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 Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 8:41 pm
Ayame Mizuko:
I'm sure you know this, but I need to say it. point out what things look like when you activate your Byakugan... describe your use of Jyuuken (gentle fist) and describe more in detail what the 128 palms technique looks like... as well as the 16 palms.
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 6:02 am
Cobra_X Shira:What?... no Heavenly spin? BLASPHEMY!
...But yeah, you are approved. I'm sure you'll use it just fine though, I'm happy with what I see here. Just remember it's tracking abilities and such as well.You are approved! Heavenly Spin... for a genin...? xD In other news, Hurrah!
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:16 am
Ayame Mizuko Name:Ayame Mizuko RPC's name:Aqua Shione Bloodline Applying for: Byakugan Why do you want it: I have never roleplayed with it adn I think it would be a great experience.Plus my RPC will have Taijutsu so really there are limited choices for my bloodline options. Plus its my favorite xD What will you do with it: It will help me find hidden enemies who may be stalking me. xD lol jk. It will allow me to find hidden enemies who may be trying to hurt my RPC. What you know about it:The Byakugan can see almost 360 degrees.It does have a blind spot which is on the back of the neck.Most of the techniques are either Taijutsu or Ninjutsu.The technique,gentle Fist,Can see chakra pathways.The Byakugan ,also known as the white eye, are pupiless when unactivated.When activated veins around your eyes bulge and it has been activated giving them their great eye sight. RP Sample:Aqua was jumping through the trees heading back to the village after a simple mission.She stopped and made a handsign activating her Byakugan.The world around her went negative.She could see all around except for her blindspot.She continued jumping through the trees.Seconds later Aqua stopped again.She sensed somebody nearby.She looked out of the corner of her eye to realize she was being tailed by a worthless bandit.She sighed and turned to face him. "I can see you."She said folding her arms across her chest. "Come out or die."She said simply.She wasn't in the mood to deal with bandits.The bandit froze. "Fine."She said jumping down.She ran towards the bandit her hands by her sides.The bandit ran out holding a kunai.He was a poor old bandit.Hardly worth killing.She side stepped him and hit him with her palm in the back hardly.He groaned and she gave an emotionless expression.She walked forward. "Give up you worthless bandit."She said harshly.The bandit whirled around looking at her.She spread her legs apart and put one hand closer to the ground and one hand in the air. "Eight divination signs, one-hundred and twenty-eight palms of the hand."She muttered.Her pinkie and ring finger,on the hand that was in the air, folded to her palm while her index and middle finger stayed up.The yin/yang symbol that appeared on the ground signified she was using sixty-four palms.She ran forward.She hit him.She was using her left hand then her right. "Two palms."She said hitting him twice with her index and middle finger. "Four palms."She said hitting him four times. "......sixteen palms..."She said hitting him again sixteen times. "....thirty-two palms.....sixty-four palms!"She said.She had hit him sixty-four times and finished by hitting him with both palms blocking his chakra pathways.She breathed a little heavier than usual.She sighed.The bandit looked barely alive.She walked over to him and finished him with another sixteen palms.Her index and middle finger stayed up again as she started hitting him sixteen times alterating hands.When she finished him she carried the body to a nearby bush and stuck it under there. "Eventually someone will find you."She said.She smirked slightly and jumped back into the tree not botheing to deactivate her Byakugan. there it has been editted.
