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 Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:15 pm
Path of Heaven's Riches An ancient style of martial arts that Knox has trained under since he was young, always considered a runt by friends and family, mostly due to a lack of chakra. While he possesed little chakra he had excellent hand to hand combat skills making his weakness opponents who relied heavily on ninjutsu or genjutsu. To make up for that dearth of chakra he trained in the mostly defunct art of chakra filtration. The path of heaven's riches, has no formal form, attack set or secret arts, only a method of breathing that purifies and filters the chakra in a person's system. In this particular form, the less chakra the better, as it is not any easy thing to filter and refine pure chakra. Now it shows no outward signs of using this style, simply the calm breathing of Knox at all times. Using this form of purified chakra he can operate his unique ANBU armor that he developed to harness the unique properties of his chakra. With his purified chakra flowing through his mind he actually stands a chance of resisting genjutsus that would catch others with more unrefined chakra then him. ((Roll 5 sided dice, evens grant immunity odds weaken the effect. 3 grants full effects.)) 
I say make it a 5 sided dice, and have one of the odd numbers be a failure to stop genjutsu. Makes more sense, then letting you either completely resist, or suffer from them minorly. 3nodding Other then that, it looks fine~I chose 3 as your unlucky number. It was in the middle. xd Kinetic ArmorA unique set of armor developed between the mechanical prowess of Mei Kinuta and Abumi Knox, it's design combines aspects of two different sets of prexisting garments into one ANBU themed suit to aid Knox in battle against foes who might have more chakra then him. In bare essentials this armor fuses the properties of Hidden Craftsman's Infinite Armor into ANBU's the fabric of the ANBU cloak and hood. The black mesh like material can cover his whole body excluding his eyes which are covered by the more external parts of the armor like the helmet along with the other air vents throughout his body. This material posses all the properties of the infinite armor in a lightweight flexible cloth along with the chakra cloaking properties of the ANBU uniform. The cloth that forms over his mouth allows him to breath out, but it blocks the entrance of foreign pathogens and viruses from entering his mouth and nose. The helmet he wears is much more breakable then the rest of the suit, but while functioning it allows him to see in bright lights by shading his eyes and in darkness with a type of low level chakra based vision, nowhere near as acurate as Sharingan or Byakugan, but still effective. The other external components are meant to help manage Knox's chakra making the best use of his unique chakra extending the range of his attacks twofold. This aerodynamically designed suit is sure to be the latest rage in the ANBU profession. ((Doesn't contain the tentacle things in the picture >_>))
Sorry for the double pending. xD
But I just wanted to know more on these "other external components are meant to help manage Knox's chakra making the best use of his unique chakra extending the range of these attacks twofold"
Your next made up should be the tentacles. xd And ok I figure your low level chakra sight, is like.. A radiance of chakra around the person~ So it's good. :3it's meant just to extend the range of attacks by two. "these" should have just been "his" attacks only go so far with what he refers as to normal chakra. The suit helps him refine his low amount of chakra improving the efficiency of the techniques he uses. Yeah... cause well he only has 10K chakra, but 7 made ups rofl
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 7:16 am
Gaia Name:RockenRollTurtle
Name:Kia Meichi
Chi Healing- A Tribe Technique in which the user uses his/her own chi (life energy) to heal a wound. The user can only heal the wounds of others, not herself, and can not heal anything more severe than a large laceration without possibly killing the user (this includes deep gashes, severe burns, and damage to inner organs). Healing most any sort of wound puts the user's health in great risk.
Medium cut or gash- 2 turns
Large cut or gash- not able
Puncture wound- 4 to 5 turns depending if it's in a semi-vital area (inside the elbow, behind the knee, etc) Vital-area wounds take longer to heal.
