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 Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:52 pm
Ahh I had only kept it there because it seemed like an incentive for people to join the bloodline and didn't seem OP. Though based off of what I just read, you can take out the speed. And if you want to keep the chakra thing then make Raiton do two ranks more of damage and make them unable to learn Katon and scared of Fire. I think that should leave with no complaints yes? If you don't want to keep the chakra thing then those things don't apply.
Now for that other bloodline, how long can they use their super strength until they start damaging their muscles?
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:55 pm
Mistah BomChickaWahWah Ahh I had only kept it there because it seemed like an incentive for people to join the bloodline and didn't seem OP. Though based off of what I just read, you can take out the speed. And if you want to keep the chakra thing then make Raiton do two ranks more of damage and make them unable to learn Katon and scared of Fire. I think that should leave with no complaints yes? If you don't want to keep the chakra thing then those things don't apply. Now for that other bloodline, how long can they use their super strength until they start damaging their muscles? You can edit that in,I totally forgot all about that bloodline. yea there is a post limit to how long they can use there Lightning Armor at one time,if they go over they burn out. I am about to make a profile cna I say I have the clan?
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:12 pm
Hmm well on that piercing thing, I assume that it's main function is to turn anything to a weapon but based on what your description is, it make it seem like if it was used on a sword it could cut a custom sword in half like butter. I need you to edit the description of that jutsu so that I know the exact power behind it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:17 pm
Mistah BomChickaWahWah Hmm well on that piercing thing, I assume that it's main function is to turn anything to a weapon but based on what your description is, it make it seem like if it was used on a sword it could cut a custom sword in half like butter. I need you to edit the description of that jutsu so that I know the exact power behind it. Done!
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:25 pm
Alright I'm just going to need you to repost the final product. I know it sounds tedious but it's going to help me review what you're submitting and post it as an official bloodline.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:27 pm
Zues's Touch[ Raikou Clan] Description:Many eons ago the Gods walked the earth. There was one called Zues: Lord of the Sky and Master of Lightning. We ruled over the other god's with an iron fist,making sure his will was obeyed. All gods,including Zues,courted and eventually married mortal women. Zues raised his first children in peaceful times,letting them have a relevetly normal life with no knowledge there father was a god. It wasnt until the Children showed signs of Mastery of Lightning that Zues became worried. Henceforth he banned all of the gods from romantic ties to mortals and ascended into the heavens where he has stayed. Throughout the Centuries the Children of Zues have breed,and amazingly kept there powers. They call themselves the Raikou Clan. The Children are much like there father. They have short tempers and amazing abilities in the art of manipulating lightning. They also have an aura of leadership around them. They are naturally born to lead and people usually defer to them on choices. Most Raikages have been one of the Children. This is their story.Rules• The Original Children of Zues were half god half mortal. So many generations have passed since then that any traces of godliness other then the power grant have long since vanished
• While,yes, you are incredibly strong you are not Super Human. You have limits. The more the use your strength the more of a strain it puts on your body. The harder you push yourself the faster you tire.
• Fuuton Jutsu Goes up one rank when used against you
• Raiton Jutsu Goes down one rank when used against you
• Raiton Must be Your Main Element
• You CANNOT have Fuuton as a second element
• Due to the impulsiveness of these Shinobi they are soley focused on offence and offence only. The ability to learn genjutsu isnt beyond them as much as it is that they see it as beneath them. It is in the mentality that-'Why break their mind when I could break their bones?'
• Ther Impulse to lead other must be present in your RPC's Rp occasionally. Ex: When forming a team you always volunteer to be leader
• Can only be a Ninjutsu or Taijutsu user
• Follow the Burnout and Genjutsu RulesAbilities
• You Strength goes up by one rank,meaning that a normal genin can go toe to toe with a normal chuunin,same with speed.
