Living inn the big city of coruscant he had to rely on his mother to keep him safe. One day a jedi master noticed how strong the force was with him and took him to training. His mother got cancer when he was only 5 years old but he never showed any anger or sadness. His father died about 3 years later in a mining accident in his work as a miner on one of coruscants moons. As he got older he started to show much anger fo no reason but many thought it had something to do with his parents. With his anger outbursts he was no longer welcome to the academy. In the exspelling he claimed to hate every jedi for not helping with his mothers illness. Being only a youngling he was easily soudouced by the dark side of the force. A dark lord took him for training as his appprentice. And now he has been in training for some years Alignment: The dark side of the Force Occupation: Sith Skills: standard jedi training Weapons:Standars sith lightsabre Ship: http://www.yavin4.com/multimedia/dal/maul/sithshipsm.jpgPersonal Belongings: His clothes he has on and his sabre. One hearth neclace from his mother. Roleplay Sample: ((I was TK in this one)) *A small escape pod came landing on the ground. The only noise that was hearable was a clanging of metal in there. Suddenly the legendary TK came out of the pod holding the wounded jedi and putting him to a safe place. Making sure that the jedi would not be unarmed when he would wake up he gave him a pistol and left his lightsapre with him and left to join his squad* *standing up with haste and drawing his sword he pushed the young girl to the side* "go now...RUN" ((a made up one)) Well id say thats about it. Hope you like it blaugh It's decent... could be better, but you got some space to improve, so I'll accept you ^^ -MrM
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 10:37 pm
Gaia Name: DarkLordTantis Character Name: Liando Lucavi Gender: Male Age: 19 Race: Human Character Description: He has long greasy black hair up to his shoulders, One eye is yellow and one is blue, He is about "5ft, 11in", He weighs about 187lbs. He has a long scar across his yelow colored eye(left eye), and he is tanned colored.
Home Planet:Nar Shadaa Starting Point: In space Relations: Fiance, and a brother Character History: He was born on the planet Nar Shadaa, his mother and fathers were sold to the hutts as slaves. He was raised by Lindo Palenor a great strattegist, he treated Liando like the son he never had. When he turned 18 he murdererd Lindo and aquired the legendary katannas Leviathin and Drashaw. Couple months later he met a young man claimnig to be his brother, he didnt believe but further results proved him wrong. His brother trained as a pilot and general for the Empire. Soon later Liando met his fiance Sam(Samantha). When he turned 19 he was appointed the command of Grand Admiral for his strategic mind. And also one of the galaxies biggest star cruisers the Devestator.
Alignment: Imperial Empire
Occupation: Imperial Empire fleet commander
Skills: Brilliant Tactical advisor and strategic, Force sensitive, an excelent marksman, and the only person to weild to kattanas
Weapons: Blaster riffle(range combat), and Leviathan and Drashaw two ancient katannas(close combat). Ship:Tie Interceptor Modified. Hyperdrive 2.0 Shields 175% Max.
Personal Belongings: HK-57 and two ancient katannas, Leviathin and Drashaw
Roleplay Sample:
"We are at sector '21:15' Admiral Lucavi." "Sir." He added.
"Yes, captain tell all the star destroyers except for the Halo, to change position along the right side of the fleet, and tell them to do any last routines before the republic arrives." He smirks and glances at his captain, "Bring the Devestator to the left side of the fleet towards the Halo." "Yes, sir." With one light adjustment the Devestator moved to its degsinated position beside th Halo.
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15 minutes later the Republic warships drop out of hyperspace. "So it begins." Admiral Lucavi said, with a twisted smile. "So it begins." Captian Fevrus look at him in amazement and fear, The admiral had some type of aura around him that his allies respected him, but his enemies would fear. "Captain put me on com-link to all starcruisers."He said still with his twisted smile. "Yes sir." Fevrus replied. "Ready Admiral." "This is your caommander speaking the republic is not in range ye to discover us, put all sheilds to maximum power, and charge all turbolasers to full power." "Admiral, surprise attack from the rear." Yelled one fo the navigational experts." "As I expected, all Tie-fighter units intersect the enemy units' surround the enemy, and take them out one by one, move the Devestator towards the incomimg warships and attack all ships in range." "But sir, what if we hit one of our own," said the captain. "This is war, casaulties are not my concern." "But si-." He was cut off. "are you disobeying an order, captain." Said Admiral Lucavi. "No sir" replied the captain. "Then do as your told." he said, temper rising or I'll be serving your head to your wife on a silver platter." He choked..."Yes sir." The Ships turbolasers fired at a Republic starcruiser. "We lost contact with the Ravager sir." He smirked and said nothing istead turned to his datapad and started to jot things down. "Sir I dont think this is a -." He was cut off again. "SILENCE" he yelled, the whole bridge was staring at him now. "Contact the Halo and tell them to jump to hyperspace send them these coordinates." ".....Yes sir." He stared at the commander but said nothing but kept staring, untill the admiral stood up, then he did wht he was told. "Send word to the Seldom, and request reinfrocemnts." I was a little full of myself headng into this campaign. He thought.
