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 Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2012 5:19 am
DreamCaster467 ForeverLasting Fermata C l a i r e
R a i
H a s c h e l
 • • • ✖ ωιтнσυт ℓαυɢнтer αи∂ ωιтнσυт тєαяs
pяσjєcтιиɢ α ωιтнєяєd αи∂ fιиιsнє∂ мє
sнσωιиɢ єvєя тнє ƒυтυяє's cιиємα σf ∂єspαιя
тнє ƒα∂є∂ яєєℓ sтιℓℓ тυяиs єvєи иσω
jυsт ℓιкє α bяσкєи тσy ✖ Claire stepped into her home. She was young and joyous like always. A boy tugged her hair today in school. So she punched him in his kidney. After all mommy said that if a boy touches her, it meant something. Mommy wouldn't say what exactly what it was, but whatever it was Claire didn't any part of it. She tossed her bag by the door and slide of her sandals as she entered her main living room. "Mommy, Daddy! I'm home!" She called out as she entered the kitchen. "Hello? Mommy?" Claire called out once more, her eyes moved to the fridge. On the fridge was a note addressed to her. 'Claire, I'm sorry we're not home. Your father was sent out again, and I have to grab food for tonight. I will be back soon. Love.Your mommy." Clarie smiled at the note and hurried to her room to draw a picture and practice her hand signs.
One Week Later
Claire rubbed her tummy. It had been days since she last ate. Mommy still hadn't come home with food, and Claire had already ate all the food in the fridge and cabinets. She lied down on the floor staring at the ceiling. She thought about why mommy hadn't come back yet, or why Daddy hasn't set word back. She curled up on the floor and began to cry.
Two Weeks From then....
Claire had finally lost all controll of her thoughts. She didn't go to school, she didn't talk to anyone on her way around town, in her attempt to forage for food. She didn't bother chasing after the small boys who teased her by tossing rocks at her. It only made her more tired, more hungry.
Another Week....
Claire had realized that Mommy was never coming home. Neither was Daddy. They had ran away and lied to her. They left, her and she didn't know why. She was a good girl, she did her chores. She got good grades. She even did her own laundry. Why did they leave her? She shook her head, erasing her mind of her thoughts. She didn't bother crying anymore. It just made her thirsty. She walked around town, to her normal handouts eating a small hunk of bread here and there. She noticed a poster, she looked at it carefully. "What...the hell?" She said, looking at the poster. The poster was of a missing child, with an artists rendering of what they look like after years at a time. Claire say these before, but not in this area. And certainly not of herself. She grabbed the poster and ran to the nearest Uchia policing Department to tell them about the mistake.
Eleven Years later....
It had been years ago when she had learned the truth. She was kidnapped as a infant, due to her mother's inability to have children. The father was lied to, Claire liked to believe. He had died during his mission. Her mother had ran away, to deal with grief and left Claire behind. However, Mrs. Rai, her birth mother was of a kind sorts. She at least cared to Claire enough to look for her after 5 years. Claire entered her house. The hallway always new and different then her memory allowed. She shook her head, and called out. "I'm home." She said, kicking off her sandals and walking up the stairs to her room. Where she fell onto her bed. She reached underneath her pillow pulling out a small piece of paper. She unfolded it and read the familiar words all over again. ''Claire, I'm sorry we're not home. Your father was sent out again, and I have to grab food for tonight. I will be back soon. Love.Your mommy.' Claire stared at the note for a few seconds longer before whispering to herself. "I'll find you. And then, I'll kill you." Claire said, before folding the note and stuffing it underneath her pillow.
"When you close your eyes and think of the world, what do you see?" I was assuming that the Uchia are a policing force like in Kohana old times. Also, I really tried hard, and this took the course of the day. This WILL NOT be every post I do. This was WAY to much work.....and I'm soooo tired ~_~ THIS. You stole my post format and and that picture, which is in my private photobucket account, which means you could have only gotten the picture from my test thread. You used them without even asking me. Take it down now please or I will be reporting you. Also, stay away from my test thread if all you intend to do is steal my ideas and creations.
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2012 6:57 am
Hey hey, wow... instead of just posting here, could you have contacted a crew member? We do not like people stealing other people's stuff as well, it's dumb. I help you. PM me if need be, do not discuss stuff here, thanks. Oh and I will let you take a screenshot of his post before I delete it in a few days.
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2012 6:58 am
You are an idiot. You quoted someone's stuff, claiming it as your own. You are banned.
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 2:20 pm
(not sure if a character needs to be made first, but just following the rules on say i need to come here and post a rp example, also note i am doing this after i read most of everything, so here it goes.)