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 1:31 pm
better. you described how your strikes landed and what it did. And its true, 64 palms leaves you with...well....yeah your pretty much SOL. approved
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 3:05 pm
Name: Shruikan Tenshi
RPC's name: Akuma Kami
Bloodline Applying for: Rinnegan
Why do you want it: I tried it before but stopped rping due to personal reason. I wish to try it again and use it to its full potential like I had done so previously....or attempted I should say
What will you do with it: I will master the rinnegan and create all the paths of the six realms. I plan to use it to further myself and see if I am really capable of using it. Maybe even strengthen my rp skills by using this bloodline
What you know about it: I know the rinnegan was the bloodline used by the Sage of the Six Paths. It has the capabilities of using all and any element. The chakra rods are used by it to create more then one body by placing them inside the bodies of others making the six paths known as the Animal Realm, The Hungry Ghost Realm, The Human Realm, The Hell Realm, The Asura Realm, and the Deva Realm. The next descendant was said to be Nagato, or Pain. He has shown exceptional skill in weilding the rinnegan similar to that of the Sage though he says his powers can never compare to the Sage's. I can keep going if needed
RP Sample:
Akuma leered down at the genin. They were in the chunin exams, at the peek of thier time being in the last round. His opponent was from the leaf. The proctor walked between them. "Alright, I want this to be a fair and clean fight. You will continue fighting until one of you has submit defeat or can no longer continue fighting. May the match commence!" The genin rushed in swiftly, taking out a kunai and before getting face to face with Akuma he planted on his left leg, spinning to the right with his arm out, intending to stab at him with a full powered swing. Akuma responded quickly by flicking his sword upwards, slapping the genin's armed limb over his head and followed by mimicing what he did, getting inches fro his chest and drove his elbow into his right side beneath the arm, sending the genin back. The genin clutched his side being knocked on his back and flipped up, ignoring the pain and weaved handsigns. A bright flame flared up and took form, shaping into the genin's appearance indicating he used Katon: Yojin Bunshin no Jutsu (Fire Release: Ember Clone Technique). Tossing the clone a kunai both the clone and the genin charged at Akuma. Akuma merely remained quiet, his purple rippled eyes watching as he strung handsigns quickly, water moisture collecting rapidly and a puddle formed, which the liquid rose up taking shape into a mirror image of himself. The technique being Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone Technique). The water clone intercepted the fire clone resulting in the two's destruction and steam rushed around screening movement on both sides. However Akuma could see the genin, the rinnegan giving the ability to see chakra and the genin's chakra flared like a fire in infrared goggles. Under the veil of the steam and hearing the genin still charging he strung another set of seals, opening his mouth releasing a bullet of water into the steam, which he ran right after. He heard an uff from the bullet striking the genin's stomach making him double over since he didn't prepare for it. Akuma turned his sword around and struck the genin's forehead with the hilt of the sword making his head jerk up but just to be pushed back down as Akuma placed a hand on the back of it, flipping off the genin and in mid air flip weaved handsigns, landing on his feel he spun around as the genin caught his breath, lowering himself low in the midst of spinning around and his sword crackled with lightning on the length of the blade, slicing through the back of the genin's ankles tearing through the tendons and eletricuting him as well from the eletrical current running through the blade, not only cutting off the ability to walk but numbed his lower body easily. The genin cried out dropped to his knees as Akuma drew out two black rods, rolling along the genin's back and before rolling off he stabbed both rods through each side of the genin's neck killing him. Akuma landed, in a kneeling position before the proctor who looked shocked. He slowly rose and looked at him. "I believe this match is over" He said plainly as another figure rose beside him. It was his opponent but his eyes mirrored that of Akuma's and had a different demeanor. The two turned away, walking out of the stage.
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:04 pm
You are approved Tenshi!
APPROVED!
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 10:46 am
Name: Grandmaster Ginger
RPC's name: Yuudai Phantos
Bloodline Applying for: Ink Artistry
Why do you want it: It sounds like a lot of fun and I would be one of the only people to have it and I like to be an individual.
What will you do with it: It can make it so I can use it in very unique ways and become a very unique ninja.
