Kazurama heard the knock at the door, probably good timing for his Jonin. Turning his head slightly he stared looking at the door. Long black tresses of hair slowly fell down into his face, covering his blue eye's from sight while he waited for the door to be opened. Finally his ears caught sound of a voice yelling from the other side of the door. Kazu's mind raced with what the genin would look like, well at least what he was wearing considering he claimed to be from the Aburame clan. Finally though having waited at least a few minutes for the door to open he slowly made his way towards the large doors, his chakra blade dissipated while the jonin gathered themselves and quickly hid within the shadows of the tower. Kazu pressed opened the door slowly allowing himself to be seen from the crack that he made; his blue eye's stared around the area seeing no one till he glanced down. A young boy, well he did say he was a genin; which means he must have just came from the academy. d say he was a genin; which means he must have just came from the academy. "Aburame...?" He questioned really to himself. Seeing most of the young boy's face which seemed unusual, well maybe he hadn't had that much training with the chakra consuming bugs. Kazu motioned him into the tower as the boy would hopefully follow. Kazu began to walk back towards his desk and large chair.
Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 3:19 pm
the iMAGE
Hello. emotion_kirakira Thank you for the accept. I hope this is okay.
"Kana! Why haven't you left yet?!" A thunderous voice ricocheted off the walls of the marginally small house. Kana was jolted from her sleep, having convinced herself that she had witnessed a small earthquake. She leapt from her bed and darted for the closet, determined not to fall victim to her mother's fury. She sloughed off her nightclothes and replaced them with her usual attire before disappearing into the confines of the bathroom. "My first day meeting my new team and I'm late! How could this happen? I didn't even hear my alarm go off!" Kana thought to herself, whilst dragging her toothbrush through her hair. She growled at her mistake and took the small brush out of her hair.
When Kana finally emerged from the bathroom looking less than presentable with her hair severely pulled back from her face. She bustled back into her room to attached her shuriken thigh holster and glimpsed the little clock by her bed. Kana stopped in her tracks. Her hands clenched and unclenched nervously. Kana stormed down the hall toward the kitchen.
"KAA-SAN!! I am not late! I'm early!" her voice was shrill, her expression was that of exasperation. Kana's mother was seated at the dining table calmly sorting through a large stack of papers, her expression was passive as she gazed at her daughter. "I didn't say you were late. I asked 'why haven't you left yet?'." A smile crept across her lips. "The correct answer would be, 'Because I still have time, mother'." The smile grew wider until pearly white teeth shone in the morning light. Kana stood still, her only movement was the exaggerated inhale and exhale of oxygen. Of course her mother had finished her work early, and of course she wanted to play a prank on her only daughter. It was plausible and she had felt for it completely. Kana turned to slump away, but was stopped by her mother's calloused hand holding her back. Her mother's hand shook with soft laughter and, despite being drained by this morning's escapade, Kana couldn't help but smile. "Come here. I'll fix your hair."
OCC: Hahaha, um. I might've gotten carried away. Sorry. I hope this is still okay. Sometimes I have trouble making paragraphs. sweatdrop
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Jak1Strider
yo, I haven't made a RPC yet but when I do his name will be Jak Strider
RP Sample
Jak slightly opens his eyes and is quickly blinded by then suns rays. Jak would then roll over in bed trying to block the rays of the sun from his eyes when he suddenly remembered it wasn't the weekend. He would then throw the covers off of him and jump out of his bed landing on the cold floor. He would then quickly walk over to his closet and grab hi normal clothes that he goes to school in and throws them on the bed and quickly starts taking off his PJs, and replaces them with his school clothes. He then walks over to his dresser and grabs his ninja pouch that was on top of it and would wrap it around his right leg. He didn't have any tools in it yet but he thought it made him look cool. Jak would then run out of his room and feel his foot hit something on the way out. He then heard a whistling sound and his reflexes took hold as he jumped back to see three kunai land in the spot he was standing. Jak would then hear someone clapping and turn to see his grandpa was the one clapping. "not to shabby, but your going to be late for school if you don hurt." Jaks grandpa would say with a grin on his fac. Jak didn't have time to argue as he ran to his houses window and slid it open and jumped out, heading for school. (sorry if its long I got caught up in the moment)
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Metal Trsu
Haven't made a Character but I have one in Mind.