• You Learn Raiton Jutsu Two Posts Quicker
• You Learn tTaijutsu One Post Quicker
• You Have Zues's Aura. It makes you a natural born leader and gives you the impulse to lead. Other around you will also trust you more
• Your Naturally Stronger then normal Shinobi of your rank even with no strength training
• The Burnout- By going over the post limit for the Lightning Armor you enter the Burnout Stage. This stage is one in which you return to your normal parameters but all attacks on you do twice the damage as your body is physicly exhausted. Your speed and strength drop as well as your muscles have tore to a great extent. I recomend you avoid at all costs
• Genjutsu Susceptibility- You are very weak against genjutsu. You do not understand,nor will you ever understand them. You cant even learn to Kai out of them until your a Jounin! My advice: Punch em out before they get in your head!JutsuName: Fuzen Raikou Houmen Yoroi [ Partial Lightning Release Armor ]
Rank: D
Description: This is the first step in mastering the Raikou Clan's Legendary Lightning Armor. In this Jutsu the User focus's concentrated Raiton Chakra into a limb on his body. The Limb Affected's attack prowess will be increased significantly after doing so. The one drawback of this is that the length of this technique is very short [1 Post]
Name: Kyousei Bushi No Jutsu [ Great Peircing Jutsu ]
Rank: D
Description: The user will grab just about anything with a point and will call upon thir lightning armor. They shroud the object in a casing of the armor so tightly packed that even a toothpick could penetrate a tree. However something of lesser mass can not do so much against somehting of greater mass. Example: A toothpick would not do as much against a boulder as a kunai would.
Note:No Auto Destroying others weapons,if contact is held with a object that this jutsu has ben used on then it will eventually break but not at once
Name: Raiton Tama no Jutsu [ Lightning Shot Jutsu ]
Rank: C
Description: The user will shroud his hand in the armor. He will raise his hand and bring his pointer finger to point at the targer. Then on will the lightning armor surrounding his hand will change shape into a bolt,and fire at the target the finger is pointing at.
Name: Baburu Kassha no Jutsu [ Bubble Sheild Jutsu ]
Rank: C
Description: The user will preform the handsigns and place his hands on the ground. A Shroud of armor will expand and form a bubble like sheild. The sheild is 3 meters high and 4 meters in diameter. The backside is that organic life forms can pass through wile clone,projectiles and jutsu of equal or lesser rank cannot. A jutsu of higher rank of a Fuuton jutsu of lower rank can break the sheild. Note that the users hands must remain touching the ground for the sheild to stay active
Name: Hangaku Raikou Houmen Yoroi [ Incomplete Lightning Release Armor ]
Rank: B
Description: This is the second step in mastering the Raikou Clan's Legendary Lightning Armor. In this Jutsu the User focus's concentrated Raiton Chakra into a two limbs on his body. The Limb Affected's attack prowess will be increased significantly after doing so. The one drawback of this is that the length of this technique is short [3 Posts]
Name: Tsuin Tiger no Jutsu [ Twin Tiger no Jutsu ]
Rank: B
Description: After preforming the handsigns the user will coat his arms in the lightning armor. Soon afterwords it will peel off and form twin tigers composed entirly of the armor. These tigers can attack but will be destroyed after 3 hits or a C Rank Fuuton Jutsu
Name: Kusari Raikou - Chain Lightning
Rank: B
Description: This technique is only effective with the use of "Kaze Denri no Jutsu - Wind Ionization Techniuque" as it uses the ions that have now been made reactive to the users chakra signature to allow for electrical current to pass through the air but only the users Raiton Jutsu, this Jutsu basically sends forth mutiple bolts of lighting out of a body part, which is not important, the bolts then break up and can attack mutiple targets at once or even dodge around an oncoming jutsu and still attack the target.
