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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 8:16 am
Okay, here goes. As time went on, I realized my current made-up, Vectors, is largely useless with the way it's written since there's a Kamakura now. So I'm going to try rewriting it to see if that helps. Old version: Vectors- Demi-passive. Due to a growing irregularity within Nemu's pineal gland, semi-invisible (they can be seen as translucent in rain or mist) arms made of chakra began to manifest after her mental barriers were shattered (This hasn't happened yet, so until it does, this made-up would be unusable. And even then, this would only be usable if and when she snaps, which would be very rare. Triggered by head injuries, large shocks and the like.) They are centered in her pineal gland, sprouting forth from the back of her head to move at her will. Each arm has a base reach of two meters, and there are two arms at the beginning, although as she grows in strength, their number and reach increases. (Every 10K of user chakra equals two meters of reach, and every 25K manifests two extra arms. These arms require a fair degree of concentration, they move by her will, and if she totally loses her concentration, they vanish back to their point of origin, until extended once more. They move approximately three times as fast as her real arms, and have a high degree of strength against physical objects, such as rocks, kunai or flesh. Against elements and other non-physical force, they are virtually useless, barely even usable as shields, although they can be used to help move her faster than what otherwise might be possible. As invisible manifestations of chakra, they are not entirely corporeal, able to pass through some objects such as rocks or people without causing damage. They can be made corporeal, and vibrate at such a frequency that they can cause severe damage to physical objects. However, the particular irregularity in Nemu's vectors has caused these arms to be carriers of the same irregularity. If one of the arms were to pass through another humans' pineal gland, and they lived to procreate, their future children would have this same irregularity.) As an instantly noticeable sign of her change, a pair of small bony horns sprouted from her head at the same time, small protuberances that are only about three to four inches large. Which is one of the reasons she would barely even remove her hat. A bit of superstition-based trivia: The pineal gland is occasionally associated with the sixth chakra (also called Ajna or the third eye chakra in yoga) or sometimes the Seventh (Crown) chakra. It is believed by some to be a dormant organ that can be awakened to enable telepathic communication. New version: Nemu has always been a little different from everyone else. For as far back as she can remember, she would fall asleep without warning, having little to no control over it, and still sometimes feel tired afterwards. This seemed like more than just ordinary narcolepsy, but it wasn't until she'd turned 13 that her problem progressed on a much higher scale. She noticed herself growing a pair of bony horns from the top of her head, looking vaguely like cat ears. Her narcolepsy increased at this point, to the point that there were some days she was only awake for a handful of minutes. What she didn't know was that she actually was awake during that time, but it's fortunate she didn't remember those times. With the creation of the bone horns, she seemed to gain odd phantasmal hands, made of chakra and guided by her will. The same will that guided their motions also urged her to become a killer, to seek out and destroy pretty much everything. This was a vast change compared to her normal personality, which was generally sleepy but friendly, if not occasionally a little ditzy. The change was so severe, in fact, that her new personality was forced to be sealed up, along with her newfound phantom arms. After that happened, her narcolepsy grew a little less common, enough that she felt she could actually study the ways of the ninja, to later be guided by her mentor and father-figure Isuta Sagi. During their training, he discovered, and wisely chose to never tell her, that her other personality, who called herself Kyoumu, wasn't perfectly sealed away. A solid hit to the head would awaken her dark personality, although thankfully only for a short time. Then her narcolepsy would overtake her, to prevent the strain on her mind and personality from becoming too severe. When she finally discovered the land of Kamakura, she instantly felt a familiar feeling, like she'd been there before, even though she couldn't remember it. Those memories were sealed away along with her Kyoumu personality, and the crucial piece of information they'd lend to discovering why she was so different with them. What it actually means is that Nemu was one of the first, if not possibly the first, Diclonius. Her phantasmal arms seem just a little more raw and unfocused, but more powerful, as a result. They are centered in her pineal gland, sprouting forth from the back of her head to move at her will. These arms require a fair degree of concentration, they move by her will, and if she totally loses her concentration, they vanish back to their point of origin, until extended once more. They move approximately three times as fast as her real arms, and have a high degree of strength against physical objects, such as rocks, kunai or flesh. Against elements and other non-physical force, they are virtually useless, barely even usable as shields, although they can be used to help move her faster than what otherwise might be possible. As invisible manifestations of chakra, they are not entirely corporeal, able to pass through some objects such as rocks or people without causing damage. They can be made corporeal, and vibrate at such a frequency that they can cause severe