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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 3:56 pm
Morimo im a semi-literate, im not a good typer in the first place so yeah....well please dont be angry at me please You're not even close, my friend. You state your actions clearly, yes, but they're simple and no more than a sentence, if even. Take your time in forming your posts. There's more than just dialog and a simple action. Describe the action, or if there is none, describe what your character's thinking, or doing, like a narrative. It'll take some getting used to at first, but once you begin forming longer and more descriptive posts, you'll start feeling more confident.
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 3:56 pm
*squeaks* Whuzzat...? o_O *sniffs at* ....yummy...cinnamon =3~
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 3:58 pm
Darshendros the Eternal Morimo im a semi-literate, im not a good typer in the first place so yeah....well please dont be angry at me please You're not even close, my friend. You state your actions clearly, yes, but they're simple and no more than a sentence, if even. Take your time in forming your posts. There's more than just dialog and a simple action. Describe the action, or if there is none, describe what your character's thinking, or doing, like a narrative. It'll take some getting used to at first, but once you begin forming longer and more descriptive posts, you'll start feeling more confident. i guess....oh great i came to build up self confidence and i dropped for none what-so ever to never existed
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:01 pm
Morimo, I want you to add more to your last post, because there's much more you can add onto it, and you're not giving me much to work with. Remember your surroundings. The waitress just brought us our drinks, so there's something to react to there. Plus, Afro-sama didn't exactly tell you what kind of quest it would be, or any details about it at all, so surely you must be wondering just what kind of quest this crazily-dressed guy with an amazingly large afro is going to have you do. Another aspect in roleplaying is feeding the other people you're roleplaying with, with material that they can work off of, and keep you in the loop. Otherwise, you're going to find yourself left out, because you're not giving everyone else much to work with to interact with you.
edit: In order to build up self-confidence, you must first learn how to accept criticism.
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:01 pm
sweatdrop Don't eat me, eh, Lu?
x.x Why the guilt trip Morimo? Least you can do is listen to what people say and not give up so easily.
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:02 pm
Sunstrike sweatdrop Don't eat me, eh, Lu? x.x Why the guilt trip Morimo? Least you can do is listen to what people say and not give up so easily. like i can, i cant help it. im trying to change that
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:04 pm
It's going into that mind of yours. This much I can tell, just be receptive about it. Try out the suggestions Darsh is handing out instead of dismissing them as soon as they come out. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:04 pm
I'm being nice right now. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:04 pm
Darshendros the Eternal Morimo, I want you to add more to your last post, because there's much more you can add onto it, and you're not giving me much to work with. Remember your surroundings. The waitress just brought us our drinks, so there's something to react to there. Plus, Afro-sama didn't exactly tell you what kind of quest it would be, or any details about it at all, so surely you must be wondering just what kind of quest this crazily-dressed guy with an amazingly large afro is going to have you do. Another aspect in roleplaying is feeding the other people you're roleplaying with, with material that they can work off of, and keep you in the loop. Otherwise, you're going to find yourself left out, because you're not giving everyone else much to work with to interact with you. edit: In order to build up self-confidence, you must first learn how to accept criticism. fine just tell me what it is and ill try...
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:06 pm
Hmm. This is going to be a long day indeed. I'm going to have a cigarette, then I'm going to post, so be back in 10.
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:07 pm
Sunstrike sweatdrop Don't eat me, eh, Lu? x.x Why the guilt trip Morimo? Least you can do is listen to what people say and not give up so easily. But that so reminds me of Christmas....and I really was in Christmas mood a few days ago when I saw all those cookies already being sold here XD~
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:13 pm
INSPIRATION!
I have a better idea. Morimo, what messenger do you have? We're going old school for this quest.
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:14 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:14 pm
Darshendros the Eternal INSPIRATION! I have a better idea. Morimo, what messenger do you have? We're going old school for this quest. uh...yahoo
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:23 pm
Ah, good. We can do a conference then. What's your screenname?
Anyone else who has YIM that wants in on this EPIC QUEST, post now or forever hold your peace.
I need to make a room first.
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