What you know about it: I can draw pictures and use some of my chakra to bring them to life. They are destroyed very easily. I can talk to the drawings that I created. I can also fly on my drawings ect…
RP Sample: Yuudai walked out onto the battlefield and looked around expecting to see him. Yuudai couldn’t help but thinking about what he was about to do, but more importantly why he was about to do it. ‘Just this one time’ He thought to himself, ‘I am only going to have to kill someone this one time.’ He thought as a mysterious figure came out of the forest with a sword in his hand. The figure put the sword out o his side and held it up to the sky. Yuudai rolled a scroll out on the ground and drew a line and put his hand on the scroll and a snake came out across the land and went into the forest. Then Yuudai drew 3 lions and had them spread apart as the figure got closer. “Nice to see you again Yuudai.” The mysterious figure said with a slight chuckle in his voice. The figure slowly took off his hood and reviled his face and it had a scar across his face. “What happened to us Yuudai I was your Kage why did you betray me?” He asked in an almost sympathetic voice. Yuudai looked up with a serious look on his face. “Do you really think I betrayed you, I was just doing my duty and what I thought was right.” He said as a clone of the Kage ran from behind Yuudai as one of the tigers went out and tackled the clone as it puffed away. “I did not want to give up our jinjuriki! I wanted to fight the akatsuki not just give it up!” He said as he grabbed the sword on his back and made a quick slash at the Kage’s mid section. The Kage quickly jumped back and looked at Yuudai. “I just wanted them to leave without any other harm to the village.” The Kage said as he did some hand symbols and said, “Katon: Kaen Hisame no Jutsu” as fire started to rain from the sky. Yuudai quickly did some drawing and put chakra into the paper as an eagle appeared above him and took the fire as he quickly ran away towards the forest. Yuudai quickly threw some paper around him like a sash for quick drawings. Yuudai then yelled across the village, “You couldn’t think clearly you were just nervous about that attack now they are even closer to their victory you should have stopped them!” He yelled as he did some hand symbols and said, “Raiton: Raikou Boruto no Jutsu” and moved his hand and shot a bolt of lightning at the Kage. The Kage quickly sidestepped the attack and went rushing in. “That didn’t mean you had to go rouge Yuudai.” He said as he attacked Yuudai with his fist. Yuudai quickly grabbed his hand and pushed it to the ground as he took the hilt of his sword and hit the Kage’s other elbow. The Kage quickly recovered and drew his sword and slashed at Yuudai’s midsection. Yuudai quickly moved his blade and hit the Kage’s away. “I had no other choice, it was go rouge or give up all of my morals and you know I can’t do that.” Yuudai said as he quickly need the Kage in the ribs. It connected the Kage quickly recovered. “You didn’t have to hunt me I was just going after the akatsuki.” Yuudai said as the Kage threw a punch to Yuudai’s ribs. The Kage connected and said, “I had no choice it was kill you or look week.” He said with a smirk. Yuudai quickly grabbed his shoulders and pushed off. “You should have looked week.” He said as one of the tigers now was attacking the Kage head on and the other two were going for both sides. The Kage stabbed the one coming heads on and kicked the one to the side but the last one was able to get a bite before he hit it away. “Yuudai you have lost your touch you drawings used to be a lot more deadly.” The Kage said we pure confidence. Yuudai quickly went for a slash that the Kage dodged and went closer to the forest. “You’re wrong they are still very deadly.” Yuudai said as the snake went behind the Kage. Yuudai went for a slash and the Kage blocked it. Then the snake wrapped itself around the Kage and tripped him so he fell to the ground. Yuudai then slashed the Kage as he was falling to the ground across the face. “Don’t you think so Kage?” He said as he stabbed him through the heart killing him instantly. ‘Well at least it is over.’ Yuudai thought to himself and walked off going for the akatsuki now.
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 9:10 pm
Ginger:
With the realism involved with a Genin killing a Kage aside, there's only one problem I see with the sample and this is that you never used the proper hand signs and jutsu name which brings the pictures to life. they don't just spring to life, you have to create hand seals and use the jutsu don't you?
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:08 am
Yes I am sorry about the hand sign I forgot to say that. But I was rping higher than a genin because some people like to know what I would do as a higher rpc then a genin. I am sorry I will wright a new one if you would like. And I will be a genin.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:43 pm
Alrighty, I dont mind if you were higher level...it's just that I wasn't sure. You can be whatever level you like.