Light burn- 3 turns
Medium burn- 5 turns
Large burn- not able
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 6:28 pm
Quote: Kaguya, Akai Hidden Sound Concealed Blades This technique is an ability that works for all of the weapons in Akai's arsenal. It allows for all weapons, including that of special weapons, to be completely hidden. As if they were not there at all. Allowing for him to appear as if he does not have a single weapon to be held. As soon as he is in need of a weapon, Akai may simply move his hand to where one of the weapons are, and then grip and draw it from where it is sheathed. As soon as he begins to draw the blade, it would appear in order to be used. This technique works much like the technique known as Cloak: Art of Nudity, and also allows for the weapons to be soundless, as if they were not even there. Though as soon as he draws one from it's sheath, it will appear as if from no where. This technique can last as long as the user wishes, once activated. And does not cost any chakra past activation of the technique. -------------------------------------------------------------------- Bone Art: Wind Shards This technique, using his bloodline abilities unique Shikotsumyaku (Corpse Bone Pathways) ability. This technique activates, as soon as any of the user's bones are broken the pieces will continue to shatter until they enter the air itself. Once in the air, they will become around an inch in size, before every one launches in the direction of the opponent. From any angle they they may have gone. These bones have one shot to be able to strike the opponent. These bones move at a swift speed, and due to it's size, is close to invisible. Since these pieces only have one chance to strike. They often move at a speed that is strong enough to pierce through the opponent. Or at least enter their bodies deeply. This technique is only activated, when the user's bones are destroyed, and is used as part of the user's bloodline abilities. Quote: Kagerou, Zaman Hidden Sound Flame Lord: Dance of Corrupt Flames This technique, is a basis behind the fighting abilities of Zaman. Taking in his advancement in speed, and his unnatural strength. He managed to work out a battle style that fit his personality and ability to manipulate his black flames. With this, he is able to draw out his battles, with only flames to come as his acceptance. When ever someone were to cast a fire based technique in his direction, the flames would literally dance around his body instead of actually effecting him with the attack. As such, he manages to move through them, and proceed with his own attacks. Using either blade or claws. As well, when ever Zaman moves, he seems to swerve and move about as if he were in some type of dance. Each movement causing black flames to trail behind him, making even a simple flick of his wrist a deadly combination. The interesting thing about this technique, is that it is actually closer to a taijutsu. The black flames being a cause of his own chakra reaching the air and taking form. Although they still own the same properties as the Grand Death Fire. -------------------------------------------------------------------- Spark of Grand Death Fire: Lightning Effect This technique, incorperating both his abilities with flames, and the new found ones involving black lightning. Slowly come to reveal the speed to which Zaman is capable. Once a battle rages for more then ten posts, Zaman would then enter what is known to him as the "Lightning Effect". This technique causes his very movement, to sound like lightning striking the ground where his foot hits, or the area even a single finger of his touches. The true reasoning behind this, is that once fighting for a long amount of time, lightning begins to spark up across his body. Once the black lightning is moving all around him, it shoots off to become grounded on other things. Causing each step that he takes, or each item that is touching the ground, that he touches. To become partially singed in that area, due to the lightning striking there from his body. Thanks to this effect, Zaman can strain his body, to allow for him to move as if he were simply a flash of lightning. Accelerating the black lightning around his body, to use their force in order for him to move at a swifter rate then he normally could. This one ability, making him faster then some of the more swifter shinobi of his rank. Due to the strain this places onto the body, Zaman is not able to use the speed in continual rapid succession. After using the speed a maximum of ten times in one battle, he runs the risk of hos body starting to shut down from the strain. After any more then twenty, his body will begin to be torn apart from the force of the lightning, and the strain this move causes. -------------------------------------------------------------------- Flame Lord: True Form Upon entering the stage of death, and then using his ability to Rebirth through the use of the technique known as Rebirth Process. Zaman has managed to refine the abilities that come with having a true demon form. Since he is of a skeletal appearance, with all around flames covering his body in certain places. Zaman has learned that it is actually possible to allow his deceased body to rise up, and even form together if it was torn apart. In order to be recreated as this flaming avatar of fire and bones. Though this recreation of his body, only works upon his death. Zaman also noted that he was given a distinct flexability and a unique power as well. This power actually allows for him to be able to cast flame based techniques without a single hand seal. Although it only works in this form. The only other thing that this grants, is the automatic restoration, and resistance against any kind of block that may prevent the use of his made ups, or his flame based jutsu. -Allows recreation of body, upon resurrections. -Able to cast fire based jutsu, with no hand seals. But no other jutsu are use able. -Prevents the locking of fire based jutsu, and made ups.
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 7:16 pm
Ayami Uchiha Hidden Leaf Jounin exam rewards Total relaxation Using this ability Ayami's body becomes very loose and fluent . In this stage she gains a boost in speed and power of Taijutsu moves . This ability costs 1,000 to activate and lasts for 7 turns . Dolphin blow edit This is a Taijutsu technique where Ayami will strike her enemy with the force of a dolphin ramming into them . This technique as a extreme output of power which will result in damage to both parties .Force of ramming Dolphin:120 pounds of force .
