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 Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 3:36 pm
Thard_Verad V-Amaterasu-V MISSION- Night Raid on Devon Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Devon Corporation and steal 50 PokeNAVs. But you must not be seen be anyone. Beware there are 10 guards in the building. You must enter the building. Then make your way to level 3 were the PokeNAVs are. But get them quickly and return back. All the PokeNAVs are in one box. Pokemon you may run into on the mission (you may only run into one): Zigzagoon Voltorb Duskull Funds upon completion: 1000 *Dusclops quietly puts a sticky note on the mission and phases away* Not bad. Definitely improved over the first attempt. Pass! You now have Duskull and the P$1000 reward. From a style standpoint, I feel that enclosing your actions in asterisks is unnecessary and a bit distracting. While posting in HQ, you will more than likely need to do it, but for a mission report they can be omitted. The level 1 missions are a good place to refine your technique. Keep up the good work! "Thanks Thard" *Hugs him*
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 4:54 pm
Hey, Thard you said I can turn in missions after you check the one I'm currently doing, well since you graded my other one heres another mission. If it's not good can you tell me what I need to fix?
MISSION- Positive Reaction
Any Team Aqua member is asked to catch a Plusle
Pokemon:
Plusle
Funds upon completion: 500
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While training his pokemon Shock’s TADS goes of and starts to beep.
“So this time we have to catch a Plusle huh?” “Okay, let’s go guys.”
As he is walking towards a Power plant near Mauville town, Shock stops at the pokemon center to rest up.
As it is turning morning Shock wakes up and continues onto the power plant where the Plusle usually hang out.
On his way to the power plant he spots a Plusle.
“Yeah, come out Duskull” “Duskull use Shadow ball!” *Shock throws a pokeball in the air revealing Duskull*
*Then Duskull uses Shadow ball knocking Plusle into yellow zone of health* *Plusle then counter attacks with thunderbolt*
“Dodge Duskull!” *Duskull barely dodges the attack and gets hit by an inch injuring itself a little bit*
“Duskull try a weak shadow all one more time!” *Duskull uses a shadow ball accidently knocking it out*
“Oh no Duskull you knocked it out, well we better get to the power plant to find another.”
*Shock enters the power plant with soft steps trying not to be seen by some guards there* *Shock accidently kicks a rock and it hits wall and startles a guard which was sleeping*
*Shock then quickly slides to a nearby wall to hide behind* *As the guard waves his flashlight around Shock begins to get nervous and starts to sweat*
*The guard steps back to his chair* Guard: “Hm must’ve been a wind.” Shock: “Phew.” *Shock then quickly gets to area full of plusle where they are playing with each other.*
*Shock then quickly grabs one and goes through the back emergency door softly so the guard would not notice*
*Shock then as soon as he gets away from the plant so nobody can here him battle put the Plusle down before it could Shock him* “Okay Duskull.” “This one is ours.”
“Duskull use shadow ball!”
*Duskull then hits Plusle knocking it red health because of critical hit*
“Yeah!” “It looks weak!” “Duskull watch out!”
*Plusle then uses thunderbolt hitting Duskull into red zone of health* [From the battle with the last Plusle]
“Duskull stand back! Return!” *Shock throws a pokeball into the air returning Duskull* *Shock then pulls another pokeball from his belt and throws it at plusle*
*Shock starts sweating with anticipation, because he wants to catch this pokemon bad* “Holy hell don’t break free” *The pokeball then stops wiggling* “Oh no I think it broke free” *The red circle turns normal white*
“Yeah!” “I caught a Plusle, mission accomplished!”
End Mission
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 11:20 am
*I walk in*
Me: My, Thard has been busy.
*Goes to read Shock's mission*
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 12:00 pm
someones been a little mission happy <_< *stares at report board*
..... i should do a mision tomorrow maybe even tonight i think i have time
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 12:18 pm
V-Amaterasu-V MISSION- Positive Reaction Any Team Aqua member is asked to catch a Plusle Pokemon: Plusle Funds upon completion: 500 Fail, your battles were decent, the problem is your story. Put in more of an introduction, not just "I'm training in Mauville near the Power Plant." Expand on it, how are you training? Is anything interesting happening around you? Be creative. And you can expand upon your story a tiny bit more. Accidentally KOing the first Plusle is a nice touch but you can do more. What it really sums up to in the end is its too short. With the brief, your mission is 1 1/2 Microsoft Word pages. While I hate to put page limits down, a typically good rule of thumb is at least 2 Microsoft Word pages for a level 1 mission. Keep trying though, your battles weren't bad.
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 2:38 pm
Hows this? If it's not good tell me : P
MISSION- Positive Reaction
Any Team Aqua member is asked to catch a Plusle
Pokemon:
Plusle
Funds upon completion: 500
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While training his Electrike, and Duskull at the Mauville city gym by fighting training dummies, Shock get’s kicked out of the gym, because of excessive training day and night.
Shock’s TADS goes of and starts to beep a few hours after getting kicked out of the Mauville city gym.
“ The TADS says, Mission-Positive Reaction.” “It says we have to catch a Plusle, so this time we have to catch a Plusle huh?” “Okay, let’s go guys.” *After saying that the pokemon get excited for having a new mission.*
As he is walking towards a Power plant where the Plusle hang out near Mauville town, Shock stops at the Mauville City pokemon center, to rest up from all of the excessive training. Shock stays in the pokemon center for one whole night .