I'll accept you, but there are a few sidenotes... As personal craft, please choose a small ship, a fighter or small transport shuttle. Large craft like star destroyers can only be assigned to you by topic owners, so once you start Rping, just convince the imperial leaders to let you command a capital ship 3nodding And perhaps it would be usefull to use some colors on spoken text, for example blue for yourself, and red for the person you're talking to, it just makes all a bit more readable ^^
-Accepted ~MrM
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2005 1:15 am
Gaia Name: SilvernKnight Character Name: Silverion Gender: Male Age: 21 Race: Human Character Description: Standing at an outstanding height of six foot tall, this warrior is an impressive figure. He is lean, with a slight muscular built, and had pale white complexion. He have a pair of mesmerising platinum-tinted irises, and his face - a beta male - is an extreme beauty that would challenge even the prettiest of the Eve-spawn. His hair weight down to his waist, in natural pale white colours with highlights of deathening black and shiny silvers. Often, he is cloaked in a silverish cloak, hidding his face with a hood. Home Planet: Unknown. Starting Planet: Unknown. Relations: None. Character History: At an extreme young age, with his twin brother, he was brought up by the Sith. Trained in the dark arts of the force since young, he however held no deep hatred nor anger for anyone. Therefore he was a mere apprentice despite his master constant attempts to fuel his rage. He decided to leave the dark rituals when he was ordered to fight in a life and death duel with his twin brother, which he unfortunately killed. Plauged by remorse and fear, he escaped the academy secretly. On the way, he met a lone Jedi expelled from the Jedi Academy. After much teachings, he was told to approach the New Jedi Order for help. Which he was guided there, under the wings of Master Wellington, during the mere age of 13. There with Sephiroth and Alron Qualin, he was promoted, despite the none-existence of having a master. His patience and knowledge made him a great choice to add within the Jedi- Council. When he became a Master, he was only then at a mere age of 18. Some which many others considered impossible for so. 3 years since, the young man departed the Jedi Order to find the remnants of an ancient organisation. The neutral Force-Users - Covenant. Alignment: Neutral Occupation Covenant Skills: Known for his extraordinary piloting skills and his extreme ability to learn very fast, but at times not lasting. Weapons: Unknown amount of Lightsabers. 2 dual ended lightsaber, red/blue; 1 silver GreatSaber; and 3 silver all-rounded sabers, which are used more usually. Ship: None. Personal Belongings: None. Quote: Roleplay SampleHe glanced uneasily toward his nemesis. Nervous and not sure of what to do within the enclosed arena. The boy opposite pulled out his lightsaber. A dual- ended crimson red weapon, very much like his own ."Why! " His nemesis ignored. Then, as if thirsting for blood, the boy charged. He took out his very own, an exact replica of his nemesis' one, a dual- ended saber. In colours of vampiric Sith. The two sabers met. "Why must we thread upon this path!" Their face was just mere inches away. His nemesis remained quiet. But he could feel the unease within the heart. A disturbance in the force. He shut his eyes and felt for the heart that was linked with his at birth."There is no choice. It is either you or me. Or we perish." He could feel. All around him. People was laughing, scorning, happy of the two terrible plight. He was disgusted by their thirst for such torturous activities. Why? "I am sorry..." His nemisis muttered to him. "Betrayed your own blood for life?" "I can..." Fine Enraged by the betrayal, he pushed his nemesis back. Then an amazing display of sabers clashes in all direction, and finally, into his nemisis' heart..."Goodbye... My brother..." -short extract from his earlier days in the Sith academy. When he was ordered to fight against his twin brother. Do I need to bother and look at it, or shall I just accept it? -MrMUm... Just see if there is anything wrong. I don't want special treatment cause I am special. blaugh -J@ you already made a topic and I did not yet approve you! *bans*ok, accepted. officially and all mrgreen For you information... YOU HAD JUST SACRED THE FREAK OUT OF ME. gonk *hugs pillow* -J@
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Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 12:21 pm
Gaian Name: bytlu9 Character Name: Kat Larzo Character Age: 23 Character Alignment: Jedi Stationary Planet: Nar Shaddaa
Lightsaber type: Single-blade Lightsaber Color: Purple additional Weapons: Robotic arm (It has a slot her Lightsaber can be inserted in when it is inserted her robotic hand can work like a Lightsaber as well as burn through certain doors) Owned Vehicles: Old republic fighter Other important possessions: Stealth belt Role-Play Example! This Is a MUST!: What is that all you got you are pathetic! How you managed to even use the force is a mystery What could you even hope to do to me with a move like that?!