Name: Kaze Denri no Jutsu - Wind Ionization Techniuque
Rank: B
Description: Basically all this jutsu does is Ionization particles in the air with the Users Chakra Signature acting as a medium, because of this any Raiton Jutsu the user performs speed will be increased greatly, as well as this because it all has the users chakra signature this jutsu acts as sensor of sorts, picking up any movement made by a large enough force, such as a person of oncoming jutsu, giving the User of this jutsu time to react, this jutsu lasts for 10 posts.
Name: Raikou Houmen Yoroi [ Lightning Release Armor ]
Rank: A
Description: This is the final step in the Lightning Release Armor's three forms. The user will be totally and completely encased in a feild of electricity. All there Raiton jutsu while in this form are one rank stronger as well as there strength and speed.~A Vanillabear Creation
[ I reserve the rights to edit this bloodline's jutsu's at will with proper approval from Guild Moderators ]
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:37 pm
Alright, you pass inspection, APPROVED!
Now I don't think you need to apply for this bloodline since you made it, so you should be able to just put it on your profile. Though, if I see you misusing this bloodline or God Modding, I will have to nerf it and make it so that you can't become clan head. Though I don't foresee that happening in anyway so things should be fine. Not sure if you're new to POTS or not but in any regard, thank you for choosing to RP with us. If you have any more questions then you can PM me or any of the other crew members as we will be happy to answer your questions. If you for some unexplictable reason can not contact one of us then feel free to utilize the Questions and Answers thread in our Main Forum.
Once again, thank you for RPing with us and it was a pleasure to work with you. ^_^
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:27 pm
Everyone has to approve for anything
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:52 pm
Lament_of_the_lonely Everyone has to approve for anything Even for a bloodline that he, himself just created? I was under the impression that bloodline requests were to show how knowledgable you are of a bloodline and that you can use it correctly. I just gave him the benefit of the doubt because I assumed that of all people, he would know both subject matters better than anyone else since it is his creation. Though if that's really the case then I guess you'll have to do it bro, no matter how tedious and unnecessary it seems. You can ask a VC or Lance if you really feel like you need to but otherwise I suppose you will have to fill out a request. If I could I would make it so that wasn't the case but if those really are the way things are then theres nothing I can really do about it. Sorry for any inconvience and confusion that I may have caused.
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:24 pm
Mistah BomChickaWahWah Lament_of_the_lonely Everyone has to approve for anything Even for a bloodline that he, himself just created? I was under the impression that bloodline requests were to show how knowledgable you are of a bloodline and that you can use it correctly. I just gave him the benefit of the doubt because I assumed that of all people, he would know both subject matters better than anyone else since it is his creation. Though if that's really the case then I guess you'll have to do it bro, no matter how tedious and unnecessary it seems. You can ask a VC or Lance if you really feel like you need to but otherwise I suppose you will have to fill out a request. If I could I would make it so that wasn't the case but if those really are the way things are then theres nothing I can really do about it. Sorry for any inconvience and confusion that I may have caused. I couldnt care less if I have to apply for it or not but if I get denied for it then I am taking this bloodline down as well
PM me when you post this and the Hoshigaki clan up and please place the clan head spot as RESERVED
~Thank You
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:31 am
(OOC: Well, I know it's probably OP, but.... Either way, might as well try, right sweatdrop ?) KukanVoid, Emptiness, Soul History
The clan, just like many others, learned of their kekkei genkai through chance and with no real way of being able to pinpoint the cause of it. It's been theorized that the Nai clan, which is the origin of the Kukan, managed to create a void in the soul of certain children because of their practice of extracting weapons, known as Keys, out of the soul. However, it is simply a theory and, to this day, it is unsure which members of the clan will end up with the kekkei genkai. It seems that purity of blood plays no part in who obtains the bloodline, resulting in just as many people from the obscure branches gaining the bloodline as those closer to the main branch. There have even been cases where families with no ties to the Nai clan other than some long-deceased deserter have managed to bring forth a child with the ability to use Kukan. However, the similarity between all Kukan-users is there surprisingly strong soul despite their frail bodies.