Role Play Example:
Running down the street it was a hot summer mid day. Things seemed to be going as normal as ever for this academy student. Not much to say on if his mind was all there, but at the least he was happy. Not only did he manage to barely get away from the store, but he had also picked up some candy that he very much wanted. "Such good stuff. I should go back and get more," he had said as Jack ran down a small ally. After eating most of the candy Jack had sat down to rest a bit for he had ran through about half of the city. At the least he had thought he ran half the city, but only ran about 4 blocks down. He was not in the best of shape for any person, but he got away with what he could. Stealing mostly candy from stores and some food supplies needed to live Jack mostly lived in a dumpster since no one took care of him. After a few moments his teacher had come around the corner for it was easy to follow a scent that made even animals turn away. His teacher was mad at him as usual, and started to scold him for his miss behavior. Jack ignored most of it, but didn't ague or make a point as to what he did for he thought it was fun. Already thinking of the next store to go rob a bit of food his teacher gabbed him by the arm and started to drag him towards his house........
(hope this works and i could keep going i believe.)
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 2:46 pm
Role Play Example:
" I hope you have a very good reason for interrupting my sleep. " Spoke makoto in a very sour and hateful tone. When his team mates decided to wake him up from one of his peaceful 12 hour long naps, He was not in the most understanding mood. " Makoto... you do understand what our mission is here don't you? " spoke Akari in a worried tone of voice, knowing that she didn't want to guard the nobleman's treasure by herself. The treasure was a very rare scroll that contained a priceless and powerful ninjutsu that could be used to bring the dead back to life, in the wrong hands it could even lead to a world war. Makoto sighed roughly, peeling himself off the comfortable chair that he was sleeping on to look at Akari on eye level. " Listen... I honestly don't give two cents of a rats *** if we were defending the lord of the fire nation ourselves, My sleep is all we need to defend the scroll okay? Without it I can't use my most prized justu to defend it with. I'm sorry but it's the only truth you have to realize. " Spoke Makoto with a sour but honest tone, knowing that the prized jutsu he had did take up a lot of his strength... but at the same time it was prized for being nearly indestructible and impenetrable. Turning away from Akari again to face the chair he was in, He spoke to her one last time before he returned to his seat. " Sorry for being to direct about it... A lot of stress and barely any sleep is no excuse for me to take it out on you. Please, allow me to rest up. " Spoke makoto in a soft and tired voice, wishing sometimes that he never had this prized jutsu.
(( your thoughts? ))
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:50 pm
Lord_Titus2012 Role Play Example:" I hope you have a very good reason for interrupting my sleep. " Spoke makoto in a very sour and hateful tone. When his team mates decided to wake him up from one of his peaceful 12 hour long naps, He was not in the most understanding mood. " Makoto... you do understand what our mission is here don't you? " spoke Akari in a worried tone of voice, knowing that she didn't want to guard the nobleman's treasure by herself. The treasure was a very rare scroll that contained a priceless and powerful ninjutsu that could be used to bring the dead back to life, in the wrong hands it could even lead to a world war. Makoto sighed roughly, peeling himself off the comfortable chair that he was sleeping on to look at Akari on eye level. " Listen... I honestly don't give two cents of a rats *** if we were defending the lord of the fire nation ourselves, My sleep is all we need to defend the scroll okay? Without it I can't use my most prized justu to defend it with. I'm sorry but it's the only truth you have to realize. " Spoke Makoto with a sour but honest tone, knowing that the prized jutsu he had did take up a lot of his strength... but at the same time it was prized for being nearly indestructible and impenetrable. Turning away from Akari again to face the chair he was in, He spoke to her one last time before he returned to his seat. " Sorry for being to direct about it... A lot of stress and barely any sleep is no excuse for me to take it out on you. Please, allow me to rest up. " Spoke makoto in a soft and tired voice, wishing sometimes that he never had this prized jutsu. (( your thoughts? )) Good. confused Just remember to break lines whenever someone new speaks. That's the proper way to write dialogue. I.E. it would look more like above. confused Still, good. Needs a bit of polish but that's all the more reason to get you off and writing in the guild right? Approved. emotion_brofist
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The Ghost of Xmas Awesome
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 8:27 pm
I know this is just a sample, but I took this long since I was accepted into the guild because I like to actually write down my RP in my notebook before I pass it on to the digital media. smile
Without further ado:
As Kalix sat down to eat her favorite food, fried pork dumplings, she noticed her mentor sitting across the room of the restaurant. With a faint smile, she stared back down to her meal and started eating, keeping her gaze to her plate. After five minutes, Kalix reluctantly raised her eyes and let out a sigh. 'I did not want to see him today.' she thought.