Kazurama heard the knock at the door, probably good timing for his Jonin. Turning his head slightly he stared looking at the door. Long black tresses of hair slowly fell down into his face, covering his blue eye's from sight while he waited for the door to be opened. Finally his ears caught sound of a voice yelling from the other side of the door. Kazu's mind raced with what the genin would look like, well at least what he was wearing considering he claimed to be from the Aburame clan. Finally though having waited at least a few minutes for the door to open he slowly made his way towards the large doors, his chakra blade dissipated while the jonin gathered themselves and quickly hid within the shadows of the tower. Kazu pressed opened the door slowly allowing himself to be seen from the crack that he made; his blue eye's stared around the area seeing no one till he glanced down. A young boy, well he did say he was a genin; which means he must have just came from the academy. d say he was a genin; which means he must have just came from the academy. "Aburame...?" He questioned really to himself. Seeing most of the young boy's face which seemed unusual, well maybe he hadn't had that much training with the chakra consuming bugs. Kazu motioned him into the tower as the boy would hopefully follow. Kazu began to walk back towards his desk and large chair.
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Qyp Crew
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 12:14 am
hello my characters name is Kogaitchi was acapted in the the Village Hidden in the Mist
Sample: kogaitchi woke up in a very confused state. He was in between the real world
and his dream world where both collide. He had no idea what was real and what
was not. his dream was still hunting him making his heart race. but as he sat
there the more reality crept on him. the room started to come in to all thought
there was nothing to look at. It was all familiar witch allowed his heart to stop
racing. allowing him to think clearly. One question came to mind what was he
doing, What was he going to do now.
i hope i did good
Posted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 9:35 pm
Sakurayuki watched as Jinichi hauled in the fish. The ones in this particular ocean were quite big in size, not to mention strong as well. She didn't think she'd be able to handle them as well as her partner did, never mind the other Hoshigaki member of their team who seemed to simply flick them on to the boat. This mission would be a great chance to learn from all of them, even if they were still technically on a mission. Yuki floated on the water a bit before diving back in. The other team was done with their haul, so all they needed was one more on her part before they were all done. She highly doubted they needed all 6 fish, since one looked big enough to feed two, really, but Sakura dived in again nevertheless to chase her last bit of prey. It was a bit hard to find, but she quickly spotted one nearby the craggy rocks, and she again started her chase to push it up to the surface.
It took a while, but Yuki got her job done.
"Here, catch!" she called out as she broke the surface of the water as well.
Good enough? wink
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Posted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 10:29 pm
XxDylanRxX
hello my characters name is Kogaitchi was acapted in the the Village Hidden in the Mist
Sample: kogaitchi woke up in a very confused state. He was in between the real world
and his dream world where both collide. He had no idea what was real and what
was not. his dream was still hunting him making his heart race. but as he sat
there the more reality crept on him. the room started to come in to all thought
there was nothing to look at. It was all familiar witch allowed his heart to stop
racing. allowing him to think clearly. One question came to mind what was he
doing, What was he going to do now.
i hope i did good
Fix capitalization, and general grammar, then resubmit. Also, remove the spaces between lines, they're necessary.
Isolesty
Sakurayuki watched as Jinichi hauled in the fish. The ones in this particular ocean were quite big in size, not to mention strong as well. She didn't think she'd be able to handle them as well as her partner did, never mind the other Hoshigaki member of their team who seemed to simply flick them on to the boat. This mission would be a great chance to learn from all of them, even if they were still technically on a mission. Yuki floated on the water a bit before diving back in. The other team was done with their haul, so all they needed was one more on her part before they were all done. She highly doubted they needed all 6 fish, since one looked big enough to feed two, really, but Sakura dived in again nevertheless to chase her last bit of prey. It was a bit hard to find, but she quickly spotted one nearby the craggy rocks, and she again started her chase to push it up to the surface.
It took a while, but Yuki got her job done.
"Here, catch!" she called out as she broke the surface of the water as well.
Good enough? wink
You copied and posted that, please submit your own material.
Posted: Wed Feb 12, 2014 2:57 am
Gideon Commando
Isolesty
Sakurayuki watched as Jinichi hauled in the fish. The ones in this particular ocean were quite big in size, not to mention strong as well. She didn't think she'd be able to handle them as well as her partner did, never mind the other Hoshigaki member of their team who seemed to simply flick them on to the boat. This mission would be a great chance to learn from all of them, even if they were still technically on a mission. Yuki floated on the water a bit before diving back in. The other team was done with their haul, so all they needed was one more on her part before they were all done. She highly doubted they needed all 6 fish, since one looked big enough to feed two, really, but Sakura dived in again nevertheless to chase her last bit of prey. It was a bit hard to find, but she quickly spotted one nearby the craggy rocks, and she again started her chase to push it up to the surface.
