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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 3:57 pm
The Moon ninja called Yuan would feel a creepy pressence in the area as the tempurate suddenly dropped, "What have we here?" A voice calls out from the shadows as a pair of golden slitted eyes appear to stare at Yuan, "What brings you to my domain, boy?"
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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 4:04 pm
Yuan stopped quite suddenly in his tracks. He had been to the afterlife several times, but he had never met anyone here. He never even saw a body in that seemingly abandoned town. But now that he thought about it, he did recall seeing and hearing some sort of fearful creature in the distance the last time he had come through. Yuan turned to face the darkness, seeing only gold eyes, but feeling that there was more to this... thing than met the eye. Death. Death brings me to..."your" realm. I have been here before, but never seen anyone. Not so much as a body. Who are you? Make yourself know.
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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 4:12 pm
The bodiless voice laughs, "A live one it seems. Who do you think you are giving me orders?" Just then several snakes whip out of the darknes and tie around both of Yuan's wrists as a second ties both his ankles together. Out of the shadows steps Orochimaru, "I can forgive you this time, boy. But it will cost you." Walks closer and pats Yuan's cheek, "This part of the afterlife is different than the part most visit...this part is normally locked away for those that would sell their soul for power...You must be such a child."
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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 4:19 pm
Yuan was rather surprised by the suddenness of the move. He hadn't expected snakes, although he probably should have going off of what little he had seen before. Whats it to you what kind of person I am? I do enjoy power, but what can you offer me? I am already working on a promising career in the world of the living, and I know how to return to life. So what more could you offer me?And what would you want to return.
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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 4:25 pm
"What could I offer you? Power...more of it than you could gain in that world of the leaving, something that will make you truely unique and powerful." Orochimaru walks away about twenty feet and turns to face Yuan again, "The cost is your soul. You must do as I command for the rest of your unnatural life, or till you find a away to remove the power I can grant." He then licks his lips, "Simply is it not, Boy." He watches Yuan for awhile and quietly lets him make his choice.
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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 4:33 pm
Yuan tilts his head slightly, seeming to think. Then he started talking. Almost appeared to be thinking out loud, but he may have been talking to the snake man. Well its an interesting offer. I always do want power, but i don't like being under control of others, especially others who I know nothing about. But I am willing to do anything for more power. But am I willing to give up my freedom. But then he said that there might be a way to break his hold on me. But how long will it take me to find that way? Would I mind serving under someone in order to gain incredible power? Can I trust him. Yuan was speaking so fast by the end that one might wonder if he was loosing his mind. Then his head snapped up to face Orochimaru. I'll do anything for power. Give me the power of which you speak! Yuan was smirking again.
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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 4:39 pm
Orochimaru's neck stretches out as his head rockets over biting Yuan in his neck. Where he bite becomes incrediblely painful as well as it seems using chakra hurts far more than usaual, "The pain will subside when you gain the power to control the mark." Orochimaru disappears as suddenly as her appeared and the snakes tying Yuan up poof as if they where no more than Kage Bushins. Quote: Yuan obtains the Darkness Curse Seal
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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 4:56 pm
GAAAAAAHHHHH!!! Yuan screamed as the fangs were removed from his neck. He could feel an energy surging through him. It hurt. Damn him! How long!?! How long until I can control this power!?! Yuan dropped to his knees as he clutched his neck. His senses were blurred, but he could tell that the snake-like man had disappeared. Who was he? What was he? How would he learn to use this power. Yuan suddenly doubled over as he felt the energy blending with his chakra. Slowly his breathing calmed and he rose again, scratching his neck. He could feel the energy now... it was his. Yuan smirked.
