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 Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:55 pm
Nobara looked around the building one more time. The classrooms were bare as the other children were celebrating outside. It felt strange. This had been the child's life since she entered the school. She wasn't going to be with her friends all the time anymore and her parents were going to expect her to do more and more training. It was bitter/sweet to her. The girl moved away from the door way and into the class. She walked down the stairs that lined the seats. She stopped only and the middle front seat. That was the one that she had sat in for so long.
The child let out a sigh. Tomorrow she was going to be put into a group of other genin and they would be her extended family. They would balance her out in her faults and she would balance them in her strengths. "Bara." She heard a man's voice call out. She turned her head 180 degrees to let her father know that she heard him. "Papa." She showed that she saw him. "It's going to be weird not to be here anymore. Did you feel the same way?" She asked the man. A grin sat on this face. "Yes, but I know you'll be much better as a genin over a student. Then a chunin, then a jonin." He told her. It really helped her feel better about her new journey.
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:57 pm
EliteDax Ikago tightened his grip on his katana's hilt. It was shoved in it's sheath, due to his style of combat, Iai, the art of drawing and sheathing your katana at lightning speeds. His eyes were set solely on the man only fifty-meters from him, a high level Jounin whom challenged the Samurai Warlord's superiority. Suddenly, Ikago lunged forward, moving at incredible speeds. Hibiku had began to draw his fingers into a row of handseals, Grand Fireball no Jutsu. He quickly dashed backwards, ceasing his hand-movements as Ikago's blade left it's sheath. Unfortunately he couldn't string handseals fast enough, was Ikago's speed overpowered his own. Sweat rolled down his face. This was a battle, the was not in the shinobi's favor. 
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:58 pm
angelmage99 Nobara looked around the building one more time. The classrooms were bare as the other children were celebrating outside. It felt strange. This had been the child's life since she entered the school. She wasn't going to be with her friends all the time anymore and her parents were going to expect her to do more and more training. It was bitter/sweet to her. The girl moved away from the door way and into the class. She walked down the stairs that lined the seats. She stopped only and the middle front seat. That was the one that she had sat in for so long. The child let out a sigh. Tomorrow she was going to be put into a group of other genin and they would be her extended family. They would balance her out in her faults and she would balance them in her strengths. "Bara." She heard a man's voice call out. She turned her head 180 degrees to let her father know that she heard him. "Papa." She showed that she saw him. "It's going to be weird not to be here anymore. Did you feel the same way?" She asked the man. A grin sat on this face. "Yes, but I know you'll be much better as a genin over a student. Then a chunin, then a jonin." He told her. It really helped her feel better about her new journey. You had some sentence fragments, and missed some commas, but I'm not going to be a grammar-nazi so...
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 5:29 pm
Ryota ran out of the academy crying because of the students made fun of him since he was weak. Ryota kept on running all the way out of Konoha. He thought that he would be the best ninja of all, but everyone wanted him gone or dead. He kept on crying until he had an idea of stealing a few scrolls
Several hours past until it was midnight. Ryota stealthily sneaked around and noticed that no one around the academy. He picked the lock and entered the academy. He sneaked into the classroom and fount the scrolls and copied the the hand signs of the "Great Fireball Technique" on a sheet of paper and left the building as fast as possible.
He went to a lake and copied the hand signs from the paper to the ground and started practicing. The first attempt was a small little spark and people started to laugh. He whispered to himself "I can't wait to laugh when I prove you all wrong." A tear came out and tried again
He kept on practicing skipping the day from the academy. Each attempt the flame grew not just length but in size. He wanted to me as large as the whole lake. Class was almost over and he wanted to show them who they're making fun of. Ryota exhaled and did the hand signs. After he finished he inhaled and made a giant fireball that covered the huge lake. He smiled and screamed out loud. "HELL YEA!" he dropped his arms and fell asleep with a smile on his face.
