After talking it out in crew, we've decided to deny this keystone ability. We do not want customs effectively mimicking things like sage mode or creating new bloodlines/doujutsu
NecroPlant
Your S+ technique cannot have the ability to blow up heads. If you want it to have an earth-shattering, neck breaking fissue, that's fine and all
Mattysandwich
As with Ku, this is effectively a pseudo-sage mode and it thus denied
HeadlessKoko
You're approved with the exception of max revive and six paths of souls. Max Revive allows for the exploitation of powerful techniques that have death of the rpc as a component of the jutsu and paths of souls literally gives RPCs the rinnegan.
EDIT: Please take out the following line to your second technique and it'll be approved.
"If the power of the technique is the same ranks as the chakra cost, then the size of the technique is one rank lower than the chakra cost. Additionally, either side of the scale may be decreased by one additional rank (up to two ranks) in order to increase the other side by half a rank (up to one rank). I.e., a 2 meter wide A-rank manipulation will have the chakra condensed to a point that it equals a standard S-rank attack or a 16 meter wide A-rank manipulation will only have the power of a C-rank attack."
VIII-IX-MCMXCI
I will continue to let Matty handle your customs, just quoting you to let you know you're not being overlooked
Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2018 3:18 pm
SB5K
After talking it out in crew, we've decided to deny this keystone ability. We do not want customs effectively mimicking things like sage mode or creating new bloodlines/doujutsu.
I take the point on not allowing a mimic of sage mode. My suggestion on that for customs that are similar in nature to sage mode is to give it similar challenges to learn or obtain the custom as it does for sage mode. We could also say that learning such a technique would forbid access to sage mode. To clarify, this tenseigan custom does not create a new bloodline or dojutsu at all. The tenseigan is really just a byakugan that gives a chakra mode canonically. The technique also does not grant new ocular abilities and is essentially just a transformation technique. Canonically speaking, the tenseigan does not have detailed ocular abilities like the mangekyo sharingan does for example. This is probably why it does not exist in the guild as an advanced version of the byakugan. Based upon these points, I respectfully request that the crew re-evaluates the denial of this keystone. Thank you for your time and consideration.
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Character: Sandayu Genburyuichirousuke
Technique Name: Omniscience [ -1 Custom Slot ] Rank: B Type: Bloodline | Spiritual Element: Rinnegan (Outer Path) Description: Sandayu can tap into the other senses of those he has either a visual link to through his Rinnegan or anyone/anything that has one of his black chakra receivers embedded in their body. He can also share his own senses with others or redirect sensory information between any viable targets if desired. This effect is automatically applied and the cost must be paid when the Outer Path is activated.
Technique Name: Predator's Fang | [ 4th Free Bloodline Custom ] Rank: S Type: Bloodline | Spiritual Element: Rinnegan (Preta Path) Description: The Rinnegan user channels the power of the Preta Path throughout their body, changing all of their Hard Physical Formless and other blocking/striking taijutsu techniques into Complex when interacting with other techniques for the duration of this technique: Complex taijutsu are treated as Spiritual when interacting with other techniques. Also, for the duration of this technique half of any cost paid to use Hard Physical formless or any blocking/striking taijutsu technique is absorbed on contact from an opponent or technique then given to the user of this technique; this proportionately weakens any affected technique on contact and reduces damage inflicted by any excess that isn't absorbed by the user. Lasts for 3 Posts.
Technique Name: Amenominakanushi (Heavenly Ancestral God of the Originating Heart of the Universe) | [ 5th Free Bloodline Technique ] Rank: S Type: Bloodline | Spiritual Element: Yin Release (Rinnesharingan) Description: The user applies their mastery over the principles of the Yin Release, near-simultaneously breaking down and restructuring materials in their vicinity into new physical forms to effectively recreate the environment around them. This effect originates from the user's location and spreads outwardly, changing the setting for twenty-five [25] feet per post, for up to 10 posts (ultimately limited to the size of the role play topic). New new environmental setting can be of anything the user may imagine (forest, desert, ocean, etc.), but without any obscure environmental effects (ie- decreased/increased gravity, etc.). Creations and objects made from other jutsu, materials being manipulated by anyone else's chakra, as well as people in the previous environment will not be effected by the changing process directly; for example: if a building had been created by a technique that building will remain as it was in the new environment and affected thereafter the setting's changes are in effect. These environmental changes are permanent unless altered again by this or another technique.
