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 Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 9:00 pm
two people arived in the afterlife both looking slightly angry and confused. one was Alice the othr was Zakun, Alice looked at Zakun "you look familiar, i may have been you...." she said feeling confused. Zakun looked at her then turned away and ran off, unsure of her. he thought she was nuts.
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Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:59 pm
" What should we do with him ." a voice spoke out as it's figure laid it gaze upon the body on the floor . " What else can we do were all died can't get any worse then this . " A grey skinned man spoke as he lit a cigarette . " Lets get out of here . " The grey skinned man spoke again as he walked out of the room . " Geez whats up with Ookisame these days ? " The other man stated to himself as he too left the room . But once he left Ookisame was no where to be seen .
Ookisame would reappear walking the streets of the afterlife . He was on a special plain were everything took shape as if it were in the mortal word . But it wasnt the best place at the same time . This plain was mostly populated by sinners and the hell bound . This was the first place every new comer would experience till they were worthy to move on up . But Ookisame has been on this plain for years . That wasn't what was bothering him though . The fact that his ride was going to be over soon . The almighty seem to think that Ookisame has over stayed his welcome . So now he only has 24 hours before he will return to the mortal world . " Shoot i wonder what im going to do ? " He questioned himself as he wondered what the world was like now . After being dead for so many years and now he had to return . In ways you could say that it pissed him off . He would soon come to a bridge the connected two sections of the city .When he got to the middle of the bridge he would look out over the endless ocean that was the afterlife . " Well i guess i should get back to the basics . " He stated as she started to make his way toward the dojo . It wasn't really a dojo thats just what the ignorant locals called their fight club . " I hope there is some decent women at this spot . " Ookisame Stated as he walked down a flight of steps and arrived at a Iron cast door . He would knock three times at the base of the door . The peek hole of the door would slide open as the body guard examined Ookisame .
" Ah Ookisami i didn't imagine you would show up again . "
The bodyguard stated as he unlocked and opened the door. Ookisame remained quite and just walked in once he was allowed to . Walking down the dim hallway Ookisame would come across a large ballroom . At the center a cage where two people went in and one come out . All types of scum showed up here . From your corrupt business men to your everyday feudal pimp . Ookisame Hated this types of people the most , the ones that would force themselves on to a woman and bleed the poor for everything they have . But Ookisame was forced to dwell with such men . Because he too had sins of his own . But redemption was sought out years before and also obtained .
Ookisame would take a deep breath as he made his way down the stairs toward the stands . They were packed but Ookisame managed to secure himself a seat . Before he would begin his training he would watch to see who was the best fighter their that night . So when everyone left he would follow them and challenge them . This is how Ookisame kept his ninja skills in tune while he wasted away in the endlessness of the afterlife .
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 6:48 pm
Quote:  Orochimaru could only see a faint glimmer off in a vast quantity of darkness. But of course, the light was the way to the other side of life; the part beyond life itself. He could only be attracted to this light because he wanted to meet the one his was supposedly supposed to surpass someday, the original Orochimaru himself. Orochimaru approached the light, he looked down to notice he was merely floating on nothingness. When he felt he was close enough to the light, he reached out to it with his right hand with his right index finger slightly raised.
"Lord Orochimaru!"
His facial expression completely changed. It went from lost and unfortunate, to infuriated and fierce. His bright yellow eyes turned a dim crimson red due to him being filled with anger and excitement at the same time. Though he didn't think it were possible for his eyes to even change color because they had been yellow for his entire life. With a bright flash of the light, Orochimaru would be in a entirely new world. The afterlife.179
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 7:32 pm
Quote:  As he arrived within this strange vicinity, Orochimaru noticed that it was what seemed to be a whole new world. A large grassy plain with several white cherry blossom trees in full bloom. There were no petals on the soil below the trees, and Orochimaru found that quite peculiar. He approached the trees looking off into the distance as he got closer.
"Not a single petal upon the ground. That is quite akward. A tree busting with life, and not a single petal on the ground."
