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 Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:39 am
It looks better. If it looks like a "wall of text" group more sentences together. Also, just because you make a long post doesn't mean it should be a wall of text. If it does look like one, either add dialogue or something else. Sometimes, maybe you're writing too much. Just learn to balance that.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:40 am
*Considers it* I put it on dark blue, for an easier read-but it looks black to me.
*Partially color blind* Things aren't as shiny and all that...luster.
*Ponders* I'm glad. Looks better without bold too? I had PUT bold on there because in the DT I used size nine, and was told bold makes smaller text easier to read. *Flails!*
I guess the proper alignment isn't too bad...I started using center to make my post look more spaced and less...wall...
But mostly-it's the lack of tabs. Drives me nuts. xD
My tags don't stick out much either-but I don't like cluttering tags that distract from the post, so oh well~
WELL OKAY. I'm happy to know it's easier to read and not a pain in the a**~
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:42 am
Maybe I am writing too much...but I like descriptions, so a reader can 'see' what's going on, how Arian's feeling, blah, blah, blah.
*Rubs forehead*
Kay.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:52 am
TyKat12 Maybe I am writing too much...but I like descriptions, so a reader can 'see' what's going on, how Arian's feeling, blah, blah, blah. *Rubs forehead* Kay. I very much enjoy that too. d(^_^)z
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The Female of the Species
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:57 am
Go nuts if you have to on descriptions. I'm just saying, not many people can do it right, so use it cautiously. If I'm going to read a long post, make me interested in its contents. Let me "feel" something.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:58 am
I like the new look Ty. If you're concerned about looking like a wall of text though then Vin gave a pretty good idea. But when you do that something else I think that really helps is trying to group sentences that all relate to a single topic into a single paragraph.
But either way you do it, I think it's fine. =D
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 9:14 am
*Listens and nods seriously* Thanks for the help!
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 9:52 am
Sometimes the character just isn't feeling that much. If you've already set the mood that your character's in a couple of posts ago, I guess I just don't really see the point on elaborating on it any further.
So don't feel bad if you can't get that extra two paragraphs, I'd rather have nothing there than a bunch of filler.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:03 am
Vintrict, anyway I can get a copy of the profile I sent to you and was approved? I have one, but I want to be sure of what I've got here, some minor details on weaponry and stuff.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:13 am
I just won the award for best intro post ever.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:17 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:20 am
It was pretty interesting. I should get to posting, though.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:33 am
*Blinks at her accepted profile*
...oh my...
*Cackles madly, runs off crazy like* Thanks!
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:55 am
We're feeling what now?
It doesn't sound like JUSTICE. And that's the only thing we should be feeling!
...Right?
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:57 am
Forget justice. I rather hear some INJUSTICE now.
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