Technique Name: Ochagami no Tamashii [ Spirit of the Tea God ] | [-2 Slots] Rank: X Type: Bloodline (Yozen no Soutou) Element: Fuuinjutsu Description: The user performs hand seals and designates one of the tattoos they've made that is in the same thread as theirself. That tattoo physically manifests as the art separates from the medium it was bestowed upon. Regardless of its design, the tattoo is animated with clone-like awareness and function (1 activation in the first post, 2 for all following posts); its chakra/stamina reserves are divide between the amount of chakra paid to activate this technique. The animated tattoo can only use formless attacks logical to its physical design, but it is possible for them to launch projectile attacks by paying chakra from their reserves. Tattoos can maneuver on the ground and in the water or air according to the logical physical limits of their design. Any fuuinjutsu effect(s) that were applied to the animated tattoo remain viable for use even in this form. The cost paid for this technique also determines how large the tattoo can become when manifested. The living tattoo returns to the place it had been animated from after it is no longer in use unless it is destroyed or if its source has left the locale; if the source leaves the same topic then the tattoo automatically fades from existence. β’ That tattoo(s) and projectile attacks are counted as maruton regardless of what form they take and therefore have no elemental advantages or weaknesses. _β E: Smaller than humans _β D: Up to Human-sized _β C: Up to One-story building sized _β B: Up to Three-story building sized _β A: Up to Five-story building sized _β S: Up to Boss summon sized
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Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2018 2:09 pm
Character: Kasumi Iekami Technique Name: Flora Bane Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu Element: Earth Description: Kasumi is capable of recreating ingredients of natural, plant-based hazards that he has spent time studying through his mokuton creations. Takes one post to fully study a hazard, and can study +1 hazard at a time per post per body rank starting at one at D-rank.
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Character: Kasumi Iekami Technique Name: Urban Toxication Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Earth Description:While under the effects of any hazard the user has gained resistance to their senses are focused to prevent disorientation while facilitating composure and alertness. Cannot be afflicted by the side effects of other techniques lower than Kasumi's body rank while under the influence of a hazard (example- lightning jutsu weaker than his body rank will shock Kasumi but cannot stun/paralyze him if he's affected by a hazard). Temperature attacks do not apply to this immunity. Once activated, resistance gained lasts for six posts.
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Character: Kasumi Iekami Technique Name: Amber Sweat Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu (Augment) Element: Mokuton Description: With all mokuton creations, they overproduce and coat themselves in sap that makes them fire retardant towards Katon attacks one body ranks below Kasumiβs. If an opponent makes contact with the sap gets stuck to it for one post unless they can overpower it with a C-Rank or higher stamina.
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Character: Kasumi Iekami Technique Name: Senju Herbalist Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu (Augment) Element: Mokuton Description:Hazards created from ingredients grown with the "Moku Soujuu [ Wood Manipulation ]" technique are more potent; effects occur with one more dosage per rank applied with the aforementioned jutsu.
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Character: Kasumi Iekami Technique Name: Lively Garden Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu (Augment) Element: Mokuton Description:After performing the necessary hand seals, the user grants any one of their mokuton creations sentience. The affected creation can act and move about as though it is alive. Creations retain this trait only as long as they are rooted in fertile soil. Must pay the same cost for this jutsu as had been paid for the affected creation.