In recent years, the Nai clan has been massacred and even the most remote branches have been killed off. Now, the only possible survivors of the clan are those who somehow managed to survive the massacre or those whose families have no obvious ties with the Nai clan. As a result of the massacre, most of the records of the clan, including all of the ones that provided information on the techniques of the clan and bloodline have been destroyed.
Abilities
The Kukan kekkei genkai grants the user to control and sense void. Control-wise, void refers to the absence of everything, even space and time. Controlling void can often be explained as creating a rip in space-time, giving the user the ability to block anything and cut through anything. However, such abilities require the use of 100% void, a milestone that is near impossible to achieve. In terms of sensing void, the user can sense any sort of void, be it a place that is void of chakra or a place that is void of life. The possibilities are many. Through a process of elimination, this sensing ability can be used to gain more information on one's surroundings. Members of the Nai clan that are blessed, or more appropriately cursed, with the Kukan ability are found to be born with a void within their souls, a space devoid of anything. It is because of this void that many potential Kukan users die soon after birth, after their soul is forced to fend off the void on its own. Those that have survived, only have done so because their strong souls have managed to seal up the void, preventing it from engulfing the child entirely. In return, the void further strengthened the soul of the blood-line users, instilling in them a determination and endurance that is far greater than their peers. Because of the void within their soul, Kukan users have the ability to create and sense void. Their abnormality has also rubbed off on their physical appearances and traits, making them slightly scrawny (which often decreases their strength but increases their speed), and harder to notice (stealth). However, their strong souls often allow them to withstand more pain than normal ninjas with a similar body build can, putting them on equal footing as other ninjas when it comes to withstanding attacks.
Most Kukan users also have a Key, which is a weapon that is created from the user's soul. Certain techniques require a Key to use, so it is usually in the favor of the user to get one.
Rules For Kekkei Genkai/Clan :
-Void is counted as an element.
-Must not have any elements.
-Must have a legitimate reason for surviving the massacre.
-Must adhere to the weaknesses and strengths.
-Any additional jutsus/techniques must be applied for in the custom jutsus forum.
-Physical description must include, at the least, a slightly smaller than normal body size.
-Void cannot be broken unless attacked by a higher rank jutsu using pure energy. Jutsu using pure energy that is equal in rank to the void will simply nullify both jutsus and jutsu using pure energy of a lower rank will be broken by the void.
-Elemental chakra is weak to void and can only nullify it if it is a rank higher than the void. If the elemental chakra is two ranks above the void then it can break it. Elemental chakra that is lower or equal in rank to the void will simply be nullified. Elemental attacks work in a similar fashion. Attacks that are equal or lower in rank to the void being used will be completely nullified. Attacks that are one rank higher will have half of the leftover percentage pass through the void (ex: a C-rank fire jutsu against a D-rank 25% void will have 37.5% of the attack pass through). Elemental attacks that are at least two ranks higher than the void will pass completely through whatever percentage is left (ex: an A-rank fire jutsu against a C-rank 50% void will have 50% of the attack pass through).
-Only one Key is allowed per person. The Key must be applied for in the Custom Weapons thread. While its metaphysical origins allow for it to have powers with no logical explanation, there is a limit to what a Key can do as well as specific restrictions and weaknesses. The limits to what a Key can do will be determined by those approving Custom Weapons. As for restrictions, the Keys of all Kukan user's must, at the very least, be weak to pure energy and must weaken when the user's soul weakens (ex: doubt, hesitation). Furthermore, analysis techniques (ex: Yamanaka's mind-reading techniques) can be used on the Key as if the technique was being used on the Key's owner. Luckily, though, the Key has the same capacity to release a minuscule amount of chakra that makes sensing the Key as hard as sensing the owner. In other words, the Key is just as stealthy as the owner.