Just remember that the blood Art imitation isnt just making pictures and springing them to life... there are other jutsu involved as well which you should incorporate.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:47 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:04 pm
Name: _Manpish_
RPC's name: Hanabi Otamagaki Tsukikage
Bloodline Applying for: Oragami no Dara
Why do you want it: I simply love this bloodline because it is awesome to be able to control paper! Also i have liked Konan since she first entered the Anime so i thought it would be fun to have the Kekkei-Genkai
What will you do with it: Ill use this Kekkei genkai to mess with my opponents by flinging paper weapons and maybe even paper flowers and such at them for the fun of it! xP
What you know about it: I know that the paper is very vulnerable to water unless coated in chakra and that it is vulnerable to fire (no matter what). I also know that the paper can fold into any shape and can even be used as weapons. Oragami no Dara is the Kekkei genkai (bloodline) of the Anime character Konan in Naruto (everyone knows this).
RP Sample:
Hana sat there in the class room wishing that he could just leave and be over with school. The teacher simply loved to talk and waste his time, which really pissed him off. Hana smiled as he suddenly made a hand sign under his desk and focused his chakra, he made his homework fold into a paper shuriken and fly at the Teachers back. The Teacher reflexively caught the shuriken and looked around the room to see who it had come from. Hana quickly made some more hand signs using the Paper clone jutsu to make a clone of himself out of paper. The paper clone floated up to the front of the room and tapped the teacher on the shoulder, whenever the teacher would look to see who it was the clone would float up to the roof so that the teacher didn't see it. Hana covered his mouth trying not to laugh at the teachers own stupidity. After a while Hana smiled as the paper clone dispersed itself and the Teacher turned his back to them again leaving himself wide open, suddenly Hana made some hand signs and focused his chakra around everyones papers, he simply folded them all into paper shuriken. Hana aimed carefully and flung them all at the teacher who didnt have a clue what was going on. When the teacher turned to greet the class he had an expression of anger seeing as he had about ten paper shuriken jabbed into his back. "ok class dissmissed..." the Teacher finally told the class and watched as everyone left the room. As Hana ran out he stuck his tounge out at the teacher teasing him.
(Edited again...)
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:43 pm
Manpish:
Not so bad here, but there are a few things I think we can do to make it better...
1. To form the shuriken, you need to perform hand seals... you can't jsut USE your chakra and have the technique occur, the hand seals form the technique and direct the chakra as you use it.
2. Trying incorporating more then just one technique when making the RP sample... and try to be realistic too, because i think 20 paper shurikens might kill someone...(unless they simply weren't formed with sharpened chakra to increase their effect.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:06 pm
Cobra_X Manpish:
Not so bad here, but there are a few things I think we can do to make it better...
1. To form the shuriken, you need to perform hand seals... you can't jsut USE your chakra and have the technique occur, the hand seals form the technique and direct the chakra as you use it.
2. Trying incorporating more then just one technique when making the RP sample... and try to be realistic too, because i think 20 paper shurikens might kill someone...(unless they simply weren't formed with sharpened chakra to increase their effect.
2) added another jutsu into the sample
3) if ya want more jutsu into it i can come up with something
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 11:03 am
Name: Kawaii Sarutobi
RPC's name: Kawa
Bloodline Applying for: Tendril threading
Why do you want it: I've never had it before
What will you do with it: Prove my absolute power
What you know about it: It was used by Kakuzu, one must take the heart of another ninja to extend his own life and use other elements, it is almost like a shinigami writing the name of a human in their death note
RP Sample: Kawa was feeling tired, run down, and depressed. He was sure one of his hearts was going bad. He noticed a gang of Fuuma clan shinobi was running away from a village they had ransacked. Attepting to brighten his own day, Kawa stood in their way and challenged them. Amused, the Fuuma shinobi ganged up on him, unaware of his abilities; feeling impatient, Kawa decided to end it fast. He took of his jacket and snared one of them with his tendrills. Kawa crushed his skull in the tendrills and came at the others. Two of them took out windmill shuriken and hurled them at Kawa, disabling his arms, but Kawa still had the upper hand. Taking one of the masks on his back, he used Fire style: fireball jutsu, taking out them both. Only two remained now, and one of their hearts were going to be his... Kawa lunged at the one on the left, who quickly used his windmill shuriken as a CQC weapon, stabbing Kawa's bad heart. "We have a winner..." Kawa grabbed his enemy's head and stuck his other hand in his chest, ripping out his heart. Kawa added it to his own, and let the other one live.
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