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Character: Kasumi Iekami Technique Name: Decay Regeneration Rank: Variable Type: Ninjutsu Element: Mokuton Description:Kasumi can transfer half the chakra in one mokuton creation to another to repair the second target of any suffered damage through connecting roots. Doesn't stop the effects of ongoing damage.
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2018 4:30 pm
Just bringing this to the forefront.
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Forget formless. i made them all genjutsu, deleted some techniques, and reworked these to have information that the other genjutsu have.
Character: Aya Shi Wu Technique Name:Survival Of The Fittest: Wash A Ninja Rank: C Type: Tactile Activated Genjutsu Element: S a k k a k u g a n Description: This technique also known as, "Mopping a ninja" or "Givin' It Up" or "Doggin' that B*tch Ninja" or "Drop A Ninja" is a genjutsu commonly used with the succession of "Caught The Ops Lack'N." Every attack that is successfully landed causes the user to perceive themselves receiving nerve damage; The nerves struck instantly cramp to replicate the pain of being struck by a devastating blow. The opponent's vision is distorted with tremor effects upon impact and a disorienting effect similar to nausea overcomes the victim. The victim will see half of the user vanish and the other half out of focus to make the user appear as a blot. The target remains impaired until this technique is Kai'd away or until four (4) posts have past. This technique's effect costs an upkeep of ten (10) units of Chakra beyond the four (4) posts. This technique can stay passive after the first strike if half it's cost is paid in addition.
Character: Aya Shi Wu Technique Name:Survival Of The Fittest: G@ng B&ngin' Rank: A Type: First part: Visually Activated | Second part: Tactile Activated Genjutsu Element: S a k k a k u g a n Description: The user creates an illusion that makes their features more attractive to the target. The target will feel a compulsion to approach the user. The user will make contact with a sensual touch ( HA!!! 4laugh ) that matches the frequency in the targets mind to awaken the body and make the target docile to the user... eekscream You dirty bird!!!!! It isn't like that at all!!!!!! crying W-w-we're a good Catholic Mine Craft server!!! talk2hand LMAO!!! twistedeek The target will gradually find themselves in an euphoric state most times, but can develop contentment physically, mentally, or emotionally in general. This technique even works for those with chronic/long term mental and emotional problems [ validation seekers/abuse victims/impaired genetics ]. This technique removes all bad terms that the user has with the target and allows the target to forgive them or show mercy. Once this technique is done, the target will be addicted to this stimulation. This technique lasts for Five (5) posts with an upkeep of Fifteen (15) units of chakra. This technique can be kai'd to remove the immediate auto-compulsion, but the target still can not harm the user under the same terms and will still face addiction.
Character: Aya Shi Wu Technique Name:Survival Of The Fittest: SquashNBeef Rank:Null Type: Chakra Activated Genjutsu Element: S a k k a k u g a n Description: The user usually precedes this technique by teasing with a starry-puppy-eyed demeanor after upsetting someone. This technique works by transferring the user's nerve responses to a harmful stimuli (opponent) that has attacked the user. This will cause the stimuli (opponent) to experience the damaging effects of the attack they landed for the duration of Five (5) posts. After the time limit is up, the user will immediately receive all the damage transferred to the stimuli, which will relieve the opponent of that pain. Damage accumulated during the time-span of this techniques Five (5) posts will not be effected by this technique. This technique can be kai'd, but often most people don't get time to do the math, since they are in danger.This technique only works if the target's body rank is equal or less to the rank of this technique. To upkeep this technique beyond the Five (5) posts will cost Twenty (20) units of chakra per post. However, if the target dies (is defeated) before this technique is broken, then none of the damage is returned to the user.
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2019 1:27 pm
Osaka Kaicho
Flora Bane: Awkward. So since Hazards are getting redone, I really don't want to approve or deny a custom which is based on them, and then possibly have to judge your custom again once we have a decision of it. So until then, please hold off.
Urban Toxification: Pending. I'll allow this technique so long as you specify that it only works the first two post of which you are affected by a hazard.