It took a while, but Yuki got her job done.
"Here, catch!" she called out as she broke the surface of the water as well.
Good enough? wink
You copied and posted that, please submit your own material.
I forgot to mention, sorry. This is my mule. (waves) I still wrote that thing, but if you want me to I can still re-write something else entirely? xd
Kazuma woke up early one day ready to start his training at the Ninja Academy. He was excited to start his journey as a Ninja, though a long way to go Kazuma had a plan and dream to reach the top. But at the very least getting out of bed to start his first day was a good first step. As he drew the covers off he went to his dresser to get out of his white a-shirt and white pajama bottoms to pull out a black t-shirt and black jogging pants with a change of sock and underwear. He went to the bathroom to due his usual routine of using the toilet, take a shower, dressing into his clean clothes then brushing his teeth. He then heard his mother calling to him for breakfast. It was the usual of ham, eggs, and rice. This eating regiment was an every morning thing because his mom didn't know how to cook anything else. Plus he didn't mind much about it at all plus it allowed him to stay more quite. Though very young and not quite smart he kept quite to hide this small little drawback. He just ate it as usual gave his mom a good bye kiss and then rushed off to start his training as soon as he could.
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Page 99. wink Though looking at it, I could so much better than that... -looks at his sample rp brewing for his Senju Clan app- Nah, this should be sufficient and posting that will probably call for needing to draft a new one. sweatdrop
[I haven't made a character yet, so go ahead and read about the brainchild I just made up.]
Sori did a flip and a twist and a mid-air jumping jack and consequently fell on her butt on the way down.
"Owww," she whined, as she got back up. She dusted herself off and stood for a while, just listening to the sound of herself breathing and the sounds of the forest coming alive around her. She was in a secluded training field, and the sun was just starting to peek over the treetops. The sky was a mellow blue, with a woolly cloud here and there. It was a beautiful day, and here Sori was trying to do a move that was way too hard for her. Why would anyone want to do a jumping jack in mid-air, anyway?
She gave a frustrated yell and threw her hands into her black hair. If there was anything to kick, she would have kicked it. She knew the reason why her sensei had given her this stupid move to practice, and that was to make her better at taijutsu, since her body couldn't follow her ninjutsu and maybe because she might kind of be a wimp. Perhaps something this ridiculous was going to save her life one day, or make her less of a wimp.
Sori pulled her fingers away from her scalp and took two deep, calming breaths.
'Here I go again.'
Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2014 7:59 pm
Kitty_Kat_Hyro
[I haven't made a character yet, so go ahead and read about the brainchild I just made up.]
Sori did a flip and a twist and a mid-air jumping jack and consequently fell on her butt on the way down.
"Owww," she whined, as she got back up. She dusted herself off and stood for a while, just listening to the sound of herself breathing and the sounds of the forest coming alive around her. She was in a secluded training field, and the sun was just starting to peek over the treetops. The sky was a mellow blue, with a woolly cloud here and there. It was a beautiful day, and here Sori was trying to do a move that was way too hard for her. Why would anyone want to do a jumping jack in mid-air, anyway?
She gave a frustrated yell and threw her hands into her black hair. If there was anything to kick, she would have kicked it. She knew the reason why her sensei had given her this stupid move to practice, and that was to make her better at taijutsu, since her body couldn't follow her ninjutsu and maybe because she might kind of be a wimp. Perhaps something this ridiculous was going to save her life one day, or make her less of a wimp.
Sori pulled her fingers away from her scalp and took two deep, calming breaths.
Kimiko sat in front of the computer screen, its soft, white, glow was the only thing illuminating her room at this odd hour of the morning. For some reason her body had chosen to wake her up at six o'clock, a mere five hours after she had laid her head down and prayed for the sweet recuperating powers of sleep to overtake her body and help her forget the pain. However, between the massive bruising on her side and the laceration from her mentor that had been tightly bound up, her body decided that even sleep was to painful to continue, and her mind supported its argument by making sure that once she had laid there for a bit she would finally register that there was no hope of returning to the land of slumber.
