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PostPosted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:12 pm


@Rikku: Ah, well thank you for clearing that up mrgreen

Much better, a very good rp sample showing a clear understanding of the bloodline, APPROVED!!!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:23 pm


Ok Gohan, just one real issue:

The sharingan can see chakra, but it can't really determine chakra levels, only the most basic fluctuations of chakra before an attack. So you wouldn't really be able to see if someone had less chakra in one arm. Also the last part about hitting the girl in chakra points, be extremely careful about that because that's an ability only the byakugan can give.

but just be careful about that and you are APPROVED!!!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:22 pm


Okay, I donated the gold to the guild.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 12:14 am


(i hope the rp sample is ok, lol im sure it is but hey.. im not good with the whole rp sample thing lol only cause i base my posts off of what other people do around me.)


Rpc Name: Shino Shinigato
Village:
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: 死の神の砂 ( Originaly unnamed but over time came to be known as Divine Dust Of Death )
What you know about the clan/bl: The user's red blood cells duplicate (which depends on the chakra level, higher level more duplication the cels can make) and leak out through the skin. Once out in the air the cells harden into what resembles dust
Rp Sample : Shino moved back and forth across her large room with her arms crossed thinking of what she should do. "Dammit...what to do?... Most of the Villages and still rebuilding parts of their villages.... what to do about the leaf village... it seems to remain the strongest after all of theses years..." She stopped and walked over to her bed sitting on it with her legs crossed. "I bet father wouldn't mind destroying a village or two....i should take over the sand village... it is my home..was my home..." She stood up and headed out of her room and stopped down the hall looking at Ryu's closed door and could hear his snoring. "..That boy need to learn to go to bed earlier..." She turned and headed farther down he hallway into the living room and turned to the right into the kitchen and grabbed a apple out of the fruit bowl. She threaten the rest of the members living there that if they didn't keep the place clean she'd kill them so she didn't have to worry about cleaning up after their messes. She took a small bite of her apple and headed out of the kitchen and headed through the living room and to two large doors. The one of the left was to out side and the one of the right was to the stairs that lead to the dungeon underneath the base. "... what to do?..." She took another bite of her apple and walked out of the base that was in the woods not far from the dessert that was close to the sand village. "...i dont need to wake father to take over the sand village... but it would be nice to speak with him....but not this early" She moved through the forest towards dessert taking a bite of her apple every few steps untill she got to the core. She threw away the core as she saw the end of the treeline. "well lets get this over with... after i take over the sand village we can come up with a plan to take over the others..." She quickened her pace and smiled as her foot hit the sand of the dessert, she continued her way accross the long dessert. Her father laid asleep 100 yards underneath the sand of the dessert and ussualy slept a week at a time.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:24 am


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@Rikku: Ah, well thank you for clearing that up mrgreen

Much better, a very good rp sample showing a clear understanding of the bloodline, APPROVED!!!

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:25 pm


@Orchid: so that's a bloodline we don't have, correct? you need to go to the customs sub-forum, the custom bloodline/clan topic and make the clan there

@Rikku: yes she did, I'm very happy with it mrgreen

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:47 pm


Ye it is, thanks didnt know about that.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 8:18 pm


Rpc Name:Joshua Uchiha
Village:Leaf
Rank:Joinin
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Uchiha
What you know about the clan/bl: Uchiha's have Sharingun Eyes or otherwise known as wheel eyes, the can see the future by using there sharingun and dodge most of the incoming attacks.
Rp Sample: Joshua decided to practice on dummies and improve his juistu so he went to the training ground and and said "Mongekyo Sharingun" and black flame burned up the poor dummy into bits of ash. it was no surprise that a assasin from the rain found him and wanted to fight an Uchiha to complete his bingo book. Joshua's head was 5trillion ryos and that meant really rich. but for a head that costs so much meant he was an s rank ninja and so he was no match for an uchiha and was beaten up harshly to his death with his new juistu radoi. black lightning blasted out of his palms as unholy chakra which even pierced through the the tree as if i there nothing there. as the Uchiha skillfully speeded toward the enemy he lashed out his last word for the assassin "Raaddddooorrrriiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!" and blasted him into thin air. he felt like a ''God'' once again.

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PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 2:19 pm


RPC Name: Mizax
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline/Clan: Sharingan
What you know about the clan/bl: Well... what is there not to know? It's one of the canon bloodlines, and therefore, quite well known. If you want me to run ya' through the basics just so that your clear that I know it all, then I shall.

First of all, the Sharingan grants the ability to track movements, and copy jutsu. However, that all depends on if the user can keep track of the target that their loathing sights have been set upon. The growing of the Sharingan starts with one tomoe, training themselves upon its use to gain the second, and third tomoes. At this point, the user can go no further unless they gut their best friend, after which the sharingan transforms into the amazing MANGEKYOU! But wait! There's more! Call now in the next five minutes and you could gain the ETERNAL mangekyou sharingan for FREE! All you have to do is gut another user of the mangekyou, and take their eyes! It's that simple!