Amber Sweat: If it's a passive then it needs to be called a passive, not an augment. As an augment, it can only last for four post, and it can only apply to senju jutsu C-ranked and below.
Senju Herbalist: Pending. Make it an A-ranked passive where all hazards made cost +10 chakra on a scale based on the rank of the technique.
Lively Garden: Pending. What does this do? Do the trees swing around and attack? Do they exclusively sing show tunes? I could use more insight about why it's useful for these trees to become sentient.
Decay Regeneration: Denied. This guild kind of works on a collision based system, so I cannot envision too many times where one creation is injured and requires you to patch it up with another one. If you want this technique truly then you can have it. However, I am denying it as a favor to you since I doubt it would be relevant in the guild. If you argue it will have relevance, feel free to consider it approved.
Regalina Kaicho
Omniscience: Pending. Needs to be locked to the topic you're in with outer body.
Predator Fang: Denied as turning simple formless into complex are the exclusive class perks of double tai and double buki.
Heavenly Ascension: Denied as you would need the element releases of wood or ice to make ice or wood. I think this is doing too much even for rinnegan, as nothing within the rinnegan is capable of doing this.
Spirit Tea Tattoo God: Pending. I don't think you can put stamina into these tattoos, so specify please that the tattoos use chakra to perform simple techniques, but that they are still treated as simple attacks. Also specify please that they are destroyed by spiritual techniques of equal rank to the rank of the technique. I recognize that's kind of implied, but you know how it goes. Finally, please have a time limit on the length which the tattoos can last.
VIII-IX-MCMXCI
Survival Of The Fittest: Wash A Ninja: Okay.
Survival Of The Fittest: G@ng B&ngin: Denied. Please Read Gaia's TOS in regards to genjutsu of this kind. This is a good, catholic, Minecraft Server. Lmao for real though, pending. Make it exclusively A-ranked, and take out the part about that it last forever. Give it a duration and you can also take out the part about requiring the user to never strike the opponent, or else the technique will never work again.
Survival Of The Fittest: Keyboard Warrior: Denied. I don't think that this is a technique which should be in the guild. It doesn't seem to serve any purpose to be honest.
Survival Of The Fittest: SquashNBeef: Maybe I'm misreading this, but how is this different from your first custom? Please re-write this one to better help me understand what you are asking of this.
Technique Name: Omniscience [ -1 Custom Slot ] Rank: B Type: Bloodline | Spiritual Element: Rinnegan (Outer Path) Description: Sandayu can tap into the other senses of those he has either a visual link to through his Rinnegan or anyone/anything that has one of his black chakra receivers embedded in their body. He can also share his own senses with others or redirect sensory information between any viable targets if desired. The range of this effect is limited to the same topic Sandayu is in. This effect is automatically applied and the cost must be paid when the Outer Path is activated.
Technique Name: Predator's Fang | [ 4th Free Bloodline Custom ] Rank: S Type: Bloodline | Spiritual Element: Rinnegan (Preta Path) Description: The Rinnegan user channels the power of the Preta Path throughout their body. For the duration of this technique half of any cost paid to use Hard Physical formless or any blocking/striking taijutsu technique is absorbed on contact from an opponent or technique then given to the user of this technique; this proportionately weakens any affected technique on contact and reduces damage inflicted by any excess that isn't absorbed by the user. Lasts for 3 Posts.
