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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2014 5:31 pm


Midnas Lament
xNanahara puffed out her cheeks, sighing deeply as her eyes furiously blinked back the whirlwind of dirt that her training had just made, seemingly spontaneously, appear. After the dust finally cleared, Nanahara was left flat on her back and covered head to toe in dirt, the girl groaned; her body exploding with pain as she tried to move; finally registering the injuries sustained from falling off the top of a tree. Jeez Nanahara, get your stuff together, why can't you run up the side of a measly tree, huh? The thought ran through the woman's mind before quickly dispersing; replaced with a more 'stop the pain' path of mind. Even if more cursing was probably being used. Shakily, Nanahara sat up, trying to keep her groaning to a minimum; she would hate to get caught out of the house by her step-father, especially if he figured out what she was up to, oh man it wouldn't have been pretty. It wouldn't have been impossible either, since the girl is such a dunce and she decided to only a couple hundred feet outside of her house to practice controlling her chakra; even after her step-father explicitly told her not to do so.

xThe trees rustled lightly as a small breeze wafted into the glen, gently brushing Nanahara's short hair in all directions. She just sighed once more, slowly getting to her feet and doing her best to remain quiet as she did her best to brush the grime off her clothes. Doing so raised up another small dust cloud, and however hard she tried, Nanahara couldn't resist letting out a loud and sharp cough; her eyes widening to the size of saucers as she did so. It felt like her heart was going to pound out of her chest, and she did her best to scamper a little bit deeper inside of the woods, however, she was still hurting quite a bit: she didn't manage to get very far. 'Nanahara. Nanahara! Calm down! Breathe, c'mon girlie, breathe, you're not going to get caught. It's not like devil-dad heard a measly little cough, calm the heck down,' The girl's quick and calming thoughts soothed her slightly: she leaned against a tree for support. The bark was rough against the scratched, bare skin of her forearm, and while it felt normal: there was still something slightly... off about it.

xNanahara's eyes widened, as a lone and terrifying thought popped into her mind. 'Genjutsu,' She almost mouthed the word as she slowly turned around in absolute terror.

xIt seemed her stepfather had caught her after all.


Careful on your sentence structure, you want to make sure all of your objects agree with each other. It looks like there was a couple times you started a sentence and changed to a new sentence midway through. It easy to do when you are just typing the way you think.

But other than that tiny grammar flaw PASSED!
PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 3:58 am


As the darkness succumbs in front of his eyes, Heinrich puts on his dark blue cloak and with a sad face he left the bar. The wooden planks begin to crack under his feet. As he tried to leave the bar a hand grasped his foot. With his left hand he punched the one who grabbed him. He left a red mark on his cheek, then kicked him in the belly. the man moaned in pain, then regretted his choice.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 03, 2014 1:17 pm


A slight scratching sound permeated the room as Saya wiped the sleep from her eyes. In the dark shadows of the early morning, she sought out the source of the sound. After he daily ritual of stretching and yawning, she rose and lumbered towards the sound. A cube like shape with a black cloth draped over it. Picking up the cloth, she was greeted by the hungry face of her ferret Williams. "Good morning there" she said smiling at her furry best friend. She opened the cage just enough to give her little friend an early morning petting. After closing the cage, she moved to the shelf to retrieve Williams food. A small jar cruelly labeled "Ferret Food". Saya dispensed some of the contents into her friends cage, watching him devour it in ecstasy. Saya enjoyed watching William at times like this, he helped her get her mind off of life for a few minutes. She glided giddy over to the stove, after giving it a few kicks it clicked on. She began preparing breakfast.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 03, 2014 3:01 pm


All pass!

PS. ImKotsu, I appreciate that you might not be done with your profile yet, but your Rex and Fort should both be -1 smile I'm loving the flute touch ^^

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Dimi Deiod

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2014 10:21 am


Dimi took a step away from the window, with his hands, trembling slightly - was his eyes deciving him? He stood paralyzed looking at the same spot from where the person, who he dreaded so, was just a moment ago. His body wouldn't move. Still he would be made to move. Very soon. "What if.. What if.. I.. I don.. I don't want t-" his thoughts were cut off by a knocks on the wooden panel visitors used to signal his family by slamming a tiny wooden-bird figurine into a wooden board. His body sank. The gaze of his were now fixed on the floor. His arms and chest were hanging down over his waist, as a branch, heavy with snow.

His feet scrapped along the floor as he made his way through the hall, down the stairs and into the hallway. The knocking had become a part of the background noise. His mind were else where. "DIMI!" his mother shouted "ARE YOU GOING TO OPEN THAT?!" he didn't reply as he were just a few more steps to the door that the sound of him sliding the door for the visitor would be an answer in itself. His fingers moved slowly towards the end of the rice-door and in a moment he were to push it to the left, revealing one of his many fears.