My character is Ryota Teranishi
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 5:57 pm
Shrade Ryota ran out of the academy crying because of the students made fun of him since he was weak. Ryota kept on running all the way out of Konoha. He thought that he would be the best ninja of all, but everyone wanted him gone or dead. He kept on crying until he had an idea of stealing a few scrolls Several hours past until it was midnight. Ryota stealthily sneaked around and noticed that no one around the academy. He picked the lock and entered the academy. He sneaked into the classroom and fount the scrolls and copied the the hand signs of the "Great Fireball Technique" on a sheet of paper and left the building as fast as possible. He went to a lake and copied the hand signs from the paper to the ground and started practicing. The first attempt was a small little spark and people started to laugh. He whispered to himself "I can't wait to laugh when I prove you all wrong." A tear came out and tried again He kept on practicing skipping the day from the academy. Each attempt the flame grew not just length but in size. He wanted to me as large as the whole lake. Class was almost over and he wanted to show them who they're making fun of. Ryota exhaled and did the hand signs. After he finished he inhaled and made a giant fireball that covered the huge lake. He smiled and screamed out loud. "HELL YEA!" he dropped his arms and fell asleep with a smile on his face. My character is Ryota Teranishi When ???? crying
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:10 pm
Shrade Shrade Ryota ran out of the academy crying because of the students made fun of him since he was weak. Ryota kept on running all the way out of Konoha. He thought that he would be the best ninja of all, but everyone wanted him gone or dead. He kept on crying until he had an idea of stealing a few scrolls Several hours past until it was midnight. Ryota stealthily sneaked around and noticed that no one around the academy. He picked the lock and entered the academy. He sneaked into the classroom and fount the scrolls and copied the the hand signs of the "Great Fireball Technique" on a sheet of paper and left the building as fast as possible. He went to a lake and copied the hand signs from the paper to the ground and started practicing. The first attempt was a small little spark and people started to laugh. He whispered to himself "I can't wait to laugh when I prove you all wrong." A tear came out and tried again He kept on practicing skipping the day from the academy. Each attempt the flame grew not just length but in size. He wanted to me as large as the whole lake. Class was almost over and he wanted to show them who they're making fun of. Ryota exhaled and did the hand signs. After he finished he inhaled and made a giant fireball that covered the huge lake. He smiled and screamed out loud. "HELL YEA!" he dropped his arms and fell asleep with a smile on his face. My character is Ryota Teranishi When ???? crying Dude you only just posted it... a little patience... Pass, though, you have a few grammar errors. They are in bold. Make sure you have correct spelling before you hit submit in the future.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:23 pm
Qyp Shrade Shrade Ryota ran out of the academy crying because of the students made fun of him since he was weak. Ryota kept on running all the way out of Konoha. He thought that he would be the best ninja of all, but everyone wanted him gone or dead. He kept on crying until he had an idea of stealing a few scrolls Several hours past until it was midnight. Ryota stealthily sneaked around and noticed that no one around the academy. He picked the lock and entered the academy. He sneaked into the classroom and fount the scrolls and copied the the hand signs of the "Great Fireball Technique" on a sheet of paper and left the building as fast as possible. He went to a lake and copied the hand signs from the paper to the ground and started practicing. The first attempt was a small little spark and people started to laugh. He whispered to himself "I can't wait to laugh when I prove you all wrong." A tear came out and tried again He kept on practicing skipping the day from the academy. Each attempt the flame grew not just length but in size. He wanted to me as large as the whole lake. Class was almost over and he wanted to show them who they're making fun of. Ryota exhaled and did the hand signs. After he finished he inhaled and made a giant fireball that covered the huge lake. He smiled and screamed out loud. "HELL YEA!" he dropped his arms and fell asleep with a smile on his face. My character is Ryota Teranishi When ???? crying Dude you only just posted it... a little patience... Pass, though, you have a few grammar errors. They are in bold. Make sure you have correct spelling before you hit submit in the future. Sorry, I'll be more patient next time. It's been a slow day in my area.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:31 pm