Height: 8 feet Weight: 80 pounds Eye Color: black Hair Color: black with purple dyed bangs Race: human Skin Complexion: Caucasian Relations: Dozvlo (Friend) Home Planet: Candrilla Marks/Tattoo's/Etc: Robotic right arm Character Description: Wears a green shirt with that has one long sleeve and one short sleeve, black pants and black boots Character History: Kat works mainly as a merc. 2 years ago she had an ace indent on one of her missions that took her right arm luckily her friend Dozvlo found her just in time and made her a robotic one.
"Rejected. Please follow the standard Application form found on the first page." ~J@
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Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 1:38 pm
ok, now that i'm going to use her, I'm just moving her up to the top of the pile for Jason's convience since she will be joining that covenat of his soon. Gaia Name:liz_bliz Character Name: Zeelin Ki (also known as Zel or Ze) Gender:female Age:13 Race: Togruta Character Description: She has the traits of any of the other Togruta. She has red skin with white circles around her eyes. She has two horns on the top of her head and 3 zebra like stripped head tails, to extending down from her horns and a third behind her head like a braid. She stands about 5'2'' and has black eyes. Home Planet:Naboo Starting Planet:Kamino Relations:none, mother died giving birth, father is unkown Character History Zel's mother was on the run from slave owners when she landed on Naboo and had just enough time to give make her will, give burth to Zel and then die from exhaustion. She was adopted and raised in the palace, not as a servent, but as a charge. While she was not actually anyone's child, they all took care of her, and she got a good education in all subject, even athletic things, where she learned she excelled in melee fighting with swords and marital arts, thanks to her unbelievable quickness and agility. She became martial artist and swords preformer for the Naboo palace and won many prizes for best swordsman and martial artist in annual competitions before she felt that she needed to something more, and that she felt she had special abilities, after a jedi came to the capital city, she was told be him that she was force sensative, and that she should come to Coruscant for training, but while she was out one day, a dark jedi tried to discredit the jedi and told her to go to korriban, she is still somewhat confused by it, and isn''t sure which way is right. She is searching in the outter rim for anwsers and has found Kamino just as he ship has begun to run low on energy, she is Landing on Kamino for help, just were the Covenent is located, chance? I think not. Alignment: the Covenant Occupationa neutral jedi (hopefully) very saber oriented path Skills:skilled in swordsmanship, mostly in quick, almost dance like styles and katas, very fluid and hard to predict and track. She also know some Martial arts (or whatever they call it in this galaxy), mostly ones that use their opponent''s strength and skill against them. She can do a style called "Dance of swords" that is only possible through her connection with the force and subconcious use of it. Weapons: Tonfa/baton style vibro swords where the handles can flatten to make a regular hilt and that can also attach at the butts to make a double vibro blade with the blades facing opposite ways. She also carries a longer style vibro blade. This is so she has many options in battle to fit differnt opponents, though she is best with the tonfa style becasue it allows for faster movement that she likes. She also carries a sniper rifle (force sensitivity gives her better aim) and a automatic laser rifle. She wants to design tonfa/transforming lightsabers when she makes her own. Shipthe Predator (roughly the half the size of the Raptor for reference)  with a one man fighter of her own design, though it was built by a professional.  Personal Belongings: her weapons and a pendant she got from her mother''s will that is made of pure silver and onyx. It is in the shape of two cresent moons crossing each other. Roleplay Sampleif you want one i''ll put it in later, but i think my other 2 profiles give you a good idea. Gimme an RP sample damnit!!! gonk or not.... -Accepted (of course) ~Mr. Mkk, sample: Zeelin parried another strike from her ''opponent''. Though that opponent was actually just another performer for the courts and what they were doing was more of a dance than a fight, simply a dance, a show for the Naboo court. She saw many of the faces that she had grown up with in the crowds and the look of approval on the queen''s face, she had gained favor in her younger years with the queen because of her abilities. Zeelin parried yet another blow and then retaliated with a kata twirl and spinning of his tonfa vibroblade, spinning them in her hand as she herself became a fluid circle of moving blades, her swords followed closely by her feet or fists. She used her ''dance of swords at the last minute, making a strait stike, and then when her opponent thought she knew where the blades was going, Zeelin changed the direction of the swing in mid strike, stressing her arms and totally throwing off her opponent. The ''dance of sowrds'' was always a crowd pleaser, because even the crowd couldn''t follow her move and that made it all the more fun to watch, it added a mystic feeling to watching Zeelin fight. He switched up strikes hit home, but since they were fighting with dulled baldes, it just left a welped and sent a shock into the other performer. The crowed raored and cheered as Zeelin helped her fellow fighter up and they took a deep bow at first the crowd and then the queen. When they were walking away, Zeelin saw a strange man in a a hooded robe watching her. he got up and went to an exit as she went to the performer''s locker room. When she stepped out, the man was there and he said, "I sense the force in you........ You actually added one? I was just joking gonk i was bored xP ^~^ pirate Oh Wow. My very first member. heart Nice description. Definately a thumb up. See you then. twisted -J@(P.S Can I use red? No one using Red right?)yeah, i hope she can create a new saber style that is more dance like, kinda like a mix of forms II and IV
