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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 6:02 am
ivory_vamp Rhunon Tatsuhiko RP Sample Rhunon entered the acadamy doors wondering wait this day holds for him. As he entered his first class his mind was jumpinig with anticipation. This was the day he would master his Shadow Clone Jutsu. He was ready to grduate and handle his first assignment. Short, yet literate. In posts like these, you should give them a little more. Do one more.One more sample? :3
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Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 1:28 pm
Hey, I didn't know I was supposed to post here until I got yelled at... So anyway I already know about RPing so can i graduate? My name is Sinel, that is the only info I can give right now.
RP sample:
Sinel was walkign through the forest on the outskirts of the village. He was just walking until he sensed that he was being hunted. He quickened his pace. Finally he got tired of running and turned in time to dodge a flying shuriken. Armed simply with his few shuriken, and fire jutsus he had to fight, or he would die.
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Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 9:03 pm
zell77230 Hey, I didn't know I was supposed to post here until I got yelled at... So anyway I already know about RPing so can i graduate? My name is Sinel, that is the only info I can give right now. RP sample: Sinel was walkign through the forest on the outskirts of the village. He was just walking until he sensed that he was being hunted. He quickened his pace. Finally he got tired of running and turned in time to dodge a flying shuriken. Armed simply with his few shuriken, and fire jutsus he had to fight, or he would die. Mmm...your literacy is fine and will work for now. >.> I would, however, suggest changing up your sentence structures a bit. You start all of your sentences almost exactly the same. Oh. And length...Remember, children! Details are your friends! So...Let me see another post with some variety and length. ^^ I'm sure you'll have no problems with this as you appear to be fairly literate.
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 8:48 am
Zineal wants to make sure I can RP for a Jounin level character so here it goes.
RP example:
Iishiro sighed as he pulled out a kunai. In times like this he always wondered how in the world he managed to pass the Chuunin exam. He wasn't the best student, he was never really skilled, and now he was told he would be becoming a Jounin? It just didn't make sense to him. Making some hand signs he let out another sigh, "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" Two shadow clones appeared on either side of him. He nodded his head and they went out on opposite sides of the rock with him going over in the middle. He would try his hardest because the last thing he wanted to do was let Amekage-sama down.
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 9:55 am
Cross_revert Zineal wants to make sure I can RP for a Jounin level character so here it goes. RP example: Iishiro sighed as he pulled out a kunai. In times like this he always wondered how in the world he managed to pass the Chuunin exam. He wasn't the best student, he was never really skilled, and now he was told he would be becoming a Jounin? It just didn't make sense to him. Making some hand signs he let out another sigh, "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" Two shadow clones appeared on either side of him. He nodded his head and they went out on opposite sides of the rock with him going over in the middle. He would try his hardest because the last thing he wanted to do was let Amekage-sama down. I think that's perfectly adequate for jounin level. 3nodding So...Pass!
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:21 pm
((I really want to join a town, but Cerbi said I had to go here, first... Sooo...))
Hiro walked cautiously though the room, knowing morbidly that there could be traps laid in any step of the room. He was carefully looking at the ground as he walked, looking for the slightest indentation in the rug of the halls. He noticed he had bumped into somthing, a big 'somthing'. He slowly looked up to see a hulking brute of a man, who seemed to almost hit the ten foot ceiling with his head he adorned a huge crimson cape that tore at the bottom, and black battlemail. With a gasp, Hiro got into a defensive position, waiting for the man to strike first, and fingered a kunai behind his back.
"Come on, Tiny! Let's have at it!"
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 12:36 am
Brennan(0.0) ((I really want to join a town, but Cerbi said I had to go here, first... Sooo...)) Hiro walked cautiously though the room, knowing morbidly that there could be traps laid in any step of the room. He was carefully looking at the ground as he walked, looking for the slightest indentation in the rug of the halls. He noticed he had bumped into somthing, a big 'somthing'. He slowly looked up to see a hulking brute of a man, who seemed to almost hit the ten foot ceiling with his head he adorned a huge crimson cape that tore at the bottom, and black battlemail. With a gasp, Hiro got into a defensive position, waiting for the man to strike first, and fingered a kunai behind his back. "Come on, Tiny! Let's have at it!" Pass! I love your use of detail. Very nice. 3nodding
Also! For all of those who I told to make longer posts! I've decided that this is only supposed to be a sample, not your masterpiece. So as long as I approved your literacy, you're good to go. If you're not sure please ask.
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 1:32 pm
I'm not sure if I am suppose to have a village yet, but here it goes. My name is Ikazuchi Doragon.
