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 Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 5:49 pm
`Trace disliker of the mary sue `Trace Personal alterations... ninja Quote: Name: Trace Aentre Age: 18 Blood Type: O- Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Mizumi Element: Water Bio: Originally, before he was a Sailor Scout, he was a boy in college doing normal things. Due to a random incident with a pendant given to him by a strange cloaked woman, he was transformed into a female. He was very surprised at this outcome. Later, he had met Sailor Gaia and decided to join her. There wasn't much that he could do, other than to fight evil. Since he was transformed, nobody knew who he was nor did they believe him. Weakness: Short attention span. Sometimes he will get distracted and forget what the current situation is. I no wanna be easily coaxed by villains... emo xd hm it technically your character and i was thinking from a realistic point that any boy would want to gain his manliness back at any cost. but your is much better then the one i made. Men who believe that their manliness makes them who they are seem somewhat chauvinistic to me... ninja True men (or maybe perverted men, which I am not) can handle being turned into a woman. 3nodding yeah i barely knew you so i had to make it's personalty from scratch
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 5:52 pm
disliker of the mary sue `Trace disliker of the mary sue `Trace Personal alterations... ninja Quote: Name: Trace Aentre Age: 18 Blood Type: O- Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Mizumi Element: Water Bio: Originally, before he was a Sailor Scout, he was a boy in college doing normal things. Due to a random incident with a pendant given to him by a strange cloaked woman, he was transformed into a female. He was very surprised at this outcome. Later, he had met Sailor Gaia and decided to join her. There wasn't much that he could do, other than to fight evil. Since he was transformed, nobody knew who he was nor did they believe him. Weakness: Short attention span. Sometimes he will get distracted and forget what the current situation is. I no wanna be easily coaxed by villains... emo xd hm it technically your character and i was thinking from a realistic point that any boy would want to gain his manliness back at any cost. but your is much better then the one i made. Men who believe that their manliness makes them who they are seem somewhat chauvinistic to me... ninja True men (or maybe perverted men, which I am not) can handle being turned into a woman. 3nodding yeah i barely knew you so i had to make it's personalty from scratch I had a feeling that was the case. xd
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 5:54 pm
`Trace disliker of the mary sue `Trace disliker of the mary sue `Trace Personal alterations... ninja Quote: Name: Trace Aentre Age: 18 Blood Type: O- Sailor Scout Name: Sailor Mizumi Element: Water Bio: Originally, before he was a Sailor Scout, he was a boy in college doing normal things. Due to a random incident with a pendant given to him by a strange cloaked woman, he was transformed into a female. He was very surprised at this outcome. Later, he had met Sailor Gaia and decided to join her. There wasn't much that he could do, other than to fight evil. Since he was transformed, nobody knew who he was nor did they believe him. Weakness: Short attention span. Sometimes he will get distracted and forget what the current situation is. I no wanna be easily coaxed by villains... emo xd hm it technically your character and i was thinking from a realistic point that any boy would want to gain his manliness back at any cost. but your is much better then the one i made. Men who believe that their manliness makes them who they are seem somewhat chauvinistic to me... ninja True men (or maybe perverted men, which I am not) can handle being turned into a woman. 3nodding yeah i barely knew you so i had to make it's personalty from scratch I had a feeling that was the case. xd yeah most of you guys are like those people you see all the time yet never really talk to.
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:23 pm
this forum just keep growing and growing! blaugh
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:24 pm
okay any other people who have their character in there that like to critique my work?
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:44 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:44 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:01 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:01 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:02 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:44 am
do we need more bios for other senshis or we have all senshis??
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:46 am
kittyshadow_rachel do we need more bios for other senshis or we have all senshis?? well we still need the boys but i rather not touch those with a 10 foot pole.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:47 am
disliker of the mary sue kittyshadow_rachel do we need more bios for other senshis or we have all senshis?? well we still need the boys but i rather not touch those with a 10 foot pole. of course.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 12:04 pm
is that all we have left?
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 12:05 pm
cherub_Shagami is that all we have left? pretty much unless you want to add more villains, allies or other important characters.
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