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Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 8:24 pm
Gaia Name:Zeke Ren Character Name:Basta Zurrliean. Gender:Male Age:25 Race:Mandalorian Character Description: Basta's plain white hair goes down past his shoulders,an uncommon trait among mandalorians.As well as slightly cat-like light blue eyes.He wears dark brown jedi robes and wears a single chisled Khrayt Dragon pearl around his neck.He wears a dark red suit of mandalorian armor and a black body glove under his robes. Home Planet:Mandalore Starting Planet: Relations: Dead father,dead mother,dead little brother. Character History:Basta was born on Mandalore to a warrior father and a slave mother.But unfortunatley they had to leave several years later.The ship they had been living on was attacked by space pirates who had sith connections.His father and mother where slain and he was left with his new baby brother.Though a small band of jedi had followed the pirates and where caught in an on-board battle with them.They found Basta hiding in his parent's quarters,but a pirate had nicked his little brother and took him along with them when they fled.The jedi took Basta,who refused to leave behind his father's truck,insisting that the note on it said it was to be given to Basta in the unfortunate event of his death.Basta was trained as a jedi,and hid the fact he was a mandalorian from them.Eventually he opened the trunk and found several things in it.Including a set of madalorian armor,sadly the helmet was too damaged to be used.A box full of ancient parts.And a silver necklce with a small Krayt Dragon pearl hanging from it.There was also a note of explanation for everything.He kept it all,and used the parts to construct his strange lightsaber.He later found that his brother was slain in a raid gone bad during his stay at Nar Shaada. Alignment: Jedi Occupation:Jedi Skills razz iloting,Dueling,and Combat Tactics Weapons:'Blacklight' Greatsaber Ship: The Helm Storm is Basta's custom fighter.It is slightly modeled after Naboo fighter's but heavily modified for his own Fighter Jock purposes. Personal Belongings:Necklace,Mandalorian armor,and several of his father's battle tokens and trophies. Roleplay Sample: A lone figure stood crouched under a rock overhang,it was twichlight in the middle of the desert.He was lost,starved,thirsty,and already half mad.He now believes to be a primative beast,the king of the desert.He quickly scamperd out from under to the rock,running lizard-legged across the cool sands,saliva dripping from his mouth and his eyes clouded with rage and insanity.He quickly stopped and turned his head.He flicked his toungue out and crawled under a bush.Several large tanks drove by on a dirt road.Sure these where his fellow soldiers,but driven mad he didn't recognize them.He remaind under the bush for hours until the freezing night chill set in.His body was found days later,he had frozen to death. I think you should be able to get around Accepted -MrMCan't be a Mandalorian Jedi. ~ Seffi
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Posted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 10:44 am
This is an NPC dark jedi, which I already used a bit ^^
Gaia Name: Vo Character Name: Doesn't matter. You know what? that's actually his name then, if names are that important... Gender: M Age: 43 Race: Zabrak Character Description: The Zabrak dark jedi is wearing a home made Armor, including helmet, which looks most like a combination of a stormtrooper and mandalorian armor, in a shiny gold color, like the sith armors from KotOR. Not only does this make him totally unrecognizable, it also looks badass Home Planet: Reytha Starting Planet: Coruscant Relations: Nopers Character History Blah blah blah... Ehm, ok. Doesn't was a young kid from Reytha when his father left his farming business and traded it for a job at the old, still existing Azzameen Twin-Sun transport compagny, which after the galactic civil war experienced quite some growth regarding their connections with the rebels during that war. 100 years later, they are one of the leading republic transport compagnies. He was destined to become a pilot there, like his father, of course, things never went as they seemed. The ship was interdicted and shot down by a remnant craft, because he apperantly came too close to the imperial planets in that section of the galaxy when he was heading to mon calamari to deliver a flight of underwater fridges for the quarren. The crash landed on Korriban, and altough noone would ever expect him to survive, he only had a broken finger. Thumb, to be exact. (you expected him to be nearly death, eh?) The dark jedi imprisoned him, and wanted to use him as saber food one day, but things went otherwise. His force potential was recognized, and the dark jedi trained him. At first, he didn't like it, but he started enjoying it more later, and totally forgot his plans to flee.... 20 years later, he is quite a nifty dark jedi. Until the time of the great convergence arrived. He went missing during this time, while he was on mission to Reytha, his home. Some say the jedi hunters got him, some say he's hiding somewhere...