"Kalix!" Her mentor, Yoichi yelled in her ear. "You haven't been around for training lately." He added with a blank expression.
"Yoichi-Sensei." Kalix responded. She grabbed a dumpling and gulped it down before continuing on. "You know I was away for a mission this last month."
She then took a sip of her sake and added. "Besides all that extra time you had should serve you to actually beat me in a fight this time."
Her sensei, smirked along with her and replied. "Well, I was on a mission of my own... Uh, you know the one from the village? So... I. I didn't really have the time for any training..."
Kalix smiled and said. "That much I imagined..."
'You always were a bad liar sensei.' She said to herself.
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 7:12 am
KalixHavok I know this is just a sample, but I took this long since I was accepted into the guild because I like to actually write down my RP in my notebook before I pass it on to the digital media. smile Without further ado: As Kalix sat down to eat her favorite food, fried pork dumplings, she noticed her mentor sitting across the room of the restaurant. With a faint smile, she stared back down to her meal and started eating, keeping her gaze to her plate. After five minutes, Kalix reluctantly raised her eyes and let out a sigh. 'I did not want to see him today.' she thought. "Kalix!" Her mentor, Yoichi yelled in her ear. "You haven't been around for training lately." He added with a blank expression. "Yoichi-Sensei." Kalix responded. She grabbed a dumpling and gulped it down before continuing on. "You know I was away for a mission this last month." She then took a sip of her sake and added. "Besides all that extra time you had should serve you to actually beat me in a fight this time." Her sensei, smirked along with her and replied. "Well, I was on a mission of my own... Uh, you know the one from the village? So... I. I didn't really have the time for any training..." Kalix smiled and said. "That much I imagined..."
'You always were a bad liar sensei.' She said to herself. Passed. Please let me know if you have any questions on what to do next.
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Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:48 pm
Well I'm completely new and was looking through the forums when I saw this. It looked like I should do this first before I try anything else, so I wrote a short one... I do hope I've made the right choice. Everything is confusing me out because of the sheer extensiveness and thoroughness of the guild. After this, is there a place I can get help? Anyway, here's the rp. razz
Hanami gently set foot on the surface of the cold water, concentrating the chakra flow to the sole of her feet for the first time. She was learning to walk on water, something she had been envious of ever since her brother had dashed across the pond in their back yard. After hours of begging, her mother had agreed to teach her how to do so, since she had mastered the tree climbing training a few weeks ago anyway.
"Now, focus your chakra and let it out continuously to match your body mass and keep it afloat, and concentrate!" her mother yelled from behind her as Hanami took a couple steps forward. Excited, she kept going, further into the middle of the pool. That is, until she went plunging down from being distracted by a chirp from a bird nearby. Gasping, she coughed and spluttered while swimming back to the edge. It was a good start though, and the look of the prideful glance her mother sent was more than enough to get her smirking.
'Oh just you wait, Inari', she thought as she got to her feet and gathered chakra to her feet again. "I'm going to beat you and wipe that smirk off your face. Hah!'
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Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:01 pm
Cleric Saphire Well I'm completely new and was looking through the forums when I saw this. It looked like I should do this first before I try anything else, so I wrote a short one... I do hope I've made the right choice. Everything is confusing me out because of the sheer extensiveness and thoroughness of the guild. After this, is there a place I can get help? Anyway, here's the rp. razz Hanami gently set foot on the surface of the cold water, concentrating the chakra flow to the sole of her feet for the first time. She was learning to walk on water, something she had been envious of ever since her brother and dashed across the pond in their back yard. After hours of begging, her mother had agreed to teach her how to do so, since she had mastered the tree walking training a few weeks ago anyway. "Now, focus your chakra and let it out continuously to match your body mass and keep it afloat, and concentrate!" her mother yelled from behind her as Hanami took a couple steps forward. Excited, she kept going, further into the middle of the pool. That is, until she went plunging down from being distracted by a chirp from a bird nearby. Gasping, she coughed and spluttered while swimming back to the edge. It was a good start though, and from the look of the prideful glance her mother sent, it was more than enough to get her smirking. 'Oh just you wait, Inari', she thought as she got to her feet and gathered chakra to her feet again. "I'm going to beat you and wipe that smirk off your face. Hah!' Looks good. Well spaced, good detail, splendid job. wink Pass. If you have any questions, please ask one of the crew, myself included. We hope to see you Oto. Sure, we slightly morally gray, but we've got cookies! .... stare Ah who am I kidding that never works. xd In all seriousness though, the two Open villages right now are Mist and Oto. You can ask around and look around to decide which one's plot lines and atmosphere suits you best. wink Also remember to at least get a grounding in the system. We all help to fill in the gaps for people, but something to keep in mind.
