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 Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:20 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:33 pm
xd Its all good, Seaphron.
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 8:39 pm
Chapter 16 Added
@FMB - Fire Emblem
@Betman - Good
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:03 pm
FRICKIN' AWESOME! Words cannot describe how ultimately cool I think this latest addition was to the story. Unmarked liquor, an Echo of thought, mourning for those passed from us, and the inclusion of a good friend to all mrgreen You sir, are a genius
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:18 pm
I agree with Allwing on all o' that. Unmarked liquor is VERY for the win.
CHAPTER 17 NEXT, BABY. cool
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:22 pm
Betman I agree with Allwing on all o' that. Unmarked liquor is VERY for the win.
CHAPTER 17 NEXT, BABY. cool Not saying anything about the liquor that's NOT from Jamaica
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:26 pm
Maul wouldn't know. He's never been there. =O
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:28 pm
Betman Maul wouldn't know. He's never been there. =O Or have I? *suspence*
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:31 pm
Oh god. If you haven't, you'd be a poser!
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:43 pm
Betman Oh god. If you haven't, you'd be a poser! *Thunder and Lightning* *woman faints*
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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 10:12 pm
That was pretty damn good Seaphron, I really like the way your story flows out, it makes the reading more enjoyable and keeps you wanting more, guess I'll start reading faithfully now, before I only read every so often.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:41 am
@Allwing - Glad that you enjoyed it!
@Betman - Thank you. If I am not mistaken I might be able to get chapter 17 online tommorow but i am not 100% positive about that.
@Maul -So what did you think?
@Zen - Yeah I have a new reader! Upload chapter 4 dammit!
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 5:18 am
this is good writing Seaphron if you and FS wrote a novel with illustrations you could rule the world!
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 12:14 pm
Thanks Sauvie! Just curious how far have you read?
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 12:22 pm
Good chapter. I liked it.
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