What exactly is the force of a ramming dolphin? rofl
Ok. As long as it's not continueous. You're good. xd Somersault This is a Taijutsu technique where if Ayami is in close quarters with her enemy she will preform a series of kicks and end with a somersault kick . The Final kick is jam packed with enough force that it causes even Ayami to leap back to regain her footing . Final Heaven This Taijutsu technique is a move that took Ayami four years to master . She will gather a large amount of visible chakra in her fist and attempt to connect with her enemy . Since this attack in infused with a dangerous amount of chakra being hit by this ability would break bones and cause internal injury . But because of its power Ayami uses up a lot of stanima . Offensive jutsu can't be used for three turns .
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:49 am
Sabuka no Matsuri Hidden Sand - Dunkelster Engel, hellster Dämon -dunkelster Engel, hellster Dämon is A Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The two females will take ahold of each others hands, getting the chakra go threw their body. A gray aura will appear around there bodies until there is nothing left to see. When the aura clears a simple women will be appearing where the once two girls stood. It's a simple combination of the two. It will increase their speed. Have their seances be brought up to a higher level. Their chakra will also be fused together. However this can only be used if their life's are in danger. The technique will drain their chakra to the point that if they are forced to break it, the two will die. Speed - Fast as a marathon runner Her image - http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v509/RyoRin/Characters/woe.jpg Chakra wings - When "dunkelster Engel, hellster Dämon" is activated the female will use her chakra and the wind element to utilize chakra wings. One will be black while one will be white, working with yin and yang. They have to fighting purpose but to felt her 'fly/ glide', Her speed in the air will grow to a large amount. Speed - Twice her 'normal' speed.
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 11:30 am
Hurdy Tetsu Metal Lake creation: The tetsu clan is known for it's mastery of liquid metal. In this jutsu, Hurdy will place his hands on the ground and extract liquid metal from it, enough to make a medium sized lake. Pending
Some kind of restriction. I'm thinking.Tetsu art: liquid to metal Allows Hurdy to turn any liquid to liquid metal. Water, blood ect. Pending
I'm thinking some kind of restriction for this too.Tetsu art: Harden Allows Liquid Metal to be hardened in to fine steel. In the Compendium
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 1:03 pm
Hido Nara Hidden Leaf Dark Affinity: This is merely an advancement on his already great clan abilities, this skill allows Hido to use any clan or shadow based jutsu without the use of handseals or verbal commands. These cost about 20% more chakra to use because of it. [If it was more detailed. Or the simplist thing like. "Nara clan jutsu" I wouldn't have been able to misread it, you know. rolleyes ] Pending.
It cant be clan techniques, and it should cost more, to use techniques without hand seals.Why can't it be clan techniques? Because if I let you be able to use every shadow jutsu in the guild. When someone comes along wanting to learn every fire. Or every water jutsu. I'll have to let them on the same principle. neutral Void Ring: This is a skill like the head hunter jutsu. Hido presses his hands into the rat handsign, this causes his opponents shadow to lose all form and essentially become a 'hole' in the ground. If his opponent doesn't keep jumping, or fly, they will fall into their own shadow and be trapped up to their head in it, unable to break free using physical means. Pending.
Now, this works only on the shadows of your opponents correct? And it's not permanent.Correct only my opponents shadow, and it's just like the headhunter jutsu, about two posts unless my opponent is stronger than me. In the Compendium Or if they have some way to break free that's not physical?
Add all that in, and then you can have it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:39 pm
Dark Revival - Artificial Stone
After tracking down one of the only people who knew anything about how the last Fuhrer of Alchemy created his minions and defeating him on pure fluke (challanged him to a game of chess which neither had played before, they were both horrible at it). He gained the information necessary to create a least a partial Mimic of the Fuhrer's famous Red Stones. A small strange red stone, slightly malleable in texture this strange stone is what the ninjas of the Alchemy village have been looking for most of the villages existence; a stone capable of enabling the user to make transmutation of unequal value. These stones only last for a limited time though and once their power is exhausted they will violently lash back at the user unless discarded before exhausted, that is unless they use the exhausted stone as a weapon that can be thrown at the enemy. Momiji's variety only last for ten posts, but they can be created from any dead body that still contains most of it's blood, but only once every two weeks[[referencing cannon fodder characters]].
Approved. Just describe what the stone does exactly for the folks who dont know about the original stone.
