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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 3:23 pm
This is only my second time at doing rp here, but I'll try. My name is Serena Kinomoto:
Serena silently smiled as she walked up to the academy that she had been in for so many years. "My time to graduate", she thought,"I really hope I do". She had worked on her techniques the day before and was prepared; yet, she was still nervous about whether or not she would graduate. A whirlwind of thoughts swirled in her mind. "What if I don't pass?" "What if I don't get my techniques right?". She assured herself that she would pass, took a deep breath, and shyly walked through the doors of the academy.
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 4:06 pm
OOC: I haven't put up my profile yet, but I wanted to make sure I've at least cleared this before I go and post my profile in Lightning Country(If I get accepted, that is.) ~IC~ Jakaka sighed wearily as he walked of his home, tilting his head from side to side, which caused a slight 'pop-pop' to be heard with each crank. The brunette glanced upward at the sky, a slightly bored expression on his face. 'Why am I being through the test on such a nice day? I could easily be relaxing here at home...' The blue eyed boy took in a deep breath as he tilted his head downward again, letting it out in a sigh as he began walking. 'And, of all things, just so that I can even goto the academy! I sometimes wonder if becoming a shinobi is worth it.' Jakaka thought this quietly as he walked, nodding respectfully at each of the people he passed. Stepping around the corner, his boredom from before slowly drained from his face as he saw the academy. 'Okay, maybe it is worth it.' Frozen in place for a few seconds, his lightly colored blue eyes just stayed locked onto the academy. This triggered a couple of people near him to let out a chuckle, making it obvious that they had seen similar things happen to other people. The laughter seemed to make Jakaka snap out of his trance, due to the fact that he tossed a glare over at the pair before stuffing his hands back into his pockets. Deciding to show off a bit, he darted forward, closing the rest of the distance between himself and the academy in relatively little time at all. Darting up the steps, Jakaka came to a halt, though, right in front of the door that led to the training rooms inside. Resting his hand on the door handle, he bit his lower lip a little bit, his eyes staring down at the door handle within his grasp. 'If I don't pass, I'll be a laughing stock. If I pass, I'll go on to do great things. Well, now or never.' Allowing a slight smirk to creep onto his face, Jakaka opened up the door and stepped inside, letting it fall closed behind him. OOC: Hmm...I think this is actually pretty good. Up to the judges, though.
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 1:09 pm
jkowl This is only my second time at doing rp here, but I'll try. My name is Serena Kinomoto: Serena silently smiled as she walked up to the academy that she had been in for so many years. "My time to graduate", she thought,"I really hope I do". She had worked on her techniques the day before and was prepared; yet, she was still nervous about whether or not she would graduate. A whirlwind of thoughts swirled in her mind. "What if I don't pass?" "What if I don't get my techniques right?". She assured herself that she would pass, took a deep breath, and shyly walked through the doors of the academy. Pass. ^^
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 1:11 pm
The Darkness Makuta OOC: I haven't put up my profile yet, but I wanted to make sure I've at least cleared this before I go and post my profile in Lightning Country(If I get accepted, that is.) ~IC~ Jakaka sighed wearily as he walked of his home, tilting his head from side to side, which caused a slight 'pop-pop' to be heard with each crank. The brunette glanced upward at the sky, a slightly bored expression on his face. 'Why am I being through the test on such a nice day? I could easily be relaxing here at home...' The blue eyed boy took in a deep breath as he tilted his head downward again, letting it out in a sigh as he began walking. 'And, of all things, just so that I can even goto the academy! I sometimes wonder if becoming a shinobi is worth it.' Jakaka thought this quietly as he walked, nodding respectfully at each of the people he passed. Stepping around the corner, his boredom from before slowly drained from his face as he saw the academy. 'Okay, maybe it is worth it.' Frozen in place for a few seconds, his lightly colored blue eyes just stayed locked onto the academy. This triggered a couple of people near him to let out a chuckle, making it obvious that they had seen similar things happen to other people. The laughter seemed to make Jakaka snap out of his trance, due to the fact that he tossed a glare over at the pair before stuffing his hands back into his pockets. Deciding to show off a bit, he darted forward, closing the rest of the distance between himself and the academy in relatively little time at all. Darting up the steps, Jakaka came to a halt, though, right in front of the door that led to the training rooms inside. Resting his hand on the door handle, he bit his lower lip a little bit, his eyes staring down at the door handle within his grasp. 'If I don't pass, I'll be a laughing stock. If I pass, I'll go on to do great things. Well, now or never.' Allowing a slight smirk to creep onto his face, Jakaka opened up the door and stepped inside, letting it fall closed behind him. OOC: Hmm...I think this is actually pretty good. Up to the judges, though. A complete profile isn't necessary to pass the RP Academy. We're happy to help, though. This is most definitely a PASS. *sigh* So good to see that we're attracting more and more completely literate people. heart
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 3:33 pm
(i have had a lot of practice from previous guilds such as avatar and other roleplays i play ozia in avatar,hes hard to play because we dont know much about him)
okay,here is the characteristics:brenzella or brenza[brenza prefered]town: Sunagakure/desert AGE:14
RP:brenza had just gone out to eat ramen,when she noticed something familiar.she saw something she hadnt seen scince she was 4.she couldnt make out exactly what it was but she knew it meant trouble or danger.she got up to examine it closer.when she got to what it was she noticed what it was.she picked it up and exained it better,it was the same thing that killed her parents.she didnt realy care about her parents anyway because they were evil."oh no.this cant be good i have to go get someone."she said.she ran down a long narrow path to the closest help she could get.
she was actually like her parents[very dark]although she is very sassy.
someone came running tward her.
