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Gaia Name: Darth_Amidala
Character Name: Rhiannon Kateera
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Race: Human
Character Description: Average height(about 5'5") Blonde hair that is lightly curly. She has vivid blue eyes that show all of her emotions.

Home Planet: Naboo
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: A brother and a sister
Character History Born into a very loving family, Rhia was very happy as a child. She was privately taught along with her older sister and younger brother. She was very opinionated even at a young age and was often found argueing political issues with her sister.
Both of her parents were politically active. They themeselves were not politicians, they were advisors for the queen. The family sort of revolved around the different actions going on in Theed.
When Rhia was about thirteen her parents went missing. Search parties were sent out searching planets as far out as Tatooine. Despite the frequent efforts her parents were never found, however, there was a clue as to where they were. A pen that belonged to Mr. Kateera was found in a lodge in the lake country. Rhia would hold onto this to remember the loving family she once had.
The three siblings were moved to the very homeless shelter that their parents used to work at. Rhia's sister continued on with an education in a school a block away from the shelter, her brother started studying to become an acrchitect, and Rhia decided to enter into politics like her father.
She started by studying the different fields of politics located on just Naboo, but she did not want to stay on her beloved planet. She wanted to be heard by many people from all across the galaxy. She wanted to be a senator.


Alignment: Republic
Occupation Senator
Skills: Extremely articulate and is rather good at getting her way in politics

Weapons: A Naboo pistol which she hides beneath her clothes
Ship Naboo Skiff
Personal Belongings: A pen that belonged to her father

Roleplay Sample

*gazing at the holographic image of her sister*"I can't come home Sis. I have important business I have to do here in the senate."

"I don't care Rhia! Your brother and I miss you. We haven't seen you in at least two months."

Rhia looked away from her sister's pleading face, "I just can't Sis. I'm sorry."
And she found she really meant it.

"Alright, but I still can't see why "the senate" is more important than your family"

"But..." before Rhia could counter her sister's statement her image flickered away. She bowed her head. Had it really been two months since she had last seen her family? She looked over at the many scattered papers on her desk. She knew she had important work to do but she couldn't bring herself to do it.
I am helping many people by doing what I do! She told herself, and she believed it to. Looking back at the spot where her sisters image had been, however, she found herself blinking back tears.

accepted
-MrM

Fixed it is it any better im actually a great rper but at times i just miss the guidelines sory sweatdrop


I'm going to say. NO. I'm basically going to reiterate what Maniac has already told you. That roleplaying sample SUCKS. no description, punctuation is moderaly bad ... ok HORRIFIC. The character really has no thought in it and your roleplay sample has no description or depth.
Do it again but do it better.~~~~ Krome_Devil

Gaia Name: x_Faithless_x
Character Name: Venok Lycal
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Race: Human
Character Description: Standing 5' 8, he has dark green eyes, light brown hair, a full beard, and a mild tan. He is fit for his age but doesn't have such a built figure. His hair goes down to his shoulder, looking scruffy in a way. The only mark he has is a scar going from his left cheek down to his neck.

Home Planet: Coruscant
Starting Planet:Coruscant
Relations: None
Character History
Only a few years after birth, Venro was given away to the jedi temple because his family could not continue to care for him. He was taken in and trained by a jedi knight until his master's death on a mission he knew would be suicide. He remains a padawan, in search of a new master, though he is blinded by emotions, he tries to keep himself in balance for there is no emotion...there is peace.


Alignment: Republic
Occupation Jedi
Skills: Piloting
Force sensitive
Computer use

Weapons: An old training lightsaber
ShipAn average X-wing
Personal Belongings: An Astrodriod [R4]