damage to physical objects. However, the particular irregularity in Nemu's vectors has caused these arms to be carriers of the same irregularity. If one of the arms were to pass through another humans' pineal gland, and they lived to procreate, their future children would have this same irregularity. As well, Nemu, or rather Kyoumu, will find out that her training to increase her Vectors, her phantasmal arms' true name, seems to hold a greater potential than others doing the same training. In number terms, the higher her chakra pool, the more powerful her Vectors can get. (Basically, she can multiply her Vectors' levels by her maximum chakra divided by 1000. So 25,000 chakra would add 25% to her levels, rounded down. So a LV 10 would become a LV 12. And so on.) A bit of superstition-based trivia: The pineal gland is occasionally associated with the sixth chakra (also called Ajna or the third eye chakra in yoga) or sometimes the Seventh (Crown) chakra. It is believed by some to be a dormant organ that can be awakened to enable telepathic communication. Okay, the basic change is instead of automatically gaining new reach and arms, it's based on my chakra count instead. Otherwise I'd wind up having two sets of Vectors with different ranges and number of arms, or end up having to splice the two together, and when I checked the numbers, that seemed excessive.  Nice and detailed, thanks
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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 11:09 pm
Yukimura Siedo Automatic Crystallization Mastery~Being a member of the Siedo clan, Yukimura is able to crystallize air droplets. The user is granted the ability to amplify the amount he can crystallize at one time. The user can crystallize a large amount of air and then freely control it. The air can take any shape or form. At Yukimura's level(20-40k) he can conjure up an amount equal to the size of a two story home at a time anywhere within a distance of 50 yards. (Once over 50k he can conjure masses about the size of a three story building. At 70k and above he can blanket up to half a village. Ice can be manipulated/moved. The larger the amount of ice, the larger strain on the body-slows down mobility. But as long at the technique is kept to the size of an average man or smaller, no strain is applied)  Okay after freezing air into a shape you could like make it move and junk? Like making an ice dragon having it attack an opponent? Like an ice golem sort of? I'd put it at half a village at 50k and a whole village at 70k. even when you get that high in chakra an ability to summon that much ice would put a chakra strain on anybody.
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Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:26 pm
Meushi Gyuunyuuya
Milk, it does a body good- Meushi, being rather... unique, has discovered a singular gift, granted her by a combination of her alchemical prowess and the special changes that overtook her at the beginning of her career. She can change the properties of (her) fresh milk, giving it one of several special properties. It can either heal someone's injuries, or cure their ailments, or lull them to sleep, or even work as an aphrodisiac. This change takes a short time to take effect, and the milk loses it's special properties if it's boiled, or if too much time passes between it's production and it's time of being drank. It is difficult to do this action during a battle, but not impossible. As well, she enjoys producing the milk, and produces quite a bit of it each day (nearing 30-40 gallons!), requiring regular... productions. Of special note, any female who drinks this milk will soon find themselves swelling and able to produce milk of their own, although it will just be ordinary milk. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
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Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 10:52 pm
Kagerou, Zaman Hidden Sound Spark of the Grand Death Fire:: Welcome to Hell Using the original technique, known as Spark of the Grand Death Fire, and retaining all normal abilities associated with it's flames. This technique, allows for a sudden change in battleground for the battle ahead. This sudden change is a blast of Grand Death Fire, that encircles both the user, and the opponent or opponent's in a half mile wide radius from where Zaman stands. The blast of Grand Death Fire literally makes a circle around both Zaman and his opponent, in order to keep them from being damaged by the flames from this blast placing them both on the only living patches of earth, within the large scorched and burning circle. This ability turns everything from grass to trees into burnt cinders. Grass turning to smoldering Ash, and trees becoming chalky, black and fragile. If within a village, the buildings will become scorched and some may even continue burning with the black flame. Stone weakens and becomes scorched. At certain points, the black flames may burn high and steadily, though their slow spread prevents them from leaving the circle of the half mile radius. The process, and way this technique is used, makes it appear as if it were a genjutsu, though it is not. To all appearances, an opponent should believe that it was a genjutsu. In such a way, if the opponent were to try and attempt a Genjutsu release, against their new surroundings, they would instantly become smothered in a deep dark smog like smoke. To which is of such a thickness, that it proves almost impossible to see within. Not only would this smoke blind, but it would also induce fits of coughing, to those that were unmasked and unprotected by it's particles. Naturally, it is only a darkened version of normal smoke, and all smoke like properties apply. The smoke is only the outcome, of someone mistaking this jutsu, for a Genjutsu instead of the Ninjutsu that it is.  I'll approve very well thought out, but could you cut it down to a half mile? PLease? Sure, sure. It was late, I was probably on a power streak or something mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 12:47 pm