As he spoke to himself, he noticed that a single black flower slowly fell to the ground in front of him. A black flower falling from a tree that blooms white flowers, utmost strange. Orochimaru looked up to the approximate area from which the flower fell, as he looked he was caught by surprise by almost a mirrored image. The original Orochimaru looked him back into the eyes as he say the boy below him standing on the ground. Orochimaru's facial expression went from one of surprise to a expression of nothing. The real Orochimaru dropped from the tree and landed in front of the boy and locked eyes with him.
"So, you are the one who has been speaking of becoming my so called heir."
"You heir, no. I will surpass you Orochimaru, just as your pass pupil Uchiha Sasuke."
Lord Orochimaru could only smile with this amusement. At least, he thought it was humurous, the boy was completely serious and had the same look upon his face. Orochimaru smiled and then moved his head directly in front of the boy's.
"Listen to me you little fool. If you think you can surpass me as that Uchiha did, then you might as well give me your body now. You will never surpass me as Sasuke."
"Though, Sasuke wasn't the only one who surpassed you that you tried to make your vessel. The one known as Itachi did the same to you."
Lord Orochimaru's face grew a slight frown and his eyebrows slanted down to show the expression of anger upon his face.
"That doesn't make you like them! you will never surpass me as long as you don't posses those accursed eyes of theirs!"
"So the eyes are key then. Then you are no longer of any use to me. It seems you aren't what your were made out to be since the Uchiha clan seems to be your predator and not your prey. You and I shall meet again Orochimaru, but that day shall come only when I have obtained those eyes and accomplished more than you could have in two lifetimes."
Orochimaru simply blinked in his ancestor's face and then walked off. He had lost his past fear of Orochimaru and was now moving on to greater things, the Sharingan. Orochimaru continued walking until he vanished from the horizon and back to the world of the living. Lord Orochimaru watched the boy the entire tie with a look of anger and hatred upon his face.504
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 12:24 pm
:: Immolatus ::  "Oy, what a headache this'll be..." the spirit of Immolatus would slowly glance around, and unlike his mortal body which was blinded, he could see; the first time he had seen anything in over five years... Quickly glancing around, he tested out his powers, although unfortunately it seemed as if his abilities to channel chakra were not up to par in the spirit world. Perhaps one needed to be truly dead in order to use techniques to their full power? "At least this means I might be able to return... Although it seems that in order to battle this guy, I need greater power... That destiny bond worked as a good gambit, but he'll be more wary of it next time..." the Enkou would slowly focus his breath, recalling that in the absense of the sun, breath was the key to controlling the power of his fire. If Judgment was yet to come, he could at least pass the time by adjusting himself to the spirit world... Quote: Immolatus Before: 2923 + This Post: 174 = New Total: 3097
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:06 pm
Hido was standing in the center of the afterlife, his soul ejected from his body by kanshin. He was proud of her she actually killed him. He looked around teh familiar terrain, he had been here twice before. It was nothing new and he walked straight to his target. He sat down in front of orochimaru staring him in the eyes. "You've obviously heard of me, so you obviously know what I'm here for." He said smirking slightly.
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:19 pm
Orochimaru laughs as Hido approaches him so directly, "I heard of you, Nara. I'm impressed finally someone who doesn't randomly scream out when they are in the darkness." His cold snake eyes glare back in to Hido's as he laughs once more, "I will give you are brave for approaching me as you have. Very well...in exchange for your loyalty I will grant you some of my power." With out another word Orochimura's neck stretches out as he bites the Nara's neck allowing his fangs to pierce deep into his skin, "But if you die again, I will strip my powers from you and find another. More suited to be my minion. Now be gone boy."Quote: Hido gains the Light Curse Mark
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:30 pm
"Why scream out in darkness when you control it." Hido said smirking, even as his spirit began to fade once more, returning to his body in the real world. The mark on his neck began to pulse and he grinned ready to use it to increase his power. His soul shot back into his body, the force causing his body to lean forward even as his eyes reopened again.