Roleplay Sample

The sound of burning metal was heard as the young jedi,Venro, cut threw the cargo hold doors. Im in
he informed his master through the com link he held. He began searching through cargo for the missing datapads of Master Varko, opening container after container, to find nothing but old blasters and a few medi packs.
Hands up jedi !
An emperial gaurd stood by the sliced cargo doors, blaster rifle at hand, aiming directly at Venro. He slowly lifted his hands and turned around, This should be easy enough he thought to himself.
Now then, you are to come with us to b........
Before the gaurd could finish his sentence, Venro had already managed to leap behined the gaurd, ignite his lightsaber, and have it held to the gaurds neck.
Could you please put down your blaste.....
His words were soon inturupted by the sound of blasters coming from behined. He turned around to see five more gaurds trying to shot him down. Managing to take out two by deflecting the shots back at them, he then grabed the first gaurd and held him hostage.
I will kill him if...
they had already begon to shot at the gaurd before he could finish his words.
well thats not very nice
He lept towards them, cutting one down as he fell, then tackling another to the wall, he then deflected a few more blaster shots, coming from the last standing gaurd, before he came in for the kill, cutting off his arms, then one clean cut through the neck.
How rude
he noticed the tackled gaurd trying to get up, knocking him out by a good kick in the face.
Now then, time to continue the search

*Sighs* Ok, the character wasn't bad, though you don't have a lightsaber yet. You have to wait until you get some training to recieve one. However you need to learn to spell or spell check. (Hint: it's spelled GUARD) You need to learn to capitalize consistently and to use punctuation and sentence structure. (Hint#2: If a sentence has SIX commas, that's too much. Separate it into three or four sentences.) Accepted, just make sure to work on that. ~~~~~Krome_Devil

Gaia Name: neoboy300
Character Name: Kazanukari
Gender: male
Age: 14
Race: trandoshan
Character Description: a red trandoshan that wears a black jedi cloak with a hood covering his eyes but he can see through it

Home Planet: Tatooine
Starting Planet: coruscant
Relations: none that he knows of
Character History He was adopted by human parents. When he was three, imperial officers came to his house for his parents. They were jedi so they fought back. One surviving storm trooper called for reinforcments and 7 dropships came. After awhile they killed his parents before his very eyes. He was hiding under the couch, idioticly they did not see him. He was found by a jedi who then taught him the way of the force.

Alignment: neutral
Occupation jedi
Skills: He is an excellent pilot and spends most of his time crafting armor and weapons to sell.

Weapons: red double bladed lightsaber (like in my siggy)
Ship: Jedi Starfighter
Personal Belongings: His necklace of a lightsaber his mother gave him when he was 2.

Roleplay Sample

Kazanukari walks into a cantina and sits at the bar.

"hello sir" the bartender said "watcha want?"

"just a glass of water" kazanukari said

"a glass of water at a cantina?" the bartender asked

"too young to drink" kazanukari said as storm troopers walked in

"hey you" one of the storm troopers yelled to kazanukari "get up and come here"

kazanukari just sat there

the storm storm troopers pointed their guns at him "get up or else......"

"or else wat?" kazanukari said

"we will shoot you" the storm trooper said as he shot som1 in the cantina

after he shot the man kazanukari whiped out his lightsaber

"he is a jedi! kill him!" they started shooting at him

kazanukari was deflecting as many shots as he could back to them and eventually killing them all "clean this up....." he said to the bartender as he left


Look at your keyboard closely. See that button on the lefthand side? It's right below the "Caps Lock" button and right above the "ctrl" button. It's called a SHIFT key. It makes capital letters. Don't worry if you're scared to press it, there's another one on the other side of your keyboard right under the "enter" key. USE IT.

Your history was so typical it was redundantly boring. Your character was not ... bad. Though you can't have a lightsaber yet because you need to be trained.

Your roleplay sample... well... erm.... to put it bluntly... it sucked. Seriously. I could put my cat on the keyboard and I might have gotten a better roleplay sample. I'm not even going to bother ripping it apart. It's simply not acceptable.
Do it again but do it better.~~~~Krome_devil

Gaia Name:cloudstriferedeemed.
Character Name: Chrono.
Gender: male.
Age: 25.
Race: human.
Character Description: has spikey blond hair, blue eyes, and black leather like clothes on.

Home Planet: tatooine
Starting Planet: naboo
Relations: was raised by his mom and dad.
Character History:was raised by his mother and father when he was born on tatooine. As a adult he got in interest of becoming a mercenary and did so. Now he travels from planet to planet looking for mercenaric jobs to do. He is also quite skilled as a mercernary, too.
Alignment: light.
Occupation rogue when not in training with people. sort of a mercenary as well.
Skills: he has engineer skills and mercenary combat skills.

Weapons: blaster pistol, viroblade, (if thats how you spell that.) blastor rifle.
Ship called the oblivion
Personal Belongings: black clothes, and black shoes.



