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 Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:41 am
Character: Siniku Yoshimitsu
Technique Name: Densetsu no Sakebi Jutsu [Legendary Roar Technique]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton [sound I imagine isn't a element]
Description: The User emits a high decibel , beastly Roar from deep with in their throats that comes out in a shock wave of pure sound. The effects on the ninja in a small 15ft Radius around the ninja will have at the very least temporary deafness or may have their eardrums damaged if they are too close. The attack can be countered by being far enough away or having the proper ear protection, or simply getting out of range.
This sounds a wee dumb , and i probably didn't do this right <3 But its worth the ol' try isn't it?
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 1:44 pm
Character: Lupus/Cloud Hari
Technique Name: Last Stand
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique starts off by focusing chakra evenly throughout the users body. The user will then have their body consume the chakra, doubling their strength and speed. Since the chakra was evenly consumed around the body, the user's head and brain will also get a boost. This allows the brain and eye's to process things much quicker. This is an extremely dangerous technique to use and if the user is not careful, it will result in their death.
Info
- This state lasts for [10] posts.
- Can be used [3] times per battle.
- Must have an interval of at least [3] posts before the user can perform the technique again. If the user doesn't follow this rule then they won't give their body enough time to return to normal, this means the user's body will be turned into pure chakra, ceasing to exist.
- Must have incredible stamina and be in shape to be able to function properly in this state and after.
- While in this state, the user may not perform any techniques which require chakra.
- Considered a Complex technique/ requires chakra to use.
- This state cannot be ended early, the user must wait until it wears off.
[Edit: I changed the increased reaction time and increased sight, smelling and hearing to quicker brain processing]
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 2:22 pm
Character: Lupus/Cloud Hari
Technique Name: Darkness of Hell
Rank: A-S+
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a Genjutsu that eliminates all of the opponents senses for a certain amount of time. The user must first fully understand exactly how the brain works and how it can be affected by chakra. After the user makes the required handsigns, they will focus chakra to one part of their body(eye's, feet, chest, etc) If the target is to look at the spot the chakra is focused at then they will be put into the Genjutsu. The chakra can also be focused in the hands, which would touch something such as a sword or kunai. If the opponent was to look at the object that was touched or get touched by that object they would be in the Genjutsu. The chakra will flow from the object and into the opponents body. The chakra will enter the opponents body through the eye's which gives the chakra immediate access to the brain. After it enters the body the chakra will attack the brain and deactivate the opponents five senses. It completely wipes their senses, leaving them with no feeling, unable to hear or smell, unable to taste, and unable to see. This leaves them in complete darkness.
Info
- A Rank: lasts [3] post, S Rank: lasts [5] posts, S+ Rank: lasts [7] post
- When in the Genjutsu the opponent cannot make any handsigns since they won't be able to feel their hands touching each other.
- The opponent also cannot move since they won't be able to feel the ground.
- Only users of the Genjutsu Class can use Kai to break out of it/ only effective against A rank version. S and S+ rank are unbreakable.
[Edit Complete: I did this because I figured it would be put as god modding the way I had it before]
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 3:28 pm
[ Azi: } Looks... good. . _ .
[ Flawed: } Well, something like that would actually be around B rank, but yeah, you did well. Approved.
[ Angel: } The first one... I would have to say cut it down to two uses per battle, or lessen some of the abilities.
Let me know when the second one is finished.
Actually... if you want, I can give you a hand with both of them if you message me.
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 3:41 pm
Character: Judai Satetsu
Technique Name: Crown Black King
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline
Element: Null
Description: This is Judai's main battle jutsu it is kinda a stance as long as it's worn it increases his Magnetic Manipulation allowing him to control metal objects and his iron sand at a more fast and high rate. It also has a 2nd power their are 3 points on the crown for each jutsu he dose they glow when all 3 are lit he gets a free jutsu but only one that is equal to the highest rank he used within those 3.