Alignment: dark jedi Occupation DJ (I'll make myself a 1-rank-below-master since it is an NPC ^^) Skills: Languages, melee combat with any close range weapon, repair skills
Weapons: 1 dark red bladed lightsaber and a accurate, slow firing mid-range pistol Ship TIE-Defender Personal Belongings: leavin'open
Roleplay Sample Amstel beer, because we love it
-What an astonishing sample, every word is totally true Accepted -MrM
DENIED!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Besides, Berliner Kindl beer is the best beer ever whee ~ Seffi
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Posted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 7:10 pm
Gaia Name: x_Faithless_x Character Name: Haxus Nor Gender: Male Age: 16 Race: Human Character Description: Haxus has light brown skin, and short black spikey hair. His eye color is the same as his skin. But his left eye is artificial and has red eye color. He has a sith tattoo coming down from his forhead, around his left eye, and down his cheek. And his body has a medium build.
Home Planet: Korriban Starting Planet: Kamino Relations: none Character History Born on Korriban, Haxus' childhood was tough. He was taken from his parents by the sith because of his force power, killing them both in the process. He went through a bit of average training with the sith. But they did not hold him for long. He didn't like the sith teachings, and ran away in the middle of the night. Knowing he wasn't safe in Korriban, he fled with smuggler named Orn Sifus. After time went by he became attached to Orn, he was like a father to him. And Orn tought him everything he knew about smuggling and stealing.
After the death of Orn Sifus, all of his belongings went to Haxus. Including an HK-47 droid he called K9. Of course he had to re-program the droid after he got shot in the eye by K9. The droid was soon his companion and acted more like his brother as time went by. And as for his eye, he had to get a new one.
Alignment: Neutral Occupation Smuggler, but soon to be a Covenant [ I hope anyway] Skills: Piloting, Electronics, Stealing, and force sensitivity
Weapons: Average blaster, and a fusion cutter he keeps in his pocket. He also carries around an old red lightsaber he won in a game of Dice, but doesn't use it, because he doesn't know how. Ship A modified YT-1300 that goes by the name - The Iron Hand Personal Belongings: An old HK-47 unit. Though modified, so it is not programed as an assasin.
Roleplay Sample
"Well that wasn't so bad now was it K9?" Haxus stood up and brushed himself off. " Of course not sir" K9 replied, already reloding his blaster rifle, just incase anyone got up again. " Check the bodies for any credits or valuables" Haxus tucked his blaster back into its holster before taking the lightsaber and credits off the table and stuffed it into a small bag.
" Jeez they had to try and shoot me. Man there just rude" he pulled a chair and sat down, watching all the others in the bar staring at him. "Sir you cheated, the dice were loaded" K9 had finished looting the men and began to count the cash. " Only 127 credits sir" he gave Haxus the money. "Well they still shouldn't have shot me" Haxus took the credits and stuffed it in his pocket. "AND WHAT ARE YOU ALL LOOKING AT?" he yelled at the people around him, who all turned back to there drinks in fear.
" You should learn to keep calm sir" K9 said. " What are you? a jedi?....ahh whatever, lets just get outta here, and remember to refuel the ship. I don't wanna be stranded out in space or anything" Haxus stood up and exited the bar. "Yes sir" K9 said following him, he would have had a smile on his face if he could show facial expression.
~~~ "Pretty neat I would say. But well, the K9... I hopes Xiao doesn't care about the close resemblance to her 19. Then again, I don't think she would care... I hope. Accepted!~" -J@
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Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 2:43 pm
Gaia Name: Slipknot456 Character Name:Xious Gender: Male Age: 19 Race: Human Character Description:XIous has black hair that is constantly falling in his face. He also had blue eyes,somewhat muscular. He has a long scar running down his back from when he crashed one of the newer x wings into a lake. Home Planet: born on a ship his parents were travelingon. Starting Planet:give me a minute Relations: none Character History:After being born on the corvett type ship that was carrying his father and mother,the ship was attacked by a unkown group of pirates. They took him and raised him. At the age of 10 he relized that he could use the force. He killed all of the irates then left. he took a missle frigate and flew to a planet that to this day he does not know the name of. There he met a girl about his age. He fell in love but then found out she was sleaping with another guy so he killed her. Now 19 he left that planet to find other jedais. Alignment:neutral Occupation: jedi Skills:piolting,great with a lightsaber,electronics. Weapons:2 silver bladed lightsabers Ship Your character's starship.:A newer model x wing Personal Belongings:none Rp sample sad (DO I do it now or from an older rp))
((please do so now. Remember, don't use sabers before you trained in an academy (you may use them for the sample tho))) (ok)
Rp sample: Xious walked quickly through the hallways once again to be confronted by droids. As his lightsaber came to life the droids opened fire. He blocked all of the shots,sending them back at the droids. Then used the force to send the last one flying into the wall. Xious stepped over the mangeld droid bodys to see a pirtae step out also holding a lightsaber."I didnt know you pirates knew how to use these things". The pirate grunted then attempted to slahe at Xious's midsection only to have his head cut of with one quick motin of xious's lightsaber.