"HEYDIMI!LETSGOPLAY!" she grapped a hold of his wrist and sprinted out on the streets - dragging him along to some (probably) wicked and dangerous adventure. The young girl was of the same age as he, who always wore a smile that crossed her entire face. This was the girl he had long loved in secret. Who had never gotten the hint of his feelings. Who would always get him into to trouble. Who would never know how he felt.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2014 4:37 pm


As good as ever Dimi! :3

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Holy Knight Tristan

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 12:34 pm


Dimi Deiod

(that last paragraph! hahah I know the feels sir.)

It was a nice autumn day. The leaves on the trees were in mid-change and it some how relaxed him. He always felt more himself during this season than any other, like he was truly at peace with himself. He couldn't help but smile as his clothes began to ripple from the wind. He laid there completely relaxed on the hill, looking out over the changing forest. A rustle sounded behind him, and he shifted slightly to see what it was. He smirked as he looked and saw a huge shadowed figure coming towards him. It's huge mass was very distinguishable. He waved and patted the ground beside him as he turned and looked back out to the sea of trees. He felt the ground rumble at his companions footsteps, then a loud thump that actually caused his jaw to jar from the impact. He glanced beside the fuzzy mass beside him and started scratching at it. "There there Hisoka." He said reassuringly.

The giant mass known as Hisoka grumbled and swatted his massive paw at the bugs that tried to n** at his face. Hisoka's stubby tail swayed briefly. Saito sat there staring at his big furry buddy. He had to admit Hisoka was pretty damn useful. He patted the bear a little more roughly before standing and swinging himself onto Hisoka's back. "Come on Hisoka. There's a village out there that we need to "visit". Let's stop by and say hello to the delightful people." He said to his companion. Hisoka grumbled as he began to walk down the hill into the sea of trees.


(Good enough?)
PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2014 4:40 am


Holy Knight Tristan
Dimi Deiod

(that last paragraph! hahah I know the feels sir.)

It was a nice autumn day. The leaves on the trees were in mid-change and it some how relaxed him. He always felt more himself during this season than any other, like he was truly at peace with himself. He couldn't help but smile as his clothes began to ripple from the wind. He laid there completely relaxed on the hill, looking out over the changing forest. A rustle sounded behind him, and he shifted slightly to see what it was. He smirked as he looked and saw a huge shadowed figure coming towards him. It's huge mass was very distinguishable. He waved and patted the ground beside him as he turned and looked back out to the sea of trees. He felt the ground rumble at his companions footsteps, then a loud thump that actually caused his jaw to jar from the impact. He glanced beside the fuzzy mass beside him and started scratching at it. "There there Hisoka." He said reassuringly.

The giant mass known as Hisoka grumbled and swatted his massive paw at the bugs that tried to n** at his face. Hisoka's stubby tail swayed briefly. Saito sat there staring at his big furry buddy. He had to admit Hisoka was pretty damn useful. He patted the bear a little more roughly before standing and swinging himself onto Hisoka's back. "Come on Hisoka. There's a village out there that we need to "visit". Let's stop by and say hello to the delightful people." He said to his companion. Hisoka grumbled as he began to walk down the hill into the sea of trees.


(Good enough?)


Yep, great smile ! (And re: your PM, you're welcome lol)

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2014 5:39 pm


{I havent made a Character just yet, but here is a possible one I have in my head}

Yukia twisted in a spin as she pushed her palms outwards in a striking form into a rock then a tree. She was in a training ground for Taijutsu specifically and she was trying to learn this new style she had heard of. Her palms hit again on the tree making small cracks appear as she used her full force, the tree quivered but stayed standing strong. She took in a deep breath and flushed her Chakra out to her hands as she spun around using this time to block just before striking the boulder with her left palm using most of her force. A small cracking sound was heard and she gasped in pain jumping back.

Yukia quickly looked at her hand and saw that she had luckily sprained her wrist instead of breaking it. "Darn, huh well thats what I get for hitting a large rock with almost all my strength" She chuckles to herself and places the hand behind her near the middle of her back "I guess its time to use the single palm technique my master was teaching me" The wind blew through the training area making her silvery blonde hair blow around her face. She took in a calm breath and checked her chakra reserves, they were low which was most likely the cause for her being so tired. "Another hour and then its time to go home"
PostPosted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 8:02 pm


Goldielo
{I havent made a Character just yet, but here is a possible one I have in my head}

Yukia twisted in a spin as she pushed her palms outwards in a striking form into a rock then a tree. She was in a training ground for Taijutsu specifically and she was trying to learn this new style she had heard of. Her palms hit again on the tree making small cracks appear as she used her full force, the tree quivered but stayed standing strong. She took in a deep breath and flushed her Chakra out to her hands as she spun around using this time to block just before striking the boulder with her left palm using most of her force. A small cracking sound was heard and she gasped in pain jumping back.

Yukia quickly looked at her hand and saw that she had luckily sprained her wrist instead of breaking it. "Darn, huh well thats what I get for hitting a large rock with almost all my strength" She chuckles to herself and places the hand behind her near the middle of her back "I guess its time to use the single palm technique my master was teaching me" The wind blew through the training area making her silvery blonde hair blow around her face. She took in a calm breath and checked her chakra reserves, they were low which was most likely the cause for her being so tired. "Another hour and then its time to go home"


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