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 Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:46 pm
I can't quite explain it...she hasn't quite developed him yet...
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:48 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:52 pm
Well, He's supposed to be like James Bond, but a douche to guys he doesn't like and ugly girls...that's what my Stardust just said...so....
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:56 pm
I'm pretty sure if he gets anywhere near a girl... Andy will try to beat him up. That's been the idea so far. He only hasn't beaten Ayden up because he doesn't really think he's a threat.
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:59 pm
Any girl. Or, Just Bianca...?
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 11:54 pm
OH MY GOODNESS WE HAVE BELLE?! SWEET!!!
I've been making a Beast character in the back of my mind for a while. Let's just say he's a bit odder than the rest of our current characters. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:19 am
Yay! Belle is Accepted...Elaine is on Skype with me right now...and she said Belle get's the A-Ok...so...YAY!
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 1:14 am
yessss, i have Shauna do all my dirty work for me(:
But no, we were on webcam, and internet hates when i'm on webcam. so yeah.
oh and isa, you have to write something about yourself for the mod thing. i forgot all about it, it still feels kinda lame, but it shows how devoted we are or something.
i don't know i'm falling asleep as i type so yeah.
Ummmmmmm, Belle, OH MY LORD, we were on webcam for two hours and not once did we exchange names D: what is your name love?
but ummmmmmmm, since reading the text (minus your lovely voice, you need to teach all the boring creative writers how to read aloud) i noticed some repeativness, it was only really there twice, and nothing more than what i'm sure everyone falls victime to. it was when she was running through the forest and when she approached Marcel. other than that, perfect. i still have to go through the profile more, but from your post and what i gathered from webcam, she's well developed.
as Shauna said, which she was my surrogate in that case (can you use that word in that tense, or not?), and you heard me say, you're accepted.
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 8:41 am
Yay!!!! My name is Mandy, by the way. I can't believe that I never gave you my name. Wow. I feel dumb. Really dumb. But back to more exciting news....YAY!!!! As for teaching "boring" creative writers how to read aloud, if you/they are that passionate about learning how to do it well, my suggestion would be to take a public speaking or, even better, a acting class or two. Honestly, it's what's helped me quite a good deal. But cha. And once again for good measure....YAY!!!!!! xd
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 8:47 am
Umm, I'm sorry to be annoying about this but um Star? Andy and Marc are in the hall outside of thee lunch room getting in a confrontation. and you're post says that he's not... Well not that he's not... it's just weird.
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:03 am
Real weird. How can I properly put a 'street rat' in his place if I have to make nice, nice? Or....as nice as Marcel could even be in any given situation.
Hee, its not that big a deal though. I mean, with some creative typing you could change some of your post into something like, 'I saw the fight and I just couldn't let it happen'. Kind of thing. If...you can understand my rambling. Anyway, that way you wouldn't have to trash your post and keep it mostly as it stands.
Though I can't promise Marcel will come away from this fight easily. Andy is pushing the right buttons shoving him like that! Oh no, he just didn't!
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:31 am
Raw!!! Stupid laws of physics that get in the way of my life. I'll go edit.
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:50 am
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 1:19 pm
Aww... Come on... I need Andy to get the crap beat out of him! I have a plan and you are all ruining it!
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:13 pm
Aww. Don't worry! I'm sure with Andy's charming demeanor he can get into another fight in no time! Though if it makes you feel better I can still have Marcel 'push' him around a little bit?
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