(also must be with one rank of each other no E rank E rank S rank stuff)
Character: Judai Satetsu
Technique Name: Black King 's Bane
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline
Element: Null
Description: Building a larger compact clump of Black iron sand around his arm judai will then Blast it off in them from of a large black cylinder But it is only extended it doesn't leave his arm during the attack. When it hits the target it Crushing and cutting the longer their left in it's path. It also may change it's direction but it cost a D rank of charka but only two times after that it won't have anymore sand.
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 4:33 pm
Character: Lupus/Cloud Hari
Technique Name: Katon: Go Stage 2
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user will start off performing Katon: Go(A fire Chidori), but instead of rushing at their opponent to impale them with their hand, they hold their hand upwards, pointing it at their target, and unleash a pure condensed blade of fire at the opponent. The blade is made by using chakra to condense fire into a solid object. It is four inches wide and six feet in length. It's range is 200 feet/ 66 yards. It is also attracted to the opponents body heat and will perform right angles to adjust itself to the opponents position. The blade will always head for the direction the user aimed at. This means if the user aimed for the opponents head then the blade would adjust itself to hit the opponents head, even if the opponent was to move. If the blade hit the opponent in the leg when it was aimed for the head, then it would move up the users body until it reached the head. The blade is harder than steel(making it incredibly hard to destroy) and moves at the same speed as the user's speed rank. Can easily pierce armor, shields, barriers, etc.
[Edit: I went for your idea Shin and made it into a projectile-type attack. I increased its range and made it much more deadly)
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:52 pm
[ Zeo: } I'm really gonna need you to reword all of this, or just wait awhile and let me fix some stuff up. ^ ^;;
[ Angel: } More a less the same for you. I'll do what I can tonight via pm for all of your techniques.
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:00 pm
Character: Judai Satetsu
Technique Name: Crown of the Black King
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline
Element: ---
Description: This technique generates a black iron sand crown which Judai wears appropriately. While wearing the crown, Judai has better control over magnetic forces, increasing the power of his bloodline techniques, while reducing the preparation needed to perform them. The only down sides are that techniques rank E through C require [5] additional chakra, and techniques rank B through S require [10] additional chakra, and the crown itself generates magnetic fields which can hinder Judai's own raiton techniques.
Character: Judai Satetsu
Technique Name: Crown Charge
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline
Element: ---
Description: Judai will momentarily change the polarities of his iron sand crown to attract lightning. After successfully absorbing a bolt of lightning or a raiton technique, he will be able to perform a free bloodline technique (if it fits within the correct boundaries.) It should be noted that continual usage of this technique can result in severe head trauma.
• Natural lightning: Any bloodline technique up to rank B.
• Raiton technique: Any bloodline technique of the same rank.
• Can only be used four times per battle.
• Requires one post cooldown between usages.
Character: Judai Satetsu
Technique Name: Black King's Barter
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline
Element: ---
Description: Judai will build a large and compact clump of black iron sand around his arm, which he can then use as an extending ramming type weapon. When the opponent is in range, Judai will thrust his arm forward, causing the iron sand to extend forward roughly 10 yards. Rather than forming a sword or spear like weapon, the iron sand will become a spiraling cylindrical ram which slams and presses the target. Because of its material and rotation, the ram causes both spinning-blunt damage, and terrible friction burn.
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:01 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:34 pm
Character: Lucas Miyamoto
Technique Name: chakra transformation
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description:
this jutsu is a very unique jutsu that can only be learnt with certain training aids and requirements during the training of this technique. also due to the nature of this technique it takes longer that most other jutsu do. the purpose of this jutsu is confusion and stealth. this jutsu changes the chakra signature and the level of chakra compleately. in doing so he can reduce his chakra pool and increase it but limited in it's increase.
- takes 4 posts longer to train
- takes 5 full posts (4-5 scentences) of charging before using
- only takes chakra to activate
- can not go above the normal level of chakra (origional chakra pool will be stated in brackets)
- 5 real day cooldown (or 10 posts. whichever doesn't happen first is the one to be followed)
- can only be trained with the help of someone else who has the use of sensory jutsu
- during the cooldown the user has no chakra in their chakra pool
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 8:54 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:04 pm
Character: Lupus/Cloud Hari
Technique Name: Last Stand
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Null
Description:This technique functions similarly to the releasing of the Eight Gates. The user will begin by focusing chakra to a high-point in their chest, once collected, they will allow the built up chakra to spread and overlap the chakra that normally flows through the body. By layering their chakra, the user is able to increase their strength, speed, reaction time, and mental processing. Unfortunately, the actual act of layering one's chakra is extremely temperamental, and it cannot be maintained for long, lest the user suffer serious repercussion.