RP Sample:

Mizax shuffled his way towards the corner of the large boulder he was pressed against, the cool, hard surface of it feeling refreshing against his wet skin. There were several beads of sweat flowing freely over his exposed skin, attributing to his harsh, uneven breathing. Mizax had been running for hours from one person, someone who seemed fanatically persistent in removing their target from existence. That would not be so, he thought to himself, his heterochromia eyes peering around the a sharp corner, seemingly carved into the boulder. There he was, the attacker, looking about eagerly, and appearing about as tired as Mizax himself was. Good, he thought again, maybe he won't have such a rough time.

A sharp cry shot forth from a bird approximately five feet to Mizax' left, darting out of the trees and into the mist layered sky, soon disappearing from view. Apparently, the startled bird had caught the Shinobi's attention, and he was now approaching Mizax' location, eager to end the mission he had been sent out on. As he reached the corner that Mizax was hidden behind, a light shuffle in the grass caught his attention before a foot swung in an axe motion directly for his chest. Being caught of guard, the blow hit home, and knocked the shinobi onto his back. He quickly recovered, and look at the boy who was now in view.

"Why are you after me?" Mizax shouted at the shinobi, his expression contorted with anger.

"It's just a simple mission, now be a good pup, and die." The shinobi disappeared from view and reappeared a second later to the side of Mizax, whipping out a kunai and thrusting it in the direction of his torso. It was Mizax' turn to be slow, and he hopped aside from pure habit just to have the tip of the kunai slice into the last rib. Blood began to leak from the wound, soaking the clothing that was nearby. He winced, and move a hand protectively to it, pressing the cloth against the open gash. Just then, one of his eyes changed color, the familiar sharingan appearing not in both eyes, but one. This caused the shinobi to smirk.

"So they sent me after a kid with an early transplant?" He chided, performing the same maneuver earlier. This time, with the three tomoe eye intact, Mizax easily tracked his movements and pivoted on his heels for 'perfect timing,' bring his foot in the air. Surprise and horror cascaded onto the Shinobi's face, mixed, as the heavy boot crashed into his skull, giving off a satisfying crunch. The body fell lifelessly to the ground, blood beginning to soak the area around the cranium.

"Birth defect, a*****e." Mizax replied, closing his eyes to allow the Sharingan to deactivate itself. "Oh and, thanks for the 'maneuver'." Using the same fancy footwork and swift agile movements the now dead shinobi had used, Mizax moved behind a tree and jabbed his fingers into the ground of a bird, killing it just from the force of the impact. Shrugging it off, he let the dead bird fall to the ground, turning towards the direction he came. Fatigue began to tear at him as the momentary adrenaline began to wear off. His eyelids were becoming heaving, and his movements sluggish. "I guess.... I should take a nap...." With that, he fell to the ground with a soft thud, allowing the damp grasp to hug him with its cold comfort.

(( Please tell me if you want me to mod this to include stuffs. ))
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 2:53 pm


I'm pretty biased against the sharingan (I don’t know why, I just hate it) So I’m not going to approve or deny either one, I'll let someone else do that. But I can say this:

Metaphorically: Yours looks good, and I bet if lance sees it it will be approved.

Zaft: I can say that you will be denied immediately. You spelled Mangekyou and Sharingan wrong, which tells me you do not have any knowledge of this bloodline. Second, you may NOT start as a jounin unless auto ranked. Finally, your RP sample is terrible, and not just the spelling mistakes. And you cannot have a custom jutsu unless we approve it, though yours just looks like an amaterasu version of chidori, which I personally would deny for being way too overpowerful.

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PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 2:57 pm


{Sharingan eyes can't see into the future, they merely perceive movements at a faster rate than others e.e}
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 9:40 pm


Metaphorically Insane
RPC Name: Mizax
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline/Clan: Sharingan
What you know about the clan/bl: Well... what is there not to know? It's one of the canon bloodlines, and therefore, quite well known. If you want me to run ya' through the basics just so that your clear that I know it all, then I shall.

First of all, the Sharingan grants the ability to track movements, and copy jutsu. However, that all depends on if the user can keep track of the target that their loathing sights have been set upon. The growing of the Sharingan starts with one tomoe, training themselves upon its use to gain the second, and third tomoes. At this point, the user can go no further unless they gut their best friend, after which the sharingan transforms into the amazing MANGEKYOU! But wait! There's more! Call now in the next five minutes and you could gain the ETERNAL mangekyou sharingan for FREE! All you have to do is gut another user of the mangekyou, and take their eyes! It's that simple!