Cold_Assassin Yukimura Siedo Automatic Crystallization Mastery~Being a member of the Siedo clan, Yukimura is able to crystallize air droplets. The user is granted the ability to amplify the amount he can crystallize at one time. The user can crystallize a large amount of air and then freely control it. The air can take any shape or form. At Yukimura's level(20-40k) he can conjure up an amount equal to the size of a two story home at a time anywhere within a distance of 50 yards. (Once over 50k he can conjure masses about the size of a three story building. At 70k and above he can blanket up to half a village. Ice can be manipulated/moved. The larger the amount of ice, the larger strain on the body-slows down mobility. But as long at the technique is kept to the size of an average man or smaller, no strain is applied)  Okay after freezing air into a shape you could like make it move and junk? Like making an ice dragon having it attack an opponent? Like an ice golem sort of? I'd put it at half a village at 50k and a whole village at 70k. even when you get that high in chakra an ability to summon that much ice would put a chakra strain on anybody. Edited
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 12:52 pm
Cold_Assassin Oni Recognition Oni Descartes uses this technique to temporarily regain his form as a Oni demon(Last for five post. Three post cooldown after form is finished).His Sickle also multiplies its size to about a 4ft blade. In this form he is about 7ft tall, faster than average, and has extreme strength. The only way to stop this form is to outlast its duration. Though it has one weak point, its abominable area is uncovered by any armor what so ever. This form doesn't regenerate until the next time the jutsu is used. Appearance   So what does he regenerate or something? I dunn get the last sentence? Wouldn't he have some sort of heart or weak point. Trading up to get a physical body would probably give you some physical weak point where you could get killed by the average nin. Edited
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 2:01 pm
Yukimura Siedo Summit Automatic Crystal Achievement After being able to crystallize air droplets into ice crystals for so long. Yukimura Seido of the Hidden Federation's Summit Village decided that he would add a twist to his crystallization methods. Going beyond ice, Yukimura developed a new technique that would make all of his Crystallized Ice, become just crystal instead. Not frozen water, just crystal. It is both heat and cold resistant and has a blue tint to it. So instead of shooting an water/ice dragon when using the Seikaku Mizu Dangan(User creates a Water Dragon and hurls it at their opponent.) Yukimura shoots crystal/liquid crystal. Though, this technique can be turned on and off at will.(Does take more chakra for water/ice techniques. +200 CP)
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 4:52 pm
Gaian name: Dreadmaster_Supreme RP name: Shihan Gouken Made up technique: Shadow Trap: A fairly simple technique, Shihan uses the long chain on his Kusari-gama and makes it into the shape of a star on the ground. Standing anywhere between the middle and 20 feet away, whenever an opponent steps inside the large star, Shihan uses his chakra to trap his opponent, wrapping the kusari-gama completely around them, leaving them toatlly exposed for the next attack.
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 11:34 am
Agito Mibu (Demon) Hidden Fantasy 75,000 CP Made up True Form Mastery- Agito's true demon form is already a great force, but on top of it's natural ability, Agito has trained his body and his mind when in that state to increase it power greatly. When Agito changes into his true form, his strength and speed are tripled along with the power of his jutsu. Agito is now able to do partial transformations like being able to stay in his human shape but can sprout his demonic wings. When Agito is in his demon form, he is able to use his add-ons despite his demonic nature. (add-ons= curse marks, demons, special items, etc.)
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:45 pm
:: Eluamous Nailo :: Hidden Federation --> Hidden Mythology Spartan Made-Up Tech 60,000 CPS: Crush Chakra Virus - Eluamous can release a deadly strain of virus, known as the Crush Chakra Virus, into the air surrounding the entire battlefield. As this is a virus which exists on a microscopic level, it cannot be blown away by things such a wind, or burned away by fire. The virus's nature is of an unusual sort, and when released into the atmosphere, will prevent the use of any techniques that cost over 800 CPS; including made-ups. This virus will affect everyone on the battlefield, including Eluamous himself. If Eluamous is killed, the virus will linger within the area for another 48 hours. [Gaia Time] A side-effect of the virus also infects his artifacts and powers, binding them to his bloodline so that he can only have ONE thing stolen when he is killed. [Note: stealing his body for a puppet would count as this one thing]; and even with this limit, anyone attempting to take an item will feel a terrible boiling sensation within their blood as if their body is about to explode, thus requiring a strong will of mind in order to break through this sensation. Upon being killed, should his body be stolen [IE: puppetry], the virus will hollow out his corpse and leave the new puppet without any abilities or techniques, although the CPS level will not be altered.  Your good on everything except the item stealing part, take that part out and your fine. That and a Fuuton based attack could probably blow it away, but it would only work when it was first released when it was still relatively clumped together.