And thus there she was, staring at pages upon pages of data. The recent raiding of other lands had yielded them greater technology. Digitized scrolls made accessing jutsu easier. Unfortunately for most they were only the most basic of techniques, but for beginners like her they were a start. She scrolled through page after page of text looking for some kind of guide to healing. She thought that it was wonderful that she would never know what it was like to have a broken bone for very long, but the rest of the wound hurt like hell. As she reached the bottom of the page she found no such technique available on the list and lifted herself from the chair to power down the machine. After pressing her thumb into the button for a few minutes she stumbled out into the family room to find a large portion of the clan awake. From here she could better understand why, the rain that in her room had sounded like a rhythmic instrument was louder out here. The sound of it beating against the ground was so terribly loud with the open door that her young ears felt like they would pop. And then they did, but she could still hear, and suddenly it wasn't so loud anymore. She hobbled into the center of the room to sit at the family able with her mentor and he reached over to her, hand glowing green, and pressed it to her wound. It began to stitch itself shut. The bruising remained, but he undid the beginnings of her bandages and said, "You don't need to wear those anymore young one." She nodded to him and closed her robe, uncomfortable with his touch. Thank you Uncle, she said as she stood and returned to her room.
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 8:53 am
Fishicks
Kimiko sat in front of the computer screen, its soft, white, glow was the only thing illuminating her room at this odd hour of the morning. For some reason her body had chosen to wake her up at six o'clock, a mere five hours after she had laid her head down and prayed for the sweet recuperating powers of sleep to overtake her body and help her forget the pain. However, between the massive bruising on her side and the laceration from her mentor that had been tightly bound up, her body decided that even sleep was to painful to continue, and her mind supported its argument by making sure that once she had laid there for a bit she would finally register that there was no hope of returning to the land of slumber.
And thus there she was, staring at pages upon pages of data. The recent raiding of other lands had yielded them greater technology. Digitized scrolls made accessing jutsu easier. Unfortunately for most they were only the most basic of techniques, but for beginners like her they were a start. She scrolled through page after page of text looking for some kind of guide to healing. She thought that it was wonderful that she would never know what it was like to have a broken bone for very long, but the rest of the wound hurt like hell. As she reached the bottom of the page she found no such technique available on the list and lifted herself from the chair to power down the machine. After pressing her thumb into the button for a few minutes she stumbled out into the family room to find a large portion of the clan awake. From here she could better understand why, the rain that in her room had sounded like a rhythmic instrument was louder out here. The sound of it beating against the ground was so terribly loud with the open door that her young ears felt like they would pop. And then they did, but she could still hear, and suddenly it wasn't so loud anymore. She hobbled into the center of the room to sit at the family able with her mentor and he reached over to her, hand glowing green, and pressed it to her wound. It began to stitch itself shut. The bruising remained, but he undid the beginnings of her bandages and said, "You don't need to wear those anymore young one." She nodded to him and closed her robe, uncomfortable with his touch. Thank you Uncle, she said as she stood and returned to her room.
xNanahara puffed out her cheeks, sighing deeply as her eyes furiously blinked back the whirlwind of dirt that her training had just made, seemingly spontaneously, appear. After the dust finally cleared, Nanahara was left flat on her back and covered head to toe in dirt, the girl groaned; her body exploding with pain as she tried to move; finally registering the injuries sustained from falling off the top of a tree. Jeez Nanahara, get your stuff together, why can't you run up the side of a measly tree, huh? The thought ran through the woman's mind before quickly dispersing; replaced with a more 'stop the pain' path of mind. Even if more cursing was probably being used. Shakily, Nanahara sat up, trying to keep her groaning to a minimum; she would hate to get caught out of the house by her step-father, especially if he figured out what she was up to, oh man it wouldn't have been pretty. It wouldn't have been impossible either, since the girl is such a dunce and she decided to only a couple hundred feet outside of her house to practice controlling her chakra; even after her step-father explicitly told her not to do so.
xThe trees rustled lightly as a small breeze wafted into the glen, gently brushing Nanahara's short hair in all directions. She just sighed once more, slowly getting to her feet and doing her best to remain quiet as she did her best to brush the grime off her clothes. Doing so raised up another small dust cloud, and however hard she tried, Nanahara couldn't resist letting out a loud and sharp cough; her eyes widening to the size of saucers as she did so. It felt like her heart was going to pound out of her chest, and she did her best to scamper a little bit deeper inside of the woods, however, she was still hurting quite a bit: she didn't manage to get very far. 'Nanahara. Nanahara! Calm down! Breathe, c'mon girlie, breathe, you're not going to get caught. It's not like devil-dad heard a measly little cough, calm the heck down,' The girl's quick and calming thoughts soothed her slightly: she leaned against a tree for support. The bark was rough against the scratched, bare skin of her forearm, and while it felt normal: there was still something slightly... off about it.
xNanahara's eyes widened, as a lone and terrifying thought popped into her mind. 'Genjutsu,' She almost mouthed the word as she slowly turned around in absolute terror.
xIt seemed her stepfather had caught her after all.
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