Weakness :
-Unable to use most elements. However, users can use the medical element, the sealing element, the sound element, and any elements that the user has managed to control in some roundabout fashion (ex: creating a custom weapon that somehow allows you to control an element in some way) if they fit the requirements for those elements.
- Techniques related to the kekkei genkai require more chakra than a normal jutsu.
-Depleting chakra completely will also result in an additional side-effect (ex: memory loss, temporary loss of emotion) because the soul has also been greatly eaten away at.
-User's are physically smaller than the average person and often look younger than their age.
-Void harms the user just as much as it harms the opponent, requiring focus when using the kekkei genkai to prevent it from touching the user's body.
-Requires 1.5 times more posts to learn jutsus related to Kukan because of the lack of any scrolls to teach it through.
-Void is weak to attacks of pure chakra.
Strengths :
-Ability to use a stealth that is equivalent to an assassin of the user's rank. For the same reason, the user emits little to no chakra, making it impossible for chakra sensors of the same rank to sense the Kukan practitioner unless he/she is using a jutsu or emitting chakra forcibly.
-Stage 2 raises the number of chakra points to 1.5 times the original (excluding bonuses). This chakra bonus can be stacked with other chakra bonuses.
-No hand signs, vocal orders, etc. required for jutsu related to Kukan.
-Since void is nothing, it is impossible to see void unless the user can sense/see chakra. In which case void can be spotted by the absence of chakra or of anything else.
-Jutsus related to Kukan can be learned without the aid of teachers or scrolls. The first jutsu can even be learned in the heat of battle if the user does not know that they have the technique.
-Void is strong against elemental attacks/chakra.
-Ability to control void through simply thinking about it (think Shukaku's sand) .
-Users naturally have the speed attribute.
-Able to master one extra weapon/taijutsu style as long as it is related to the Key.
Kukan Kekkei Genkai Jutsu
Jutsu Name: Void Release
Rank : -
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Nai clan members with the Kukan ability are able to cause their Key to dissolve completely into void, creating an offensive void that is in the shape of the Key. Depending on the level of void used, the chakra cost for Void Release changes. Void Release can only be held for as long as Aether can be used. The void formed from the Key does not damage the user in any way and will only damage what the wielder wishes for it to damage. Stage 2 of Kukan must be achieved before this technique can be used.
Jutsu Name: Void
Rank : D
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Surrounds the user and/or anything else he/she chooses with a coating of void. Very volatile and can cause extreme damage to whatever it is surrounding if it goes out of control. A high level of concentration is needed. The only thing that remains undamaged 100% of the time are Keys. At this level, it is impossible to use pure void but 1%-25% of void may be used, the rest is chakra. At stage 1, can only lasts two posts before it goes out of control, three posts maximum. At stage 2, can only last three posts before it goes out of control, three posts maximum. At stage 3, can last indefinitely.
Jutsu Name: Warp
Rank : D
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Using the connection between the user and his/her Key, the kekkei genkai allows the user to either teleport to the Key using void or teleport the Key to them using void. Start at 1m, then it is possible to work up to 500m maximum. Can only be used three times in a battle.
Jutsu Name: Isolate
Rank : D
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Isolate helps to prevent any signs of the user from escaping outside of the user's body. At D-rank, it prevents the user from being detected in any way save sight and sound. Even with sight, opponents with a doujutsu like the byakugan, will only be able to see the physical body of the user; they will be unable to locate or even see any chakra points. Isolate works only on others of the user's rank or lower. Isolate can block chakra, heat, smell, radiation, etc. from escaping the user's body. While using Isolate, the user may not use chakra in any way. Isolate can last for twice as long as the user's void.
Jutsu Name: Void
Rank : C
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : A more advanced form of the Aether learned at Genin. Can use 1%-50% void if at first stage. If at second stage, can use anywhere between 1% and 75% void. At stage 1, can only lasts three posts before it goes out of control, four posts maximum. At stage 2, can only last four posts before it goes out of control, five posts maximum. At stage 3, can last indefinitely.