Technique Name: Ochagami no Tamashii [ Spirit of the Tea God ] | [-2 Slots] Rank: X Type: Bloodline (Yozen no Soutou) Element: Fuuinjutsu Description: The user performs hand seals and designates one of the tattoos they've made that is in the same thread as their self. That tattoo physically manifests as the art separates from the medium it was bestowed upon. Regardless of its design, the tattoo is animated with clone-like awareness and function (1 activation in the first post, 2 for all following posts). The animated tattoo can only use formless attacks logical to its physical design, but it is possible for them to launch projectile attacks by paying chakra from their reserves. Tattoos can maneuver on the ground and in the water or air according to the logical physical limits of their design; they use the Special X-Ranked Dodge technique for defensive/evasive efforts, paid for from their chakra reserves. Any fuuinjutsu effect(s) that were applied to the animated tattoo remain viable for use even in this form. The cost paid for this technique also determines how large the tattoo can become when manifested. The living tattoo returns to the place it had been animated from after it is no longer in use unless it is destroyed or if its source has left the locale; if the source leaves the same topic then the tattoo automatically fades from existence. β’ That tattoo(s) and projectile attacks are counted as maruton regardless of what form they take and therefore have no elemental advantages or weaknesses. _β E: Smaller than humans | 3 Posts _β D: Up to Human-sized | 5 Posts _β C: Up to One-story building sized | 7 Posts _β B: Up to Three-story building sized | 8 Posts _β A: Up to Five-story building sized | 9 Posts _β S: Up to Boss summon sized | 10 Posts
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Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2019 4:48 am
Mattysandwich
VIII-IX-MCMXCI
Survival Of The Fittest: Wash A Ninja: Okay.
Survival Of The Fittest: G@ng B&ngin: Denied. Please Read Gaia's TOS in regards to genjutsu of this kind. This is a good, catholic, Minecraft Server. Lmao for real though, pending.
Got ya; Done
Make it exclusively A-ranked, and take out the part about that it last forever. Got ya; Done
Give it a duration and you can also take out the part about requiring the user to never strike the opponent, or else the technique will never work again. Got ya; Done
Survival Of The Fittest: Keyboard Warrior: Denied. I don't think that this is a technique which should be in the guild. It doesn't seem to serve any purpose to be honest.
Got ya; Deleted
Survival Of The Fittest: SquashNBeef: Maybe I'm misreading this, but how is this different from your first custom? Please re-write this one to better help me understand what you are asking of this.
The first tech is Coda Keystone custom from Bloodline class, both have been run past Brooy prior to posting via Discord.
Character: Coda Technique Name: Body Art: Blood Seal Rank: B Type: Bloodline Element: N/A Description:Inspired by the historical struggle of the Yozen no Soutou clan, Coda secretly developed a method by which to negate the precious bloodline abilities of shinobi in their entirety. After intense study and experimentation on her own Yoton techniques, she created a tattoo fuuin formation that negates bloodline abilities. The jutsu functions in one of two ways. The first is a general field extended around the user, encompassing everything within 50 feet of them. This affects any bloodline techniques and abilities that are not Yozen no Soutou, including any others that the user possesses and implants of them, of A rank or lower. The second, which requires genetic material from a specific person, locks down only that specific person's abilities, sparing the user and anyone else nearby the effects. These two effects share elements of the tattoo formation, and thus cannot be active at the same time or in multiple instances. Adding genetic material to the fuuin can be done instantaneously within a fight, for storage purposes, but a unique formula must be created for it out of combat - and subsequently tracked on the user's profile - for it to be used to seal a person's bloodline abilities. Only 3 sources of genetic material may be maintained at any one time, and the effects of this technique last for 4 posts before the cost must be repaid.
Character: Coda Technique Name: Body Modification: Assumption of Form Rank: X Type: Bloodline Element: N/A Description:Using a special set of tattoos, Coda stores advanced transformation jutsu. Unlike normal transformations, these forms are tangible changes to the user's body. Their size and efficacy vary by the rank the jutsu is applied at, but they may apply no more than one self-contained effect based on the nature of the transformation. For example, an E-rank transformation based on stone or earth might turn Coda's skin rocky, but otherwise leave her appearance unaltered, and resist an E-rank amount of physical force. Like her Yozen no Soutou jutsu, however, that specificity comes at a cost. A resistance to physical force would leave the form vulnerable to elemental and other forces, including physical ones of a higher rank. Similarly, while she could do something like change her skin into barbs that deal damage to people who hit her, she could not turn it into a surface that emits poison gas, as that is not local to her body. If she turned her skin into her Yoton jutsu, she could not project lava from herself, even though it could still burn. And so forth and so on.