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:39 pm
Quote: Mythic, you can continue this time but next time someone actually has to kill you for you to go to the afterlife... This count's for everyone
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Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 9:03 am
[[Ironically, he could have accepted Immolatus's Destiny Bond if he really wanted to die. Hope kanshin looted his body good -lol-
Post reserved to post Immolatus's ressurection
Could a mod quick answer me what we're supposed to do if our body is stolen and made into a stone soldier?]]
| I would think that you would need to create a completely new character since you have no body to return to. In short, you cannot recreate Immolatus in the same clan. Make him someone new but with the same skill list and stuff. You can ask another mod if you don't like my decision. xXx Grimace |
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:41 pm
Onishi awoke in the Afterlife. She did not know where she was. This was the first time she ended up in the afterlife. She did not know what to do at this point. She looked around and saw that she was in a dimly lit cavern. "What the hell did i get my self into." she thought to herself as she looked around. She did not recognize anything about the place. Of course, maybe the term look around would not be the best term for the blind girl. Still she took hold of her walking staff and wandered through the underworld.
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 6:39 pm
Dev had then opened his eyes. He looked around and noticed that he was on the ground. He then leaned himself forward and then looked at his arms. They were not burnt at all. He pushed himself up so that he was standing completely up. He turned around looking for any sign of the man who killed him. He then caught a glimpse of a body on the ground. He looked right at it and then saw a burnt body on the ground. By the shape of it, it seemed like himself but it was only made out of ash. He then stepped on it but his foot did not touch it but merely went through it as if he was a ghost. He then backed up and began walking away. He put his hands to his head wondering what had happened. He was beginning to lose control and then dashed into a complete run. He was going mad about how confused he was. He ran and ran without stopping and he noticed that he wasn't getting tired.
“What is this place?”
An old man had then come towards him and then Dev at an automatic response but his fists up ready to fight. He didn't know if his jutsus would work wherever he was but he was soon to figure out. The old man then chuckled a bit and scratched his head with his cane.
“Hm. The young; They are so violent.”
Dev had the most bewildered and confused look on his face. He then put his guard down and looked at the man. He then began focusing on the details of the old man. He looked at the man's wrinkles that went from head to toe and the small, blue robe that he had on. He even noticed the inch thick sandals that the old man was wearing. Dev did not dare to ask who he was as he did not want to say anything.
“Young man does not talk? How rude of me. I should introduce myself. My name is Horatio Lorain, and I have been taught by the Hokages of many years now.”
“That is not possible. The Hokages with an S are dead. There is only one Hokage.”
“You obviously don't know where you are or what you are. You are dead.”
Dev then looked at the old man and then he gasped. He knew the man was right. It all made since now. Never getting tired, being able to go through things, the impossible was now possible where he was. He then slowly fell down landing on his butt. His face was still completely surprised.
“Do you not believe me?”
“Yes, I do believe you. It's just... I can't believe I died. I don't even remember how I died. I just remember... a fire.”
“Yes, Yes. You can still train too. It's a lot easier considering we don't get tired here in the afterlife.”
Dev then looked at him and then he scratched his head. He did not know what he should do. Considering that he was dead there wasn’t much point of trying to train but what else could he do. He had nothing to do and all his life he had been a ninja. He would never get tired so he decided that he would rather train at since he would never get tired.
“Could you… train me? I don’t think I will be able to get to meet the Hokages soon.”
“Your right, you probably won’t see any of them in a while. You would have had to be well respected in the real world. And yes, I could train you, but on one condition.”
“And what is that condition?”
“Until you can beat me in a spar, you will be my personal slave.”
The old man smirked a bit showing an evil smile making Dev doubt that the old man had good intentions. Dev then continued on and thought about this choice. Starting a new life had made it so that he had to make a lot of choices. This choice was a bit harder to decide other than trying to do worthless training or not. He would put the rest of his life, which he predicted was eternity in the afterlife on the line. He thought about hard and long until he finally came onto a decision. He then took a very deep breath as he spoke.
“I’ll do it.”
The old man stopped smirking now and raised one eyebrow as if he was questioning Dev’s decision. He then dropped his stick and then closed his eyes.
“So when do we start?”
“Now. The first technique that we are going to learn is called Water Dragon Projectile. This jutsu shoots out a large blast from the user’s hands at the user. This jutsu specializes against any fire type jutsus. It is one of the few projectile moves that has been passed down through people from Hokages.”
