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 Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:30 pm
ACTIONY.
Is the noble's name based off of Romeo and Juliet, by any chance?
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:26 pm
Betman ACTIONY.
Is the noble's name based off of Romeo and Juliet, by any chance?
Yep. Montague and Capulet. We're reading it in English.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 3:42 pm
Chapter Eleven is up. Commence comments, criticism, etc.
Is it just me or does this chapter look shorter compared to the rest?
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 3:48 pm
Oh snap.
O:
Oversized Clothes FTW.
Poor assassin. And Betman.
Great chapter.
Seemed shorter, though.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 3:50 pm
Lifeless-Fox Oh snap.
O:
Oversized Clothes FTW.
Poor assassin. And Betman.
Great chapter.
Seemed shorter, though. Yeah, I thought it looked short.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 4:15 pm
I liked the overall chapter, I couldn't help but think Vegas interrogation in the chapter though. Very nice addition with the betman and soul Angle, and the end was damn near perfect to signify what is soon to come. very good chapter, although it seemed shorter it was still really good, perfect length for what you wrote
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 5:15 pm
Great chapter Masamune. Betman is going insane. Maybe we get to see a killing spree or something. And I still have no idea who the assassin is based off of.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 5:16 pm
Demonix13 Great chapter Masamune. Betman is going insane. Maybe we get to see a killing spree or something. And I still have no idea who the assassin is based off of. don't say killing spree
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 5:33 pm
Sauvie I liked the overall chapter, I couldn't help but think Vegas interrogation in the chapter though. Very nice addition with the betman and soul Angle, and the end was damn near perfect to signify what is soon to come. very good chapter, although it seemed shorter it was still really good, perfect length for what you wrote I am glad you posted before me, saved me the time of having to write my own when I thought the same.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 5:34 pm
Seaphron Sauvie I liked the overall chapter, I couldn't help but think Vegas interrogation in the chapter though. Very nice addition with the betman and soul Angle, and the end was damn near perfect to signify what is soon to come. very good chapter, although it seemed shorter it was still really good, perfect length for what you wrote I am glad you posted before me, saved me the time of having to write my own when I thought the same.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 5:40 pm
Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie I liked the overall chapter, I couldn't help but think Vegas interrogation in the chapter though. Very nice addition with the betman and soul Angle, and the end was damn near perfect to signify what is soon to come. very good chapter, although it seemed shorter it was still really good, perfect length for what you wrote I am glad you posted before me, saved me the time of having to write my own when I thought the same. rofl
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 4:50 am
Demonix13 Great chapter Masamune. Betman is going insane. Maybe we get to see a killing spree or something. And I still have no idea who the assassin is based off of. The name of the assassin Imade up.us He's loosely based off of an enemy in Way of the Samurai 2.
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:49 pm
Sorry about the delay. I was visiting family for a few days. I'll update soon.
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 5:51 pm
I will update it soon. I've already started working on the new chapter. (I had to look through my Gamecube games for inspiration.)
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:31 pm
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