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 Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:55 pm
Akuyoko Lifeless-Fox Seaphron Drakam I swear has to be one of my favorite characters. Nice work on the chapter btw. And Foxly? How about that bulky bandit? wink Hah, I killed your friend.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:59 pm
Lifeless-Fox Akuyoko Lifeless-Fox Seaphron Drakam I swear has to be one of my favorite characters. Nice work on the chapter btw. And Foxly? How about that bulky bandit? wink Hah, I killed your friend. Eh, he deserved it. It's Forsaken that decided to kill me scream (Just kidding, FS)
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:19 am
The new chapters were really good, I find myself wanting more. I like the fact that in each chapter you explain a bit about each character. Enjoying reading this . xd
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:01 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:29 pm
Nice, not much to say other than I like it. You really don't give much to complain about, the only thing I don't really care for is how at the end of a chapter, you'll say that a certain enemy was a Cultie, which changes my complete perspective on that character.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:32 pm
Meta Fish Nice, not much to say other than I like it. You really don't give much to complain about, the only thing I don't really care for is how at the end of a chapter, you'll say that a certain enemy was a Cultie, which changes my complete perspective on that character. Yeah, I've been thinking of removing the guest appearances, I only add them so that even more culties can have a role (everyone wants one sweatdrop ). Also, you don't have to find something to complain about, I also like to hear about which bits people liked etc.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:41 pm
Right, right. I understand the part about the Culties, but I mean, it doesn't really bare any resemblance to them at all, and it's unneeded. If they want to be in a Cult story, go ask someone else, because that isn't what your Cult story is for. And you're right, I shouldn't just look for bad parts. Your story is really good, I can't really find one thing to focus on, and say that it's good or bad, which is an even better thing.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:52 pm
I love it .It is really interesting reading.I look forward to the next chapter.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:53 pm
Diana Godstone I love it .It is really interesting reading.I look forward to the next chapter. xd Thanks for reading, much appreciated. @Fish: Yeah, you make a fair point. I think I will probably remove guest appearances.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:51 pm
Really great chapter, that has too be one of my favorites yet.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:02 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:07 pm
I really, really liked this chapter, but probably because it was about Christina and I. Well written, I love hearing what someone saying, and what they're thinking, too. Well done.
Hopefully Ms. Carol feels the same way towards Fisher. =o
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:11 pm
Meta Fish I really, really liked this chapter, but probably because it was about Christina and I. Well written, I love hearing what someone saying, and what they're thinking, too. Well done. Hopefully Ms. Carol feels the same way towards Fisher. =o Well, I just hope Fisher gets the strength to tell her how he feels. There's nothing worse than wasting years alone that could be spent together.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:14 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Meta Fish I really, really liked this chapter, but probably because it was about Christina and I. Well written, I love hearing what someone saying, and what they're thinking, too. Well done. Hopefully Ms. Carol feels the same way towards Fisher. =o Well, I just hope Fisher gets the strength to tell her how he feels. There's nothing worse than wasting years alone that could be spent together. I hear that. Go Fisher, go! >w<
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:15 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Well, I just hope Fisher gets the strength to tell her how he feels. There's nothing worse than wasting years alone that could be spent together. I know that feeling crying , great chapter.
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