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The Ghost of Xmas Awesome
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:58 am
Ok I hope my rp style is good enough. My character is called Sakura Tsuki who's village is the mist village.
The morning sun was rising and all that was heard in the mist village was a single violin playing. The sound that came from the violin was unbelievably beautiful. After a minute of playing Sakura started to sing and her voice was more beautiful then the sound that came from the violin. Many animals would listen to her though really Sakura was just practising a genjutsu.
Sakura learned how to use the sound element though she used it more as a genjutsu. As soon as Sakura finished it started to rain "great just what I wanted" Sakura said while running closer to the village.
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 10:32 pm
Shizune laid on the floor with her arm covering her eyes. She was taking a break from training in the woods. While she was laying there her Kit fox played on her stomach. The kit was jumping on her trying to catch something. Shizune opened her eyes and looked at the kit.
"What are you trying to catch, Kirara?" she smiled.
I still don't get how to get into a village. So that's my role- play example.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:18 pm
gaia_angelleft Role-playing example and time to show off. gaia_angelright
Amy // Female // Mist Village // 11 years old // hearts you <3
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With in the misty region of the Mist village is a small house off to it self, there lives a young girl who is quite unusual from the other villagers. Amy is often seen sleeping around the village in/under trees and or roof tops, this sometimes makes her hard to find by people who do not know of her usual spots. During a quite night in the mist village she gently and smoothly walks down the main street, her long blond hair laying across her back and her white sundress reflecting the moons light make her seem to be a angle. After a while she walks up to a open restaurant and enters the building , once in side a elderly man walked over to her with a smile on his face as he bows to her and said. " Good to see you Amy, welcome and come take a seat." the man soon turned and swayed his had as to invite her to a seat." Would you like your normal order tonight ?" the man added as Amy walked past him.
Amy Turned her head and with a soft smile upon her face she said softly." yes please that would be nice." Amy took a seat at a booth and crossed her arms on top of the table and rested her head on top of them , using them like a pillow. With in minuets the elderly man returned to her side as he places some cream and potato soup on the table next to her. " There you go Amy , don`t worry about payment just stop by and help out around the place.". Amy sat up in her seat and brushed her hair behind her ear and said to the man politely." Thank you and I will do that.". The old man nodded his head and returned to the front counter where he took a seat on a stool and started to read his book.
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(just leave it as this.. emotion_kirakira lol )
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:34 pm
gaia_nitemareleft Sample #1 gaia_nitemareright Samantha / Genin / Female / Lv 3 ______________________________________________ With in the heart of combat there are ones who fight and ones who fight to protect there comrades and friends from harms way. With in a field a fight takes place where two Genin are in a heated combat with a experienced Chunnin. 'Samantha come on ! We need to work together to win this one." yelled the second genin who at the time was evading attacks from the sword wielding Chunnin. Samantha stood up from the ground where she was previously kicked down upon, she called out to her comrade and said to him. " I am on my say! " Sammantha charged into the quail and arrived just in time as the chunnin knocked away the guard of the genin boy and was about to make a killing strike. Samantha seeing that the strike could not be evaded or blocked. Sam made a chain of hand seals and trusted her hand forward tords the two and said ." barriers art: Gusta kyoken" Between the two ninja formed a orb and with in seconds (after forming) the orb exploded sending the genin and the chunnin sliding back from each other. Both the genin samantha and the boy now stood side by side as they looked at there chunnin opponent thinking of what the turn out could be. What was for sure samantha needed to be there to protect the boy comrade, cause she lacked the needed attacking skills that he had. My English is not the best (grammar) please keep in mind I am french and English is a sub language for me.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:34 pm
Roleplay Example:
Raku was walking along the street with his arms wrapped around his favorite book. Oh how he loved reading. He would run his hand through his hair before he took off running to his favorite spot. He saw the tree in the distance and made his way to it. He sat facing towards the river and opened the book. He looked down at the book and was ready to read the book for the tenth time. After twenty minutes of him reading the book he felt a drop of rain hit his head. He looked up worriedly and screamed out in horror as a drop of rain hit the page he was reading. He quickly put the book under his shirt, to keep it from being rained on. Raku looked back towards the village and started to run toward it so that he didn't get the book anymore wet. Once he entered the village he took a sharp right and went into his house. He sighed with relief and sat in a couch. He happily opened the book and once again started to read.
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