Dark Revival - Kicking God In The Shin
The other art retrieved from his wager with Shirokarasu's Lieutenant, the art of creating the seven sins. Using his created Artificial Stones Momiji will draw up the gates of alchemy from wherever he happened to be and this one a varience on the old formula picks up or recreates an item belonging to the deceased who would be at least partially resurected, this he brings into the gate with him. After entering this gate Momiji heads after his intended target, someone who has recently died and is residing in the afterlife at the moment and uses the gate to acess the soul of the deceased. Now he doesn't take their soul back with him only an archtype of them, an outline of who they were minus the soul. From that information he creates a body using the remaining power in the stone which closes the gate, but leaves behind a Homunculi, a creature somewhat like a human, but lacking a soul, but unlike Shiro's seven, Momiji has managed to bind these Homunculi to the item he takes through the gate with them asuring their obedience. As stated, only seven Homunculi can exist under his control and each posses one of the powers of his clan just like the old guard. These Homunculi can completely mimic their old selves, but for the most part take on a new persona.
Approved as long as the item you recreate doesnt have the same powers as the original item. We cant have you creating copies of special equipment. Also take out the regenerating ability. Its a bit too much. I wasn't actually thinking of that, but good point.
Both In the Compendium
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Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 4:51 am
Ayami Uchiha 60k made up EDIT Sharingan trickery arts : Time skip < Added to Compendium >Using the abilities of the mangekyou sharingan Ayami had developed a technique . It was similar the body flicker but she doesnt just move to a location at fight speed . She skips through time with the aid of the sharingan . Though this is a very crafty and deadly skill it takes a heavy burden upon Ayami . Should she use it more then 6 time her chakra pool will be drained and left blind for two real days . Distance : 10 feet every 25k 
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Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 1:29 pm
Zabimaru
release command: "Hoero!" ("Howl!")
This zanpakutou grows larger and has a saw like appearence. Zabimaru can extend and retract at the user's will. It can be thrown around like a whip and slice threw the enemy.
Approved-Dr E.
Way to not look to see if there's a technique with this name. sweatdrop
Which, there is. We need a slight name modification, the technique's still good though.
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:08 am
:: Eluamous Nailo ::
Hidden Mythology --> Spartan
Super Spartan 3 - Eluamous's third, and final, level of the Super Spartan Transformation - it can only be used while Eluamous is a Super Spartan 2. In this transformation, his Chakra Pool is tripled - but he gains a new status called "Ki" which is equal to his base CPS. 10,000 Ki will be deducted from the Ki meter per turn as a Super Spartan 3. Should his Ki reach the amount of 0 - Eluamous will die. If he stops paying this cost, Eluamous will be reduced back to his original form. If he becomes a Super-Spartan 3 again during the same battle, his Ki will NOT be replenished.In the Compendium
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 12:05 pm
Ryu Hoshi hidden cloud Hadoken-Ryu focuses more on the Hadou principle of his style that he learn from his master, which translates to him being very skilled with his usage of ki. Ryu thrust's His palms forward, sending a surge of Ki energy flying towards the opponent. he mush use Both hands to thrust out the hadou ken and the more he trains with it the more focus and powerful it become Once reach to 20,000 cp upgrades to shinku hadoken- a powered up version of the hadoken can be powered up to do more damage to the opponent and after the use of this technique he'll need some time to recover so he can do it again(1 post ) then when ryu reaches 60,000 cp he'll be able to perform metsu hadoken-this is the powered up version of the shinku hadoken this is his most powerful move so far cause he powers up the hadoken to it's max to do maximum damage to his opponent but after each use he needs time to recover (about 5 post) he can still move around but he just can't use the move back to back.
Seems fine to me.In the Compendium
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:13 pm
Hidden Mask Yamai Majora Clone Mask: This mask is white but when it's put on it morphs into the users face. It gives the user the ability to create a twin of him self. Not a like a shadow clone, but a living copy of their self. Only one copy can be made at a time. With Yamai his other personality is released as the clone or Yamai is released depending on who's in control at the time. The user controls how much chakra is put into the clone. If one is killed then the chakra is returned to whoever is alive while a part of the users mind also dies. If the user takes the mask off the Clone Mask the copy is disappears in the thin air. Replication Cover: This mask appears like a hideous human but it's different based on the user. It has the ability to copy the appearance of another person. Everything changes from the voice to the natural smell of the person. Everytime the mask is used the face of the last person is trapped on which is why it ends up looking ugly.
It's trapped, so it can be used more then once, I'm guessing? just remember, people who can see chakra, have the chance to tell that you're not the same person. In the Compendium
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Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:53 pm
Orochimaru (Orochi)
Hidden Creature
Orochi Art: Body- The user of this technique has the ability to extend any part within his body that contains muscle in it to great lengths. This technique originated from the followers of Orochimaru. Orochimaru had an adnormal ability to extend and contract parts of his body to great lengths almost as if he were a snake himself. The user can stretch further with leverage, but without leverage the user can only stretch so far. Some examples of these parts are the tongue, arms, fingers, legs, abdomen area, toes, etc.