Even abiding by these limitations, the user may still feel uneasy after or even during usage.
Additionally, the user cannot use further techniques that require chakra or put incredible strain on the body, for it may disrupt the state, causing serious chakra system injury- if not death.
• Lasts [10] posts.
• Can only be used [3] times per battle.
• Requires [3] posts of cooldown between usage.
• Cannot exit state early.
Character: Lupus/Cloud Hari
Technique Name: Blazing Lance
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user lofts one hand at their opponent and begins to generate a large amount of fire and chakra in their palm. After a minor amount of charging, the fire will be launched at the target, taking the shape of a 6 foot long, 4 inch wide blazing spear-like projectile. After being released, the user is able to move his hands in any direction in order to manipulate the spear's trajectory and position. Because of the spear's composition, it can very easily pierce armor, and can only be extinguished, not destroyed.
Character: Lupus/Cloud Hari
Technique Name: Darkness of Hell
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A powerful genjutsu technique that forces the opponent's senses to go completely numb (every sense, even sight!) After forming the required handsigns, the user will generate a chakra focus point on something or someone by touching it. The chakra focus point will then generate a thin, dark indigo colored mist. This mist will spread at a very slow rate, roughly a 5 yard radius after 4 posts have passed. If this mist is taken into the body in someway, be it through the eye sockets, mouth, etc., it will begin to affect the afflicted. The chakra mist will search the afflicted's body (1 post), until it can finally rest in the cranium. From here, it will deactivate all five senses: sight, smell, taste, touch, and hearing; leaving them completely in the dark. It should be noted that if the user generates the focus point on the target, it will instantly affect them.
• Lasts [5] posts.
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:05 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:37 am
Character: Tsukino Kazuki
Technique Name: Living Light Daggers
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: By using medical knowledge Tsukino can create Six inch chakra daggers that when thrown at a targets, can absorb thier chakra and dispel it in the air.One of these daggers takes away 5% chakra then and so on,but if it hits one of thier chakra points it will absorb 10%.The user charges chakra into thier hands, using the same healing energy used for the Healing hands technique,but sharpens it.Then the user just swings thier arms in a arc to release a stream of these deadly daggers.
*Note: These daggers can pierce skin like the average Kunai while absorbing chakra
Character: Tsukino Kazuki
Technique Name: Adrenaline Pulse
Rank: B
Type: Eseijutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: The user sends out chakra in the form of golden pulses i a 360 degree sphere around them,affecting anything in the air or underground as well.As the wave goes out,they focus it on thier target in order to avoid hurting allies.The wave,once it makes impact with the target, it speeds up the enemy's heart rate and beat causing them to have somewhat of a heartattack that paralyzes them for 3 posts.If the user hits the target with the wave and continually sends out a steadily streaming pulse,it could potentially kill the enemy.
*Note: The range of the pulse is about 1 mile
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 7:14 am
Character: Tsukino Kazuki
Technique Name: Soten Kisshun
Rank: A
Type: Eseijutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Tsukino focuses chakra and compresses it form a half-oval barrier around whatever or whomever she wishes.While active, the barrier rejects all wounds and negative affects such as seals or poisons inflicted upon anything within the barrier. It has enough power to reattach a severed arm back on to the intended target.As long as only one body part was cut off the user can completely reform it to heal the target and the barrier can restore it to full working order,but cannot repiece a entire body that's been blown to bits or someone who is already dead.As a by product of this technique being a barrier it can protect the user and anyone else in it from any type of jutsu A rank and below for 4 posts,unless user deactivates it earlier.
*Note: This ability is extremly strong healing but cannot bring people back to life or affect inanimate objects,with the exception of plantlife which is considered living.
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