Shrade Qyp Shrade Shrade Ryota ran out of the academy crying because of the students made fun of him since he was weak. Ryota kept on running all the way out of Konoha. He thought that he would be the best ninja of all, but everyone wanted him gone or dead. He kept on crying until he had an idea of stealing a few scrolls Several hours past until it was midnight. Ryota stealthily sneaked around and noticed that no one around the academy. He picked the lock and entered the academy. He sneaked into the classroom and fount the scrolls and copied the the hand signs of the "Great Fireball Technique" on a sheet of paper and left the building as fast as possible. He went to a lake and copied the hand signs from the paper to the ground and started practicing. The first attempt was a small little spark and people started to laugh. He whispered to himself "I can't wait to laugh when I prove you all wrong." A tear came out and tried again He kept on practicing skipping the day from the academy. Each attempt the flame grew not just length but in size. He wanted to me as large as the whole lake. Class was almost over and he wanted to show them who they're making fun of. Ryota exhaled and did the hand signs. After he finished he inhaled and made a giant fireball that covered the huge lake. He smiled and screamed out loud. "HELL YEA!" he dropped his arms and fell asleep with a smile on his face. My character is Ryota Teranishi When ???? crying Dude you only just posted it... a little patience... Pass, though, you have a few grammar errors. They are in bold. Make sure you have correct spelling before you hit submit in the future. Sorry, I'll be more patient next time. It's been a slow day in my area. Alrighty.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2012 1:51 am
Ive sent a request into the group but im gonna go ahead and start a little early,
My characters name is Darizon Ikaho
Darizon's Father speaks, "This test was not meant to be easy, You can't take it so lightly, Darizon", Darizon Grunts, "Well... It should! I did well on my try and i deserve better!, I shouldn't of failed!, I'm not a loser!" Darizon speaks angrily, His Father just listens, silently at his angers, At sudden, Darizon hits the bench he is sitting on, "I'm not gonna stop here!, I'm gonna do that test even if my life depends on it!" Darizon says in higher anger, He darts off back to the academy to take the test once more.
Well, How did I do? neutral
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:14 pm
Hello :3
My character, Hiro Gekko, is the son of Hayate Gekko. So preferably, I hope to get into the leaf village... >.>
RP example:
Hiro meditated in the forest clearing with his bound katana resting in his lap.
He was preforming a ritual jutsu of his clan to dampen the power of the monstrous Komodo Dragon spirit that resides in the sword's blade. However he was rudely interrupted by an ambush of enemy ninja who sought to steal the Gekko clan's sword and the spirit harbored within it.
"We are here for that blade child. Hand it over before you make us take it by force." Said the leader of the group on ninja.
"You should know that won't happen." Hiro said with a stern look on his face as he stood up right, taking his stance with his still sheathed sword.
[Hope this wasn't too long, I tend to go on sometimes.... >.>]
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 12:48 am
[I'm still working on my character sheet right now, but I have a name and a village! sweatdrop My character is Sato Purin, from Kirigakure (unless I'm not accepted). ]
Purin held the basket close to her body as she stepped down the stairs one at a time. She couldn't see over the top of the wicker container as she walked, so she held her body at an angle. It made her waist ache, but at least she could see where her foot was about to go and prevent breaking an ankle, or worse.
"Why me?" She grumbled under her breath, nearly toppling forward as her fingers nearly slipped from their hold on the basket. "Why did they leave this one to me? Because I'm a girl or something, right?"
She grit her teeth and wrinkled her nose as she steadied herself, and continued the task. Just watch, one day I'll get the better parts.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 2:11 am
You did okay writing, but we rp in the third person here, so please rewrite it in third person. You two on the other hand formated your posts kind of weird, there's no real need to press enter after every sentence, Kael, but since it's just a formating thing, and everyone can generally do what they want when it comes to that:
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 2:28 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2012 5:46 am
Mazu had been wandering for days within the forest. It had seemed like an eternity since he was left by his parents within the wild. He hated them for it, but he could never truly stay mad at them. He knew there was something behind their smiling faces, that something was wrong. They wouldn't have left him without a good reason. They had, at least, trained him in the way of weapons, but his Chakra focus and training was poor to say the least.
After a few days of wandering he managed to find a road, which was not well kept, but at least it looked well traveled. He adjusted his gear before heading left along the road, hoping for find someone, anyone, so he didn't have to be alone anymore. It didn't take long before he reached the Hidden Village of Clouds...
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