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 Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 5:18 pm
Kesui walks in. Kesui says" Sorry it took me so long, i had a seating challenge, so what do want to learn first?"
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 5:26 pm
well what did u learn first
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 5:29 pm
Kesui looks at him. " Will i had to do something first" Kesui answers. Kesui ran's up yori, and throws a punch in.
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 5:31 pm
yori was starteled when the punch came at him and was hit by it as well[after yori got up he asked what was that for]
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 7:30 pm
((For the love of Jesus! I think my eyes are gonna bleed. This is an official warning about one-liners and grammar. We don't ask much, just that you make it readable, and your posts, both of you, are indeciferable.))
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 11:58 pm
(( I have to say, that's putting it rather kindly Fefnir
For starters, your both one lining... NO!
Second, when RPing, your supposed to use grammar... you know, the stuff you learned in school? The stuff your teachers worked so hard to smash into your skull that your blatantly ignoring for no reason?
Third, your not even distinguishing quotes from action or even from OOC! *if you even have a clue what that is*
Finally, FOR THE LOVE OF THE HOLY HAND GRANADE, SPACE OUT YOUR WORDS FROM YOUR PUNCTUATION! *No,one,talks,like,this*
In response to your most likely reaction to this, yes, I am mean and a witch *spelled with a B* about RPing... Get over it. It will help you learn when I point out all your blatant errors for you.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 8:38 am
((. . .What DOES OCC mean?))
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 8:52 am
iOath ((. . .What DOES OCC mean?)) (( "Out Of Character" typo on my part... My bad :: fixed:: Thanks for pointing it out.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 3:50 pm
Benvolio walked into the area, wondering where Captain Fefnir was. He had heard much about the 9th Squad Captain. His monstrous arms laid in wait as he stood there, waiting impatiently. Benvolio was never much on patience, he just tolerated things. "Hmm... I wonder how strong he will be?"
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:01 pm
Unaharu came out to greet the young Shinigami. "Uh, hello...and who may you be?", she asked nervously at him in her Were form. She placed her hand on her two hilts casually, just in case this one was an feisty one like her previous students. But she showed no signs of being rude to him, just wanted to know his name and all.
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:15 pm
Fefnir quickly came up behind his daughter and put a hand on her shoulder. "He's one of Yuki's..." Fefnir said, smiling lightly at Unaharu, "I've got him for today!" His trainee for the day was... big. A large guy, seemingly german in heritage from his blond hair and blue eyes. He seemed extremely strong because of his bulging arms and legs, and he had an air of determination about him as well. "So... are you Benvolio?" Fefnir asked, looking up to his charge's face.
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:19 pm
Benvolio smiled and bowed at them "Yes, I am Benvolio of Squad 13. Thank you for taking time to train me Captain Fefnir. May I ask what we will start with." Turning to Unaharu, he bowed again and smiled "Good day Madam, I am sorry if I scared you, no need to be ready to strike. I am on the same team as you." Benvolio ran his fingers through his golden hair as he awaited an answer from either of the people he had spoken to.
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:30 pm
"Hmm..." Fefnir thought out loud, "You look like you have strength and endurance out the yin-yang... How's your movement speed? Are you quick?" As he said this, Fefnir slowly paced around Benvolio, a hand over his mouth as he thought, his hakama scuffing lightly on the ground.
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:36 pm
Benvolio sighed "I am decent with speed, but the problem is my zanpaktou. For some reason, this monster of a katana was born while I was creating it. It gets in the way when I try to move around." Benvolio began to look around "Do you think my shikai will be any bigger?! I have no problem with holding heavy things, but if it is bigger or heavier it will be even more of a problem." Thinking about all these problems that could be happening in the future, Benvolio began to panic on the inside. He want to achieve shikai really badly, but he was afraid of the outcome.
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:45 pm
Fefnir thought for a moment, then answered, "Chances are, you aren't familiar with the weapon, that's all. It only get's in the way because you haven't gotten used to it yet. Your shikai will most likely get smaller, or it may get larger. The key is what function it does, since all shikai have a function and a form to match. It also reflects yourself, your emotion, your motivations, and your knowledge. Therefore, you most likely will find that your shikai will handle better than that giant blade there, even if it gets bigger," Fefnir stopped for a moment and nodded, a look of knowing coming over his face as it always did when he was teaching. "At any rate, you and I will have a little combat training to do, and don't worry!" Fefnir smiled, "I'll go easy on you,"
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