ROLEPLAY SAMPLE:As Chrono sits at his desk working for the military as a mercenary which was his main job, a man with white clothes on, long brown hair, and a grey beard, comes into the room. " Sir, I believe we have spotted the federation ships closing in on this position. We await your orders, sir." Said the long haired man. "Thanks, soldier. Your dismissed." Said Chrono as he got up from his desk and headed to the ship dock. This otta be pretty interesting. Lets see what the enemy has in store for us this time. Thought Chrono as he continued on towards the ship dock. little did he know, was that the federation leader was on this federation armada, fully ready to greet him for what Chrono did to him so long ago. As he runs towards his ship and jumps in, little does he expect what dangers await him in this battle, as well a what awaits him in if he survives this battlwe, for if he does there is a whole new journey for him to take that will be far more treachourouse. This is his story.(note: this is only a sample RP. There will be more like this later.))

Gaia Name: Elladan kenet
Character Name: Eldin Thorst
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: Corellian Human
Character Description: Much like my avatar. Long, silver hair, silver eyes, pale skin. Wears a black jedi tunic similar to Anakin's.

Home Planet: Corellia
Starting Planet: Corellia
Relations: He's kin to the owners of Corellia City Security Force, the official police of Correlia's capital. At a very young age, he was taught how to wield and fire blasters with expert precision.
Character History Not much. He was bornm lived with his family in Corellia, learning to operate and use various weapns, until the Jedi identified him as force-applicable. He has been with the Jedi ever since (Apprentice, soon to be Khight, I am aiming for. I need a Master).

Alignment: Jedi
Occupation Jedi Apprentice/Marksman
Skills: Saber skills, mainly.

Weapons: A green-bladed lightsaber, and a modified T-16 Heavy Blaster with laser-sighting.
Ship He's allowed to own a modified Jedi Starfight his parents lent him. Called the JAVELLIN, it has hyperdrive, dual laser cannons, heavy shields, astromech socket, AND a backseat (for his Master).
Personal Belongings: Besides his lightsaber and the JAVELLIN, he owns

Roleplay Sample

Eldin dodged the training droid as it sliced downward on the spot where he was. The red blade hissed, a Eldin cut horizontilly, meeting the blade. The droid pushed forward, its mechanical reflexes and strength easing it on, but no match for The Force.
Eldin, spun around the red blade, quickally turning off and turning back on his own, and he severed the enemy lightsaber in less than a second. The Whirlwind Technique.
But there was no time for celebration. Not only did the droid pull out a second lightsaber, but another droid came from the rear, with two of the blades. Eldin jumped aside as the two droid colided, then turned on Thorst.
"Aw comeon, these odds are stupid." He reached out for the wall. Three more droids popped out from their holders, and ignited blue lightsabers.
"Now, that's more like it."
The first two droids were by him now, and Eldin met all three lightsabers with his own. They pushed on him, following the Brutal style they were programmed to be fighting in, but instead of pushing back, Eldin ducked, rolled under neath them, and sliced their legs in half. The two droids fell, but Eldin had little time to recover, as the other three descended on him.
The leftmost of the three leapt, and dove at him, while the other two came from the sides. "Hmm, Raptor Maneuver," he smirked. Eldin lept back, allowing the droids to clash, then ran up to engage them in a flurry of blue and blue and blue and green energy. Eldin parried their attacks using a Windmill Skill, then thrusted, and ruined one of the lightsabers. One down.
Of course, just because they lacked lightsabers, didn't mean they were finished. Still battling with two sabers, the two sliced robots, and the unbroken one without a sword, tried to gang up on him. Eldin used a simple Force push to knock back the two able warriors, then used his blade to shread to pieces the three handicapped robots.
Three down.
Now, with just two robots, it was ridiculously easy. Lunge, parry, dodge, reverse, slice, uppercut, lightsaber cloven in two, repeat process. It was too simple. In three minutes, both robots lost their lightsabers, and their arms.. Another slice later, and their circuits were severed. they fell in a heap.
Eldin dusted off his black tunic, and threw his hair back. He looked around at the pile of debris. 'I suppose I must clean up now."

Exept for the fact that perhaps using colors in RP, for example, making the statements colored, which will make it more readable, I have little to comment here. Just don't use the saber before being in the jedi temple ^^
-Accepted! MrM