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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:18 am
((I just restarted my browser and it showed up that hwole sections was jsut blank and not loading ><))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:20 am
[[.....okay, I'm going to go mop the bathroom floor I'll probably be back in a half hour or so]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:23 am
"Thank you", Ryn said, bowing his head slightly to fit through the doorway, and squatting down on the ground, instead of taking a seat on the couch. Glancing at the Izzy, he realized that he had been right, when he thought he had seen the girl in the picture yesterday.
"Yes this will be fine for me... And its true that the President is dead... I heard the gods say so. I am one of their creations and so I hear everything they say to the Purifiers, whether they want me to or not.", Ryn said, his eyes flicking between Nendir and Izzy. He sighed slightly, wondering what was going through the girls head, because he was quite sure that if she was indeed a normal human, he would be getting some sort of reaction soon.
((I am way to hyped up about RPing I think... I can't stop posting razz ))
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IoriYagami00 rolled 1 10-sided dice:
5
Total: 5 (1-10)
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:28 am
Masaru lunges her knife into Iori's hand making it useless for now. He looks at his bloody hand not expecting what had just happened and looks back at Masaru and snarls at her. He lifts his left hand out of his pocket and slashes Masaru across the face, and continues to pull the knife out.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:28 am
((Don't scratch my hard woood floors D: hahaha. I'm just waiting on Pen. And Iori, I don't know what to tell you about the dice. :/))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:36 am
Izzy looked from one person to the other, and sighed. "ok, my life is officialy... well I don't know exactly, but it's certanly not normal." after all that Izzy's seen, and heard, in the last bit of yesterday and the begining of today, she just put 'tall person with wings, scales, and claws' under the growing pile of.. stuff that she had to grasp, and get used to. She stopped looking between the two other people that inhabited the room and just stared at the floor. "and now the president is dead. whoop-dee-do." she said sarcasticly. Her life was most definetly out of any sort of control.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:46 am
[[Iori, Duckie rolled a six, which means she's done six damage to you. She already threw her attack at your hand. So, you're basically going to take the damage and then throw your own attack. Dice are only rolled when you throw an attack. It shows whether or not you hit the person, or they dodged it. There's no need to use the dice if you're not attacking. By the way, you have 20 hitpoints and Duckie has 40. All the information is listed under the introduction on the first page.]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:46 am
"Izzy, this is serious." He said looking over at her. It somewhat bothered him how she looked at everything as an inconvenience, when some things were there to make things better. "Look, this country is going to be shot to s**t and flipped upside down, I mean, I hardly saw anyone walking the street when I was running earlier. We all need to be prepared for the chaos.." His gaze shifted from Ryn to Izzy and Back. "We have to train her. The same way you get messages from your gods, I get messages from mine, well, in a way. But Izzy is crucial, at least on my path, and seeing how your here that only means one thing, she's important to you too."
He stood up and walked over to Izzy. "Get you bow. We can head to the countryside in my car and train, I doubt you wanted to be cooped up here for too long anyway." he knew Ryn needed rest, but he would probably be more comfortable sprawled out with enough room for his large frame. He turned away from the pair and headed upstairs to get him Tome. He knew a bow and arrow could be deadly, but what would Izzy do if she was unarmed completely?
He disappeared up the stairs and left the two to talk about whatever they needed. Afterall, there could be no fighting in his home, so he need not worry about anyone's safety. Within moments he was in the shower, and just as quickly was out and dressed in his usual combat attire, but he desired to stay upstairs for a few moments, just to give them all time to adjust.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:51 am
Ryn stayed silent as Nendir left, before turning to Izzy and saying," You know that is probably the most interesting reaction I have ever gotten from someone when they saw me... None at all."
Ryn grinned,his wings hanging limply, before saying,"You better get your stuff if we are leaving. I guess I'm coming along because I have nothing else to do."
He stretched slightly, doing his best to not scratch the flooring with his claws as he stood, and walked over to the counter, taking an apple from the fruit bowl, and beginning to eat it, while leaning lightly against the counter, watching Izzy.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:53 am
((Izzy, I'm working on something so feel free to leave me out for a bit.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:55 am
[[I managed to survive cleaning the bathroom (and without scratching any hardwood floors, lol)...and now I have to feed my brother. Meh. XP Cleaning and babysitting...the imperfect combination. I'm gonna wait and see if Iori fixes his post anyways.]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:02 pm
[[I think it would also be helpful if you put the amount of HP you had left at the top, before you start your post and have it look like this: (25/40). That way, you and your opponent can keep track of how much HP both of you have left and correct each other, if either of you make a mistake.]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:05 pm
[[Alright, I'll do that from now on. It's actually a really good idea]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:06 pm
((if i dont roll how do i dodge and plus i have two hands to attack with))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:06 pm
[[ xd I'm glad you like it!]]
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