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:52 pm
Komen Usai Hidden Leaf The soul of the Dimension Thief: This is a special outer dimensional technique concocted by Komen. A portion of his chakra will literally disperse from his body and dissappear in mid air to trace any and all items that have been touched by the user at all. (Furnature, the ground, other people, etc.) But the main use of this technique is to track down all the special weapons and armor that may have been sealed or thrown in some safe dummy dimension. Once found, Komen rips open a dimensional black hole where he had detected the items and can rip out as many as he chooses to take. Once passing through the black hole, it purifies all the items he takes. All items are returned to their original form, making any change done unto them null and void. Special weapons, armor, and items are all that he can grab. Anything that deals with orochi powers, demons, beast seals, etc. must be done in the traditional fashion. This technique steals only physcial items, weapons and armors. The only Thing Komen has to do is kill off the person once to get access to the dead persons items. So if a person has more than one life, it is possible to steal from them in the midddle of a battle.
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 6:39 am
Joker Gum Joker can alter his chakra consistency into an incredibly sticky substance somewhat akin to bubble gum, albeit much stronger. It can be used to pull opponents within punching range for a flurry of rebound pummels. Joker Gum can both stretch and contract, depending on what Joker's desires. It can be attached either by pointing at his target or through direct physical contact. When not attached to Joker's body, Joker Gum cannot stretch more than 10 millimeters. Joker Gum cannot be seen unless his opponent is using some sort of doujutsu. However, even if an opponent uses a doujutsu, it is still almost impossible to avoid, as Joker can simply attach Joker Gum while hitting his opponent.  Though I imagine that it would be able to be cut by things like weapons that can cut through anything. >_>
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 5:17 pm
Bone (Model 00-00-00-01 Realian Series) Hidden Gear Cogito Virus – an organic virus that infected Bone’s mechanical form long before its initial activation. The virus comes in and out of a dormant state but when it emerges, it overrides Bone’s mechanical circuits and enhances his abilities based on the number of kills and the level of the virus Bone has. There are several levels: Quote: Level 1 (0-3 kills): Bone loses all ability of using Ninjutsu and Genjutsu while a mask grows upon his face. Also, his synthetic nails can cut straight through a 4-foot thick piece of wood. Level 2 (4-6 kills): Bone loses all use of his techniques while a mask grows upon his face as a small amount of white hair grows from the top of the mask. Also, Bone’s speed increases so he is twice as fast. Level 3 (7-10 kills): Bone loses all use of his techniques while a mask grows upon his face and more white hair grows from the top of the mask. Bone’s speed is increases so he is 4 times as fast and his strength is twice as strong than it is. Level 4 (11-15 kills): Bone loses all use of his techniques while a mask grows upon his face and even more white hair grows from the mask. Bone’s speed is increased by 8 times the normal amount and his strength by 4 times while he is able to send a pulse of energy at the opponent to knock them back. Level 5 (16-20 Kills): Bone loses all use of his techniques while a mask grows upon his face and more white hair grows from the mask. Bone’s speed is increased by 16 times the norm and his strength increases by 10 times with the ability to send a pulse of energy at the opponent. Level 6 (21+ Kills): Bone loses all use of his techniques while a mask grows upon his face and a large amount of hair sprouts from the mask. Bone’s speed is increased by 20 times the norm and his strength by 15 times with the ability to control his hair into various shapes and can pulse out energy to knock back his opponent or even kill them. At this point, all genjutsu, poisons, or diseases cannot affect him, but not before. However, he can only stay in this form so long as the mask remains on his face as that is when the virus is not dormant and he can wake the virus when he desire it. Cut back on the multipliers some. I'm not sure I understand the wording. Do you lose the use of the techniques only while the mask grows or the whole time the mask is on. How long does it take the mask to grow?
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:30 pm
"thats no fair' the user says this with a a string of hand seals and the foe can not use his or hers Kekkei Genkai or Kekkei Genkaia jutsu that is need to complete the jutsu , and this jutsu cant be used if the foe is useing of has his/hers Kekkei Genkai if not then it lasts for 4 of there post no counting users posts of others i hope this is not too powerful  if you lose your kekkei genkai too sure. xd
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