Well, it ain't the best rp sample around, but I think you can improve while playing, so give it a shot Accepted -MrM
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Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 12:55 am
Gaia Name: Streak Lightening Character Name: Lightning Gender: Male Age: 22 Race: Human Character Description: A republic pilot who has a mysterious arua about him. He has neatly cropped, raven black hair, falls carelessly across his features. He wasn't one to fuss over his hair and preferred the slightly messy look. A mysterious light was held in those black pools, those eyes that seemed to reach into the depths of your soul. His outfit is the same as most republic pilots.
Home Planet: Corusant Starting Planet: Corusant: Jedi temple Relations: Other than his regiment he has none. Character History Born on Corusant and discovered by the Republic to be very good with vehicles and physically fit. He joined at the early age of 16 for his exeptional performance. He soon climbed the ranks to become a pilot. He never knew his parents.
Alignment: The Repulic/Jedi Occupation X-wing pilot Skills: Vehicles, fitness, force sensitive (but doesn't know it)
Weapons: Blaster rifle, grenades, time-bombs. Ship No main ship as he is normally switched to make things easier for whoever he fights for. He is a great asset to all ships. Personal Belongings: None.
Roleplay Sample Lightning landed in the enemies hanger bay. He shot one of the Imperial soliders and went deeper into the ship. The Imperial's ship was filled with Tie-Bombers, Tie-Fighters, Tie-Interceptors and one X-wing (his). Lightning suddenly felt the instinct to jump. He had learned to always trust this instinct. He jumped just in time to avoid a sniper shot. He threw a grenade at the sniper and killed him. Lightning began to enter the center of the ship. He destroyed two auto-turrets before they could lock-on to him. He then placed all his time-bombs in the center and ran. He entered hi X-wing and escaped the blast radius just before it exploded. Lightning then smiled.
"Not exactly the best Rp-sample, but it is good anyway. However, you will have to wait for Maniac or Sepy to accept you into the Jedi Order. confused " ~J@
Nope, you don't have to wait, just start Rping and we'll put you in there 3nodding -MrM
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Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 11:48 am
Gaia Name: Loki the Stampede Character Name: Aksel Gender: Male Age: 18 Race: Human Character Description: Tall, thin, but strong. Brown spikey hair, with blue/gray eyes, and slightly pale skin. Wears a black and gray flight suit and carries a EE3 Carbine.
Home Planet: Bespin Starting Planet: Unknown Space Relations: Gone. Character History A lone pilot who does odd jobs, and seems to lack motovation. He once had a relationship with a Jedi, who has now disappeared because of the Jedi Hunt. He will do anything to find out what happened to her.
Alignment: None, but favors the Jedi Occupation: Freelance Pilot Skills: Piloting, Guns, Strong Will
Weapons: EE3 Carbine Ship: Modified B-Wing Lost Cause Personal Belongings: None
Roleplay Sample: "Lost Cause you have entered private space. You will be shot if you get involved in these personel matters!" Aksel watched as hundreds of fighters were attacking each other in the distance. Small specs fallowed by green, red, and blue blaster fire lite up the empty space that served as a background to this battle. The call came in again. "Lost Cause! We are sending in fighters, unless you declare yourself!" Aksel could see two fighters starting his way. He turned to the comm hanging on his ear. "This is Lost Cause. I am here on vacation, just passing through." "What?! Vacation?! Prepare to be boarded!" "My declaration is to the New-Republic. Call off your fighters and I am requesting landing permission is your main ship. I am sending my data now..." The comm raddled on as it the man's voice finally cut. "...can't just fly in here and expect-... ... ... ... ... Um... Fine then... You are cleared for... dock 3... ... ..." "Thanks Carrier NB-17, preparing to dock." Aksel smiled, and headed towards the ship. Soon, the tracking device will be placed, and all would go as planned. Nowadays, you flash a VIP pass, and your all the rave...
((Hows this?))