Jutsu Name: Void Seal
Rank : C
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : A temporary seal that uses the same concept as aether but in a much more concentrated and stable form that requires much more energy. The longer it is used to seal something, the more the chakra and soul of the user deplete. Target and user have to remain still. User can only seal energies that are less that or equal to two ranks above his/her energy. Lasts only for as long as the user's Aether can last. When something is sealed within void, it becomes completely separate from the outside world, effectively blocking anything outside from seeing/sensing anything inside of the seal. However, those inside of the seal can see/sense what is outside of the seal.
Jutsu Name: Erase
Rank : C
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Erases from existence any object of the user's choice. Does not work with jutsu but does work with weapons and such that have not been tampered with by jutsu. Also does not work with custom weapons. Can only be used three times every battle or day. The jutsu gets rid of all weapons coming from one direction only each time it is used (user can use multiple Erase at one time to erase attacks coming from different directions). For example, one use of Erase can prevent fifty kunai coming in one direction from reaching the user, but it cannot prevent fifty kunai attacking from all around from reaching the user. Must be at second stage. Can only erase items that are less than 500m away from the user.
Jutsu Name: Hide
Rank : C
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : By enveloping the Key in void the wielder is able to keep it hidden and from being detected in any fashion. Hide can only last for a maximum of five posts.
Jutsu Name: Isolate
Rank : C
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Isolate helps to prevent any signs of the user from escaping outside of the user's body. At C-rank, it prevents the user from being detected in any way save sight and sound. However, it muffles the sound created by the user. If the user stays completely still, than only someone with the ears of an Inuzuka of the user's rank or higher will be able to hear any of the user's body functions. If the user moves, then only Inuzukas of the users rank or any shinobis higher than the user's rank will be able to hear him/her. Even with sight, opponents with a doujutsu like the byakugan, will only be able to see the physical body of the user; they will be unable to locate or even see any chakra points. Isolate can block chakra, heat, smell, radiation, etc. from escaping the user's body, hiding these traits from anyone of the user's rank or lower. While using Isolate, the user may not use chakra in any way. Isolate can last for twice as long as the user's void.
Jutsu Name: Void
Rank : B
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : A more advanced form of the Aether learned at Chuunin. Can use up to 75% void at first stage. At second stage, can use up to 99% void. At stage 1, can only lasts four posts before it goes out of control, six posts maximum. At stage 2, can only last six posts before it goes out of control, six posts maximum. At stage 3, can last indefinitely.
Jutsu Name: Void Seal
Rank : B
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : A more advanced stage of the Aether Seal learned as a Chuunin. Can be combined with other seals to strengthen those seals while maintaining their properties. Must be at second stage. Does not need to be maintained so only energy required for activation is used. User can only seal energies that are less that or equal to two ranks above his/her energy. Lasts only for as long as the user's Aether can last.
Jutsu Name: Erase
Rank : B
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : A more advanced version of the Chuunin's Erase. Can be used to erase jutsus as well as weapons. Can only be used three times every battle or day(weapon's erasing and jutsu erasing are same jutsu). Can only erase jutsus coming from one direction (user can use multiple Erase at one time to erase attacks coming from different directions). Must be at second stage. Can only erase jutsus that are less than 500m away from the user.
Jutsu Name: Isolate
Rank : B
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Isolate helps to prevent any signs of the user from escaping outside of the user's body. At B-rank, it prevents the user from being detected in any way save sight. Even with sight, opponents with a doujutsu like the byakugan, will only be able to see the physical body of the user; they will be unable to locate or even see any chakra points. A B-rank Isolate can block chakra, heat, smell, radiation, sound, etc. from escaping the user's body, hiding these traits from anyone of the user's rank or lower. While using Isolate, the user may not use chakra in any way. Isolate can last for twice as long as the user's void.
