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 Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 1:25 am
lol, i think we do. Why don't you PM me what you are thinking and we can go from there? In my head it is pretty general, though I keep thinking about switching the order of things around in my head. Then I realize I'm not doing my reading for class tomorrow and have to focus once more on First amendment rights in mass communication.
please kill me.....-collapses-
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:07 am
Ugh... VD, I think we have to wait for Ab.
Grargh... Munchies... I needs them!
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:12 am
Illiud Ugh... VD, I think we have to wait for Ab. Grargh... Munchies... I needs them! Ah, Absanthe wont be on till the morning. lol
and i feel ya. i'm eating cookies. XD
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:17 am
Curses of DOOM!!!! pbj, and a ham sammich. My munchies. oh yeah. Damnit I wanna effin RP!!!
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:17 am
Sorry guys, I have to get some sleep. Have 8 hours of class and 3 hours of work tomorrow...I prolly won't be on until the afternoon and after that not until really late in the evening.
Behave yourselves!
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:18 am
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:19 am
lol XD cookies for the win! Night Arylkia. And yes i want to RP tpp... :[
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:22 am
hey VD, wanna read my poetry? I wrote three poems last night that I'm effin proud of.
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:24 am
yeah bro. poetry is awesome lol
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:29 am
PM or here?
Edit: F it. I'mma post em here. I'll let everyone see my awesome poetry!!!
Weak Knees
When I look at her
My diaphragm tenses.
When I think of her
I use all my senses
To remember her skin,
Her voice:
My sin
Is not having the guts
To tell her how I feel.
Makes me feel like a puts
Like I missed my last meal,
And now I'm starving.
O, please,
My darling,
My heart beats faster
When we talk about anything.
Now I'm a stupid b*****d
For lacking courage in everything
Relating to
Telling you
You make my knees weak.
Mirror
Can I tell you something?
Okay, don't say anything,
I want to say this all at once.
You're amazing.
Simply astonishing.
You listen, you care, you smile and laugh.
I felt heaven when you held my hand.
It might be too soon for both of us,
But do either of us give a damn?
I don't.
I hope you don't.
People don't mean s**t.
So to hell with it.
Let me be the one
To make it all okay,
and I'll let you
Just take the pain away.
I want to kiss you
So bad I want to explode.
I want to hold you,
And dance in slow mo.
So?
... ********' mirror...
Untitled
I should be hurt.
This should be depression.
But it's not.
I should be torn,
Broken, destroyed, and shattered.
But I'm not.
I shouldn't feel happy.
Shouldn't have the butterflies.
But I do.
I shouldn't be smiling.
Shouldn't be having you on my mind.
But I do.
Society tells me I should pine.
I should be going through sorrow and grief.
Ya know ******** that.
I ******** like you, b***h!
So ******** them!
I want ******** Hell, kiss me!
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:40 am
I dig dude. I'm big into writing on g lyrics, and the first one actually sounds like good song lyrics. The other 2 are definitely good too. full of passion, i see. good qualities in a poet my friend.
So Good Work! lol :]
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:45 am
Thanks. I'm proud of them, cause I haven't had the inspiration to write in months. Now I have it, and I hope that inspiration... well, goes out with me. XP
And yeah, the first one I wrote intending on a nice beat rhythm. I've gotten a lot of compliments on the second one, but I like the third one the best, I think.
Edit: I'm going to go to bed, actually. I need to sleep through what could become a terrible nic fit. Being a jobless f*k, and not being able to get smokes really f*kin sucks!
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:54 am
Illiud Thanks. I'm proud of them, cause I haven't had the inspiration to write in months. Now I have it, and I hope that inspiration... well, goes out with me. XP And yeah, the first one I wrote intending on a nice beat rhythm. I've gotten a lot of compliments on the second one, but I like the third one the best, I think. Edit: I'm going to go to bed, actually. I need to sleep through what could become a terrible nic fit. Being a jobless f*k, and not being able to get smokes really f*kin sucks! well i hope it work out for you dude. Sounds like you really got a thing for this girl. and dude i feel ya. I'm a jobless fcuk(Spelled wrong on purpose XD) too. I'm still waiting to get a call from a hotel where i am hoping to work. Its the nicest hotel in Oklahoma. Celebrities and whatnot stay there. I barely manage to get cigarettes too... lol it sucks. haha But yeah bro, i'm gonna pass out too. i suppose we shall RP tomorrow? Night mate.
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 3:51 am
Gawddamnit. I need to learn how to not fall asleep. >.<
Sorry guys.
And beautiful poetry btw. I was thinking the same thing about the first song and just picturing the lyrics being sang. My favourite is the mirror one, too ... I just absolutely love the start and beginning, which both come off equally as powerful for me. ^^
Teh third one is also really good and takes a nicer perspective of things. I enjoy the reference to society's expectations of you. 3nodding
The poems I've read of yours are awesome sauce and I conclude that these ones are as well. Keep writing!
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:20 am
My favourite part about the last one is the last few lines. I'm fairly confidant that I could say those word verbatim to her face, and she'd smile, and not slap me. XP
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