"Are you just a random character with no Affilation and just travelling through space? If you are, then there is nothing wrong with your Applications. I guess... Accepted" ~J@
Accepted! Have fun -MrM ((if you are planning to bounty hunt, we still need someone to make a Bounty Hunters guild ^^))
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 1:25 pm
Gaia NameVamp_from_hell Character Name:Aimless(( real name unknown)) Gender:Male Age:20 Race:Human Character Description biggrin yied red hair. Green eyes. He weres a plain shirt and blue pants. Sometimes he may have a cloak on or a jacket depending on his mood(( angrey. Or really angrey))
Home Planet:Corriella Starting Planet: In space near Tantioone Relations:Older brother of Zackaroth Character History: Banished from his village by his father for trying to kill his little brother, Aimless roams the galaxy in an old A-wing. It breaks down from time to time but he somehow always manges to fix it. He,like Zackaroth, is force sensetive. He knows trying to join the Jedi would be useless since he has to much anger in him. He goes around killing bounties and barely makes a living from the repairs he has to do to his A-wing. He seeks to hone his abilities so he can finlley one day go back to Tantooine and kill his brother.
Alignment:None Occupation: Small time bountey hunter Skills: A really good Marksman(( hence the name Aimless.)). Can also brawl in hand to hand combat pretty well.
Weapons:A Blaster pistol. Ship: An old A-wing Personal Belongings:Only the clothes on his back
Roleplay Sample: Aimless punched the man back in the face. He looked all over his green eyes showing hate. He looked around the bar as three more men went up to him. " Come on. You pieces of Bantha fodder want a piece of me?!" he yelled.
They didnt get a chance to strike. While looking at one of the other mnen he shot the one one on the right dead. The other stunned for a moment,rushed in. They tried to subdue Aimless but found themselves out mucsled. Aimless punched one guy in the chin while the other in the groin area. They both feel on the ground.
Aimless spit on the ground and prepared to bored his A-wing off this third world planet. He needed to find someone to help train him in the ways of the force. THe Dark Side of the Force. He needed a Sith....
Go ahead! -MrM
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 4:10 am
Gaia Name: Mr_BFA Character Name: Darth Deceit, but also just known as catloj- ki Gender: Male Age: 18 Race: Changeling Character Description: He changes into many appearences but mostly he sticks to a human one. the appearence what he mainly chooses of is. black hair with red streaks, pure white eyes, pale face, black cloake hooded, tall, built and extremely fit
Home Planet: Ryloth, situated on the outer rim Starting Planet: on a hyperspace route, near the Bespin Relations: his family died when he was young, and has no intrest in knowing why..he has no reason for this hars behaviour, he just doesnt care whether or not he stumbels across the truth, otherwise he will never know Character History he was born the on planet of Ryloth, he was taken from his home from a dark jedi and taken to the world of korriban to be trained in the ways of the force, not knowing what would lay before him, he went willingly leaving his family behind, after he left his family were murdered, but by the time when the news came across him, he was filled with so much rage and too twisted within the dark side to even give it a second thought
Alignment: neutral, he has no view on the galaxy and how it is treated or who takes control over it Occupation Dark jedi Skills: Force sensitive
Weapons: One Single-bladed red lightsaber, and a blaster Ship the destroyer...its a X-wing also Personal Belongings: a ring, incrested is a blood red jewel, he does not know why he has this, and suspects that it is actually blood inside it, black with a silver lining. he was told that sometime in the future it may become a key to finding a great source of power, but perhaps he will never find it, he does not know
Roleplay Sample the firdt post i made before i did this app, will be what ill be rping like, if you dont like it, ill just edit this post and try to make out another one
there it is.....hopefully you like it enough the accept the app
Unfortunately for you, I'm the one that looked at this first. it's bad. Period. "Darth deceit"?? ummm are you SERIOUS? "a ring that may have blood in it and may be the secret to great power but he'll never know"? Please tell me that you REALLY didn't write that. You claim he is nuetral and has no view of the galaxy and yet he's a dark jedi... hmmm NO.
Here's another little hint. If your character history doesn't have a period in it, then it's a BAD history. It either means you have way too many run on sentences and punctuation issues, or the character history is way to short. In your case it's both.