Jutsu Name: Akasha
Rank : A
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Creates a void in space that is filled with a music that can be heard by anyone with a conscious, even the deaf. Those who hear the music are unable to see, hear, feel, or sense in any other way. Can only be used on one target at a time and the user must be focused on that target (they can still move, though). If the user is forced to concentrate on something else, the jutsu is broken. Second stage is required. Target is protected by the user's highest level of void until the jutsu is lifted. Akasha can be partially broken out of in the same way that a genjutsu is broken out of. However, because not all of its effects are attributed to the music, fully breaking out of Akasha requires the target to destroy the void that is surrounding them. Akasha lasts for only three posts.
Jutsu Name: Nirvana
Rank : S
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Creates a void directly in the conscious of the target, placing the target in a state of oblivion. Can only be used on one target and requires complete concentration. The user can neither move nor sense with his/her body because he/she is forced to sense what the opponent is sensing (sight, hearing, touch, energy, etc.). However, the user cannot control the body of the opponent. Using what the target is sensing, the user can know when to dodge, but doing so will break the jutsu. The jutsu can also be broken after the target is attacked or if it used for longer than three posts. Can only be used once in a battle or day. Must have been at second stage for at least 2 months and know Akasha for at least one month. The jutsu, although it has effects like that of a genjutsu, is not a genjutsu in the way that it is used. As a result, it cannot be broken out of. The only way to break out of the jutsu is to either force the user out of the target's body or attack the target's body.
Jutsu Name: Kirin
Rank : S
Elemental Ethnicity : Void
Description : Key temporarily dissolves into pure soul and surrounds the user, granting him/her an ultimate offence and defense. Strength of jutsu depends on the strength of the soul (which can be affected by strong emotions). Is activated upon the initiation of Stage 3, so the stronger the soul is, the stronger the jutsu is. Requires Key. Does not need to be learned to use. Can be used by any rank. Chakra is not needed to activate Kirin, but chakra equivalent to one jutsu of the user's rank is required each post to maintain Kirin.
Levels of Kukan
Stage 1) The initial stage.
Requirements:
-Must have kekkei genkai and be aware of it.
Abilities:
-Can use all jutsus except for those restricted to higher levels. Jutsus use up chakra equivalent to 2 jutsus upon activation and chakra equivalent to 1 jutsu for each minute (aka: post) activated for prolonged jutsus (Aether, Aether Seal). However, for a jutsu that is at least a rank lower than the user, the chakra required for activation and each post it is activated for is reduced by half (ex: a Chuunin uses only 25% Aether, so they only need to use up one jutsu for activation and half a jutsu for each minute Aether is activated).
-Develop basic void-sensing abilities, but can only sense extremities (ex: being in a caged room and an open field only feels slightly different). At this stage, this ability often comes in the form of a very light instinct. The only thing that they can sense clearly is the pure void used by other Kukan users or present within the souls of other Kukan users. This allows the user to tell if there are others with the same bloodline as him/her.
-Can only use up to 25% void as a Genin, up to 50% void as a Chuunin, and up to 75% void as a Chuunin when using Aether or Aether Seal. The part of the technique that doesn't use void uses the user's own chakra, which uses the same amount of energy but cuts down the power of the jutsu.
-Void can only be formed and controlled when used around the body or Key (ex: cannot form void shields in mid-air; must form shield by surrounding arm or Key with void).
-Before using any jutsus related to the kekkei genkai before a battle, chakra equivalent to one jutsu of the user's rank is used up. The kekkei genkai only needs to be activated once every battle. This activation requirement is separate from the activation requirement for the separate techniques.
Stage 2) An advanced stage that is only reached after opening the "gate".
Requirements:
-Must have stage 1.
-Must be at least an experienced Chuunin (Jounin are more likely to reach stage 2).
-Must have completed one A-rank or S-rank mission.
-Must have depleted all chakra and at least half of soul and still survive. Mind and body can suffer damage. This requirement does not need to be met exactly when the gate is opened.