Pending
I just need a length. Cant have you being able to stretch as far as you like all the time. Give a length for stretching, and this should be fine.
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Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:00 pm
Quote: Dante, Thantos Hidden Alchemy The Black: Evolution Enhancement:: With the ever evolving abilities of 'The Black' as it constantly grows and becomes stronger within the body of it's host. It casually begins to gain a stronger sense of it's own abilities, and it's own strengths can be explored further into it's own abilities of fighting styles. Since the host has such a vast array of shadow like abilities, it also begins to gain the ability to do more then just what it was once able. Now, the Black has advanced so far, as to when it is activated it can actually allow shadows around him to warp and be passed into the Deathly Aura. Causing the area that his Deathly Aura reaches, to be extended to the point of the shadows themselves. As well, the host gains the abilities to use the special illusions for a longer period of time, this period being that of 10 posts. Aside from simply enhancing some of their given abilities. 'The Black' also gained a new power, which is that of a series of crimson eyes that can form across the host's body, anywhere 'The Black' chooses them to. These eyes act as a permanent series of Ultimate Eyes, and are normally most seen on the backs, or palms of the host's hands. Though this is really the only knew ability that is granted by this evolution. Everything else is simply an enhancement to the original technique. These eyes are all routed to the brain, in order to act just like the host's normal eyes. And when they close, they seem to vanish from the host's body, as if they were never there.
Use able under 'Black' Influence only.Noir- Pending Just for sake of the power. Thinking about it... >_> Ok? xD
Forgot the obvious. sweatdrop It only works with 'The Black' activated. xDsureee... why not? What's the worst that could happen? I'll PM you my response, so if the person I want to mention reads this, they cant yell at me. xD-------------------------------------------------------------------- Ethereal Light This technique, is a creation based off of Thantos' former ghostly form. It actually allows for an eerie pale light to be illuminated off his pale skin, at any time he wishes them to. This eerie light actually causes shadows around Thantos to dance against the user's will. Making them dance around him, instead of actually being able to to touch him. Thanks to his Deathly Aura ability, which has already disposed of his own shadow. He has no worry of his own shadow being thrown out of control, and cause him to be effected. Since this technique, is nothing more then an unnatural light, it can be flicked on and off with only a thought towards the need to make it work. Once working, it appears as a pale light, almost like a flickering of a candle, that causes the shadows within seven feet of him, to be forced to circle around him, or rebound back. The constantly pulsating light, causing the shadows to dance, and making it gain the name of a 'Shadow Dance' though the name was deemed badly thought of, and unoriginal. And so it was hardly ever mentioned as such. -Noir - Denied - Sorreh, cuts off Nara clan jutsus making them useless. Worth a shot~ xd Quote: Serkan, Hisame Hidden Blood Blood God: Blood Drawing A technique that can be used, with any amount of blood that is in the area. Serkan actually causes the blood to scatter into the air as a viewable mist, mixing with the normal liquids that are in the air. Then once they are inhaled, they will enter the blood stream of those that have inhaled it, and form there work as a massive amount of blood will be transfered directly from the opponent, to the user. Much like that of multiple uses of the Blood Bullet technique, used all at once. This blood that is taken, would emerge from the veins, causing small holes, unseen by even a highly accurate eye, and then have the blood shoot through the air and enter the Crimson Aura that surrounds Serkan. Easilly granting him more blood, to be added to his arsenal. This technique, can be used at a distance of up to 14 feet in all directions. Making it a good long distance attack, to gain blood from the opponent. Pending- Hmmm only through your blood and it'd probably have to be large enough amount to be seen a like a mist or fog for it to serve as enough of an anchor to draw out the amount of blood your suggesting. A mist works. 3nodding approved then -------------------------------------------------------------------- Blood God: Art of Liquification A constant technique, that allows for Serkan's blood based techniques to resist abilities that may attempt to make them harden and useless, or at least against Serkan's own will. This technique causes the blood to become liquid again, and keep it's move able flowing nature. So it cant be burnt and hardened. Of course, this technique also makes the blood able to flow freely through any area, and causes techniques that involving summoning blood, to double the amount that it summons. In order to cause more blood to be used, in order to make the technique stronger. But still not cost anything more, with it's use. Pending - set it double the amount and what about freezing? Anti freeze or fire retardent would seem to be your choice. yeah I was saying you'd have to pick one expemption. I made it so it cant be burnt 3nodding
I'll just make another one, for freezing. xD!
I'm considering this accepted now. 3nodding
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