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2019 5:55 pm
Character: Falsalazar Sanda Technique Name: Denial Rank: X Type: Bloodline Element: Outer Description: Once activated, this skill traps the entire (thread) that the user is currently in, asthetically causing hundreds of chains to appear at the border. As long as this skill persists, while within the border no ninja is able to use **any** ability that manipulates space are unable to be activated up to its rank and below. This means skills like Kamui, substitution, Yomotsu Hirasaka and even shunshin are prevented from activating, and will simply waste chakra when used. Lasts for 5 posts at base, with an extra post tacked on per rank applied.
Pending. This technique should either be S-ranked or S+ ranked, since similar techniques in the guild are of that rank. I'll allow you to double the time limit on it, however.
Pending. This technique should either be S-ranked or S+ ranked, since similar techniques in the guild are of that rank. I'll allow you to double the time limit on it, however.
Not all of them do though. Im not paying S ranked chakra to stop a C ranked bending of space lol.
Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2019 6:14 pm
Character: Selina Rosewater Technique Name: Floral Seal Rank: B-ranked Type: Passive Element: Description: While Selina is in a state of Sakidasu, Selina is able to turn her flower petals into seals. These seals have a range away from her body just as the petals of Sakidasu can reach. Automatically drains a B-ranked amount of chakra upon activating the form.
Character: Selina Rosewater Technique Name: Petal Detonation Rank: X-ranked Type: Sealing Element: Description: Selina is able to create a seal which appears in the form of the flower kanji six inches in length. Selina's chakra then causes the seal to explode into a fit of chakra. This is similar to the explosion created by an explosive tag. This seal can be made upon Selina's touch upon a surface, or through the floral seal technique.
Character: Selina Rosewater Technique Name: Thorns of Punishment Rank: B-ranked Type: Sealing - Bloodline Element: Description: Selina creates a seal in the the shape of the thorn kanji up to ten feet in length. The seal then glows with Selina's chakra as it summons thorny vines to grab someone. The thorny vines will bind them to the seal until they can break the seal itself. Breaking the vines results in more vines being made. This seal can be made upon Selina's touch upon a surface, or through the floral seal technique.
Approving myself and quoting two mods in case something is wrong.
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Fair enough. As long as you're not paying an E-ranked technique to block Kamui, you're approved. Just add that note.
Only took me forever, but here's Soujuu #2. Will having Soujuu overwhelmed by techniques of the same ranks be acceptable? Or does it have to be a whole one rank weaker?
Character: Kagerou Kiritani
Technique Name: Soujuu [ Manipulation ] Rank: X [up to S+ rank; learned as E] Type: Ninjutsu w/ Rinnegan Five Paths of Nature Requirement Element: n/a Description:Freeform manipulation of the five elements (or however many elements the user has access to).
Soujuu is a manipulation technique that sacrifices quantity and focus for versatility, building on empowering the basic tenets of ninjutsu to "create" elemental techniques on the fly. These ad lib techniques, however, can only be simple at best and are far from streamlined, losing out on quantity to retain power or vice versa. By using Soujuu, the shinobi can create any variety of forms for their ninjutsu on the fly, but they are slightly inferior techniques that lose out on the special aspects of many established ninjutsu such as the telltale elemental spewing of the dragon line of elemental techniques.
Soujuu techniques can take basic forms of any of the user's available elements, and the required chakra expenditure to use them depends on their size. Soujuu techniques. Soujuu techniques are overwhelmed by other ninutsu/spiritual techniques of the same rank. E - 1/2 meter diameter D - 1 meter diameter C - 2 meters diameter B - 4 meters diameter A - 8 meters diameter S - 16 meters diameter S+ - 32 meters diameter