“So are you going to show me the hand signs?”
“Yes, I am. Make sure you watch closely.”
The old man then began doing hand signs quickly but Dev was already fluent with speed casting where the user does creates chakra signs at miraculous rates. He memorized the hand signs as soon as he saw them and then he quickly did the hand signs so that he would be able to counter to the old man’s attack. The old man’s water projectile shot from the his hand first and then came Dev. They both came crashing into each other but the old man’s water projectile easily won due to the fact that Dev was not yet fluent with the jutsu yet. He was sure that he would be able to beat the old man’s jutsu soon. He was guessing that he would be able to do this in the second try. The two quickly began doing hand signs again when it was ensured that Dev was able to make a jutsu. The water had hit harder than expected. They both then shout out a water projectile at the same times as each other. They then both hit and then stayed at the same place in mid air for about five seconds until Dev prevailed and then his water had the old man far sending him far back and hitting the wall. Dev smirked and did not check to see if the old man alright. He knew that he would be okay. The old man then got up and then smirked a little bit. Dev had sent a wide grin right back at him.
“Well done, young one. Now before we learn another projectile move I want you to learn a very ancient technique. Not many people know this technique. It is used to escape from battles or to retreat from raids. It is also very useful if you are being attacked and you can go back to a spot that only has ways to get out and no ways to get in. The technique is called Flying Thunder God technique. It is actually very easy to use; you just have to know how to set it up. You have to create marking on the ground before you use this jutsu. Now just do the same markings as I do and then we will run a few miles south and then use the jutsu to come back here.”
The old man pulled out a kunai and then began scratching markings in the dirt. Dev pulled out his own kunai and also began cutting the same exact marking into the dirt. He made sure that everything was exactly the same as the old man’s and he figured that it was close enough when he had triple checked it. He then looked at the old man noticing he had already sped off. Dev soon galloped after him and caught up to the old man quickly. When he was a good distance away from the markings, he waited for the old man to show him the hand seals so that he could get back too. The old man caught up to him after Dev stopped and quickly began doing hand seals. Dev quickly copied him and then they both disappeared and then reappeared above the mark. Dev smirked a bit and looked at the old man. He wanted to learn the last little jutsu and then he waited patiently. He down at the old man and then waited for him to do the hand seals.
“For the last jutsu, Earth Dragon Projectile, just change the last hand seal to Ox. Bye. You are released.”
The old man then suddenly disappeared in a puff of smoke. Dev looked around for him and did not see him. He then did the hand seals and then he successfully completed the jutsu. He smirked a bit and then he sat down on a bench being very tired.
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 8:59 pm
---The After Life becomes more substantial. With both human world and spirit open denizens of the after-life find themselves not dead, but yet not fully alive.---
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Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 8:06 pm
  Once the dark cloud finally dissipated, Shouta and Lolita took a moment to take in their surroundings, which had drastically changed. The sky was dark, almost like a storm was about to break. The land was a white desert stretching on in all directions, with virtually no identifying landmarks in sight. They looked at each other in curiosity, wondering just where they had been taken. Neither of them recognized this place, but there was a vague feeling in the air, a feeling that they didn't want to stay here if they could possibly avoid it. Just then, that same maniacal laughter rose up once more, and they saw Raga striding toward them, marching down the side of a white sand dune. She didn't seem surprised by the landscape, she it seemed obvious she knew where they were. She laughed again, and threw her arms wide, welcoming the Kon twins to hell. (6211 words + 153 words = 6364 words)
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 7:53 pm
Shouta and Lolita exchanged alarmed glances, could Raga be telling the truth? This place wasn't exactly what they might have imagined hell might have looked like. But it did look like no other place they had ever seen before, so perhaps there was some truth to what Raga told them. Either way, they needed to know more. Lolita took a step forward, anger flashing in her eyes. She demanded to know why Raga was so intent on doing all of this to them. She knew they weren't the most innocent people around, but people that had done badly enough to deserve being sent to hell? She didn't think so! There had to be more to this, there had to be a deeper reason behind what was going on. And she, they, were going to find it, even if they had to fight Raga to do so! (6364 words + 149 words = 6513 words)
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