-Must have opened the "gate". (this isn't really something that needs to be completed beforehand, it's just something that the user must do when he/she is achieving stage 2). Gate can be opened either during a battle or through training after achieving all of the requirement. Open the gate during a battle is instantaneous Opening the gate during training requires 15 posts.
Abilities:
-As a Chunin, can use up to 75% void when using Aether or Aether Seal. As a Jounin or higher, can use up to 99% void.
-Does not need to use up chakra to keep void activated (Aether and Aether Seal no longer need to use up one jutsu for each post). Each jutsu still requires chakra equivalent to two jutsu to use. However, just as before, for a jutsu that is at least a rank lower than the user, the chakra required for activation is reduced by half (ex: a Jounin uses a Chuunin level Erase, so they only need to use up one jutsu for activation).
-User can use soul more efficiently and so can use more jutsus.
-Gain the ability to form void and control it away from the body and Key (ex: can form void shield in mid-air).
-Further develop the ability to sense void. Can sense voids of energy, space, sound, time, etc. extremely accurately and with pinpoint precision. As ability develops, more specific information can be retrieved. This ability can be used to detect the presence of other shinobi by sensing the lack of a void of chakra where there should normally be no chakra.
-Kekkei genkai does not need to be activated (chakra equivalent to one jutsu of the user's rank does not need to be used to start using jutsus related to kekkei genkai).
-Can combine void and use it to strengthen other jutsus (ex: combine rasengan with void to increase attack power). These hybrid jutsus are new jutsus and must be approved in the custom jutsu thread (does not include seals because there is a jutsu in the kekkei genkai that takes care of it).
Stage 3) A berserk stage that lasts only for a short time.
Requirements:
-Can be achieved at any stage, even when the user does not know that he/she has the kekkei genkai. They simply must have the kekkei genkai.
-Must be near death (so near that the only thing keeping the user alive is his/her will) and have depleted nearly all of both chakra and soul.
Abilities:
-Grants the user full control of void.
-Lasts for ten posts. Rank does not play any role in how long it lasts.
-Severely damages the user's body, mind, and soul after use. Chances of coming back unscathed are zero.
-User cannot kill the enemy or anyone else. The jutsu will end right before he/she will strike the killing blow whether or not it has reached it's limit.
-User loses all sense of himself/herself. Simply does the last action that he/she was thinking about. This places the user's allies in danger as well.
-No matter how much damage the technique does, user will not die from the wounds that the stage causes.
-Highly probability that the user will lose memories or even lose a sense of themselves (what will happen to the user will be determined by a one-day vote of the people in the battle and anyone else who would like to vote).
-Changes to appearance are very possible after and during this stage.
-No improved void-sensing abilities. While the user can sense void in this stage, their thought processes are reduced to an animalistic nature so the most that will be used with void-sensing is simple dodging and whatnot.
-Chakra, excluding bonuses from other kekkei genkais and whatnot but including bonuses from Kukan, is replenished by two-thirds for the duration of the stage. Chakra usage for each technique remains unchanged.
-No restriction apply to the user (ex: can use erase infinitely many times).
Stage 4) A mysterious stage that is rumored to exist but nothing is known about it. Perhaps the secret to controlling 100% void?
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:08 pm
@Kage
I like the concept, but I'm going to have to say DECLINED.
Anything that has to do with controlling the space-time continuum and creating voids should definitely not be used in a RP. Though just because it was declined doesn't mean you're not eligible for the contest 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:43 pm
Alrighty then and I completely understand 3nodding . Although, I might submit something with very similar effects but underneath a different concept (sealing instead of void). I don't know, depends on how much time I have sweatdrop .
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:57 pm
Sealing and Space-time falls under the same category. A Sealing caln will probably be denied for the same reasons.
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:15 am
Shoot, oh well then. If I think of something, I'll put it up. If not, then I won't put anything up.
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