It turns morning and Shock finally wakes after resting him and his pokemon.
“Okay guys onto the power plant to catch a Plusle.” *Then throws three pokeballs in the air revealing Duskull, Squirtle, and Electrike.* Pokemon: “Dus Quirt Rike” "Okay guys, lets go!"
*Shock starts running to the power plant with his pokemon*
On his way to the power plant he spots a Plusle.
“Duskull use Shadow ball.”
*Then Duskull uses Shadow ball knocking Plusle into yellow zone of health* *Plusle then counter attacks with thunderbolt*
“Dodge Duskull!” *Duskull barely dodges the attack and gets hit by an inch injuring itself a little bit almost into yellow zone of health*
“Duskull try a weak shadow ball one more time!” *Duskull uses a shadow ball accidently knocking it out*
“Oh no Duskull you knocked it out, oh well we better get to the power plant to find another.”
*Shock enters the power plant from its back door with soft steps trying not to be seen by some guards there* *Shock accidently kicks a rock and it hits wall and startles a guard which was sleeping*
*Shock then quickly slides to a nearby wall to hide behind* *As the guard waves his flashlight around, Shock begins to get nervous and starts to sweat*
*The guard steps back to his chair* Guard: “Oh well must’ve been a wind.” * The guard then falls asleep right away* Shock: “Phew.” *Shock spots keys on the Guard’s pants leading to the Plusle* *Shock quickly and softly steals the keys from the guard’s pants* *The guard is half asleep and turns around making it harder to get the keys from his pants* “Duskull softly get the keys from the guards pants.”
*Duskull softly rises into the air over the guard and lightly grabs the keys off the guard’s pants*
*Shock spots the door the key is supposed to go in and quickly turns the key and walks in*
*Shock then runs quickly and gets into area full of Plusle where they are playing with each other.*
*Shock then quickly grabs one and goes through the back emergency door softly so the guard would not notice*
*Shock as soon as he gets away from the plant so nobody can here him battle, puts the Plusle down before it could Shock him* “Okay Duskull.”
“This one is ours.”
“Duskull use shadow ball!”
*Duskull then hits Plusle with a dark shadow ball knocking Plusle to red health because of critical hit*
“Yeah!” “It looks weak!” “Duskull watch out!”
*Plusle then uses thunderbolt hitting Duskull into red zone of health* [From the battle with the last Plusle]
“Duskull stand back! Duskull Return!” *Shock throws a pokeball into the air returning Duskull* *Shock then pulls another pokeball from his belt and throws it at Plusle*
*Shock starts sweating with anticipation, so he won’t have to sneak back in and take another.* “Holy hell don’t break free” *The pokeball then stops wiggling* “Oh no I think it will break free” *The red circle turns normal white* *Shock then walks over to the pokeball*
“Yeah!” “I caught a Plusle, mission accomplished!”
End Mission
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 4:06 pm
"Wow." Ginji walks in as he sees a pile of paper stacking up around the HQ.
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 4:20 pm
Ginji of Thunder "Wow." Ginji walks in as he sees a pile of paper stacking up around the HQ. Me: Paper is good, its not tumble weed. *Looks at the revised mission*
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 5:12 pm
V-Amaterasu-V Hows this? If it's not good tell me : P MISSION- Positive Reaction Any Team Aqua member is asked to catch a Plusle Pokemon: Plusle Funds upon completion: 500 Pass, its OK. Not great, but I have seen worse. Quick point, critical hits making a match a one hit, catch Pokemon is generally frowned upon. Only because of the accidental KO am I letting it slip. Also remember basic grammar rules, when a new person speaks, its a new paragraph, and double check your spelling. Hear is not here. But keep the Plusle and the 500 PD.
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 5:14 pm
"Try." Ginji sighs. "BL, what mission level would you suggest for me?"
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 6:38 pm
Ginji of Thunder "Try." Ginji sighs. "BL, what mission level would you suggest for me?" *Shuppet soars through the room and tapes a note to your forehead* "New members often start with level 1 missions to build up their roster and start gaining points toward evolution. High-quality missions tend to earn rank-ups, and once you reach Tier 4, you can begin evolving pokemon. When you have a respectable team, move on to level 2 or even level 3 missions. "Then again, if you're the daring type, you could attempt a higher level mission even at a low rank. It'll get you noticed, but you'll also have a harder time completing it because of your team restrictions. "Above all, it's quality, not quantity or difficulty, that matters."
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 6:47 pm
"You do know that I am not a new member but rather a NEW member." Ginji laughs as he heads over to the mission board to select a good mission.
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 7:20 pm
Ginji of Thunder "You do know that I am not a new member but rather a NEW member." Ginji laughs as he heads over to the mission board to select a good mission. *Falls out of a SIV portal* Me: I want to see you do this one... Rocket. MISSION- New Wave of Poaching (LVL 4)
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 7:59 pm
"Understood" Ginji smiles as he take as the mission file to read in his room.
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 8:16 pm
Ginji of Thunder "Understood" Ginji smiles as he take as the mission file to read in his room. Me: Make it a good one. *I lay down on the couch*
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