RP Sample:

Mizax shuffled his way towards the corner of the large boulder he was pressed against, the cool, hard surface of it feeling refreshing against his wet skin. There were several beads of sweat flowing freely over his exposed skin, attributing to his harsh, uneven breathing. Mizax had been running for hours from one person, someone who seemed fanatically persistent in removing their target from existence. That would not be so, he thought to himself, his heterochromia eyes peering around the a sharp corner, seemingly carved into the boulder. There he was, the attacker, looking about eagerly, and appearing about as tired as Mizax himself was. Good, he thought again, maybe he won't have such a rough time.

A sharp cry shot forth from a bird approximately five feet to Mizax' left, darting out of the trees and into the mist layered sky, soon disappearing from view. Apparently, the startled bird had caught the Shinobi's attention, and he was now approaching Mizax' location, eager to end the mission he had been sent out on. As he reached the corner that Mizax was hidden behind, a light shuffle in the grass caught his attention before a foot swung in an axe motion directly for his chest. Being caught of guard, the blow hit home, and knocked the shinobi onto his back. He quickly recovered, and look at the boy who was now in view.

"Why are you after me?" Mizax shouted at the shinobi, his expression contorted with anger.

"It's just a simple mission, now be a good pup, and die." The shinobi disappeared from view and reappeared a second later to the side of Mizax, whipping out a kunai and thrusting it in the direction of his torso. It was Mizax' turn to be slow, and he hopped aside from pure habit just to have the tip of the kunai slice into the last rib. Blood began to leak from the wound, soaking the clothing that was nearby. He winced, and move a hand protectively to it, pressing the cloth against the open gash. Just then, one of his eyes changed color, the familiar sharingan appearing not in both eyes, but one. This caused the shinobi to smirk.

"So they sent me after a kid with an early transplant?" He chided, performing the same maneuver earlier. This time, with the three tomoe eye intact, Mizax easily tracked his movements and pivoted on his heels for 'perfect timing,' bring his foot in the air. Surprise and horror cascaded onto the Shinobi's face, mixed, as the heavy boot crashed into his skull, giving off a satisfying crunch. The body fell lifelessly to the ground, blood beginning to soak the area around the cranium.

"Birth defect, a*****e." Mizax replied, closing his eyes to allow the Sharingan to deactivate itself. "Oh and, thanks for the 'maneuver'." Using the same fancy footwork and swift agile movements the now dead shinobi had used, Mizax moved behind a tree and jabbed his fingers into the ground of a bird, killing it just from the force of the impact. Shrugging it off, he let the dead bird fall to the ground, turning towards the direction he came. Fatigue began to tear at him as the momentary adrenaline began to wear off. His eyelids were becoming heaving, and his movements sluggish. "I guess.... I should take a nap...." With that, he fell to the ground with a soft thud, allowing the damp grasp to hug him with its cold comfort.

(( Please tell me if you want me to mod this to include stuffs. ))


Very good, I'm glad to see that some people can write up a sharingan rp sample that's good enough to get approved on the first try (though there are a few that have done it before I suppose). Anyway, very nice, you are APPROVED!!! I just want you to take a look at the sharingan description in our bloodlines topic to see the game mechanics we have set up for it.

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PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 2:41 pm


Rpc Name: Fai
Village: cloud
Rank: student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Chiroku
What you know about the clan/bl: (If you put everything it will be denied on the spot) they have pretty yellow eyes and they can take on the abilities of animals to use, great for spies. but they take on all the strengths and weaknesses of the animal
Rp Sample:
Fai had decided to train today with her anigan. It'd been a while since she'd been out and in the forest. She pulled her long hair back into a ponytail to get it out of her face as she prepared to use her anigan. She listened intently to the sounds of the forest with her heightened sensory. She could hear the rustling of leaves, and she quickly looked to find it was just a deer munching on some leaves. After observing the deer for a while Fai turned her head away from it looking for signs of other wildlife. In the tree above here hissed a snake as it slowly slithered down the bark of the tree. A rabbit was burrowing its way underground. It had been a quiet day, but her senses were quite active and she could feel her chakra slowly drain as she listened to the nature around here. But she wanted to find more animals and she had to learn to save chakra when she used her animal-like abilities. Fai suddenly heard a sound as the rabbit left from digging its hole. And that's when she saw a new animal under her anigan. A lively red-tailed fox. It chased the rabbit all the way to its hole. It sniffed at the hole and followed the scent of the rabbit until after a long time of patience, the fox caught the rabbit as it left its hole.
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 4:53 pm


ok, so you didn't really use any of the abilities of the bloodline, which is kind of the point of the rp sample, so please try again and this time show that you know how to use the bloodline

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PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 6:34 pm


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ok, so you didn't really use any of the abilities of the bloodline, which is kind of the point of the rp sample, so please try again and this time show that you know how to use the bloodline

so what kind of animals other wise are around so i can get a better grasp on how to show that i know how to role play/ know about the bloodline/clan
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