"what?!?!" come we need you "aargh fine!well at least there will be some death or blood." in her head she was looking forward to fighting.she loved to fight. she was quite strong and intellegent.
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 9:21 am
sakura1290 (i have had a lot of practice from previous guilds such as avatar and other roleplays i play ozia in avatar,hes hard to play because we dont know much about him) okay,here is the characteristics:brenzella or brenza[brenza prefered]town: Sunagakure/desert AGE:14 RP:brenza had just gone out to eat ramen,when she noticed something familiar.she saw something she hadnt seen scince she was 4.she couldnt make out exactly what it was but she knew it meant trouble or danger.she got up to examine it closer.when she got to what it was she noticed what it was.she picked it up and exained it better,it was the same thing that killed her parents.she didnt realy care about her parents anyway because they were evil."oh no.this cant be good i have to go get someone."she said.she ran down a long narrow path to the closest help she could get. she was actually like her parents[very dark]although she is very sassy. someone came running tward her. "what?!?!" come we need you "aargh fine!well at least there will be some death or blood." in her head she was looking forward to fighting.she loved to fight. she was quite strong and intellegent. Ok. The actual rping isn't bad. ^^ Capitalization is extremely important. Please try to work on that. Otherwise, you're good to go. Pass.
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 5:37 pm
shizuka_kage sakura1290 (i have had a lot of practice from previous guilds such as avatar and other roleplays i play ozia in avatar,hes hard to play because we dont know much about him) okay,here is the characteristics:brenzella or brenza[brenza prefered]town: Sunagakure/desert AGE:14 RP:brenza had just gone out to eat ramen,when she noticed something familiar.she saw something she hadnt seen scince she was 4.she couldnt make out exactly what it was but she knew it meant trouble or danger.she got up to examine it closer.when she got to what it was she noticed what it was.she picked it up and exained it better,it was the same thing that killed her parents.she didnt realy care about her parents anyway because they were evil."oh no.this cant be good i have to go get someone."she said.she ran down a long narrow path to the closest help she could get. she was actually like her parents[very dark]although she is very sassy. someone came running tward her. "what?!?!" come we need you "aargh fine!well at least there will be some death or blood." in her head she was looking forward to fighting.she loved to fight. she was quite strong and intellegent. Ok. The actual rping isn't bad. ^^ Capitalization is extremely important. Please try to work on that. Otherwise, you're good to go. Pass. thanies to you!!!
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Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 1:26 am
I have no character yet. Sorry.
"Thank you Ni-san", Nicole said loud enough for her brother to hear. She was thanking him for the dinner they had together. She only saw her brother once a month ever sence he got his new job as an ANBU. He had shown her his mask once but told her not to tell anyone about his job just incase. 'They might come to hunt you down or Mom and Dad and I don't want that to happen', he had said with a smile. She slid open the door and walked out out of the house grinning.
She had to get home before sunset or she would be grounded. She didn't like to be grounded at all. 'It's so boring', she had always thought of it. She looked at her feet. The sidewalk was made of cement and just as hard. She wore no shoes because she had never liked them. She looked up and around at her suroundings. On her right was a small meadow filled with bright green grass while on her left there was a small town of farmers and traders. Where her brother lived there were no Shinobi around but somehow he recieved information just the same. The sun cast long shadows on things such as wagons and nearby trees. It made the clouds look as if their outlines were orangeish(Sp.?)-pink.
I guess I'll be late, she thought picking up her walking pace a bit, unless... She began to run; her feet thudded softly on the sidewalk at each step. She was quite fast for a Child but only because of practice. I run!, she finished her thought. She grinned while running; ocasionaly dodging people, objects and animals, which only made it funner for Nicole. After a long while but just before the sun set, she got home in time to go to bed after a quick shower.
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Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 2:10 pm
That's a very good roleplay sample.
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Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 7:30 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 8:46 pm
So we only have to post one acceptable RP example, and we can skip the Academy Student phase entirely?
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 1:36 am
Daved Lodfa So we only have to post one acceptable RP example, and we can skip the Academy Student phase entirely? Nope, that means you're a good enough roleplayer and are ready to join a village... nothing else. This does not make you advance to Genin nor the like, it just helps you improve your RP'ing skills.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 10:10 am
hiro_naka91 Daved Lodfa So we only have to post one acceptable RP example, and we can skip the Academy Student phase entirely? Nope, that means you're a good enough roleplayer and are ready to join a village... nothing else. This does not make you advance to Genin nor the like, it just helps you improve your RP'ing skills.Gotcha. Thanks for that.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 7:24 pm
Ok my Character is Fujita Junpei from Otogakure.
Rp Junpei was ready, this was his day, he was going to start his way on becoming a ninja. He stood at his door thinking about how exciting his new life was going to be and how much fun he was going to have training. His mom saw him standing there and she said goodbye and Junpei left hurrying. He didn't want to be late on his first day on ninja training.
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 8:57 am
My character's name will be named Sora (Still thinking of last name). Here is an RP sample:
Sora sat in the middle of a clearing in a forest, panting hard. He had just finished training his taijutsu. He got up slowly, still breathing heavy. As an academy student, he rarely sees action and trains after the academy class lets out. After Sora caught his breath, he dashed off to the market to buy himself some lunch ((I know It's not the most exciting sample, and I would make it longer if I had time, but I hope it gets the job done.))
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