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Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 5:27 pm
Yuan made his way to the small town he had found on his last trip to the afterlife. If he was going to pass through this rather hard to get to location, he might as well as pick up a new jutsu. Yuan had found the seemingly abandoned town the last time he had died at the hands of Reina. Yuan wondered what was happening back in the leaf village. He had left Crius there with Reina and Drago. Yuan had recognized him when he reverted back to his human form. His mannerisms, his chakra. It all matched. Yuan had gotten very close and personal with Drago at his wedding... when he had tried to kill him. The blind were very good at recognizing voices, mannerisms, and energies that surround people, being as they couldn't see people's faces. And if that didn't sell him, it became obvious when Reina had shown up. The tears in her eyes had said alot, and the way the stranger seemed to dismiss her. It was apparent that he wanted her gone, and he wasn't planning on fighting her. Now why would that be when he had just mercilessly slaughtered a random shinobi? There was something special between the two of them. It had to be Drago. But it wouldn't benefit Yuan at all to release that information. Yuan wondered what exactly was going on with Drago. Why would he attack the Leaf village? Yuan had always figured him for a self-absorbed p***k...(a strong self-absorbed p***k) but he had never figured him for evil. Yuan sighed, reading the wall that had the jutsu scratched into it. After a few minutes, Yuan stood upright. He practiced making a few hand seals. (count: 91 cool
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 6:26 pm
:: Eluamous Nailo ::  Projecting his voice through thought speech, Eluamous glared towards the shadowed silhouette as he sighted it within the mists of Limbo, the suspension between life and death... Eluamous knew there was no point reaching for a weapon to fight something that was already dead, and also that chakra use was very limited within the Afterlife, as its use could deteriorate one's soul into nothing if the user lacked the proper control... Needless to say the only real option was fleeing if this figure was a threat... But if the shadowed silhouette could offer him his body back, as well as the chance to defeat a Kage in combat despite the power difference... then perhaps it would be worth it to hear what was offered... Quote: Eluamous Nailo - Word Count Before: 450 + This Post: 205 = New Total: 655
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 8:47 am
Sliver opened her eyes, and took in her surroundings. So this was the afterlife, the place where those who had died were sent? It was very different from the graveyard, although at some level, she could feel the familiarity of the place. Countless thousands of Slivers had died in other planes of existence, and many of those planes had a life after death. This one wasn't all that different in that regard, so she knew basically what was expected of her. Since she could still move, she'd wander around and wait until she could return to the land of the living. Perhaps there would be some new information in this realm her Queen would find worthwhile, so that her death wouldn't have been quite as pointless. She could feel her bond to her Queen, still, even after dieing. That was no surprise, she was ever just a part of her Queen, and even in death she'd serve her as best she could. She got up, and moved forward, noting with some degree of surprise that even in this refined state of death, she was still cursed with the awkwardly constructed bipedal form she'd taken in this plane. An annoyance, but nothing she could not overcome with perseverance. She'd grown used to the form somewhat during her experiences in this place, some more time with it would not cause any undue difficulties. She walked forward, looking around herself at the cold, gray, foggy landscape. Details were nearly impossible to make out, without drawing closer to them. She didn't do so, she was already far too familiar with how the graveyard works to risk anything so foolish as that. Instead, she continued walking, waiting until she saw a sign that would be recognized to all as a beacon of light, a path back to the land of the living. But so far, it eluded her. She began to grow slightly complacent, and since she was not reprimanded by her Queen, she didn't do anything to fix the situation. Perhaps that was why she strayed too close to a large patch of fog. Dangerously close. She entered into the foggy mass, slipping into it silently, no sound to mark her arrival. Even so, something within the fog seemed to recognize her presence almost immediately, and cause changes to happen to the immediate area. The fog slowly burned away, revealing a landscape from her memory. Or rather, from her Queen's memory. She herself had never been there, most of her Queen's children had never been there. But she recognized it all the same. It was Rath, and not the dungeons, either. The outside! It was an amazing place. The sky was a rich shade of cerulean blue, with a few scattered clouds moving along slowly yet still almost visibly moving. If one were to stare up at those fluffy white masses long enough, they would feel that they could track the movements of them, and perhaps gain secret knowledge by doing so. But not her. Her attention was directed lower, at the acres of soft grass that seemed to expand in all directions. It was soft underfoot, so she slipped off her cumbersome shoes. She marveled at the sheer degree of sensation her foot could feel, much more than what her natural form's lower extremities could. She wriggled her toes, and twitched as an unfamiliar sensation rushed through her. Trying it again, a strange half barking sound erupted unbidden from her mouth. After conferring with her Queen, she was told it was laughter, something that humans did when they were happy. Was she happy? She didn't think so, she still didn't feel emotions properly. But the sensation was a pleasant one regardless. (This post is 618 words. I had 2270 words in Hidden Void. That gives me 2888 words total. I now use 2000 for Jutsu Shou, leaving me 888 words for later use.)