RP: Finally, today is the day. Today marks the beginning my life as a ninja. Today is my first mission. The mission seems kind of boring, but I know they will become harder as i advance in the ranks. "Kujin,"I said,"pick up the pace or we will never finish this mission." "I"M COMING,I COMING," He said. "Wait, shut up, I hear something." "What is it, I can't hear anything." "There is something in the area." "Now that you mention it, it is kind of humid out here Ikazuchi." We start walking some more and there seemed to be smoke rising from the ground. "If this keeps going i'm going to die." Kujin said. "I know what you mean but we need to make it to our destination before night fall."I said.
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:31 pm
Tyranitar45 I'm not sure if I am suppose to have a village yet, but here it goes. My name is Ikazuchi Doragon. RP: Finally, today is the day. Today marks the beginning my life as a ninja. Today is my first mission. The mission seems kind of boring, but I know they will become harder as i advance in the ranks. "Kujin,"I said,"pick up the pace or we will never finish this mission." "I"M COMING,I COMING," He said. "Wait, shut up, I hear something." "What is it, I can't hear anything." "There is something in the area." "Now that you mention it, it is kind of humid out here Ikazuchi." We start walking some more and there seemed to be smoke rising from the ground. "If this keeps going i'm going to die." Kujin said. "I know what you mean but we need to make it to our destination before night fall."I said. That hurt my head to read. @___@ Ok. Firstly, only use one person in your sample. That doesn't show me anything except that you can use dialogue. Try again please. ^^
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 9:51 pm
An arm poked out from under the covers of a bed and picked up the wailing alarm clock before throwing it out of the open window. It was a messy apartment, but organized enough to work for the lazy girl who continued to sleep for another hour or so.
Contented with her extra rest, the girl finally got up and stretched, her messy dark hair falling back into place. Reaching for an elastic, she tied up her hair to one side and stepped into a pair of slippers waiting by the side of the bed. She rubbed her eyes and walked over to a small calendar on her bedside table, glancing at it momentarily before her eyes widened in shock.
"Agh, damn!" Running over to her closet she pulled out a random set of clothes, slamming the creaky wooden door shut again, before dashing to get her toothbrush. "Gloves, right," she mumbled past her toothbrush as she hopped back to the closet, clothes half-on. The door fell off its' rusty hinges as it fell over on her, and she grunted mildly before shoving it off of her and finishing the rest of her morning routine.
"First day at the academy and I decided to throw out my alarm clock again," she sighed after gulping down the bowl of instant noodles she had prepared last night. Plopping the chopsticks and bowl in her sink, she slid into her sandals before running out the door, in such a panic that she had forgotten to take her keys after locking the door.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 1:09 am
Nice! Pass!
Noticed that you were already in Konoha, did you ask Cerbi before posting a profile?
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 8:25 am
(( I think I get the hand of the battlesystem o.O;; I hope I don't mess up, but in the meantime heres my rp entry anyways! ))
"Take your time..." Kiroku said slowly under her breath, her husky and yet young warm voice creeping in. She preeched on a thick branch in the arms of the trees, herself hidden by leafs and shadow. Her nerve still and confident, Kiroku slowly looked around with her hair slightly sweeping against the wind. Her hand slid down her thigh as if she was reaching for a Kunai, "Where are you." Kiroku took out a Kunai slowly from her black and buckled holster that held a set of six Kunai, the kunai scraped against another faintly, "s**t!" Kiroku shouted and pounced immediatly off the branch as a smokebomb exploded from the other side of the branch.
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 4:24 pm
Thank yuu. ^^ I know Cerbi IRL; she told me how to join the guild and such. Heh, GSD >w< -Prods Kira-
Erh, yup, I asked her. ^^
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 10:45 am
Aaisha Tila (( I think I get the hand of the battlesystem o.O;; I hope I don't mess up, but in the meantime heres my rp entry anyways! )) "Take your time..." Kiroku said slowly under her breath, her husky and yet young warm voice creeping in. She preeched on a thick branch in the arms of the trees, herself hidden by leafs and shadow. Her nerve still and confident, Kiroku slowly looked around with her hair slightly sweeping against the wind. Her hand slid down her thigh as if she was reaching for a Kunai, "Where are you." Kiroku took out a Kunai slowly from her black and buckled holster that held a set of six Kunai, the kunai scraped against another faintly, "s**t!" Kiroku shouted and pounced immediatly off the branch as a smokebomb exploded from the other side of the branch. Pass! ^_^ If you don't have a clan yet, you can take a look at my clan. I like the way you RP.
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