And as for your roleplay sample please provide one on your next draft as the people editing it are not going to go hunting for your posts. (I'm praying that the next application is better than this one)
Do it again but do it better~~~~Krome_devil
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 11:36 am
Gaia Name:Lord Palpatine Character Name biggrin arth Belial real name Ulicx Targon Gender: Male Age:25 Race biggrin evaronian Character Description: stands about 5'7" has hairless red-tinted skin, sharp incisors, a pair of horns growing from forehead, and wears the typical robes of a sith. Home Planet biggrin evaron, located in the Expansion Region Starting Planet: Korriban Relations: none that he knows of Character History:as a boy trained at the Jedi academy but found there teachings to be slow, weak and boring. he believe's in the survival of the fittest ideology, and is thus disgusted by any form of weakness. feels the weak should be crushed and cast into the wind. Alignment: dark side Occupation:Sith Skills:Force sensitive Weapons:A single lightsaber with a red beam. Ship: Punishing one, a Sith Infiltrator (like Mauls ship) Personal Belongings: Sith robes, lightsaber, his ship Roleplay Sample: Darth Belial sat in his chambers meditating when his comm station signaled he had a call waiting to come through, he walked over to the console and pushed the blinking button "what is it?" "excuse me sir but lord Vortex left a message for you shall I play it sir?" "yes go ahead" "I am on my way my apprentice I want you to save the holocrons until I get their then we will look at them together" end of message "private I want you to prepare the troops for Lord Vortex arrival and get General Terak on the line I wish to speak with him" "y-yes sir right away sir" "yes my lord how may I be of assistance?" "come to my chambers immediatly I have urgent news to discuss with you" "yes my lord I'm on my way now" Belial strolled back to his view of the outer courtyard "bah what does my master take me for a fool, I know he has no intention of sharing the forbidden techniques with in these holocrons"he thought to himself while looking at the holocrons in his hand "and I'd be an even bigger fool for sharing them with him. No that is something I'm afraid I can't do" General Terak entered the room "you wanted to see me my lord?" "yes General it appears that Lord Vortex is on his way here now as we speak" "L-Lord Vortex is come here?" "yes General and from the sound of it he is most displeased, he feels I have betrayed him and so he has come to deal with the matters personally" "but my lord have you betrayed him?" "I suppose in a way I have, but it was never him I gave my allegiance to it was the dark side of the force and its teachings that I'm loyal to. And it's to that end I have not betrayed I have done what any true Sith would have done but my master fails to see this I believe and so I'm afraid I can no longer follow him, that is why I'm asking you to prepare my shuttle for an emergency take off." "Your running my lord?" it was upon these words that Belial turned and faced Terak and proceeded to force choke him "how dare you suggest such a thing General,I never run from anyone or anything!!" he released his grip on Terak, who fell to his hands and knees coughing and gasping for air while holding his throat "I-I'm s-sorry my lord *cough* but then what is the shuttle for? *cough*" "fool the shuttle is incase things don't go as planned, it's just a safety precaution" "I see my lord will that be all?" "no gather the best adept's and have them also prepare to depart but only after Lord Vortex has entered my chambers he'll get suspicious if there not with the other troops when he arrives, and tell young Luryk to report to me that is all" "yes my lord" Terak bowed and left "yes soon my master will be here I can feel it and when he arrives I shall be waiting"Belial thought to himself while waiting for Luryk to arrive. A few minutes pass and Luryk a young Sanyassan Sith adept enters the room "ah good you have arrived please come closer" he appraoched Belial and kneeled before him, "I have been watching you lately and you show much promise....there is hatred in you and rage aswell....and strength.. yes much strength". "Soon my master will be here and I will have to confront him,which is why I asked you here I shall be taking on an apprentice of my own...do you accept my offer? I can teach you things....make you stronger, untill one day you will succeed me and take on an apprentice of your own for that is the way of the Sith, that is the way of life the strong rule the weak...so what say you?" "yes my lord I accept your offer to teach me" "then rise my apprentice and I shall call you Darth Maleficus, go now my young apprentice and wait with the other troops when Lord Vortex arrives then proceed to my shuttle" "yes my master" as Belials newly christened apprentice left the room he returned to his meditation for soon his master would be here and he had to use all his power to mask his devious intentions ~~~
*hides this from Kromy* Well, your Rp Sample need more 'Period'. Yea. And more paragraphing to make it simpler to read. And yes... The God-damn capital letter.Quote: Darth Belial sat in his chambers meditating when his comm station signaled he had a call waiting to come through, he walked over to the console and pushed the blinking button "what is it?" "excuse me sir but lord Vortex left a message for you shall I play it sir?" "yes go ahead" "I am on my way my apprentice I want you to save the holocrons until I get their then we will look at them together" end of message "private I want you to prepare the troops for Lord Vortex arrival and get General Terak on the line I wish to speak with him" "y-yes sir right away sir" "yes my lord how may I be of assistance?" " According to the lack of 'period', this is how long your first sentence is. And the next word after the question mark is a word start with un-capitalise letter: come. I am sure you one to change that. And try to paragraph it whenever a new guy is talking. We don't want everything jumbled up do we?
Also, perhaps your history can be a bit longer and more derailled. And make sure not to use force powers before you trained here! Just some minor things, besides this it looks good -J@
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