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 10:08 am
Sliver's eyes opened. She felt calmer now, that frantic rushing around sensation had finally left. So she'd died again, it appeared. She could feel her Queen's annoyance, that had just been sloppy. She had to agree, she didn't know what she was thinking. Perhaps it was that new body, it had made her act unusually. Now she was rid of it, and that was good. Looking around, she was slightly dismayed not to see the landscape of Rath any longer. Just a long white hallway, full of glowing light. Without any other true option, she proceeded down it, until she, too, was enveloped by the light. She had the feeling that once she reached the end, everything would be alright. She'd be back in the world of the living, and she'd be content with her body this time. (This post is 138 words. I had 888 from before, and my posts in Void and Magic add an additional 362 words. That gives me a total of 1388. I use 1300 now, for Flying Thunder God, and I'll save the other 88 for later.)
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:00 pm
Akou Rose the Ichazuki to Akou Rose the Greek Akou crawls around the area to find a large house. He reaches up a tiny hand only to be met with an open door and a shadow cast over him. He gazes up to see a woman smiling. She lives up Akou and rocks him gently. She then shuts the door. Akou blinks a few time, eyes colorless, as he tugs at the woman white hair. She smiles and then looks him over with white eyes. “Poor child,” she sings. She rubs her hand through Akou’s hair that held no color either. “How did you get here?” Akou babbles before laughing at her. She sighs slightly and then disappears behind another door. “Child with colorless hair and eyes, who has no set name, who is alone; what are you thinking of?" The woman places a hand on Akou’s forehead as he stares up and her and does not move. “A starry eyed female with blond hair… the woman’s eyes turn from starry to a delicate sky blue often… the woman, her eyes blue, and a small baby with the same blond hair and blue eyes… rose petals in the alignment of a rose.” She bounces Akou as he laughs. “I will return you to Reina. She is the one I planned to be a part of as well. We will go together.” With that the area glows brightly then fades to show the woman with emotionless eyes. A puppet left to protect the Garden of Eden in her absence. Words = 249
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Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 11:19 am
GoldDragon1188 Projecting his voice through thought speech, Eluamous glared towards the shadowed silhouette as he sighted it within the mists of Limbo, the suspension between life and death... Eluamous knew there was no point reaching for a weapon to fight something that was already dead, and also that chakra use was very limited within the Afterlife, as its use could deteriorate one's soul into nothing if the user lacked the proper control... Needless to say the only real option was fleeing if this figure was a threat... But if the shadowed silhouette could offer him his body back, as well as the chance to defeat a Kage in combat despite the power difference... then perhaps it would be worth it to hear what was offered... "Child, do not fret. What I can give can even defeat gods if used to its fullest potential. As for your body, there is nothing I can do here," said a slithery voice as a figure, cloaked in shadows appeared behind Eluamous. "However, there will be conditions on if you are worthy of this power. My one and only condition is for your eternal loyalty to me after I give you this power. For after I give it to you, you will never be able to break that vow," said the voice, waiting for his answer.
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Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 12:02 pm
:: Eluamous Nailo ::  Eluamous felt the chills within the voice, eternal loyalty was a hefty price... But then again, loopholes did exist; and perhaps Eluamous was destined to turn this being away from a dark path; as that too would be considered loyalty to prevent the one who had given him the power from remaining trapped between life and death in an endless hell... Eluamous had seen the magnificent powers of Douka no Jutsu with his own eyes, the Terrorist having used it in order to become one with the wind, and later one with his own attack in order to defeat Eluamous... The plan would work... it had to work! Even if this being could not restore his body, the power in and of itself would be more than enough; it would ensure Eluamous had some energy, even trace amounts, to perform the jutsu as soon as he re-entered what remained of his body to prevent an instant death upon his ressurection. Quote: Eluamous Nailo - Word Count Before: 655 + This Post: 249 = New Total: 904
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